Haje vi taaza lagdi hain....

pallavi_here · **Haje vi taaza lagdi hain.... -** 21st September 2005, 09:28 PM

dear frnds aaj dil kiya ki apni koi punjaabi ki post karu....hope u all b with me like always...

agar kuchh samajh na aaye to jarur kahiye...waise yahaan bataane waale bahut achhe punjaabi shayar bhi hain..jinki first class punjaabi hai...

thanx
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Haje vi taaza lagdi hain,
O meethiyaa.n jiyaa.n mulaqaataa.n….

Haje vi raahaa.n takdi hain,
Saaddi akhaa.n di barsaataa.n…..

Haje vi tennu labdi hain,
Sooni paiyaa.n galiyaa.n…..

Haje vi rakhdi hain ummeedaa.n,
O murjhaayi ji kaliyaa.n…..

Haje vi kooye di muder te,
Main shaaami jaake baindi haa.n

Haje vi teekhe bol lokiyaa.n de,
Main ghut ghut marke sehndi haa.n……

Ik waari aake dass ja ve maahi,
Kinne ku imtihaa.n tu laine ey hor,

Naa.m kitti ey saari zind.di,bass ek darr mainu,
Kade tut na jaave saaha.n di ey kachhi jehi dor….

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shayri12345 · **hi -** 22nd September 2005, 06:45 AM

hi dearest pallo
hey yaar
ik ik shabd inna sohna sajaya tusi.....bas padh'di hhi reh gayi baar baar, jaane kinni vaar padheya aaj tuahda likheya, dil nu chu gaya te Cheer vi gaya

keh ni sakdi kehri pankti sohni hai kyuki shayad har ik pankti hu tusi iddan sohna naal samaya hai ki dil baag o bagg ho gaya...likhde ravo

tuhadi apni
PRiya

Rohin · **Re: Haje vi taaza lagdi hain.... -** 22nd September 2005, 02:16 PM

Haje vi taaza lagdi hain,
O meethiyaa.n jiyaa.n mulaqaataa.n….

Oye hoye..

Haje vi raahaa.n takdi hain,
Saaddi akhaa.n di barsaataa.n…..

Oye Soniye...

Haje vi tennu labdi hain,
Sooni paiyaa.n galiyaa.n…..

Ki gal hai soniye

Haje vi rakhdi hain ummeedaa.n,
O murjhaayi ji kaliyaa.n…..

Yeh hui na Gal...

Haje vi kooye di muder te,
Main shaaami jaake baindi haa.n

Chak de pathe..

Haje vi teekhe bol lokiyaa.n de,
Main ghut ghut marke sehndi haa.n……

Ki kar dita....

Ik waari aake dass ja ve maahi,
Kinne ku imtihaa.n tu laine ey hor,

Nahi lega....

Naa.m kitti ey saari zind.di,bass ek darr mainu,
Kade tut na jaave saaha.n di ey kachhi jehi dor….

Tey nahi kaddne wali...

SSA Pallo,

hehehehehhe... Mujhe...............na.............. yeh.............na..........samjh ..............na.......................aagayi....h ehehehehehehehehhehehehe....

Bahut he.......................swwwwwww.eeeeeeeeeeeeettt ttttt likhiya hai tussi..... te hor ki... hehehhe...

Bada sona lagya menu....hehehe

Thwada
Rohin

pallavi_here · **Re: hi -** 22nd September 2005, 02:30 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by LuvPriya
hi dearest pallo
hey yaar
ik ik shabd inna sohna sajaya tusi.....bas padh'di hhi reh gayi baar baar, jaane kinni vaar padheya aaj tuahda likheya, dil nu chu gaya te Cheer vi gaya keh ni sakdi kehri pankti sohni hai kyuki shayad har ik pankti hu tusi iddan sohna naal samaya hai ki dil baag o bagg ho gaya...likhde ravo

tuhadi apni
PRiya

O my sweeetu …… I m ws expecting u to be one of d first one at this post…. Sachhi jee nu bada hi changa lagya jado. Reply vekhya….. so sweeeet… te ey jaan ke hor khushi hoyi ke tu ennu pasand vi kitta… shayad ey pehli post haigi..je sabnu pasand aai te punjaabi ch.. hor karaangi…rahi gall dard di..te priyaa kade kade hanse wich vi lakhh dard chhipe honed ne… lekin enne pyaare dostaa.n de naal haa.n taa.n sachhi mainu enna feel ne honda …luvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu…..
Khayaal rakhi.n apna…
Tuhaaddi pallo

pallavi_here · **Re: Re: Haje vi taaza lagdi hain.... -** 22nd September 2005, 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Rohin
Haje vi taaza lagdi hain,
O meethiyaa.n jiyaa.n mulaqaataa.n….

Oye hoye..

Haje vi raahaa.n takdi hain,
Saaddi akhaa.n di barsaataa.n…..

Oye Soniye...

Haje vi tennu labdi hain,
Sooni paiyaa.n galiyaa.n…..

Ki gal hai soniye

Haje vi rakhdi hain ummeedaa.n,
O murjhaayi ji kaliyaa.n…..

Yeh hui na Gal...

Haje vi kooye di muder te,
Main shaaami jaake baindi haa.n

Chak de pathe..

Haje vi teekhe bol lokiyaa.n de,
Main ghut ghut marke sehndi haa.n……

Ki kar dita....

Ik waari aake dass ja ve maahi,
Kinne ku imtihaa.n tu laine ey hor,

Nahi lega....

Naa.m kitti ey saari zind.di,bass ek darr mainu,
Kade tut na jaave saaha.n di ey kachhi jehi dor….

Tey nahi kaddne wali...

SSA Pallo,

hehehehehhe... Mujhe...............na.............. yeh.............na..........samjh ..............na.......................aagayi....h ehehehehehehehehhehehehe....

Bahut he.......................swwwwwww.eeeeeeeeeeeeettt ttttt likhiya hai tussi..... te hor ki... hehehhe...

Bada sona lagya menu....hehehe

Thwada
Rohin

Hehehehe rohin… sachhi tuhaada reply padh ke te main khid khid hans payi..naiyo rukya gaya…

ey te bot waddi gal hai ki tuhaanu ey samajh aa gayi…hum main dasso kinne de laddu wattaa.n…hehehehhee… but fer vi…dil nu sachhi inna pyaara ja lagya ki tussi eennni nehnat karke esnu samjhan di koshish kitti te ohde wich safal vo hoye….. tuhaade warge dostaa.n nal hi te es site pe haje vi saadda aana jaana hai… bass enj hi naal rehna… te apna hamesha khayaal rakhna….
Tuhaaddi pallo

Aman_rahi · 22nd September 2005, 06:45 PM

Dear Pallo,

bada changa tana bunya hai akhraan daa.....

Haje vi teekhe bol lokiyaa.n de,
Main ghut ghut marke sehndi haa.n……

haiiii.....ki kehna is misre daa......

sach bahut hi changi rahi eh koshish.......

romana · **hi -** 22nd September 2005, 07:02 PM

dear pallo ji

bhut hi piyaari kavita hai

waisey mujhe punjaabi ki samjh itni nahi aati lakin aapki yeh nazam samjh mai aaygayi and i think its wonderful. bhut hi acha likha hai aapne.

keep on writing
bye

pallavi_here · 23rd September 2005, 12:57 PM

Dear aman … thanxxx u likd a specific part of this poem … always take care & KEEP SMILING…. AAP LOG SAATH HAIN TO KOSHISHE KAAMYAAB HONGI HI

DEAR ROMANA… PEHLI BAAR MIL RAHI HU AAPSE.. ACHHA LAGA KI AAPNE WAQT NIKALA POST PE AANE KE LIYE AUR USSE SAMJHA BHI… PUNJAABI NA AANE KE BAAD BHI .. SO SWEET OF U .. I WELCUM U AT THIS POST… THANXX AGAIN DEAR..
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