Oh! I was pleasantly surprised to see that the viewing has crossed 1350 mark..Though i donot rate this poem as one of my more favourites but apparently it has hit some chord in the readers' hearts.
thanx once again
Brijinder"Sagar"
na tum aye na teri yad aayi,
fir na jane kyu najar teri parchai ayi.
wo tere kesh ki khusbu.
galo ki lali,
wo tere labo ki hasi, teri julf kali,
wo teri masti. wo umar bali. na jane kyu najar ayi.
na tum aye na teri yad ayi,
tujhe dhundte-2 ek din,
is duniya se gujar jayenge,
na aap najar aaoge na aapka chehra,
bus aapki yad me din gujar jayenge,
is dil ki ye tammana hai ki
ek bar aapka chehra najar aa jaye,
us chand ke tukde ka didar ho jaye,
fir chahe hum is duniya se gujar jaye,
bus ek bar aapke husn ka didar ho jaye,
kash mere dil ki ye tammana puri ho jaye,
Woh kuch is tarah katraanay lagay
Ki guzray huay din afsaanay lagay
Kal tak to thay jo izhaar-e-muhabbat
Wahi aaj hawas kay bahaanay lagay
Na lagaao pehray is khusbu par
Jiskay haasil maiN mujhay zamaanay lagay
Pighal jaatay thay jo baahon main kabhi
Ab faaslay itnay banaanay lagay
Poocha hai to keh di dil ki baat
Ab na kehna tujhay rulaanay lagay
brijinder, aap kii Ghazal ham ne bohat pahle paRh lee thee, lekin reply karne ka mauqa aaj mil raha hai, aur agar mai.n Ghalat nahii.n huu.n to aap ne is Ghazal ka 2nd version bhii kahii.n post kiya hai, aap ne shaayad 'lage hai.n' raadeef istemaal kiya hai.. mujh sabv se zeyaadah aap ke es kalaam ke khayaal paasand aaye.. mai.n ne bhii esi zameen par taba azmaaii kii thee, link de raha huun.. paRh leejiyega,... shaayad aap ko pasand aa jaaaye! is Ghazal par mai.n ne ek sher shaamil kiya tha, hame is tarah aazamaane lage hai.n, kii beete huye din fasaane lage hai.n. paR baad me.n pata chala kii aap already yeh duusra misra istemaal kar chuke hai.n Ghazal me.n to, mai.n us sher ko haTa diya...
Mayank,
Yes! to me ,poetry is a tool to understand myself n the world around me.Psychological maturity,emotional intensity and etc are more important to me than the craft of mathmatical precision.
Thanx a lot for these beautiful words of appreciation.I hope my poems make you pause n think afresh n linger in ur heart for some time.
Brijinder
Woh kuch is tarah katraanay lagay
Ki guzray huay din afsaanay lagay
Kal tak to thay jo izhaar-e-muhabbat
Wahi aaj hawas kay bahaanay lagay
Na lagaao pehray is khusbu par
Jiskay haasil maiN mujhay zamaanay lagay
Pighal jaatay thay jo baahon main kabhi
Ab faaslay itnay banaanay lagay
Poocha hai to keh di dil ki baat
Ab na kehna tujhay rulaanay lagay
har shakhsh ke chehre se tanhaian bolti hai
aab samjha ki chehre se sanchaian bolti hai.
wah ----------- wah shukriya aapko itni aachi bhawana ko shabdo me bayan karne ke liye