Woh kuch is tarah katraanay lagay

Brijinder · **Woh kuch is tarah katraanay lagay -** 1st June 2006, 03:10 AM

Woh kuch is tarah katraanay lagay
Ki guzray huay din afsaanay lagay

Kal tak to thay jo izhaar-e-muhabbat
Wahi aaj hawas kay bahaanay lagay

Na lagaao pehray is khusbu par
Jiskay haasil maiN mujhay zamaanay lagay

Pighal jaatay thay jo baahon main kabhi
Ab faaslay itnay banaanay lagay

Poocha hai to keh di dil ki baat
Ab na kehna tujhay rulaanay lagay

saaqi · 1st June 2006, 04:29 AM

kitni khubsoorti se aapne itni mushkil baat ko bayaan kiya hai...wah!

Brijinder · **thanx -** 1st June 2006, 10:51 AM

Thanx for the appreciation of my poem in such beautiful words.
Brijinder"Sagar'

qqplus · 1st June 2006, 08:01 PM

really good. bahut acchhe.

piasandali1234 · **RE;;HI -** 1st June 2006, 08:22 PM

JANAB BUHT KHOOB

voh kuj iss tarah katrane lage k katrane k chaker mein vo hum se dur jaane lage

Brijinder · 2nd June 2006, 02:18 AM

piasandali1234 · **re;hi -** 7th June 2006, 05:07 AM

jab insa kud se lihta hey to kooi tareff nai karta

kher pasan karne k shukria

Brijinder · **?? -** 7th June 2006, 05:21 AM

Array mainay to taareef hi to ki thi.
Brijinder"Sagar'

piasandali1234 · **ree;hi -** 11th June 2006, 02:22 AM

o ho naraj na ho dost thaaanx taref ke

Brijinder · **really -** 14th June 2006, 02:22 AM

I really meant it.
It is good to see that this poem has been viewd so many times.

koi to ho · 16th June 2006, 12:00 AM

very touchy aesay lagata hai jesay dil ki baat keh di ho bohat achi lagi

Brijinder · **thanx -** 18th June 2006, 03:44 AM

Thanx for the appreciation.
Brijinder"sagar"

Brijinder · **new sher -** 19th June 2006, 04:49 AM

A new sh'er has been added but i cannt edit my gazal n so posting here;

Guzishta shub ka kar kay khyaal
Shrmaa kay aanNkh churana chahay

Brijinder · 30th June 2006, 02:22 AM

I am thankful to all as this poem has been viewed more than 400 times.
Brijinder"Sagar"

Brijinder · **thanx -** 17th July 2006, 09:51 AM

I am thankful to all of u.This poem has crossed 500 viewing which is in itself a reward.
brijinder"sagar"

red_ruchika · 17th July 2006, 02:17 PM

bohat khoob////ehsaas bohat saccha hai...aur khoobsurti se aapne kagaz pe utara hai.

Brijinder · 22nd July 2006, 04:44 AM

Thanx a lot for the words of appreciation

Brijinder · 27th July 2006, 08:31 AM

I am grateful to all the readers who have liked this poem so much.It has crossed 700 views which is a reward in itself.
thanx

Brijinder · **thanx -** 19th August 2006, 05:48 AM

I am very thankful to all the readers who have read it so many times.Its views have crossed 900,I hope it will be 1000 in no time.
thanx once again

Brijinder · **thanx -** 31st August 2006, 02:52 AM

I thankful to all the readers for making it to 1000 views.

Akshay Jain · **shaandar -** 1st September 2006, 12:49 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Brijinder
Array mainay to taareef hi to ki thi.
Brijinder"Sagar'

Pighal jaatay thay jo baahon main kabhi
Ab faaslay itnay banaanay lagay

Poocha hai to keh di dil ki baat
Ab na kehna tujhay rulaanay lagay

bahut khoob brij ji
aaj pehli baar padha hai maine apko
consistency kamaal ki hai
bahut khoob
jyada likha karo i m waiting
Apka dost
Akshay

Brijinder · 2nd September 2006, 01:52 PM

Thanx a lot for such warm words of appreciation

Brijinder · **hi -** 17th September 2006, 05:01 AM

I am really glad that this poem is evoking so much interest n has crossed 1200 viewings.thanx once again.

Brijinder · 13th October 2006, 01:01 AM

Oh! I was pleasantly surprised to see that the viewing has crossed 1350 mark..Though i donot rate this poem as one of my more favourites but apparently it has hit some chord in the readers' hearts.
thanx once again
Brijinder"Sagar"

Brijinder · **thanx -** 20th November 2006, 01:04 AM

Thanx for making it to 1500 views.

Brijinder · 18th February 2007, 05:19 AM

Thanx once again for making it to so many views.

bansalsonu · **aapki sayri -** 19th February 2007, 05:35 PM

na tum aye na teri yad aayi,
fir na jane kyu najar teri parchai ayi.
wo tere kesh ki khusbu.
galo ki lali,
wo tere labo ki hasi, teri julf kali,
wo teri masti. wo umar bali. na jane kyu najar ayi.
na tum aye na teri yad ayi,

bansalsonu · **aapki sayri -** 19th February 2007, 05:45 PM

tujhe dhundte-2 ek din,
is duniya se gujar jayenge,
na aap najar aaoge na aapka chehra,
bus aapki yad me din gujar jayenge,
is dil ki ye tammana hai ki
ek bar aapka chehra najar aa jaye,
us chand ke tukde ka didar ho jaye,
fir chahe hum is duniya se gujar jaye,
bus ek bar aapke husn ka didar ho jaye,
kash mere dil ki ye tammana puri ho jaye,

beevi · 21st February 2007, 12:21 AM

nala gi ho jis ko woh dard kisi ka kia jane khud shama ko maloom nahi ku jal jate hain parwane

Brijinder · 21st February 2007, 12:46 AM

I am thankful to u both n for good poetic feedback.

Brijinder · 5th March 2007, 07:51 AM

I am thankful to u all for making this poem so popular.it has already crossed 1700 views.

haideraqueel · 5th March 2007, 03:05 PM

salha saal ki talaash mein zindagi ke chaman se chhante hain
Aapko chahiye toh pesh karoo mere daaman mein chand kaante hain

Brijinder · 27th March 2007, 01:13 PM

Bahut achchy

Brijinder · 26th May 2007, 02:19 AM

Wow! i am thankful for so many views of this poem.

Brijinder · 23rd August 2007, 01:45 AM

Just saw that it ht has almost reached 2000 views.I am very very thankful to u all for appreciating this poem that much.

Mayank · 31st August 2007, 07:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brijinder

Woh kuch is tarah katraanay lagay
Ki guzray huay din afsaanay lagay

Kal tak to thay jo izhaar-e-muhabbat
Wahi aaj hawas kay bahaanay lagay

Na lagaao pehray is khusbu par
Jiskay haasil maiN mujhay zamaanay lagay

Pighal jaatay thay jo baahon main kabhi
Ab faaslay itnay banaanay lagay

Poocha hai to keh di dil ki baat
Ab na kehna tujhay rulaanay lagay

brijinder, aap kii Ghazal ham ne bohat pahle paRh lee thee, lekin reply karne ka mauqa aaj mil raha hai, aur agar mai.n Ghalat nahii.n huu.n to aap ne is Ghazal ka 2nd version bhii kahii.n post kiya hai, aap ne shaayad 'lage hai.n' raadeef istemaal kiya hai.. mujh sabv se zeyaadah aap ke es kalaam ke khayaal paasand aaye.. mai.n ne bhii esi zameen par taba azmaaii kii thee, link de raha huun.. paRh leejiyega,... shaayad aap ko pasand aa jaaaye! is Ghazal par mai.n ne ek sher shaamil kiya tha, hame is tarah aazamaane lage hai.n, kii beete huye din fasaane lage hai.n. paR baad me.n pata chala kii aap already yeh duusra misra istemaal kar chuke hai.n Ghazal me.n to, mai.n us sher ko haTa diya...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57139

ek khuubsuurat kalaam ke liye mere jaaniib se daad haazir hai, qubool keejiyegaa... yuu.n hii likhare rahe.n.

mayank

Brijinder · **hi -** 14th September 2007, 11:46 AM

Mayank,
Yes! to me ,poetry is a tool to understand myself n the world around me.Psychological maturity,emotional intensity and etc are more important to me than the craft of mathmatical precision.
Thanx a lot for these beautiful words of appreciation.I hope my poems make you pause n think afresh n linger in ur heart for some time.
Brijinder

puspayudh · 20th October 2007, 10:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brijinder

Woh kuch is tarah katraanay lagay
Ki guzray huay din afsaanay lagay

Kal tak to thay jo izhaar-e-muhabbat
Wahi aaj hawas kay bahaanay lagay

Na lagaao pehray is khusbu par
Jiskay haasil maiN mujhay zamaanay lagay

Pighal jaatay thay jo baahon main kabhi
Ab faaslay itnay banaanay lagay

Poocha hai to keh di dil ki baat
Ab na kehna tujhay rulaanay lagay

har shakhsh ke chehre se tanhaian bolti hai
aab samjha ki chehre se sanchaian bolti hai.
wah ----------- wah shukriya aapko itni aachi bhawana ko shabdo me bayan karne ke liye

Brijinder · 16th April 2008, 02:36 AM

I am very thankful to you all for bringing it to more than 2000 views.