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26th March 2008, 07:08 PM
Chapter 9
Charo or khushiya hi khushiya thhi....sabke paas apna apna pyaar thha....ab sabki pareshaaniya door ho gai....or isi ke saath sardiya aa gai disammabar ka mahina lagne wala thha kuch hi dono me.... Raat ko 2 baje : "Hi honey...kya kar rahi ho " Piyush ne cell se Saba ko call kiya " Bhajan keertan kar rahi hu.....daffar raat ko 2 baje hain, so rahi hu.." Saba ne gusse me kaha " Oh yaa...achha yaar tumhari bahot yaad aa rahi hai...achha main 1 hafte ke liye chaksoo jaa raha hu, cousin ki shaadi hai 2 disammbar ki..to main jaa raha hu aaj shaam ko... " Or tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho...had hai yaar tum aaj jaa rahe ho or aaj hi bata rahe ho..i just hate u...Saba ne gusse me kaha " Karti raho hate..but i love u....achha mujhe miss to karogi na.." Piyush ne kaha "Nahi kabhi nahi....jao tum " Saba fir gusse me thhi " Honey phone rakhta hu, apna khayaal rakhna ok..main 5 tarikh tak aa jaunga...ok bye love u " Piyush ne kaha " Ok, tum bhi apna khayaal rakhna ok...bye love u too " Saba ne kaha or fir phone rakh diya dono ne... Saba ka bilkul man nahi lag raha thha Piyush ke bina...or aaj to sirf 28 tarikh hi hui thhi, abhi to ek hafta kaatna thha use Piyush ke bina...isi tarha 2 tarikh fir 3 tarikh bhi aa gai....Saba se ab nahi raha gaya... "Pahali nazar me kya jadoo kar diya tera ban baittha hai mera jiya kal ka kya hoga kya pata is pal ko jeele aa jeele zara " " Ye gana kaha baj raha hai....." Piyush se uske cousin ne puchha "Abe mera cell baj raha hai, idhar de " Piyush ne hanste hue kaha " Hello " Piyush ko phone pe jo khabar mili use sunte hi vo jaipur ke liye nikal diya usne apne mammy papa ko bata diya thha ke vo jaa raha hai...or fir kuch ghanto baad Saba ke ghar pahoncha.. " Saba, Saba tum...tum theek ho..." Piyush ne hairani se use dekhte hue puchha " Haa main theek hu, " Saba ne khush hote hue kaha " Lekin vo phone call..mujhe kisine kaha thha ke tumhara accident ho gaya vo kya thha " Piyush ne pareshani se kaha " Vo to mazaak thha budhu...main tumhe jaldi bulana chaahti thhi, waise bhi tumhare bhai ki shaadi ho gai thhi na, mera dil nahi lag raha thha isi liye ye sab kiya " Saba ne muskurate hue kaha....Piyush ne ye sunte hi ki vo sab mazaak thha Saba ko ek chaanta maara... " Fir kabhi aisa ghatiya mazaak kabhi mat karna " Piyush gusse me chala gaya...Saba ke ghar ke garden me pahoncha hi thha ke Saba ne use rok diya " I am sorry Piyush..maine galat kiya..." Saba ne sorry kaha " Saba tumne kitna ganda mazaak kiya mere sath..tumhe pata hai main kitni jaldi jaldi wapas aaya...main to darr raha thha ke kahi kuch galat na ho jaye, Saba tumhari zindagi mere liye meri jaan se bhi jyada ajeez hai, kya haalat hui hogi tumhare accidant ki khabar sunke jo ki jhuNtthi thhi." Piyush ne gusse me kaha...Saba Piyush ke paas aake mwaffi mangne lagi.... " Fir kabhi aisa mat karna " Piyush ne Saba ko gale lagaate hue kaha...or fir Piyush ne mamma papa ko call karke kaha ke sab theek hai... ab ye seen bhi khatm hua....January aate aate sab padhaai me lag gaye..notes banana...class ragualer lena...mahine bhar baad ki baat hai... Collage ke ground me : " Piyush yaar problem ho gai..Saara ke ghar waalo ko humare baare me pata chal gaya...unhone hume phone pe baat karte hue dekh liya..or Saara ka collage aana band kar diya usme parents ne " Sahil ne khabar di " To isme darne ki kya baat hai, kabhi na kabhi to pata chalna hi thha unhe..achha hua jo ab chal gaya..." Piyush ne kaha " Lekin yaar vo musibat me hai " Sahil ne kaha " Theek ho jayega sab pareshaan mat ho....ek kaam kar tu apne parents ko bata de...or fir unhe Saara ke ghar bhej de..bas " Piyush ne kaha " Haa bata de...tujhe kya lagta hai mere parents maan jayenge....mujhe maar denge..." Sahil ne kaha " Lekin kabhi na kabhi to batana hi hai na..." Piyush ne kaha " Haa yaar....main aaj hi baat karta hu " Sahil ne agree kiya Saara ke parents ab Saara ko collage nahi bhejna chaahte thhe, unhone Saara ki padhaai band karva di..kareeb 3 din to ho chuke thhe...Udhar Sahil bhi pareshaan thha...Saara ke parents ab Saara ki shaadi kar dena chaahte thhe, lekin Saara ne saaf inkaar kar diya.. Saara ke bhaiyaa sab jaante thhe...vo bade the samjhdaar thhe unhone parents ko manaya ke Saara khush nahi rahe payegi kisi or se shaadi karke...thhode dino ki aana'kaani ke baad vo bhi maan gaye....unhone kaha ke Sahil ke ghar vaale rishta leke aa jayeN..lekin kaise?...Sahil ke parents to bikul raazi nahi thhe...Sahil ne ye Piyush ko or uske mammy papa ko bataya to vo Sahil ke ghar gaye uske mammy papa se baat karne... " Varma jee, baccho ki khushi ke aage bado ko jhook jaana chaahiye..bade baccho ke aage jidd karte achhe nahi lagte..or waise bhi ladki bahot hi pyaari hai...achhe log hain..fir kya samasya hai shaadi me " Piyush ke papa ne kaha... " Kaise haa kahe du, aajtak humar ghar me kisine prem'vivaah nahi kiya...is ladke ki baat maanke samaaj me apni izajjat gaNvaa doo? " Sahil ke papa bade gusse se bole " Samaaj...konsa samaaj papa " Sahil bhi chun na raha, usne bolna shuru kiya " Vo samaaj jisne sirf lena sikha hai, aajtak kuch diya nahi...ya vo samaajh jiski wajha se humari zindagi nark bani thhi...aapko yaad nahi lekin mujhe aaj bhi achhi tarha yaad hai...gaaNv me jab humari zameen nilaam hone waali thi, tab apke samaaj ke kis insaan ne apki madad ki thhi, sab aage khade thhe, lekin tamasha dekhne ke liye, madad ke liye koi nahi aaya...lekin jo insaan humari madad ke liye aaya thha vo kon thha? GaaNv ke Kumavat baba the thhe na....vo to hamare samaaj ka hissa nahi hai..fir umhone humari madad kyu ki... Samaaj se insaan nahi, balki insaan se samaaj banta hai...or insaan banne ke liye pahale insaan se pyaar karna aana chaahiye...agar aap ye chaahte hain ke aapke andhvishvaasi samaaj ke liye main apni khushiyo ka baleedaan de du..to i m sorry papa main aisa nahi kar sakta..." Sahil jab bol raha thha to uski ankhe nam thhi...or apni baat khatm karke vo apne room me chala gaya...Piyush uske pichhe chala gaya... " Mera beta kitna samajhdaar ho gaya hai, main hi naasamajh thha jo sacchai nahi samajh saka..shaayad usne sahi kaha hai..." Sahil ke papa ki ankho me ansoo thhe fir vo Sahil ke kamre me gaye....Sahil ro raha thha, or Piyush uske paas khada tha " Sahil, mujhe mwaff kar de beta, main galat tha, meri soch galat thhi.." Sahil ke papa ne uske sar pe haath ferte hue kaha " I m sorry papa maine aapka dil dukhaya" Sahil papa ke gale lagke rone laga " Are pagal ladka hoke aise ro raha hai, itna to Saara bhi nahi rone waali jab vo shaadi karke is ghar me aayegi..." Or sab haNs pare..matlab Sahil ke parents raazi ho gaye thhe... Or unhone sunday ko Saara ke ghar rishta leke jaana taye kiya...sunday bhi aa gay ro Rishte ki baat bhi pakki ho gai...collage ki chhuttiyo me dono ki sagaai taye kar di gai...ek baar fir khushiya hi khushiya thhi chaaroNaur...kisiki nazar na lag jaaye bas...ab to intezaar thha chhuttiyo ka.....lekin usse pahale exams bhi to aane hain na..Saara ne bhi us din ke baad se collage start kar di thhi...or fir dheere dheere waqt guzarta gaya...or chhuttiya aa gai....may chal raha thha june me sagaai taye hui Sahil or Saara ki....sab usi me lag gaye...Sahil Piyush Saara Saba ye chaaro to shopping me mast thhe...kya pahanna hai sagaai ke din..saraa samaana aagaya ya kuch baaki raha..isi me may nikal gaya or Sagaai ki tarikh kareeb aane lagi...2 din baaki thhe " Piyush, Sagaai wale din thhoda jaldi jaana unke ghar..kaam me haath baNta dena..." Papa ne Piyush se kaha " Yes dad..waise dad aap kya pahan rahe hain..." Piyush ne puchha " Vo jo suit laaye thhe naa Priya ki shaadi me wahi pahanunga " Papa ne javaab diya " Oh no please..dad waha ladkiyo ke samne mera impretion kharaab karoge kya, aapko hi dekhengi sab mujhpe to koi nazar hi nahi daalega hahahaha" Piyush or uske dad mazaak ke mood me aa gaye... " Piyush dr. se chackup karvaya, tumhe kal kaha thha na " Mammy ne daaNt lagaai " Sorry mum bhool gaya...kal chala jaaunga i promise " Piyush ne kaha " Itne dino se khaansi ho rahi hai, friz ka dhanda paani pite rahate ho...sardi to lag hi gai hai fir time pe chackup nahi karaoge to bimaar ho jaoge..kal chale jana dr. uncle ke " Mamma ne kaha....Piyush ne haa kahake apne kamre ki or rukh kiya.... 2 din baad Sahil ki sagaai vale din: Sagaai ki rasm ho gai...dono ne angutthi bhi pahana dii ek dusre ko....hmm bahot khushi ka mahol thha...Tabhi Piyush ko ek call aaya...use shaayad kisine argent bulaya tha..to vo kuch hi der me waha se chalaa gaya.... Apral ke baad july bhi aa gai...or collage fir se shuru ho gai...2nd year ke student 3rd me aa gaye thhe....collage shuru hue 10-12 din ho gaye thhe... " Saba ye Piyush aajkal itna udaas pareshaan kyu rahata hai...kya hua hai ise.." Sahil ne puchha " Nahi mujhe nahi pata, mujhse bhi theek se baat nahi karta na hi kuch kahata hai " Saba ne kaha Piyush ki udaasi, pareshaani ka kaaran kisiko nahi pata chala....isi kashm'kash me 3 mahine nikal gaye..or ek din haqikat sunke sabki dhadkne thhamne ko thhi.... To Be Continoued Grazie Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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26th March 2008, 08:05 PM
zarur koi khatarnaaq kaam hone wala hai abh
Pooji mujhe gussa aajayega agar mere HERO ko kucch hua toh...coz mujhe andaza ho raha hai ki kucch ghalat salat karne wali ho tum plz mat karo aise  jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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26th March 2008, 08:11 PM
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 grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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26th March 2008, 08:21 PM
haan pooja di khulika ji bilkul sahi keh rahe hai ki ab app jarur koi galat mod laa rahe ho piyush ko kya huva hai jo itna pareshan ho gaya aur piyush ki baat sunkar sab ki dhadkane ruk gayi aisa kuva tha kahi sara ki tarah saba ki bhi shadi ki baat nahi chal rahi hai na ya fir saba ki papa ne piyush ko kuch kaha hai jo itna udash ho gaya hai piyush
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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26th March 2008, 08:57 PM
Yaar mujhe sara sahil main interest nahi hai but fir bhi ye to batao ye sahil karta kya hai...? matlab kuchh kaam- vaam bhi karta hai ya fir bas khata he hai.....mujhe to nahi lagta koi apni ladki ke shaadi us ladke se tay kar denge jo kuchh kamata he nahi ho....
 bade he bewkoof kism ke mom dad hain sara ke...puchha bhi nahi ki beta kya karte ho..? aur shaadi pakki kar di......Hehehehe Chalo thik hai ab tumne kahaani likhi hai to kuchh to socha hoga unki aage ke zindagi ke baare main....  Quote:
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26th March 2008, 09:04 PM
Arey nahiinn....main batata hun naa....piyush ko doctor ka phone aaya tha...sayad kuchh baat serious hogi tabhi uska bulaya haii....ab aage vo udaas kyon hain ye to uske mom dad aur doctor ko he pata hai....
Mujhe lagta hai...doctor ne kaha hoga tumhne brain cancer hai..ya fir....blood cancer hai.....ya fir....T.B. hai.....ya fir...bas khaNshi he hai..... Ab ye to Pooja madam he clear karengii ki aakhir hhai kya use....???? Vaise mera man to kar raha hai ki piyush ko blood cancer ho jaye aur saba ki zindahi main koi aur aa jaye...jaise sahil..... ...ya fir...apne Ajay yadav bhaiyya....vo bhi vahin rehte hain naaa........Quote:
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26th March 2008, 09:17 PM
Ek baat meri samajh main nahi aati Jab dekho bechaari saba he sorry kehti rehti hai...kya itni galat hai vo.....mujhe to uski koi baat galat nahi lagti to fir tumNhe kaise galat lagti hai.....
Bechaari chaNta bhi vahi khaye aur fir baad main sorry bhi vahi bole....aur piyush kitna kaharb ladka hai....yaar tum jisko jaan se jyada pyar karte ho usko chaaNta kaise maar sakte ho........ mujhe to bahut gussa aa raha hai....  ye bhi koi baat huii....jab se kahani suru hui hai tab se he saba ko tumne ek aisi ladki bana rakha hai jise jo chahe aaye vo kuchh bhi keha jaayee....Public property hai kya vo..vahi bechaari bar bar sorry kehti rehti hai...Pooja apne is character ko strong karo... Yaar haath kaise utha sakta hai piyush us par.... |
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26th March 2008, 09:18 PM
Ek baat meri samajh main nahi aati Jab dekho bechaari saba he sorry kehti rehti hai...kya itni galat hai vo.....mujhe to uski koi baat galat nahi lagti to fir tumNhe kaise galat lagti hai.....
Bechaari chaNta bhi vahi khaye aur fir baad main sorry bhi vahi bole....aur piyush kitna kaharb ladka hai....yaar tum jisko jaan se jyada pyar karte ho usko chaaNta kaise maar sakte ho........ mujhe to bahut gussa aa raha hai.... ye bhi koi baat huii....jab se kahani suru hui hai tab se he saba ko tumne ek aisi ladki bana rakha hai jise jo chahe aaye vo kuchh bhi keha jaayee....Public property hai kya vo..vahi bechaari bar bar sorry kehti rehti hai...Pooja apne is character ko strong karo... Yaar haath kaise utha sakta hai piyush us par.... |
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26th March 2008, 10:28 PM
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agar piyush ki jagah per tume bitha diya jaaye aur saba tumse ye kahe ki mera acident ho gaya hai to kya tum vahi per shadi me rukte aur akar saba ko badhai dete ki wah sab tumara mazak karne ka tarika muje bahut acha laga.aur saba ye sunkar bahut khush ho jaati hai na. per tumara kya tum jo shadi chhodkar aa gaye aur tum saba ki kitni chinta kar rahe the uska kuch nahi. haan agar sahi me piyush gaja tum hote na to saba ko tum badhay dete ki wah saba. aur rahi shahil aur sara ki baat to pehle part se hi sab pooja kehti aa rahi hai ki shahil study karta hai abhi to kaam kese karega haan agar tum shahil ki jagah hote to jarur kaam karne lag jaate kyu ki yaar pyar karne ka matlab to sirf vahi janta hai jo kisi ko sache dil se pyar karta ho. aur sara ke mammi papa bahut hi ache hai jo sara ka dukh samaj sake aur sara ki sagai kardi shahil ke sath agar sara ki sagai kisi aur se hoti to kya vo khush reh pati kabhi. aur sahil khush reh pata kabhi. ek baat kahu yaar tumare liye zindagi me kabhi humse kisi ka acha nahi hota ho na to yaar kisi ka bura kehna bhi hume koi hak nahi hai. aur tum ye sab baate kehte ho ki vo aisi hai ye aisa hai kabhi tum bhi kisi se pyar karo to pata chalega ki kon kesha hai agar tumne kisi se pyar kiya hoga na yaar to sayad vo ladki tume chhodkar chali gayi hogi kyu ki tum kisi ko yaha per thik se jawab dena bhi nahi jante ho to rahi pyar ki baat use kese sacha pyar karte hoge tum. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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26th March 2008, 11:56 PM
Arey wahh
kya lecture diya hai mujhe wah bhai ...ab mujhe ye bhi batao ki mere iraade kaise galat hain...maine chaaNta marne ki baat kahi thi....ab chaaNta maarna to nahi banta naa....thik hai usne ganda mazak kiya tha lakin tum use warn kar sakte ho.....par ye kya hai..." saba main tumhe isliye chaaNta maar raha hun kyunki main tumhe bahut pyar karta hun...." rahi sahil ki baat to pooja keh rahi thi ki sahil chill marta hai aur 3rd division hai..so isse to yahi lagta hai ki vo padhta vadhta nai hai..... Par ye mast tha..." saba main tumhe............................................. .....................hun" Quote:
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27th March 2008, 12:13 AM
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kahaani ka ant to apke saamne hai..ab kya zaroorat hai kahaani aage badhaane ki.... waise aaj shaayad is site se ya to main ban hoti yaar ye Sahil, mujhe iske saare javaab padhke bahot gussa aaya...lekin Sahil ki post pe apka javaab padhke gussa shaant hua thhoda....thanks grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th March 2008, 12:17 AM
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di app kisi ki vajah se mat jana kyu ki jab aag lagti hai na to dhua to charo taraf felta hai to hum dhua se kyu bhage kyu na hum sab milkar us dhua ko bhagaye AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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27th March 2008, 12:27 AM
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To janaab Sahil saaheb, aap bahot achhi soch rakhte hain...aisa karti hu, kahaani ka ant aappe chhod deti hu...aap hi aage badhaaiye kahaani...meri kahaani ka ant 9ve bhaag ke saath ho gaya...ab main aage nahi likhungi kahaani....aap apne faaltu savaal band kariye yaha....aap ke savaalo ke javaab kahaani me hi hain....aap pahale kahaani ko dhyaan se man lagakar padhiye....to aapko ek ek baat samajh aa jayegi... Sahil padhaai kar raha hai...vo 3rd division thha 11th tak...lekin uske baad uski har baar first divi. bani hai, ye baat main kahani me bata chuki hu, or Saara Sahil ki filhaal sagaai hui hai, shaadi nahi ke chinta sataane lagi aapko uske kaam ki...fikr mat kariye shaadi hone se pahale vo kaam bhi dhoondh lega....Jee haa Piyush ko blood cancer hai....lekin meri kahaani ka ant isi ke saath nahi hoga...waise mujhe kya fikr aap hain na kahaani aage badhaane ke liye...Saba ko kabhi kisine apni public proparti nahi samjha, fir aap kyu use kisiki jaaydaat banaa rahe hain....kahaani Saba par nirbhar hai to usi ke saath chalegi na...use kaise kinaare baittha du...?...Piyush ne use chaanta maara...is liye nahi ke usne Piyush ko shaadi se bulaya, balki is liye ke Saba ne mazaak kiya ke uska accident ho gaya hai....Piyush ko darr laga ke kahi vo Saba ko kho na de, lekin vo to ek jhoontth nikla, to kya Piyush Saba ki aarti utaarta uske mazaak ke badle, Pyaar ko khona ka jab darr lagta hai na jaan pe ban aati janaab...waise apni nizi baate yaha nahi likhni chaahiye lekin mujhe lagta hai ke udhaaran dena chaahiye, kyuki aapne kaha ke pyaar kare use chaanta kaise maar sakte hain...main jiss insaan se pyaar karti hu usne mujhe chaanta maara thha, kyuki maine ek bahot hi bhangaar mazaak kiya thha....jo mujhe nahi karna chaahiye thha, vo mazaak mujhse sambandhit thha jab mere muh se galat baat nikli mazaak me to usne mujhe chaanta mara or kaha ke "aisa fir kabhi mat kahana" pyaar ke khilaaf kuch ho to insaan ko gussa hi aata hai...or ye chaanta pyaar jataane ke liye thha nafrat sabit karne ke liye nahi.... Tum jaise besharm insaan ki is site ko koi zaroorat nahi, naa hi meri post ko....main apni kisibhi post pe tumhare koi bhi javaab bardaasht nahi kar sakti...chaahe achhe ho ya bure...tum pichha chhod kyu nahi dete meraaaaaaaaaa or meri posts ka.....kyu tumhe meri hi post milti hai kharaab karne ke liye.... ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th March 2008, 12:47 AM
Nahi nahi kahaani ka ant tum he karo.....aur meri vazah se likhna band mat karo......varna is site ke log mujhe bol bolkar he maar dalenge.....vaise main to bas ye soch raha tha ki tumne chaNta marne wali baat add kyun ki....chalo tumne bata he diya....
Yaar likho naa tum apni kahaani main kahan tumhe kuchh kehta hun...aur mujhse itna gussa kyun ho tum.....????? :confus ed:Chalo main ab koi post nahi karunga...likho jo tumhe lihna hai....aur aisa karo.....Mod ko bolo ki mera IP he ban kar de fir aage se kabhi main kuchh nahi likhunga.....Ok Quote:
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27th March 2008, 12:58 AM
Chalo thik hai....jitne log hai naa is site par aur jitne log mujhe bhala bura keh rahe hain bas unhi logon ne pyaar kiya hai aur vohi pyar ka matlab jaante hain.....main kaise jaanunga....main pyar thode he karta hun kisi se....
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27th March 2008, 01:03 AM
Ab dekhna log mujhe bahut bura bolne wale hain........
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27th March 2008, 01:31 AM
STORY ACHCHE HAI OR AAPKE LANGUGE BHI BAHOT ACHCHE HAI KEEP WRITING .....
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27th March 2008, 01:23 PM
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hum apko samaja rahe hai ki app jo bhi post karte ho vo galat hoti hai kyu ki apki post se har kisi ka dil dukh ta hai agar pooja ki jagah tum kahani likh rahe hote hai aur tumari kahani ka koi pehle hi ant karde to kya tum khush hote batavo yaar koi bhi khush nahi hota hai bahut dukh hota hai aur app pyar ki baat kar rahe ho na to suno meri baat jo log pyar karte hai na vo kisi ko bura nahi kehte hai khud ko bura sabit karte hai magar kisi aur ko bura kabhi nahi kehte hai. aur pyar ka matlab ye nahi hota hai ki hum har kisi ki post per kisi ko ulte hi jawab de tum khud ke baare hi soch rahe ho pyar me aisa nahi hota hai pehle dusro ke baare sochna padta hai aur fir baad me kuch bachta hai to hume khud ke baare sochna hota hai per tum na kisi ko samaj te ho na khud samaj te ho me tume yahi kahuga yaar agar mod ko bolkar tume vo block kare is se pehle tum kyu khud hi yaha se chale nahi jaate ho kyu ki yaar tum humesha sabka inslut karte ho isi liye muje tumse koi sikayat nahi hai per jo sdc per bahut purane log hai usko to yaha rehne do sab log kitne armaano se sath kahani ho ya shayri ho post karte hai per tum uski kahani ko samaj te na hi uski shayri ko jab tum se achi baate nahi hote hai yaar to kisi ki post per reply bhi mat karo yaar agar tume pooja se tumari koi baat hai tu uske badle me tum muje jo chahe kehdo gali dena chahte ho to vo dede yaar magar pls yaar kisi ko aise mat tang karo app. hum bhi yahi chahte hai ki app humare sath rahiye per app hume nahi samaj sakte ho yaar AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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27th March 2008, 02:22 PM
wah sweety bohat khoob bhai maan gaye aapko
 bohat flow main ja rahi hai tumhari story aur kafi control hai tumhara likhai pe ....mager khuda ke liye bechare piyush ko koi beemari mat lagana werna ghussa ajaye ga mujhe ending achi honi chahiye nahi to main bohat sensitive hoon yaad rakhna isbaat koapne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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27th March 2008, 02:41 PM
pooja maine apna reply dene ke baad sab ke replies parrhe hain aur mujhe behad afsos ke sath kehna parr raha hai ke aik shaks intehai fuzool baton se sab members ko na sirf pareshan ker raha hai balke story pe fuzool kisam ki tanqeed bhi ker raha hai to dear pooja aur dear members aap sab se main bas itna kahoongi ke use ignore kerdain uske replies ka koi jawab na dain aur sweety jab hum koi cheez public ke samne paish kerte hain na to phir logon ke hawale kerdete hain ab koi tareef karega koi tanqeed to humain sab berdasht kerna hota hai aur main janti hoon tum bohat himmat wali lerki ho in fuzool baton pe dhiyan nahi dogi story ko end tak zaroor pohanchaogi ok aur haan hum sab jante hain ye tanqeed baraye tanqeed hai jismain koi haqeeqat ya sachai nahi tum pareshan mat ho aur jaldi se end paish karo yahan we all are waiting dear
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27th March 2008, 02:51 PM
YuuNhi liKhati raho..
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27th March 2008, 04:16 PM
Haan Haan jaldi se end karo.......
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27th March 2008, 07:14 PM
Haan bhaii...isse pehle vo pooja mod ko bolkar mujhe ban karaye main he chala jata hun.....sab khush raho apni duniya main.....aaram se story pado aur khobb kehkahe lagao.......abhi jab pooja iska ganda end karegi naa tab dekhna kya hota hai.....Aur kya kaha tumne main jo bhi post karta hun vo sab galat hota hai.....Ek line to batao maine kya galat likha aur rahi baat gaali dene ki to maine isse pehle kis kisko gaali di hai jo ab dunga.......Aur tu jyada hero mat ban ki pooja ke jagah mujhe gaali de le.....Haan mujhe to aur kuchh kaam he nahi hai pure din tujhe gaali deta rahun.......
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27th March 2008, 07:29 PM
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.....aur aisa zaroori nahin tum usko jawab do...tum gussa mat ho aur apna kaam karo.......fir main apna karungi......heeee.chalo haso.....tum gussa karogi to main apni kahani kaise agge badhaungi......:tumhe to dhyan main rakha hain na mujhe...aaayi na hasi.....chalo ab muskura do..aur uski faltu baaton ka jawab na do.......tumahri di... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th March 2008, 08:07 PM
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aur haan agar tume khushi milti hai muje gaali dena to dete raho yaar usme kya hai kam se kam tum to khush reh pavoge humara kya hai hum to jinda hai fir bhi mar gaye hai. aur muje tumse koi sikayat hai yaar per tum jo kar rahe ho na vo galat hai isi liye me tume har baar itna massage kar raha hu varna muje kya ferk padta hai kisi ke bitch bolna per yaar aisi baato se kisi ka dil tut jata hai per muje nahi lagta hai ki tum kabhi samaj pavoge kyu ki jo khud ke liye sochta ho vo dusro ke baare me kya sochega jp apna acha nahi kar pata hai vo dusro ka kya acha karega. me tume ek bhai ke naate keh raha hu ki tum aisi past mat karo jis se koi hurt ho jaaye.sayad umar tumse kahi chhota hu per dil bahut aayna ki tarah saaf hai mera kher apko jo acha lage vo app karna. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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27th March 2008, 08:24 PM
Chapter 10
{ kahaani ke ant ke saath } '' Saba main Sahil, Tum jaldi se " Dulhabjee '' hospitel aa jao..Piyush ko waha admit kiya gaya hai " Sahil ne Saba ko call kiya, Saba turant hospitel pahonch gai...kya hua hai Piyush ko? ye savaal bahot der se uske zahan me thha...Saba Piyush se mili, or uske papa se bhi usne puchha bhi ke kya hua hai, lekin kisine use kuch nahi batayaa..Piyush ne kaha ke B.P. low ho gaya thha isi liye... jab tak Piyush hosp. me thha Saba din bhar uske paas hi rahati, shaam ko ghar jaati...4 din baad me Piyush ghar aaya...Lekin vo bilkul badal chuka thha...Vo collage jaata lekin Saba se door door rahane laga thha...Saba se bardaasht nahi hota ye...fir 1 hafte tak Piyush collage hi nahi aaya...Saba call karti to recive nahi karta...Saba ek din Piyush ke ghar pahonch gai...shaam ka waqt thha... Piyush ke ghar : " Kya baat hai Piyush, tum mujhse baat tak nahi karte..." Saba ne enter hote hi kaha " Tum, tum yaha kyu aai ho, mujhe kya hua hai sahi to hu, kar to raha hu baat " Piyush ne pane bad se utthte hue kaha " Tum aisa kyu kar rahe ho Piyush.." Saba ne dukhi awaaz se puchha " Kya kar raha hu " Piyush ne puchha " Apne aap se puchho ke kya kar rahe ho...tum pahale to mere bina rahate hi nahi thhe, or ab 10 din ho gaye hain baat tak nahi ki...kitna badal gaye ho tum " Saba ne kaha " Achha, ha main badal gaya hu, insaan jab ek hi cheez se bore ho jataa hai to usse keenara kar leta hai, main bhi bore ho gaya hu tumse...khush...sacchai pata chal gai na..." Piyush ne bahot hi seriously kaha " Dekho agar ye mazaak hai to bahot ganda hai...so please " Saba ne gusse me kaha " Mazaak? hahaha...Saba mera pichha chhodo..dekho main ab kisi orko pasand karta hu.." Piyush ne nazre ghumaate hue kaha Ye sunte hi Saba hairaan rahe gai...use yakeen nahi hua ke ye wahi Piyush hai....Saba apni bheegi palko ke saath waha se chali gai...Saba ne collage aana, friends se milna'julna band kar diya...Sahil ek din uske ghar pahoncha ke vo thheek to hai na... Saba ke ghar : " Kya hua hai Saba, tum aajkal collage nahi aa rahi or na hi phone pe baat karti ho " Sahil ne puchha, or ye sunte hi Saba ro pari...usne sab Sahil ko bataaya... " Ho hi nahi sakta, Main Piyush ko achhi tarha jaanta hu usne to kisi ladki ki or dekha tak nahi tumhare siva, balki tumhare sydeny jaane ke baad bhi nahi..vo bas tumse pyaar karta hai fir kisi or ko pasand karne ka to savaal hi nahi utthta hai..zaroor koi or baat hai jo vo chupa raha hai..." Sahil ne kaha " Aisi kya baat ho sakti hai...jo vo mujhse chhupane ke liye aisa karega..." Saba ne hairani se kaha " Pata nahi, tum maloom karne ki koshish karo shayad pata chal gaye.." Sahil ne kaha, Sahil ki baate sunke use laga ke shayad koi baat ho jise chhupane ke liye usne ye sab kiya ho...usne sab jaanne ka taye kar hi liye...or dusre din vo Piyush ke ghar fir chali gai...Piyush fir usse nazre churane laga " Piyush, kya chhoopa rahe ho tum mujhse ? " Saba ne puchha " Main tumse kya chhupaaunga..dekho Saba main saari baat pahale hi clear kar chuka hu, tum ghar jaao, baahar halki barish ho rahi hai isse pahale ke baarish taz ho tum chali jaao " Piyush ne kaha " Ye mere savaal ka javaab nahi hai..." Saba ne gusse me kaha, lekin Piyush ke paas koi javaab nahi thha... " Piyush meri aankho me dekh kar kaho ke tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte " Saba ne Piyush ke apni or kheenchte hue kaha...Piyush kab tak jhoontth bolta, aakhir usne kahe hi diya ke vo Saba se bahot pyaar karta hai.. " Main tumse bahot pyaar karta hu Saba lekin humare pyaar ki manzil nahi hai...tum please yaha se chali jaao, main tumhare haath jodta hu.." Piyush Saba ke kadmo me gir gaya... " Pahale mujhe ek haqikat bata do, tum mujhse meri zindagi kyu cheen rahe ho...mere sar pe haath rakh ke kaho ke tum mujhse ke tum dil se chaahte ho ke main tumse door chali jaau humesha ke liye..bolo " Saba ne Piyush ke haath ko apne haath me leke kaha.. Saba ki baate sunke Piyush ki aankho me aansoo aa gaye...usne pana haath door khinch liya...vo khada hua or usne Saba ko apni almaari se ek file nikal kar diya...jab Saba ne us file ko khola to vo hairaan rahe gai... " Piyush, ye sab kya hai...aisa kaise ho sakta hai " Saba ne file ko fainkte hue kaha " Yahi sacch hai Saba main bas 7 mahino ka mehamaan hu, tum meri berukhi ki wajha jaanna chaahti thi na, yahi wajha hai..main tumhe kabhi nahi batata, lekin aaj tumne mujhe tod diya..main tumhe khud se door kar dena chaahta hu, kyuki mere saath rahake tumhe kuch haansil nahi hoga...Saba tum chali jaao, chali jaao..jaaaaaaao " Piyush ne Saba ko dhakka dete hue kaha " Nahi Piyush nahi, tumhe kuch nahi hoga..main tumhe marne nahi dungi." Saba ne Piyush ke paas aake kaha " haqeekat se muh mat fero Saba, main chand mahino ka mehamaan hu...tum mujhse kinaara kar lo, isi me tumhaari bhalaai hai " Piyush ne kaha " Saaf saaf kaho ke tum mujhe ab apna nahi bananaa chaahte...Piyush, Piyush main tumhaare bina nahi jee sakti...mere hisse ki khushi to mujhe dedo...or kal. kal ka kise pata hai, ho sakta hai ke tum theek ho jaao...Piyush please mujhe jeete jee mat maaro main tumhaare haath jodti..." Saba ne rote hue kaha "Main tumhe koi khushi nahi de sakta, jis insaan ki jhholi me gam hi gam ho vo kisiko khushi kya dega..or agar 7 mahine baad bhi main bach gaya to main tumhaare paas aa jaunga...ab tum jao " Piyush ne muh ferte hue kaha " Kitne patthar dil ho gaye ho tum, theek hai...tum mujhe pana banana nahi chaahte or main tumhaara bane bina jee nahi sakti....or tumhe alag hote dekhu isse achha hai ke main ye duniya hi chhod du " Ye kahake Saba waha se doudti hui ghar ke baahar chali gai...Piyush ko laga ke vo kahi kuch galat na kar de isi liye vo bhi uske pichhe pichhe daudta hua chala gaya " Sabaaa !! kya kar rahi thhi tum, dikhaai nahi diya gaadi jaa rahi thhi..." Piyush ne Saba ko road se apni or khinchte hue kaha " Ha dikh raha thha, lekin tumhe mera dard nahi dikhta...chhodo mujhe chhodo..." Saba ye kaha fir aage badhi " Nahiii, tummeri ho sirf meri khuda bhi tumhe pana nahi bana sakta..." Piyush ne Saba ko khinchte hue gale lagaya, us shaam dono bahot roye...Lekin Piyush or Saba fir saath rahane lage. kuch 2,3 din baad Saba ne apne papa ko Piyush ke baare me bataya, to unhone Piyush se milna chaaha...Piyush jab unse mila to usne sab sacch sacch bata diya ke Vo Saba ki zindagi barbaad nahi karna chaahta, kyuki 7 mahine baad vo marne waala hai use blood cancer hai...Piyush ko poora yakeen thha ke Saba ke papa uski shaadi nahi hone denge Piyush ke saath kyuki koi bhi mataa peeta apni beti ko 7 mahino ki dulahan bana kar zindagi bhar ki vidhva nahi banana chaahte...or yahii Piyush chaahta thha ke un dono ki shaadi naa ho... Saba ke ghar: " Papa Piyush apko kaisa laga " Saba ne savaal kiya " Achha ladka hai, lekin tumhaari usse shaadi nahi ho sakti " Saba ke papa ne kaha " Kya, lekin kyu ? " Saba puchha " Tumhaara dimmag to thhikaane hai na, vo ladka jise cancer hai tum usse shaadi karna chaahti ho, main nahi karunga tumhaari shaadi usse " Papa ne gusse me kaha " Papa !! main usse pyaar karti hu, or maine aapko faisla karne ka haq nahi diya hai apni zindagi ke baare me, ye haq to aap saalo pahale hi kho chuke hain jab apne meri Maa ke karne ke baad meri khabar tak nahi li..." Saba ne gusse me kaha " Saba, bahot bol rahi ho, tumhari shaadi usse nahi ho sakti bas..." Papa ne kaha " Meri shaadi Piyush se hi hogi, main apse kahe chuki hu ke aap mujhpe apna haq kho chuke hain, papa, sirf paise dene se ya achha pahanne khaane ke liye dene se hi koi kisika peeta nahi ban jaata, peeta banne ke liye baccho ke man me jhaank kar dekhna hota hai, pyaar bhi karna hota hai, ehsaaso ko dukho ko samajhna parta hai...khushiyo me shaamil hona parta hai...aajtak apne mujhe kya diya in sab me se jo aaj aap mujhpe haq jataa rahe hain, meri Maa ke jaane ke baad kabhi aapne mujhse puchha ke main khush hu ya dhukhi, zinda hu ya mar gai..kabhi meri taraz apne dekha hi nahi...dekhte bhi kahase apko apneaap se fursat nahi milti to mere liye kaha waqt nikaalte..." Saba ne aaj apne dil ki baat kahe di or waha se jaane lagi " Saba !! '' Papa ne use rokte hue kaha " Jaanta hu beti ke tum mujhse bahot naraaz ho, lekin main bhi kya karta, tum jitna apni Maa se pyaar karti thhi utna hi main bhi karta thha...tumhe dekhta to tumhaari Maa ki yaad aati...kabhi uske bina raha nahi naa, isi liye uski yaad mujhe bahot rulaati...bahot royaa hu chup chup ke...humesha khud ko buzy rakhaa kaam me, ye sochkar ke jab kaam se fursat hi nahi milegi to tumhaari Maa ki yaad bhi nahi aayegi...tumse main kabhi nazar nahi mila saka..tumhaari aankho me aaj bhi tumhaari Maa ke liye bahot pyaar nazar aata hai...jise dekh kar main khud ko rok nahi paata, agar tumhaare saamne hi meri aankhe chalak parti to tum bhi dukhi ho jaati..isi liye tumse door raha hu ab tak...tumhaari Maa se waada kiya thha ke tumhe kabhi dukhi nahi hone dunga, lekin mujhe mwaaf kar do, maine jaan'boojh kar tumhe dukh diya.." Papa ne geeli palko se javaab diya " Papa !!, main kitni badi galat'fehami me jee rahi thhi ab tak ke mere papa mujhse pyaar nahi karte, lekin main galat thhi, main hamesha sochti rahi ke aap mujhe nahi samajhte lekin aap pata chala ke maine aapko nahi samjha,,, i m sorry papa i m sorry " Saba ne papa ke seene se lagte hue kaha " Papa mujhe meri khushiya bheekh me dedijiye, main jaanti hu Piyush ki zindagi bas kuch hi mahino ki hai, papa main use is chhote se waqt me bahot saari khushiya dena chaahti hu, mujhe mere Piyush ki khushiya dedijiye papa....main aapka ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulungi.." Saba ne papa se minnate ki... Saba ki zidd ke aage sab haar gaye, uske papa ne bhi haa kar di...or vo Piyush ke parents se milne unke ghar gaye...Piyush to heraan thha...Piyush ne jab Saba ke papa se puchha ke vo raazi kaise ho gaye to unhone sab bataya Piyush ko jo kuch bhi hua thha...Piyush bhi haar gaya, use to haa kahani hi thhi...Aaj Saba ko uske khoye hue peeta ka pyaar bhi mil gaya..ghar vaalo ne dono ki shaadi taye kar di kyuki vo jaante thhe ke Piyush ke paas jyada waqt nahi hai...Piyush ki Maa ke siva sab ko maloom thha ke Piyush ko blood cancer hai...unse ye baat chipi hi rahi hai abhi tak...1 mahine ke andar andar Saba or Piyush ki shaadi ho gai...Saba Piyush ke ghar aa gai..or ek achhi patni or Bahoo bhi sabit kar diya usne chand hi dino me... '' Saba, main kitna badkismat insaan hu, jise khushiya to naseeb ho rahi hain lekin vo bhi chand dino ki mehamaan hai..." Piyush ne Bad pe lete hue kaha " Piyush, aaj jo hai vahi haqeekat hai...kal ka sochoge to aaj ko gaNvaa doge.." Saba ne paas aake kaha " ZindaGee jeeni chaaHi to saaNse kam par gaiN Gham bhee chhoopaa hi lete zamaane se hum Par Qamb'khat yeH aaNkHeN nam par gaiN " Waqt bhi tezi se guzar raha thha... khaash ye waqt thham jaaye, lekin niyati apne usool nahi badalti...3 mahine guzar gaye..Piyush ki tabiyaat bigadne lagi thhi...use har 15 din me khoon ki zaroorat hoti, to har 15 din me khoon chadhaaya jaata use...Sahil or Saara ne bhi unko bahot madad ki...Piyush ki Maa se bhi ab ye baat chhupi kaha rahi..unko pata chala to vo foot foot ke roi..or bahot roi...kahati ke mere bacche ke meri umar lag jaye uski jagha bhagvaan mujhe bula le apne paas...lekin jiska ant likha hai uska ant hoke hi rahata hai...bas isi dukh ke phere me 3 mahine or guzar gaye or Piyush ki zindagi ka aakhiri mahina bhi lag gaya...kabhi bhi uski zindagi ka ant hone waala thha...Piyush ki request ke baad Piyush ko ghar bhej diya gaya jaha uska treatment chalu rakha gaya...glu'coz or blood regular chadhte rahate Piyush ko..davaai bhi bahot leni parti use... Ek din raat ko 3 baje : " Saba, Saba..."Piyush ne Saba ko awaaz di " Ha Piyush kaho kya hua " Saba jaldi se uske paas aai " Saba, mammy papa ko bula do, mujhe unse milne ka man kar raha hai...jaldi bulana mujhe nind aa rahi hai " Piyush ne bojhal nazro ke saath kaha, Saba doudti hui mammy papa ko bulake laai... " Hey dad, sorry yaar apko jada diya...apko bura nahi laga na.." Piyush ne lete hue kaha " Nahi beta " Papa ne Piyush ke sar pe haath pherte hue kaha " Mum, lagta hai mera waqt aa gaya hai ab..aap mere paas aaiye naa " Piyush ne kaha, uski Maa uske paas aai vo ro rahi thhin, unhone Piyush ke maathhe ko chooma... " Saba, mere mum dad ka poora khayaal rakhna, agar inhe koi takleef hui to main tumhe sapne me aakar daraaungaa..samjhi " Piyush ne muskuraate hue kaha..Sab rone lage, Piyush ka antim waqt aa gaya thha.... " Dad ab aap jaaiye, mujhe bhi nind aa rahi hai , jaaiye aap bhi so jaaiye " Piyush ne dheere dheer aankhe mundte hue kaha " Nahi beta aisa mat bol, tu so jaayega to hum jaagkar kya karenge,,tujhe jaagna hoga..humse baate kar...mujhe tujhse bahot baate karni hai..." Piyush ke papa ne rote hue kaha " Dad mujhe nind aa rahi hai..Saba, Maa...mujhe jaana hoga...main main..." Or ek saanso ki door toot gai...charo taraf ek pal ke liye sannata sa chha gaya or fir Piyush ki Maa zor se cheekh pari...teeno rone lage...yakeen hi nahi hua ke Piyush unhe chhod ke chala gaya hai...sab rishte daaro dosto ko khabar ki gai ke Piyush ki maut ho gai hai..sab pahonch gaye..shaam ko kareeb 6 baje Piyush ka daah'sanskaar kiya gaya..jab Piyush ko lejaya jaa raha thha shamshaan tab Saba cheekh rahi thhi chilla rahi thhi ke mere Piyush ko mat le jaao mat le jaao...or fir vo behosh ho gai...aaspaas maujood ourto ne use sambhaala...lekin jab bahot waqt tak Saba ko hosh nahi aaya to use dr. ke paas le jaya gaya...or fir kuch der baad jab vo theek hui to ghar le aaye use...Piyush ka Maa ne to khud ko sambhaal liya, kyuki unhe Saba ko sambhaalna thha, Piyush ke baad vahi ek maatr sahaara hai unke jeene kaa...Saba Piyush ke jaane ke baad bilkul gum'sum si rahane lagi...na kuch kahati na kisi ki sunti...bas kahi khoi si rahati thhi...usi sab samajh aata thha ke uske aaspaas kya ho raha hai lekin vo sab kuch sun kar bhi ansoona kar deti...1 din baad jab Piyush ki Maa Saba se kuch kahe rahi thhin lekin Saba ne theek se suna nahi...or fir Saba ne dekha ke Maa ne uski almaari me kuch rakha hai..lekin usne dhyaan nahi diya...Saara kuch dino ke liye Saba ke paas hi ruk gai, koi nahi thha Piyush ki maa ki madad karne waala Saba ki haalat aisi thhi ke usne waha rukna theek samjha...Piyush ko mare 7 din ho gaye thha.... Raat ko 1 baje: Saba achaanak nind se jaag gai, uski aankho me aansoo thhe..aj kitne dino baad vo puri tarha hosh me aai hai... " Piyush, Piyush, tum kaha chale gaye, kyu chhodke chale gaye..main tumhaare bina nahi jee sakti..nahi jee sakti " Saba rote rote bad se utthi usne apni davaai ki dro'ar me se sleeping pills nikaali or saari khaali.... Abhi uske paas kuch waqt tha, pills ka asar hone me waqt to lagta hi hai..usne apni zindagi ka ant apne Piyush ki yaado ke saath kana chaaha...apni almaari me se saare albums nikaal liye...jitne bhi rakhe thhe..sab dekhne lagi...or yaad karne lagi un palo ko..itne me ek file haath lagi uske...usne file ko dekhna zaroori nahi likha lekin uspe Saba ka naam likha thha to usne use padhhna chaaha...jaise usne padha to vo hairaan rahe gai...or farsh pe gir gai... " Hey bhagvaan ye maine kya kiya...kya kiya ye maine..." ye kahane lagi vo.. lekin jo kuch bhi hone wala thha vo use rok nahi sakti thhi, kyuki ab uski bhi zindagi sone waali thhi...ro kuch nahi kar sakti thhi...siva apne gunaah ki mwafi maangne ke liye...vo apni dairy me kuch likhna chaah rahi thhi...bhojhal se kadam or dhhundhlaai si nazro ke saath usne dairy kholi...haath kaaNp rahe thhe lekin pen pakda...deere deere likha shuru kiya...thhodi si der likhne ke baad jab use laga ab mumkin nahi to desk par rakhi Piyush ki tasveer ko haath me liye rone lagi...mwafi maangne lagi ke mujhe mwaf kar dena...or fir achaanak ek or dhadkane rook gaiN...ek or zindagi ka ant ho gaya... Subha 7 baje Jab Piyush ki Maa Saba ke room me aai to vo cheekhne lagi...sab daud ke room me aaye, manzar-e-haal sabki nazro ke saamne thhe... Saara dheere dheer Saba ki laash ki or badhne lagi...vo use dekhna chaahti thhi...jab vo kareeb gai to usne Saba pe Sar rakhke rona shuru kar diya or fir jab vo door hati to use dairy khuli mili,Saba ne kuch likha thha, jo vo padhna chaah rahi thhi..usne dairy utthhai or padhna shuru kiya... " Maa, Aaj main ek gunehgaar bangai hu, kya muh leke aau Piyush ke paas...maine bahot bada paap kiya hai...mere saath hi aisa kyu hua hai har baar, kyu meri khushiyo ko har baar bhagvaan cheen leta hai...mere humesha haNsaane ka ye sila mila ke ab mujhe siva aansoo ke kuch nahi mil raha...kyu Maa kyu...Maa, tum Piyush se kahana ke mujhe mwaf kar de...main uska saamna kaise karungi upar aane ke baad...kaise karungi...Piyush um naraaz hoge shaayad mujhse..lekin main kya karu mujhe kuch khabar hi nahi rahi.." Manzar-e-Aazardah tab hua jab Saara ne ye padha ki : {Manzar-e-Aazardah = Uneasy movment } "Kaash main tumhaari maut ke baad itnee besud na hui hoti to aaj anjaane me ek our zindagi khatm naa karti, kaash maine us din sun liya hota jab tumhaari Maa ne mujhe khabar di thhi ke main MAA BANNE WAALI HU '' The End ***************************************** Main jaanti hu aapme se kisiko bhi kahaani ka ant pasand nahi aaya hoga, lekin har kahaani ka ant khushi leke nahi aata, yahee zindagi hai...kabhi khushi to kabhi gham...jinhe mujhe maarne ya mujhpe gussa karne dil kar raha hai unka swaagat bilkul nahi hai... grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th March 2008, 08:26 PM
Oye main koi 50-60 saal ka boodha nahi hun, umra main mujhse bada hai tu.....agar tu bhai ke naate se bol raha hai to har baar mujhe he kyun keh raha hhai.....aur meri Id ban nahi hui thi...mujhe aisa laga tha ki ban ho gayi....(mera net connection kharab tha us din)
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grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Aap ab sahil ko koi post nahi karenge, aap to samajhdaar hain..karne dijiye use jitna post karna hai jaisa likhna hai likhne dijiye....ignore kar dijiye uski baato ko...agar aap meri baat maan sakeN to please use koi baat nahi kahenge ab.... or aapka intezaar khatam kar diya hai maine...lekin plz plz plz maarna mat ending padhke....chhoti bahan pe bada bhaai gussa kare achha thhode hi lagta hai grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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...next story agar likhungi to uska end happy karungi i promizzzz abhi iske liye mwaafi dedo didi ji grazie apki sweeti ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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aur di app ka bahut bahut shukriya jo appne is kahani ko ek ache andaz me pesh kiya kyu ki aisa vahi likh sakta hai jiske pass ek sacha dil ho apne hume sunakar bahut acha kiya ki aisa bhi hota hai isi liye to kehte hai na ki pyar amar hota hai jo kabhi nahi mit ta hai use mitane wale mit jaate hai per pyar nahi mit ta hai muje bahut khushi ho rahi hai itna pyar karte the saba aur piyush per saba ne agar vo file padh li hoti to aaj piyush ke ghar me bahut khushi hoti fir bhale hi piyush us khushi me shamil na ho. thank you so much di apne hume ye kahani suniyi AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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ok di ab kabhi us se baat nahi karuga haan apne sahi kaha ki usko reply nahi dena chahiye aur di apka end padhke bahut dukh ho raha hai aur kismat ke aage hum kaha tik paate hai. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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27th March 2008, 09:38 PM
ek toh waise hi udaas thi abh or ho gayi
kuch nahi kehna mujhe taek caer u jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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mat kar reply.......jisko reply karna hai vo to karega........ Quote:
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28th March 2008, 12:44 AM
Pooja:
kahaani ka aNt paRhaa... aNt paRh kar jaise lagaa ki dard Khud saamne naZar aa rahaa ho. tumne baRii meHnat kii hay ees kahaani par.. mujhe baRii KhuShii hu'ii tum itanaa umdaah liKhatii ho aur itani geHrii soch raKhatii ho.. guzaariSh haii yuuNhi liKhatii raho... Khudaa tumhe haMeShaa KhuSh raKheN aur ziNdagee meN kaamyaabee deN..! KhuSh raho.. apnaa Khayaal raKhanaa..! duaaoN ke saath ijaazat ~ Dhaval |
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28th March 2008, 03:11 AM
Chalo achha hai kahaani ke end main dono mar gaye....nahin to bechaare ek upar ghum raha hota aur ek neeche.......pata nahi ab ye dono kahan milenge kyunki......Narak main aajen ka koi kaam in dono ne kiya nahi aur swarg main jaane ke layak nahi......(bhala suicide case wale ko bhi swarg main entry milti hai.....)
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tune mana kiya hain na ki jisko teri kahaani ka end pasand na aye woh reply na kare....main par fir bhi karungi.....jo karna hain karle.......... dikha diya na ki tu chirkut hain.....pagal hathodi.. mandbuddhi ..kahiki....kya end likhte waqt manojkumar ,rajendra kumar ya meenakumari ki koi film dekhi thi kyaa.....jo itna ashay end likha hain tune.....kamse kam mujhe dekh leti to kuch accha sa to end likhti ttu??? ya to mujhe lagta hain tune kadve karele ka juice piya hoga likhte waqt jo aisa dardnak.....end likha haiN.............mujhe bilkul bhi accha nahin laga..rotdu kisam ka end..............itne prem aur chaav se hum tumhari story padh rahe the.....to rulane ki kya zaroorat thi...........chokri tune accha nahin kiyaaa..badal de end...........warna......grazie... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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28th March 2008, 08:23 PM
hmmm to bil akhir ker hi dia tregic end wesay end parrh ker dukh to mehsoos howa lekin haan ye sahi kaha ke her story ki happy ending nahi hoti ... per happy ending dekh ker dukhi dilon ko thorra sukoon zaroor milta hai per khair haqeeqat to haqeeqat hoti hai stories se kauson door
aik sabaq zaroor mila tumhari story se woh ye ke .... allah ne to behar haal insaan ke liye kuch na kuch agay acha hi likha hota hai mager insaan bohat be sabra hota hai aur isi chaker main woh ghalat qadam uthane main bilkul dair nahi kerta agar woh shadeed ghum main bhi uper wale per bharosa rakhe saber rakhe to use sila zaroor milta hai kisi bhi shaqal main thanks dear itna acha end dene ke liye kionki tumne haqeeqat ka rukh dikhaya hai bajaye iske ke afsanwi batain hoti jin main koi haqeeqat nahi hoti itni achi story likhne ke liye dhair sari mubarakbaadapne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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