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To yaad aaoongaa - 7th December 2004, 12:51 AM
tum merii aankh ke tevar na bhulaa paaoge
ankahir baat ko samajhoge to yaad aaoongaa

ham ne Khushiyon kii tarah dukh bhii ikatthe dekhe
safaah-e-ziist ko paltoge to yaad aaoongaa

isii andaaz mein hote the muKhaatib mujh se
Khat kisii aur ko likhoge to yaad aaoongaa

sard raaton ke mehekate hue sannaaton mein
jab kisii phool ko chuumoge to yaad aaoongaa

ab tere ashk main honthon se churaa letaa hoon
haath se Khud inhain ponchhoge to yaad aaoongaa

shaal pahanaayegaa ab kaun december mein tumhe
baarishon mein kabhii bhiigoge to yaad aaoongaa

aaj tum mahafil-e-yaaraan pe ho magaruur bahut
jab kabhii Tut ke bikharoge to yaad aaoongaa

haadase aayenge jiivan mein to tum hoke niDhaal
kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aaoongaa

is mein shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii
tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aaoongaa

Sans leta hoon main to Zakhmo ko hawa lagti hai,
Tu hi bata A Zindagi, Tu meri kya lagti hai
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Bahut acha likha hai aapne.....
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7th December 2004, 02:45 AM
Shukriya dear abhi

Sans leta hoon main to Zakhmo ko hawa lagti hai,
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hi - 9th December 2004, 02:25 PM
hi gd ji realy me bhut acha likha hai aapne dard par ase hi likhte rhyega or humari daad kabul kare bye
   
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Re: hi - 10th December 2004, 12:24 AM
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hi gd ji realy me bhut acha likha hai aapne dard par ase hi likhte rhyega or humari daad kabul kare bye
Shukrya chandni ji aapne hame daad di ye hamarikushnasibi hai ya fir aapka andaje baya kuch bhi kahe aap jais erkadardan ho to likhavat aur jajbato main aur bhi nikhar aa jata hai..humkoshish karenge aapko hamara likah ach alage...


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Is dil ne dhadakna chod diya...
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Tanhai main sheher basaaya karta hai
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Deewaroon ko dard sunaya karta hai
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Aur phir khud ko aap hansaaya karta hai




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ek pal chura lu agar bura na lage,
aap hame milkar bhale hi bhool jao,
aapko bhoolne main shayed jamana lage ...
i am waiting for u .....

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hi - 10th December 2004, 01:09 PM
hi gd ji aapni kuch jada hi kha diya hai humare baare me balki such ye ki aapka andaz sabse alag hai or usi andaz me aapne reaply me jo poem likhi hai bhut hi sundar ye poem bhi hume aapki baki shayriyo ki tharh hi achi lagi humari ik bar fir se daad kabul kare or ase hi likhte rhye or haa aapna naam jarur bhtana plzzzzzzzzz
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Re: To yaad aaoongaa - 10th December 2004, 10:14 PM
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tum merii aankh ke tevar na bhulaa paaoge
ankahir baat ko samajhoge to yaad aaoongaa

ham ne Khushiyon kii tarah dukh bhii ikatthe dekhe
safaah-e-ziist ko paltoge to yaad aaoongaa

isii andaaz mein hote the muKhaatib mujh se
Khat kisii aur ko likhoge to yaad aaoongaa

sard raaton ke mehekate hue sannaaton mein
jab kisii phool ko chuumoge to yaad aaoongaa

ab tere ashk main honthon se churaa letaa hoon
haath se Khud inhain ponchhoge to yaad aaoongaa

shaal pahanaayegaa ab kaun december mein tumhe
baarishon mein kabhii bhiigoge to yaad aaoongaa

aaj tum mahafil-e-yaaraan pe ho magaruur bahut
jab kabhii Tut ke bikharoge to yaad aaoongaa

haadase aayenge jiivan mein to tum hoke niDhaal
kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aaoongaa

is mein shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii
tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aaoongaa
Good one dear
Jaane kitne armaan bevajeh aansuon mein dhal jaate hain
hota hai kabhi yoon bhi ke tabbasum se lub chhil jaate hain

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Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


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Re: hi - 11th December 2004, 12:02 AM
Hai chandni ..
Aap jo hai jaisi hame lagi humne to wo hi kaha hai ..ek bat to hai aapme ki aap taraif bahut achi karti hai hai samne wale gardan gardan ker dete hai aur hona bhi chahiye aaisa..kHair aaap hamar anaam janna chahte hai hamara naam GD hi hai..aap bhi ahem gd kah sakte hai aur ye jo aap ji ki puch lagate ahi na pls na lagaya kare to ahme aur bhi acha lagega jeeeeeeeeeeeee..

Jeene ke liye ik tera armaan hi kaafi hai Dil ki qalam se likhi dastaan hi kaafi hai Teer ki kya zaroorat hai tujhe zaalim Qatl karne ke liye teri ek muskaan hi kaafi hai

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Re: Re: To yaad aaoongaa - 11th December 2004, 12:05 AM
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Originally posted by friendnidhi
Good one dear
Jaane kitne armaan bevajeh aansuon mein dhal jaate hain
hota hai kabhi yoon bhi ke tabbasum se lub chhil jaate hain

Regards Nidhi
Naidhi Bahut hi acha lakha hai tumne ki kabhi tabbasum se lub chil jate hai sach hai ye mante hai hum bhi aapki is bat ko...


ye meri talash ka jurm hai ya meri vafaka kasur hai,
jo dil ke jitne karib hai vo nazaro se utnihe duur hai.

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11th November 2007, 04:36 PM
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tum merii aankh ke tevar na bhulaa paaoge
ankahir baat ko samajhoge to yaad aaoongaa

ham ne Khushiyon kii tarah dukh bhii ikatthe dekhe
safaah-e-ziist ko paltoge to yaad aaoongaa

isii andaaz mein hote the muKhaatib mujh se
Khat kisii aur ko likhoge to yaad aaoongaa

sard raaton ke mehekate hue sannaaton mein
jab kisii phool ko chuumoge to yaad aaoongaa

ab tere ashk main honthon se churaa letaa hoon
haath se Khud inhain ponchhoge to yaad aaoongaa

shaal pahanaayegaa ab kaun december mein tumhe
baarishon mein kabhii bhiigoge to yaad aaoongaa

aaj tum mahafil-e-yaaraan pe ho magaruur bahut
jab kabhii Tut ke bikharoge to yaad aaoongaa

haadase aayenge jiivan mein to tum hoke niDhaal
kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aaoongaa

is mein shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii
tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aaoongaa
adaab gd ji,
bada zabardasttt likha hai aapne,

sard raaton ke mehekate hue sannaaton mein
jab kisii phool ko chuumoge to yaad aaoongaa

ab tere ashk main honthon se churaa letaa hoon
haath se Khud inhain ponchhoge to yaad aaoongaa

shaal pahanaayegaa ab kaun december mein tumhe
baarishon mein kabhii bhiigoge to yaad aaoongaa

yeh ashar to bas chuu gay edilko,bahut hi behtareen likha hai aapne.yunhin lkhte rahen ,khush rahen

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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11th November 2007, 08:59 PM
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12th November 2007, 01:31 AM
Shukrya Sara ji aapka. 3 saal bad hi sahi meri is rachna ko phir se aap jaise kadar daan mil gaye
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12th November 2007, 01:32 AM

shukrya Raj sir ji aapka tahe dil se.aap u hi hosla afzai karte rahe.
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dear DG'' sir aap hakikat main bahut hi achha likhte hai.
Sans leta hoon main to Zakhmo ko hawa lagti hai,
Tu hi bata A Zindagi, Tu meri kya lagti hai.
'' sir ye mujhe baht hi pasand aayi hai.....''Raj...''

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12th November 2007, 11:39 PM
Shukrya RAj ji ki hame padne ke lye apna kimti waqt nikalte hai. hausala afzari ka ek bar phi rshukrya.
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Love 12th November 2007, 11:48 PM
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tum merii aankh ke tevar na bhulaa paaoge
ankahir baat ko samajhoge to yaad aaoongaa

ham ne Khushiyon kii tarah dukh bhii ikatthe dekhe
safaah-e-ziist ko paltoge to yaad aaoongaa

isii andaaz mein hote the muKhaatib mujh se
Khat kisii aur ko likhoge to yaad aaoongaa

sard raaton ke mehekate hue sannaaton mein
jab kisii phool ko chuumoge to yaad aaoongaa

ab tere ashk main honthon se churaa letaa hoon
haath se Khud inhain ponchhoge to yaad aaoongaa

shaal pahanaayegaa ab kaun december mein tumhe
baarishon mein kabhii bhiigoge to yaad aaoongaa

aaj tum mahafil-e-yaaraan pe ho magaruur bahut
jab kabhii Tut ke bikharoge to yaad aaoongaa

haadase aayenge jiivan mein to tum hoke niDhaal
kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aaoongaa

is mein shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii
tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aaoongaa


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is ghazal ka har ek sher rooh me utar gaya......behtarin ghazal likhi hai aapne......ye ghazal ko padhane ke baad ek ajab si haraarat mehsoos hui, shayad koi yaad aa gaya....behad pasand aayi aap ki ye ghazal,shayad mai apne ehsaas shabdon me bayan nahi kar sakti.....

keep it up................

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13th November 2007, 12:49 AM
SHUKRYA LAMHA JI
Aap jaise dost aur kadardan hai hamare paas is bat se kushi ka ahsas hota hai jisse apne dardo gamo ko kuch palo ke lye bhul bhi jate hai.
shukrya tahe dil se
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Hi GD007,
bohot soch samajh kar jawab dena ke yeh poem apki hi hai ya nahi
   
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26th November 2007, 11:47 PM
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tum merii aankh ke tevar na bhulaa paaoge
ankahir baat ko samajhoge to yaad aaoongaa

ham ne Khushiyon kii tarah dukh bhii ikatthe dekhe
safaah-e-ziist ko paltoge to yaad aaoongaa

isii andaaz mein hote the muKhaatib mujh se
Khat kisii aur ko likhoge to yaad aaoongaa

sard raaton ke mehekate hue sannaaton mein
jab kisii phool ko chuumoge to yaad aaoongaa

ab tere ashk main honthon se churaa letaa hoon
haath se Khud inhain ponchhoge to yaad aaoongaa

shaal pahanaayegaa ab kaun december mein tumhe
baarishon mein kabhii bhiigoge to yaad aaoongaa

aaj tum mahafil-e-yaaraan pe ho magaruur bahut
jab kabhii Tut ke bikharoge to yaad aaoongaa

haadase aayenge jiivan mein to tum hoke niDhaal
kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aaoongaa

is mein shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii
tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aaoongaa

GD ji aapne ye nazam jab khood nahi likhi to aapko mention kerdena chahiye tha ke ye aapki nahi aap srf share ker rahe hain is tarah kisi aur shayer ki poetry pe daad wusool kerna ikhlaqi tor pe durust nahi aur ye to kafi jane pehchane shayer ka kalam hai umeed hai aap yahan aa ker clear zaroor karainge nahi to main shayer ka naam paish kerdeti hoon..

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zindagi me hasane wale kaam milte hai
kanto se bhari zindagi me phool kam khilte hai
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dil to tod diya usne per pyar to hamne kiya tha
dil to tod diya usne per ikrar to hamne kiya tha
galti to thi nahi uski wo kyon tadpe raat bher ...
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