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Smile *Tujhe Chain Aa Nahee Sakta :)? - 21st May 2010, 03:41 PM

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As salam walekum
Mohtarma aapne badi dilkash kalaam se hume ruberu karwaya...
Masha Allah behad dil fareb khayaal hai is kalaam ke.... But in my mind it's incomplite gazal..... I don't know about it, it's complite or incomplite.....
but my mind say's it's uncomplite........ Plz don't mind I m just saying Im not sure .. take care Allah Hafez.............


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Smile Really :)? - 22nd May 2010, 07:55 PM

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As salam walekum
Mohtarma aapne badi dilkash kalaam se hume ruberu karwaya...
Masha Allah behad dil fareb khayaal hai is kalaam ke.... But in my mind it's incomplite gazal..... I don't know about it, it's complite or incomplite.....
but my mind say's it's uncomplite........ Plz don't mind I m just saying Im not sure .. take care Allah Hafez.............
Wa-Alaikum Assalam~~~Good To Know **You Are Free To Say Here What's Your Mind Said **I Don't Have A Mind So Please Go Ahead & Say What You Wish To Say **Heartily Thanks & Lots Lots Of Flower's **Allah Hafiz **


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