teri chahat ta hai

[ABABBU]

tu nahi hasil aje ta ki hoya, teri chahat ta hai,
aje v bunda ha sufne, dil nu eni rahat ta hai,

nahi aayi jo ubhar ke duniya de sahmne,
mere jehan andar koi aisi bagawat ta hai,

aye husan wale,tere naaz aje v barqraar ne,
mere vi ishq ch aje ohi sazawat ta hai,

hath mera choh jaye achanchet hi kade je tainu,
ohi sahaaN ch teji, ohi sahaaN ch tharthrahat ta hai,

khamoshiyaaN nu todadi, sargoshiyaan jehiyaan gholdi,
mere kanni pe rahi tere kadma di ahat ta hai,

tu aam insaan hunda ta hasil kar lenda kad da,
'tu haiN beshkimti',ese lai aje kujh rukawat ta hai..

[tilakji]

Babbu ji bahut hi shhandaar si. Kujh gallaaN vakaaii beshkemti si

nahi aayi jo ubhar ke duniya de sahmne,
mere jehan andar koi aisi bagawat ta hai,
gazal de saarey gur si es wich

Es sher wich romance di extreme si
hath mera choh jaye achanchet hi kade je tainu,
ohi sahaaN ch teji, ohi sahaaN ch tharthrahat ta hai,

Wasdey raho

[Preet Dil Di]

Bahut hi pyara likhia hai Babbu ji

[musafir ek pal]

tuvaade eh alfaz vaakai tareef-e-kabil ne janab. tuvaadi kalam, rab kare, aasmaan nu chuum.e.

Manish

[D33P]

last line kamjor lagi... baki kaim aa ji................................................ ............................

[ADHURI HEER]

Originally Posted by ABABBU

tu nahi hasil aje ta ki hoya, teri chahat ta hai,
aje v bunda ha sufne, dil nu eni rahat ta hai,

nahi aayi jo ubhar ke duniya de sahmne,
mere jehan andar koi aisi bagawat ta hai,

aye husan wale,tere naaz aje v barqraar ne,
mere vi ishq ch aje ohi sazawat ta hai,

hath mera choh jaye achanchet hi kade je tainu,
ohi sahaaN ch teji, ohi sahaaN ch tharthrahat ta hai,

khamoshiyaaN nu todadi, sargoshiyaan jehiyaan gholdi,
mere kanni pe rahi tere kadma di ahat ta hai,

tu aam insaan hunda ta hasil kar lenda kad da,
'tu haiN beshkimti',ese lai aje kujh rukawat ta hai..

Bahut hi Khoooob likhiya aa Babbu ji, har vaar di tara bahut hi sohna and kamaaal da aa, har line wich vakhari hi Feeling chhupi aa

[ABABBU]

[quote=tilakji;354838]Babbu ji bahut hi shhandaar si. Kujh gallaaN vakaaii beshkemti si

nahi aayi jo ubhar ke duniya de sahmne,
mere jehan andar koi aisi bagawat ta hai,
gazal de saarey gur si es wich

Es sher wich romance di extreme si
hath mera choh jaye achanchet hi kade je tainu,
ohi sahaaN ch teji, ohi sahaaN ch tharthrahat ta hai,

meharbani TILAK ji.. tusi ena sohna reply dita.vese v tusi jis poem di tareef kar deo uss di kadar pai hi jandi hai..ese tra hi hausla vadaunde rehana, rini rahaga.

[ABABBU]

[quote=Preet Dil Di;354994]Bahut hi pyara likhia hai Babbu ji

shukriya PREET tuhade anmol reply lai..

[ABABBU]

[quote=musafir ek pal;355332]tuvaade eh alfaz vaakai tareef-e-kabil ne janab. tuvaadi kalam, rab kare, aasmaan nu chuum.e.

thanks MANESH ji for this beautifull reply..

[ABABBU]

[quote=D33P;355517]last line kamjor lagi... baki kaim aa ji.........

DEEP tusi aapna anmol time iss poem nu read karan lai dita uss lai tuhada dhanwadi hai. kujh hor behtar likhan di koshish karda rahaga..

[ABABBU]

[quote=ADHURI HEER;355540]Bahut hi Khoooob likhiya aa Babbu ji, har vaar di tara bahut hi sohna and kamaaal da aa, har line wich vakhari hi Feeling chhupi aa ..

thanks HEER tusi iss poem nu bahut gauh naal read kita and ik khoobsurat reply naal nawajeya..

[sunita thakur]

Babbu ji...................bahuttttttt hi vadiya likhiya hai tusi, ek ek lafz dil nu pasand aaya......keep it up.

reps +++ added

vasde raho
rabb raakha


sorry reps add nahi ho rahe aje.....!