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This Post was created and posted at 11-8-2010 in shayri.com . Today dedicated to salmaan khursheed . very sad.
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तुम कहते हो मेरा अपाहिज़पन, मेरी अपंगता
है मेरे पिछ्ले कर्मों की सज़ा,
चलो मैं ये भी मान लेता हूं
हो सकता है मेरी गलतिओं की वज़ह से है
मेरी गरीबी और मेरी छिन्न भिन्न देह,
शायद मैने पिछले जनम मे किसी का धन चुराया होगा,
किसी का दिल दुखाया होगा
किसी को डराया धमकाया होगा
तो खुदा ने इस जन्म मे मुझे अपंग बनाया होगा,
ळेकिन तुमने ?
तुमने उस जन्म में
शायद गरीबों पे तरस खाया होगा,
किसी रोते को हंसाया होगा
किसी का बिगडा काम बनाया होगा
लेकिन तुम?
इस जन्म मे क्या कर रहे हो?
ग़रीब का गला दबाकर दौलत का घडा भर रहे हो,
पैसे के लिए रिश्तों की डोर काट रहे हो,
कैसी राहत सामग्री बांट रहे हो?
तुम कानून के रखवाले हो , उस विभाग के मालिक हो जो
अपंगों की भलाई करता है,
पूरे देश का तन्तर तुम्हारी एक घुड्की से डरता है,
तुम हम जैसे अपंगों को नकली अंगों के लिए
देश के राज्यों मे अरबों रुप्ये भिजवाते हो,
वहां एन जी ओ के जरिए कुछ लगवाते हो
कुछ खुर्द बुर्द करवाते हो.
आज तुम हमें लगाने की जगह , नक्ली अंगों के लिये आया पैसा खुद खा रहे हो , बचा रहे हो,
शायद ये नकली अंग अगले जन्म में तुम्हारे काम आयेंगे,
क्या इसी लिए नीचे वालों से अपना कमीशन खा रहे हो ?
इस जन्म के कर्मों की सज़ा उस जन्म मे मिलती है,
इस सचाई से मूंह मोडे जा रहे हो.
कि मैं चल भी नहीं सकता हूं,
और तुम दौडे जा रहे हो.



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10th October 2012, 02:20 PM

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तुम कहते हो मेरा अपाहिज़पन, मेरी अपंगता
है मेरे पिछ्ले कर्मों की सज़ा,
चलो मैं ये भी मान लेता हूं
हो सकता है मेरी गलतिओं की वज़ह से है
मेरी गरीबी और मेरी छिन्न भिन्न देह,
शायद मैने पिछले जनम मे किसी का धन चुराया होगा,
किसी का दिल दुखाया होगा
किसी को डराया धमकाया होगा
तो खुदा ने इस जन्म मे मुझे अपंग बनाया होगा,
ळेकिन तुमने ?
तुमने उस जन्म में
शायद गरीबों पे तरस खाया होगा,
किसी रोते को हंसाया होगा
किसी का बिगडा काम बनाया होगा
लेकिन तुम?
इस जन्म मे क्या कर रहे हो?
ग़रीब का गला दबाकर दौलत का घडा भर रहे हो,
पैसे के लिए रिश्तों की डोर काट रहे हो,
कैसी राहत सामग्री बांट रहे हो?
तुम कानून के रखवाले हो , उस विभाग के मालिक हो जो
अपंगों की भलाई करता है,
पूरे देश का तन्तर तुम्हारी एक घुड्की से डरता है,
तुम हम जैसे अपंगों को नकली अंगों के लिए
देश के राज्यों मे अरबों रुप्ये भिजवाते हो,
वहां एन जी ओ के जरिए कुछ लगवाते हो
कुछ खुर्द बुर्द करवाते हो.
आज तुम हमें लगाने की जगह , नक्ली अंगों के लिये आया पैसा खुद खा रहे हो , बचा रहे हो,
शायद ये नकली अंग अगले जन्म में तुम्हारे काम आयेंगे,
क्या इसी लिए नीचे वालों से अपना कमीशन खा रहे हो ?
इस जन्म के कर्मों की सज़ा उस जन्म मे मिलती है,
इस सचाई से मूंह मोडे जा रहे हो.
कि मैं चल भी नहीं सकता हूं,
और तुम दौडे जा रहे हो.

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तुम कहते हो मेरा अपाहिज़पन, मेरी अपंगता
है मेरे पिछ्ले कर्मों की सज़ा,
चलो मैं ये भी मान लेता हूं
हो सकता है मेरी गलतिओं की वज़ह से है
मेरी गरीबी और मेरी छिन्न भिन्न देह,
शायद मैने पिछले जनम मे किसी का धन चुराया होगा,
किसी का दिल दुखाया होगा
किसी को डराया धमकाया होगा
तो खुदा ने इस जन्म मे मुझे अपंग बनाया होगा,
ळेकिन तुमने ?
तुमने उस जन्म में
शायद गरीबों पे तरस खाया होगा,
किसी रोते को हंसाया होगा
किसी का बिगडा काम बनाया होगा
लेकिन तुम?
इस जन्म मे क्या कर रहे हो?
ग़रीब का गला दबाकर दौलत का घडा भर रहे हो,
पैसे के लिए रिश्तों की डोर काट रहे हो,
कैसी राहत सामग्री बांट रहे हो?
तुम कानून के रखवाले हो , उस विभाग के मालिक हो जो
अपंगों की भलाई करता है,
पूरे देश का तन्तर तुम्हारी एक घुड्की से डरता है,
तुम हम जैसे अपंगों को नकली अंगों के लिए
देश के राज्यों मे अरबों रुप्ये भिजवाते हो,
वहां एन जी ओ के जरिए कुछ लगवाते हो
कुछ खुर्द बुर्द करवाते हो.
आज तुम हमें लगाने की जगह , नक्ली अंगों के लिये आया पैसा खुद खा रहे हो , बचा रहे हो,
शायद ये नकली अंग अगले जन्म में तुम्हारे काम आयेंगे,
क्या इसी लिए नीचे वालों से अपना कमीशन खा रहे हो ?
इस जन्म के कर्मों की सज़ा उस जन्म मे मिलती है,
इस सचाई से मूंह मोडे जा रहे हो.
कि मैं चल भी नहीं सकता हूं,
और तुम दौडे जा रहे हो.

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Praveen Ji!
You are a wonderful human being... This world is still livable because of you and people like you! Wonderful expression and subject.
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Praveen Ji!
You are a wonderful human being... This world is still livable because of you and people like you! Wonderful expression and subject.
Regards
God Bless you
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Waaah!!!!! Bahot khoob asardaar kavita praveen ji.....

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