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Apni aarzu-0an ka ek jahan bana lein ge. - 29th January 2005, 11:00 AM
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naved hashmi ki ek khoobsurat ghazal aap ki nazr hai.

"Apni aarzu-oan ka ek jahan bana lein ge
jis jaga kaho ge tum aashiyaan bana lein ge

dil mein ger iraada ho saath saath chalne ka
raasta samandar ke dirmiyaan bana lein ge

mushkilon se larne ko hausla zaroori hai
patharoan ko bhi jaana kehkashaan bana lein ge

khauf kya mohabbat mein dil ko ho paraa-o ka
ham jahan pe therein ge bastiyaan bana lein ge

manzilon ki khuahish mein kyun idher udher bhatkein
ham tumhare qadmoan ko hi nishaan bana lein ge"

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Re: Apni aarzu-0an ka ek jahan bana lein ge. - 29th January 2005, 11:27 AM
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naved hashmi ki ek khoobsurat ghazal aap ki nazr hai.

"Apni aarzu-oan ka ek jahan bana lein ge
jis jaga kaho ge tum aashiyaan bana lein ge

dil mein ger iraada ho saath saath chalne ka
raasta samandar ke dirmiyaan bana lein ge

mushkilon se larne ko hausla zaroori hai
patharoan ko bhi jaana kehkashaan bana lein ge

khauf kya mohabbat mein dil ko ho paraa-o ka
ham jahan pe therein ge bastiyaan bana lein ge

manzilon ki khuahish mein kyun idher udher bhatkein
ham tumhare qadmoan ko hi nishaan bana lein ge"

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Waah! Bhayyia...

jahan bhi kaho...ashiyaan
samander mein raasta
patharon ko kehkashaan

kya baat hai iss kalaam kee...padh kar lutf aa gaya...aap bahot khush mijaaz lag rahe hain aaj...kyaa baat hai bhayyiaaaaaaa ... ??? shhh...chupke se tau keh hee sakte hain apni behan ko....kyun

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29th January 2005, 11:36 AM
paras behan

tum bilkul sahi samjhi ho.
is ghazel mein itni khoobsurat tashbihaat hain ke dil khud bakhud isey mehsoos kerta hai.
saadgi bhi hai aur gehraayee bhi.

jeeti raho.

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Re: Apni aarzu-0an ka ek jahan bana lein ge. - 31st January 2005, 01:41 PM
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doston

naved hashmi ki ek khoobsurat ghazal aap ki nazr hai.

"Apni aarzu-oan ka ek jahan bana lein ge
jis jaga kaho ge tum aashiyaan bana lein ge

dil mein ger iraada ho saath saath chalne ka
raasta samandar ke dirmiyaan bana lein ge

mushkilon se larne ko hausla zaroori hai
patharoan ko bhi jaana kehkashaan bana lein ge

khauf kya mohabbat mein dil ko ho paraa-o ka
ham jahan pe therein ge bastiyaan bana lein ge

manzilon ki khuahish mein kyun idher udher bhatkein
ham tumhare qadmoan ko hi nishaan bana lein ge"

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mere mushi dost,

itni achhi rachna se parichit karane k liye aapka shukriaa...

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1st February 2005, 05:31 PM
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behad shukriya aap ka is ghazal ko pasand karne ka.

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27th April 2005, 10:53 AM
Mushi ji....

pyar ka saath aur mushkiloon se ladna.....ek hausla......aur badi hi saadgi hai is gazal mein.....

shukriya aapka is.se ru-b-ru karwane ke liye....har ashaar mehssos hota hai....

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27th April 2005, 11:30 PM
Wah... Wah Wah... Uss ke aage kya kahe, Taarif ke Shabd kam hai. thanks for sharing wonderful creation of "naved hashmi"

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29th April 2005, 01:03 PM
Mushrrafhusain saahab ...namaaskaar...Naved Hashmi saahab tak hamaara salaam pahuNche is khoobsoorat si rachna ke liye....or aapko bhi tahe dil se shukriya ise hamaare saath share karne ke liye.

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30th April 2005, 10:44 AM
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shukriya is post per aane ka , ise samajh ker parhne ka aur sarahne ka.
thanks a lot.

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30th April 2005, 10:46 AM
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ghazel ki pasandeedgi ka shukriya.
naved hashmi ki yeh ghazel waqaee shahkaar hai.

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30th April 2005, 10:48 AM
chand dost

naved hashmi tak aap ka salam pohanch gaya.
un ki taraf se shukriya qabool karein, aur meri taraf se bhi ke aap yahan aaye aur is bazm ko raunaq bakhshi.

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wah wah - 30th April 2005, 11:01 AM
dost mushi
bahot khubsurat gazal sunai hai apne. subha ki suruat achi hui, thanks dost.

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