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3rd January 2006, 10:12 AM
HOTE GULABI ANKHA SARABI
BOLI USKI KOYEL SI
HANSTI HAI TO AISA LAGTA
VERSA HOTI PHOOLO KI
VADE PE VADA HAI
NA JANE KYA IRADA HAI
SEEMA KABHI KHOO NA JANA
YE BANDA SIDHA SADHA HAI
WO RAH THI KANTO KI, JINSE HUM GUJRE HAI
KAL JAHA HUM THAHRE THE, AAJ WAHA PER PEHRE HAI
DEKH MUGHE MUSKA DETE THE JISKE GULABI GAAL
HOTA THA PRATIT JAISE LAMBI HO JIVAN SAAL
PHIR KIYO WO RAKHTI HAI, PARDE UPER PARDA AAJ
KAL KIYO NAHI AAYI, MERE MILNE PE USKO LAAJ
JAB SE WO JUDA HUE, KHO GAYI HAI MERI AAWAJ
AB TO BAS INTEJAR HAI, PAHENNE KO MOUT KA TAAJ
DIL SE DIL DIYA NIKAL, BHOOL GAYA TERI RAHO KO
KHIL DS PHOOL BNA GULAAL, TOODH DIYA APNI AAHOO KO
SUDHIR KUMAR RAWAT
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3rd January 2006, 04:05 PM
Bahout acha laga aap ke kalaam padhkar...Sudhir Ji !
Younhi likhte rahiyega aur parivaar main aap ka swaagat hai...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega...
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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3rd January 2006, 04:25 PM
appne meri kavita ko read kiya uske liye
appka bahut bahut thanks
main ange aur bhi likhta rahunga
bas app jaise chahne walo ki nagre milni chahiye
thanks
jald hi 1 nei kavita ke sath hajir hota hu
SUDHIR KUMAR RAWAT
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3rd January 2006, 05:41 PM
Intazaar hai aap ki nayi kavita ki...! Dard ya Ishk forum main submit kijiyega...thik hai ?
Take care
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5th January 2006, 04:44 PM
nice ....very nicely written
keep writtin
No REGRETS they don't work
No regrets they only HURT..!!
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