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Mat Tarsaao Tum - 2nd February 2008, 03:09 PM

Apni Yaadon K Liye Bhi Itna Mat Tarsaao Tum
Jab Chahun Mere Khyalon Mein Aa Jaao Tum
Maine Wafa Nibhai Hai Har Daur Mein
Apni Wafa Ki Ek Jhalak To Dikhao Tum

Lab Sile Rahe Aur Hum Muskuraate Rahe
Khamshiyon Mein Siskiyan Chhupate Rahe
Ab Wo Dard Geet Ban Nikla Hai Kalam Se
Ek Baar Apni Aawaaz Mein Gungunao Tum

Dooriyan Ab To Dooriyon Se Bhi Door Go Gai
Itni Lambi Saza Mujh Bekasoor Ko Mili
Bhulaa Do Saari Khatayen Mita Do Saare Gile
Bas Ek Baar Mujhe Gale Se Lagao Tum
   
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2nd February 2008, 03:17 PM

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Apni Yaadon K Liye Bhi Itna Mat Tarsaao Tum
Jab Chahun Mere Khyalon Mein Aa Jaao Tum
Maine Wafa Nibhai Hai Har Daur Mein
Apni Wafa Ki Ek Jhalak To Dikhao Tum

Lab Sile Rahe Aur Hum Muskuraate Rahe
Khamshiyon Mein Siskiyan Chhupate Rahe
Ab Wo Dard Geet Ban Nikla Hai Kalam Se
Ek Baar Apni Aawaaz Mein Gungunao Tum

Dooriyan Ab To Dooriyon Se Bhi Door Go Gai
Itni Lambi Saza Mujh Bekasoor Ko Mili
Bhulaa Do Saari Khatayen Mita Do Saare Gile
Bas Ek Baar Mujhe Gale Se Lagao Tum
kya baat hai dear aaj aap itni achi achi gazal likh rahe ho padhkar bahut acha laga humari har dua apke sath hai app yuhi humesha acha likhte raho
khawab dekhe bhi nahi the aur pehle hi vo toot gaye
hum unse mile bhi nahi the aur vo pehle hi rooth gaye


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15th February 2008, 04:48 PM

hi salam,
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kya baat hai dear aaj aap itni achi achi gazal likh rahe ho padhkar bahut acha laga humari har dua apke sath hai app yuhi humesha acha likhte raho
khawab dekhe bhi nahi the aur pehle hi vo toot gaye
hum unse mile bhi nahi the aur vo pehle hi rooth gaye
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21st February 2008, 08:55 AM

Teri judai bhi hamein pyar karti hai, teri yaad bahot
bekrar karti hai, vo din jo tere sath guzare the,
talash unko nazar bar bar karti hai.
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21st February 2008, 08:58 AM

Ke Tujh Se Juda Hokar Bhi
Jeeney Ki Aadat Hogayee

Tum Laut Ke Aaogey Humse Milne
Roz Dil Ko Behlane Ki Aadat Hogaye

Tere Waade Pe Kiya Bharosa Humney
Shab-Bhar Tera Intezaar Karne Ki Aadat Hogaye

Khushi Main Bhi Hum Kya Muskarate Ke
Teri Judaai Mey Rone Ki Aadat Hogayee

Kaafile Nikal Gaye Humey Chhor Ke
Ab To Tanha Safar Ki Aadat Hogaye,

Har Morh Par Mili Ghum Ki Parchhaiyaan
Zindagi Se Samjhota Karney Ki Aadat Hogayee
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21st February 2008, 09:00 AM

Tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney
roz dil ko behlaney ki aadat hogayee

terey waadey pe kya bharosa kiya humney
keh shab bhar tera intezaar karney ki aadat hogayee

khushi mei bhi hum kya muskuratey k
teri judaai mei roney ki aadat hogayee

kaafiley nikal gaye humein chhor k
k... ab to tanha safar ki aadat hogayee

har morh par mili ghum ki parchhaiyaan
zindagi se samjhota karney ki aadat hogayee

jaantey thay keh nahi hosaktey kabhi tum hamarey
phir bhi khuda se tujhey maangney ki aadat hogayee

paiman-e-wafaa kya hai humey kya maloom
k bewafaaon se dil laganey ki aadat hogayee[/B]
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Love Tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney - 21st February 2008, 09:01 AM

Tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney
roz dil ko behlaney ki aadat hogayee

terey waadey pe kya bharosa kiya humney
keh shab bhar tera intezaar karney ki aadat hogayee

khushi mei bhi hum kya muskuratey k
teri judaai mei roney ki aadat hogayee

kaafiley nikal gaye humein chhor k
k... ab to tanha safar ki aadat hogayee

har morh par mili ghum ki parchhaiyaan
zindagi se samjhota karney ki aadat hogayee

jaantey thay keh nahi hosaktey kabhi tum hamarey
phir bhi khuda se tujhey maangney ki aadat hogayee

paiman-e-wafaa kya hai humey kya maloom
k bewafaaon se dil laganey ki aadat hogayee
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21st February 2008, 02:55 PM

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Apni Yaadon K Liye Bhi Itna Mat Tarsaao Tum
Jab Chahun Mere Khyalon Mein Aa Jaao Tum
Maine Wafa Nibhai Hai Har Daur Mein
Apni Wafa Ki Ek Jhalak To Dikhao Tum

Lab Sile Rahe Aur Hum Muskuraate Rahe
Khamshiyon Mein Siskiyan Chhupate Rahe
Ab Wo Dard Geet Ban Nikla Hai Kalam Se
Ek Baar Apni Aawaaz Mein Gungunao Tum

Dooriyan Ab To Dooriyon Se Bhi Door Go Gai
Itni Lambi Saza Mujh Bekasoor Ko Mili
Bhulaa Do Saari Khatayen Mita Do Saare Gile
Bas Ek Baar Mujhe Gale Se Lagao Tum
sapna ji...........behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne.....yu hi mahfil ki ronak badati rahiye, kush rahiye aur bazam main aati rahiye.



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hey sweetsapna u write really good bhooth acha lagha mujhe
   
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good sapna .really very nice
i like it.

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Tum laut ke aaogey humsey milney
roz dil ko behlaney ki aadat hogayee

terey waadey pe kya bharosa kiya humney
keh shab bhar tera intezaar karney ki aadat hogayee

khushi mei bhi hum kya muskuratey k
teri judaai mei roney ki aadat hogayee

kaafiley nikal gaye humein chhor k
k... ab to tanha safar ki aadat hogayee

har morh par mili ghum ki parchhaiyaan
zindagi se samjhota karney ki aadat hogayee

jaantey thay keh nahi hosaktey kabhi tum hamarey
phir bhi khuda se tujhey maangney ki aadat hogayee

paiman-e-wafaa kya hai humey kya maloom
k bewafaaon se dil laganey ki aadat hogayee

beutiful ehsaas dear keep them posting and thnak you for reading mine too
   
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sapna ji...........behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne.....yu hi mahfil ki ronak badati rahiye, kush rahiye aur bazam main aati rahiye.


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kisi ki yaad main aansoon bahaye who hum na the
kisi ki rah main palke bhichae who hum na the
aadat si ho gayi tujhe yaad karne ki
warna kisi ko yaad karne wale hum nathe


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kya baat hai dear aaj aap itni achi achi gazal likh rahe ho padhkar bahut acha laga humari har dua apke sath hai app yuhi humesha acha likhte raho
khawab dekhe bhi nahi the aur pehle hi vo toot gaye
hum unse mile bhi nahi the aur vo pehle hi rooth gaye
Hi and salam how are u im new here but im lovin ur shers can u send one sher to me abt broken relationships.


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kisi ki yaad main - 22nd February 2008, 05:24 PM

kisi ki yaad main aansoon bahaye who hum na the
kisi ki rah main palke bhichae who hum na the
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warna kisi ko yaad karne wale hum nathe[/quote]


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hello sweetsapna i'm hafsa n new on this site im lovin your shers keep it up n plz can u write one about broken friendships coz i'm in need, toote hue rishtey thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx! :


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23rd February 2008, 09:16 AM

Hum kho gay to rahon me dhunda karo gay tum,
Har aik ko rok rok key pucha karo gay tum,
Hum kehtey they hum se bharhuo na dosti,
Tanhai me beth kar phir roya karo gay tum.


Tere hontoon pe saj jaon dua honay ko ge chahta hai,
mera duniya bhula kar bas tera honay ko ge chahta hai,
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Love 23rd February 2008, 09:17 AM

KABHI YAAD AYE TO AIK BAR KEHNA
KABHI AANSU BANKE IN AKHON SE BEHNA
DOST NAHI SAHI TO AJNABEE HI REHENA
PAR KABHI ALWIDA NA KEHNA.


Bikhri howi zulfoon ko apni pehchan bana lo,
rakhna hai mujhe qaid to zanjeer bana lo,
kaagaz pe lakeerain to boht kheench li tumne,
ab sab ko mila kar meri tasveer bana lo.


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Hum kho gay to rahon me dhunda karo gay tum,
Har aik ko rok rok key pucha karo gay tum,
Hum kehtey they hum se bharhuo na dosti,
Tanhai me beth kar phir roya karo gay tum.


Tere hontoon pe saj jaon dua honay ko ge chahta hai,
mera duniya bhula kar bas tera honay ko ge chahta hai,
yun sab ke samne ithkheliyan karti hai ye tujh se,
ke beiraada he hawa honay ko ge chahta hai.


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24th February 2008, 09:59 AM

tujhe chahne wale kum na honge,
waqt ke sath shayad hum na honge,
chahe kisi ko kitna bhi pyaar dena,
lekin teri yaadoN ke haqdar sirf hum hi hoNge
roz hota hai tarruf mera teri yAdoN se,
chhalakta hai noor tera meri AnkhoN se,
tadap raha hoon maiN aur ab ye Alam hai,
aur intezaar nahi hota ab meri sasoN se,


PHOOLO MAIN HASEEN GULAB HAI

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Love tujhe chahne wale kum na honge - 24th February 2008, 10:01 AM

tujhe chahne wale kum na honge,
waqt ke sath shayad hum na honge,
chahe kisi ko kitna bhi pyaar dena,
lekin teri yaadoN ke haqdar sirf hum hi hoNge
roz hota hai tarruf mera teri yAdoN se,
chhalakta hai noor tera meri AnkhoN se,
tadap raha hoon maiN aur ab ye Alam hai,
aur intezaar nahi hota ab meri sasoN se,


PHOOLO MAIN HASEEN GULAB HAI

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Love Friendship - 24th February 2008, 10:13 AM

wo zindagi hi kya jisme pyar nahi,
wo pyar hi kya jisme yaden nahi,
wo yaden he kya jisme tum nahi,
wo tum hi kya jisme hum nahi.



meri dua hai tu sabse nek seerat ho,
teri tarah tera dil bhi khoobsoorat ho,
dua se pahle mile tujhko jo tu chahe,
ke khud dua ko teri haathon ki zaroorat ho!!


chakh liya zaayeka-e-shayari jab se,
lafzon me tarannum si aa gayi hai,
arz-e-zubaan-e-ishq machal hi jati hai
jab bhi tere chehre ki tabssuum yaad aati hai....!!!


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24th February 2008, 04:47 PM

wow

nice

keep it up


Anjane me hum apna dil gawa baithe
is pyar me kaisa dhoka kar baithe
unse kya gila kare bhool hamari hi hai

jo bina dilwalon se dil laga baithe
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nice

keep it up
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keep it up


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Apni Yaadon K Liye Bhi Itna Mat Tarsaao Tum
Jab Chahun Mere Khyalon Mein Aa Jaao Tum
Maine Wafa Nibhai Hai Har Daur Mein
Apni Wafa Ki Ek Jhalak To Dikhao Tum

Lab Sile Rahe Aur Hum Muskuraate Rahe
Khamshiyon Mein Siskiyan Chhupate Rahe
Ab Wo Dard Geet Ban Nikla Hai Kalam Se
Ek Baar Apni Aawaaz Mein Gungunao Tum

Dooriyan Ab To Dooriyon Se Bhi Door Go Gai
Itni Lambi Saza Mujh Bekasoor Ko Mili
Bhulaa Do Saari Khatayen Mita Do Saare Gile
Bas Ek Baar Mujhe Gale Se Lagao Tum

lovely... bahut dard-e-dil haI AAP




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Apni Yaadon K Liye Bhi Itna Mat Tarsaao Tum
Jab Chahun Mere Khyalon Mein Aa Jaao Tum
Maine Wafa Nibhai Hai Har Daur Mein
Apni Wafa Ki Ek Jhalak To Dikhao Tum

Lab Sile Rahe Aur Hum Muskuraate Rahe
Khamshiyon Mein Siskiyan Chhupate Rahe
Ab Wo Dard Geet Ban Nikla Hai Kalam Se
Ek Baar Apni Aawaaz Mein Gungunao Tum

Dooriyan Ab To Dooriyon Se Bhi Door Go Gai
Itni Lambi Saza Mujh Bekasoor Ko Mili
Bhulaa Do Saari Khatayen Mita Do Saare Gile
Bas Ek Baar Mujhe Gale Se Lagao Tum

Sapna jee:

aap ne bohat achchha likha hai... ehsaas aur andaaz dono pasand aaya.. Yuu.n hii likhate rahe.n..

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hey sweetsapna u write really good bhooth acha lagha mujhe


good sapna .really very nice
i like it.

have nice day.




from> narayan


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Sapna jee:

aap ne bohat achchha likha hai... ehsaas aur andaaz dono pasand aaya.. Yuu.n hii likhate rahe.n..

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Lab Sile Rahe Aur Hum Muskuraate Rahe
Khamshiyon Mein Siskiyan Chhupate Rahe
Ab Wo Dard Geet Ban Nikla Hai Kalam Se
Ek Baar Apni Aawaaz Mein Gungunao Tum


good good.....
kya baath hai....


If you want ur dreams to cum true...
WAKE UP...!


Love,
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good good.....
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