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Exclamation main muqar bhii jaaun... - 15th November 2010, 10:32 PM

वो घड़ी भी खुदा की क़सम क़यामत होगी,
मेरे महबूब को जिस रोज़ मुझसे मुहब्बत होगी.

जो दिल की उल्झन खुद आप से ना कह पाया
उस खाकसार को खुदा से क्या शिक़ायत होगी.

शिकस्ता-हाल परवाने का शमा से ये त-अय्युन,
कि जलना भी उस की नज़र में नज़ाक़त होगी.

मुहब्बत करने से ऐसा फ़ासला हुआ है नफ़रतों से,
यूं लगता है रूह के ज़ख्मों से अब रफ़ाक़त होगी.

मैं मुक़र भी जाऊं यूं तो,अपनी मुहब्बत से'शाद'
पर हुस्न ही ना रहा, तो कैसे भला इबादत होगी.





Wo ghaRi bhi khudaa kii qasam qayamat hogee,
mere mahaboob ko jis roz mujh se muhabbat hogee.

Jo dil kii uljhan khud aap se naa kah paayaa
Us khaksaar ko khudaa se kyaa shiqaayat hogee.

Shikastaa-haal parwaane ka shamaa se ye ta-ayyun,
ki jalnaa bhii us kii nazar mein nazaaqat hogee.

Muhabbat karne se aisa faslaa hua hai nafrato.n se,
yoon lagta hai rooh ke zakhmon se ab rafaqat hogee.

main muqar bhi jaaun yoon to,apnii muhabbat se 'shaad'
par husn hii naa rahaa, to kaise bhalaa ibaadat hogee.



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वो घड़ी भी खुदा की क़सम क़यामत की होगी,
मेरे महबूब को जिस रोज़ मुझसे मुहब्बत होगी.

जो दिल की उल्झन खुद आप से ना कह पाया
उस खाकसार को खुदा से क्या शिक़ायत होगी.

शिकस्ता-हाल परवाने का शमा से ये त-अय्युन,
कि जलना भी उस की नज़र में नज़ाक़त होगी.

मुहब्बत करने से ऐसा फ़ासला हुआ है नफ़रतों से,
यूं लगता है रूह के ज़ख्मों से अब रफ़ाक़त होगी.

मैं मुक़र भी जाऊं यूं तो,अपनी मुहब्बत से'शाद'
पर हुस्न ही ना रहा, तो कैसे भला इबादत होगी.

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oye hoye, mai mar java!... kya baat hai janab... mohabbat ka ye andaaz to bada hi kaatilana raha... is dilchasp mohabbat ke kalaam pe dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi mohabbat ki in galiyon me aate rahiye... khush rahiye....


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वो घड़ी भी खुदा की क़सम क़यामत की होगी,
मेरे महबूब को जिस रोज़ मुझसे मुहब्बत होगी.

जो दिल की उल्झन खुद आप से ना कह पाया
उस खाकसार को खुदा से क्या शिक़ायत होगी.

शिकस्ता-हाल परवाने का शमा से ये त-अय्युन,
कि जलना भी उस की नज़र में नज़ाक़त होगी.

मुहब्बत करने से ऐसा फ़ासला हुआ है नफ़रतों से,
यूं लगता है रूह के ज़ख्मों से अब रफ़ाक़त होगी.

मैं मुक़र भी जाऊं यूं तो,अपनी मुहब्बत से'शाद'
पर हुस्न ही ना रहा, तो कैसे भला इबादत होगी.





Wo ghaRi bhi khudaa kii qasam qayamat kii hogee,
mere mahaboob ko jis roz mujh se muhabbat hogee.

Jo dil kii uljhan khud aap se naa kah paayaa
Us khaksaar ko khudaa se kyaa shiqaayat hogee.

Shikastaa-haal parwaane ka shamaa se ye ta-ayyun,
ki jalnaa bhii us kii nazar mein nazaaqat hogee.

Muhabbat karne se aisa faslaa hua hai nafrato.n se,
yoon lagta hai rooh ke zakhmon se ab rafaqat hogee.

main muqar bhi jaaun yoon to,apnii muhabbat se 'shaad'
par husn hii naa rahaa, to kaise bhalaa ibaadat hogee.



shaad...

shaad bhai
radhe radhe

wah wah bahut dil fareb rachna hai aapki dil se daad kubul karen bhai
duaon ke saath


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oye hoye, mai mar java!... kya baat hai janab... mohabbat ka ye andaaz to bada hi kaatilana raha... is dilchasp mohabbat ke kalaam pe dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi mohabbat ki in galiyon me aate rahiye... khush rahiye....


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shaad bhai
radhe radhe

wah wah bahut dil fareb rachna hai aapki dil se daad kubul karen bhai
duaon ke saath


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Sameer bhaa'ii:

namaste!

subHa-subHa aapki yeh koShiSh paRhii.. dil KhuSh ho gayaa..! qaabil-e-taareef koShiSh..!

liKhate rahiye.. dil se daad

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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namaste!

subHa-subHa aapki yeh koShiSh paRhii.. dil KhuSh ho gayaa..! qaabil-e-taareef koShiSh..!

liKhate rahiye.. dil se daad

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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वो घड़ी भी खुदा की क़सम क़यामत की होगी,
मेरे महबूब को जिस रोज़ मुझसे मुहब्बत होगी.

जो दिल की उल्झन खुद आप से ना कह पाया
उस खाकसार को खुदा से क्या शिक़ायत होगी.

शिकस्ता-हाल परवाने का शमा से ये त-अय्युन,
कि जलना भी उस की नज़र में नज़ाक़त होगी.

मुहब्बत करने से ऐसा फ़ासला हुआ है नफ़रतों से,
यूं लगता है रूह के ज़ख्मों से अब रफ़ाक़त होगी.

मैं मुक़र भी जाऊं यूं तो,अपनी मुहब्बत से'शाद'
पर हुस्न ही ना रहा, तो कैसे भला इबादत होगी.





Wo ghaRi bhi khudaa kii qasam qayamat kii hogee,
mere mahaboob ko jis roz mujh se muhabbat hogee.

Jo dil kii uljhan khud aap se naa kah paayaa
Us khaksaar ko khudaa se kyaa shiqaayat hogee.

Shikastaa-haal parwaane ka shamaa se ye ta-ayyun,
ki jalnaa bhii us kii nazar mein nazaaqat hogee.

Muhabbat karne se aisa faslaa hua hai nafrato.n se,
yoon lagta hai rooh ke zakhmon se ab rafaqat hogee.

main muqar bhi jaaun yoon to,apnii muhabbat se 'shaad'
par husn hii naa rahaa, to kaise bhalaa ibaadat hogee.



shaad...
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28th November 2010, 05:33 PM

Wo ghaRi bhi khudaa kii qasam qayamat kii hogee,
mere mahaboob ko jis roz mujh se muhabbat hogee.


Sameer Bhai,

Kia khoob likha hai janab,

Tamaam ashaar aik se bhad kar aik haiN..
mujhe matla boht ziyada pasand aaya...

Younhi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,



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likhate rahe

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mere mahaboob ko jis roz mujh se muhabbat hogee.


Sameer Bhai,

Kia khoob likha hai janab,

Tamaam ashaar aik se bhad kar aik haiN..
mujhe matla boht ziyada pasand aaya...

Younhi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,



Hassan bhai aadaab... aaj ek baa fir aapko hamari mahfil em paakar bahot accha laga.. ye janakar aur bhi khushi hui ki nacheez ka likhna aap jaise ummdah shaayon ko pasand aata hai yahi hamare liye sabse badii khushnaseebi hai,... yoonhi sath dete rahen.. aate raha karen..

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Wo ghaRi bhi khudaa kii qasam qayamat kii hogee,
mere mahaboob ko jis roz mujh se muhabbat hogee.

"wo ghaRi bhi" yaha BHI lafz ne sari gadbadi paida kar di hai, yaqeenan Qayamat to ek waqt me hi aayegi par yaha aapne kaiee lamho me se ek lamha choona hai isiliye yaha bayani kamzor ho gayee aap khud gaur_o_fikr kare is baat par.

Dusre misre me aapne kaha "Jis ROZ" yaha aapne lamhe se baher aakar seedhe seedhe ek din mukarrar kar diya phir yaha baat gadbada gayee........sher sunne me to achcha lagta hai........par technical point of view se dekha jaye to yeh galtiyaa.N kabil_e_kabool nahi.


Jo dil kii uljhan khud aap se naa kah paayaa
Us khaksaar ko khudaa se kyaa shiqaayat hogee.

Yaha "Khud aap" ka istemaal karna bada ajeeb laga zahiri baat hai kehna to aapko hi hai yaha KHUD istemaal karne ki majboori samajh me nahi aayee.

Dusre misre me aapne SHIQAAYAT lafz ka istemaal kiya hai.......aur yaha ULJHAN aur SHIQAAYAT ka rishta samajh me nahi aaya........uljhan aur shiqaayat yeh do alag alag haalat hai, SHIKWAA aur SHIQAAYAT ka rishta samajh me aata hai par ULJHAN aur SHIQAAYAT ka nahi.

Shikastaa-haal parwaane ka shamaa se ye ta-ayyun,
ki jalnaa bhii us kii nazar mein nazaaqat hogee.

Hahahahah yaha aapne Qafiye ki majboori ke chaltein bohat ajeeb baat kehdi hai..........Nazaaqat shama ke liye istemaal ho to samajh me aata hai par parwano ke liye yeh zanana amal pehli baar nazar me aaya. Parwano ko Mard aur Shama ko Aurat ke aitbaar se samjha jata hai aur sher kaha jata hai.........aap khud gaur kare.

Muhabbat karne se aisa faslaa hua hai nafrato.n se,
yoon lagta hai rooh ke zakhmon se ab rafaqat hogee.

Bohat Gehri baat kahi aapne.....

main muqar bhi jaaun yoon to,apnii muhabbat se 'shaad'
par husn hii naa rahaa, to kaise bhalaa ibaadat hogee.

Achcha hai....

shaad...
Ummeed karta hu mere bhai is la ilm ki batein aapki naraazgi ka sabab na banegi.



Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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Sabse pahle to Sajid bhai ko hamara aadab arz ho... bhai muaafi chahte hain jo itna late reply kar rehe hain... asal me ye post mere nazar me hi naa aa paai kai dino se,... aaj dekha aapka reply to socha chaalte chalte jawaab detaa chaluun..


aapki shiqayaten sar aankhon par... ab waqt hai jawaabon ka...


"wo ghaRi bhi" yaha BHI lafz ne sari gadbadi paida kar di hai, yaqeenan Qayamat to ek waqt me hi aayegi par yaha aapne kaiee lamho me se ek lamha choona hai isiliye yaha bayani kamzor ho gayee aap khud gaur_o_fikr kare is baat par.


janaab aap to badee gahraai me utar gaye... khair ek nazar se dekhen to aapki sari baten sahi hai.. par baton baton me hum kai sari baten aisi bhi kah jate hain jo aksar sach nahi hotee... maslam kisi ne kisi ki tareef me kah diya.. " kya khoob lag rahi hain aaj aap mohtarmaa...uff ekdam qayamat " ab iska hum kya matlab lein ki qayamat aa hi gai kyaa...kai baaten shayri me yoon bhi ho jati hain... ummeed hai apki pahli baat ka jawab mil gaya hoga.


Yaha "Khud aap" ka istemaal karna bada ajeeb laga zahiri baat hai kehna to aapko hi hai yaha KHUD istemaal karne ki majboori samajh me nahi aayee.



bhai yahan pe maine "khud aap" lafz ka istemaal samne wale ke liye nahi khud aap yaani apne aap se relaate kiya hai ki KHUD AAP se naa kah payaa... ( agar main AAP kahta to saamne wale se mukhatib hoon aur KHUD AAP matlab khud se) matlab ki uljhan kya haai wo main khud hi nahi samajh paa raha hoon to khudaa se is pareshani ya uljhan ki shiqayaat kya karoon jo mujhe khaae ja rahi hai.. ki ilaahi ise door kar de.... khair ye zaruri nahi jo bolchaal me istemaal ho uske alawa aap uske saath kahin aur istemaal nahi kar sakte (jaise kuch log kahte hain "khana-peena ho gaya??".. ya kuch aisa bhi kahte hain "khana-waana ho gaya??").. wese bhi shiqva aur shiqayat lagbhag ek jaise meaning wale hain... aapko kisi cheez se agar shiqayat hai to kya aap ussi shiqayat ki shiqayat karenge... ya koi uljhan ya pareshani hogi to shiqayat karenge.. ummeed hai dusre sawal ka jawab sahi sahi de paya hoon...


Hahahahah yaha aapne Qafiye ki majboori ke chaltein bohat ajeeb baat kehdi hai..........Nazaaqat shama ke liye istemaal ho to samajh me aata hai par parwano ke liye yeh zanana amal pehli baar nazar me aaya. Parwano ko Mard aur Shama ko Aurat ke aitbaar se samjha jata hai aur sher kaha jata hai.........aap khud gaur kare.


bhaai har sher me last me qafiya majburi hi hoti hai ye baaat sach kahii aaapne... lekin yahan pe majburi nahi zarurat thii... apne dusra misra to padh liya lekin shayad pahle misre me aapka dhyaan nahi gaya iske ewaz me ye sher poora hua hai...

is sher me shama ko nazar me rakkha gyaaa haai na ki paarwane ko.. ham bhi
ba-khabar hain ki shama female ke liye use hota hai.. hamari ek frnd bhi shama hain jo ki female hain....khair ab aapko sher kaa apna nazariya dikhata hoon

parwaane ka pyaaar aisa hai ki use itna bharose ya kahen ki itna bhraam hai shama pe ki shama jo jalti hai..(bhai parwana tab tak saochta hai jab tak wo jalta nahi)lekin hamesha to shamma hii jalti rahti hai par kisi ki nazar us tak nahii jati...
parwane ka pyaar itna zyada hai ki wo jaanta hai shama jal rahi hai agar wo uske paas jaaega to beshaq jal jaega lekin wo use bhi shama ki ek adaaa maanta hai jisme use nazaaqat nazar aaati hai.....

ummeed karta hoon aapke saare sawaalon ka main sahi sahi jawaaab de saka hooon.. aur gaar nahi to aapke dil me agar koi shaq hai to pooch lijiyegaaa... bandaa khidmat me haazir hamesha se...

wese tashreef lane ke liye aur itna waqt dene ke liye tahe dil se shukriyah.

shaad


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Shaad bhai bahut umda gazal lagi ... Bas matle ke misra-e-saani mein qayamat ki hogi se radeef kaafiya atpata gaya .... Baaki khyaal acha laga matle ka .....


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shahiq bhai..baja farmaya aapne wo galti hui hai mujhse manta hoon main.. use jaldi hi sudhaarne ki koshish karuunga.... tashreef lane ke liye shukriyaa.


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वो घड़ी भी खुदा की क़सम क़यामत की होगी,
मेरे महबूब को जिस रोज़ मुझसे मुहब्बत होगी.

जो दिल की उल्झन खुद आप से ना कह पाया
उस खाकसार को खुदा से क्या शिक़ायत होगी.

शिकस्ता-हाल परवाने का शमा से ये त-अय्युन,
कि जलना भी उस की नज़र में नज़ाक़त होगी.

मुहब्बत करने से ऐसा फ़ासला हुआ है नफ़रतों से,
यूं लगता है रूह के ज़ख्मों से अब रफ़ाक़त होगी.

मैं मुक़र भी जाऊं यूं तो,अपनी मुहब्बत से'शाद'
पर हुस्न ही ना रहा, तो कैसे भला इबादत होगी.





Wo ghaRi bhi khudaa kii qasam qayamat kii hogee,
mere mahaboob ko jis roz mujh se muhabbat hogee.

Jo dil kii uljhan khud aap se naa kah paayaa
Us khaksaar ko khudaa se kyaa shiqaayat hogee.

Shikastaa-haal parwaane ka shamaa se ye ta-ayyun,
ki jalnaa bhii us kii nazar mein nazaaqat hogee.

Muhabbat karne se aisa faslaa hua hai nafrato.n se,
yoon lagta hai rooh ke zakhmon se ab rafaqat hogee.

main muqar bhi jaaun yoon to,apnii muhabbat se 'shaad'
par husn hii naa rahaa, to kaise bhalaa ibaadat hogee.



shaad...

waah janaab. dard e dil aur roohaani khayaalaton se pur aapka kalaam qaabil e taareef hai. dil ko jitanaa muztar kartaa hai utnaa hi rooh ko sukoon bhi ataa karta hai. dheron daad aur duaaon ke saath ... zarraa
   
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pyare bhai.. bas ye to aapki nazar ki nawazish hai ki nacheez ka likh adnaa sa kalaam aapne sar aankhon pe rakha hai.. aapki daad aur duaaon kaa behad shukriya saab... guzaarish hai ki yoonhi tashreef late rahen.. khush rahen aabaad rahen.

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