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Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo - 26th November 2010, 04:15 AM




us dost ke naam jis ka dil sone jaisaa hai



Ghazal ka shakhsaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon
Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main
Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Kashish in ki merey dil ki zameen pe raqs kartee hai
Sitaarey hain soraiyaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Merey kaanon me ras gholen meree aankhon me bas jaayen
Merey dil ka fasaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Idhar Hassaas raaton pe jawaan karwat ka ghera hai
Udher zaoqe tamaasha hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

   
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Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo bahut acha likhaa hai bhayee bahut flow mai meetha meetha par woh dost hai kaun,, sone dil wala taajmahal
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wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...kya hi ghazal kahi hai bhai wah ..itni lambi radeef me aise mazameen ...go ke samandar ko koze me band karne wali baath ho gaai sahab ...dad behad o hisab ...allah apko mazeed barkaton se nawaze ...khush rahen bhai ..aur issi tarhan bazm ko raushan karte hain ....

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us dost ke naam jis ka dil sone jaisaa hai



Ghazal ka shakhsaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon
Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main
Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Kashish in ki merey dil ki zameen pe raqs kartee hai
Sitaarey hain soraiyaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Merey kaanon me ras gholen meree aankhon me bas jaayen
Merey dil ka fasaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Idhar Hassaas raaton pe jawaan karwat ka ghera hai
Udher zaoqe tamaasha hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Hassaas ji,
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wahhhhhhhh...... MashaAllah.... kya khubsoorat ehsaas hai janab ! apne in haseen ehsaason ko aapne bahut bahut pyaare lafzon me baandha hai...har ek sher kaabil-e-taarif hai... aap ke andaaz-e-bayaan ke to hum pehle se hi bahut bade FAN rahe hai... dil chhuu liya aapne... tahe dil se hazaaro daad hazir hai... muje puraa yakeen hai ke aapke dil ki baat aapki dost ke dil tak pahuch gayi hogi... aap ke dost yakeenan khush-nasib hai ... yuhi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....

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us dost ke naam jis ka dil sone jaisaa hai



Ghazal ka shakhsaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon
Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main
Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Kashish in ki merey dil ki zameen pe raqs kartee hai
Sitaarey hain soraiyaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Merey kaanon me ras gholen meree aankhon me bas jaayen
Merey dil ka fasaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Idhar Hassaas raaton pe jawaan karwat ka ghera hai
Udher zaoqe tamaasha hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Namaste Hassaas Ji ... Ji aap ki kaafi rachnaaye padhi .. aap bahot hi achchha likhate hai ... pyaar kaise shabdo ko kayi rangon mai bikher deta hai ye aap ki rachanaa mai .. saaf nazar aata hai ...

kahi .. paazeb ka ghungharoo .. kahi paayalon ki chhan chhan ...to .. kahi zulfon kaa kham .. ..aur kahi Taaj Mahal Taaj Mahal waali aap ki rachanaa .... aur uss pe aap ke kalaamo ko nazar naa lage .. isliye aap ka bayaan kiya hua ... apne sanam kaa Baaola Kaajal ... Kya khoob raha aap ka Andaaze Bayaan har rachanaa mai .. Just an Amazing creationsssss ....

Ji abhi tak aap ko jitana bhi padha ... hammesha dil chhoo liya hai aap ke ehsaason ne ... Ji hume Urdu bilkul bhi nahi aati .... isliye jhooth nahi kahenge ... ke aap ki rachanaa ki saari lines samajh aayi ... nope .. par jitana bhi samajh aaya .. dil tak pahonchaa zaroor hai .. aur aap ne kaafi baar .. urdu wordings ke hindi meaning bhi likhe hai jis se samajh ne mai kaafi help mila . uske liye thank you so much ...

in sab ke saath ek .. guzaarish bhi hai humaare mann mai .. .. koi galati ho jaaye to maaf kar dijiyega .. par dil mai ek baat aayi to socha aap se kahe de ..

aap ne apne Sanam ke liye itani achchhi achchhi rachanaaye likhi hai ... Hum jaanate nahi ke .. ye saari rachanaaye aap ne unhe sunaayi bhi hai ke nahi .. par sach ummid karte hai ki .. ye saari rachanaaye aap ne unhe sunaayi ho ...

gar unhe sunaayi hai to ... ek request hai .. itani saari meethi meethi ... pyaari pyaari si baatein aap ne apne sanam ke baare mai bataayi hai to .. kyon naa wo pal bhi aap apni kalam se bayaan kare ... jab aap ne unhe ye rachanaaye .. apna ye pyaar unhe sunaaya hoga .. aur unke chahere pe ... jo muskaan saji hogi .. jo sharm .. hayaa ... jhuki palake ... maasoom si sharm se dabi dabi hasi ... ...

pata nahi kyon par bas .. mann mai ye baat aayi .. to aap se kahe diya .. dil ko lagaa .. uss pal ka imagination to kar sakte hai sab ke .. aap ka likha sun ke woh bahot khush huye honge .. par Khayaal aaya ki .. uss pal ko agar aap ki hi kalam bayaan kare to .. uska Andaaze bayaan ... qayaamat hi dhaayega ... so jo mann mai aaya aap se kahe diya

Kahi koi baat aap ko buri lagi ho to hum fir maafi chaahate hai ... .. ek baar fir .. hume aap ka likha bahot achchha laga .. yunhi likhate rahiye ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

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Namaste Hassaas Ji ... Ji aap ki kaafi rachnaaye padhi .. aap bahot hi achchha likhate hai ... pyaar kaise shabdo ko kayi rangon mai bikher deta hai ye aap ki rachanaa mai .. saaf nazar aata hai ...

kahi .. paazeb ka ghungharoo .. kahi paayalon ki chhan chhan ...to .. kahi zulfon kaa kham .. ..aur kahi Taaj Mahal Taaj Mahal waali aap ki rachanaa .... aur uss pe aap ke kalaamo ko nazar naa lage .. isliye aap ka bayaan kiya hua ... apne sanam kaa Baaola Kaajal ... Kya khoob raha aap ka Andaaze Bayaan har rachanaa mai .. Just an Amazing creationsssss ....

Ji abhi tak aap ko jitana bhi padha ... hammesha dil chhoo liya hai aap ke ehsaason ne ... Ji hume Urdu bilkul bhi nahi aati .... isliye jhooth nahi kahenge ... ke aap ki rachanaa ki saari lines samajh aayi ... nope .. par jitana bhi samajh aaya .. dil tak pahonchaa zaroor hai .. aur aap ne kaafi baar .. urdu wordings ke hindi meaning bhi likhe hai jis se samajh ne mai kaafi help mila . uske liye thank you so much ...

in sab ke saath ek .. guzaarish bhi hai humaare mann mai .. .. koi galati ho jaaye to maaf kar dijiyega .. par dil mai ek baat aayi to socha aap se kahe de ..

aap ne apne Sanam ke liye itani achchhi achchhi rachanaaye likhi hai ... Hum jaanate nahi ke .. ye saari rachanaaye aap ne unhe sunaayi bhi hai ke nahi .. par sach ummid karte hai ki .. ye saari rachanaaye aap ne unhe sunaayi ho ...

gar unhe sunaayi hai to ... ek request hai .. itani saari meethi meethi ... pyaari pyaari si baatein aap ne apne sanam ke baare mai bataayi hai to .. kyon naa wo pal bhi aap apni kalam se bayaan kare ... jab aap ne unhe ye rachanaaye .. apna ye pyaar unhe sunaaya hoga .. aur unke chahere pe ... jo muskaan saji hogi .. jo sharm .. hayaa ... jhuki palake ... maasoom si sharm se dabi dabi hasi ... ...

pata nahi kyon par bas .. mann mai ye baat aayi .. to aap se kahe diya .. dil ko lagaa .. uss pal ka imagination to kar sakte hai sab ke .. aap ka likha sun ke woh bahot khush huye honge .. par Khayaal aaya ki .. uss pal ko agar aap ki hi kalam bayaan kare to .. uska Andaaze bayaan ... qayaamat hi dhaayega ... so jo mann mai aaya aap se kahe diya

Kahi koi baat aap ko buri lagi ho to hum fir maafi chaahate hai ... .. ek baar fir .. hume aap ka likha bahot achchha laga .. yunhi likhate rahiye ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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kaisee hain aap ?
aap saawan ki bad mast ghata ki tarah aayeen aor khoob jhoom ke barseen yaqeen kijiye dil khush ho gayaa aisa lagaa ki kaainaat raqs me aa gayee ho

aap ne jo sawaal kiyaa hai un ka jawaab in link pe aap ko mil jaaye gaa aap ise zaroor parhen aor apnee raaye se zaroor nawaazen

rahaa tafseel ka maslah to mere khiyaal se aapke naam ek ghazal post kar chukaa hun aap ko us unkahe sawaalon ka jawaab zaroor mil jaaye ga

yahi ik aib hai jo unki fatrat ka hai ik hissa

jonooN jab sar pe charh jaaye na jaane kiya wo bakte hain

khudaa ka shuk hai aadat nahi hai qarz rakhne ki

ye hazrat jab bhi kahte hain naqad ashaar kahte hain


ab aap ko main tasweer ke doosre rukh se bhi milaa detaa hun


furqat zadah vesaal se mahroom ik kalee
shaohar se door dard ke saanche me thi dhalee
ayaa jo phon daor ke ulte qadam chalee
aawaaz sun ke jaan ki kuchh aor jab jalee
bistar pe gir ke boli darwaazah bher kar
zaalim ne phon rakh diyaa jazbaat chher kar

furqat zadah ...... judaayi ki maaree ... vesaal ... milan


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aap ke yahaan aane se mujhe kis qadar khushi milee hogee aap ko is kaa andazah bakhoobi ho gayaa hogaa mere khayaal se jise kahne ki zaroorat baaqee nahi hai
aap ka behad shukriyah ki aap yahaan aayeen aor khaamosh jheel pe kankar maar kar halkore paidaa kar diyaa
meree nek khwaahishaat aap ke saath hain ummeed ki isee tarah aatee rahen gi aor sdc ki shaan barhaatee rahen gee
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Ama kamaal kar dala in ghungruo ne mere bhai............yaar badi galat baat hai aap jab bekaraar hote ho to hame bhi apne sah shareek kar lete.........badi mushkil se to dil ko samjha pate hi hai ke appki tadap aakho ke samne aa jati hai aur dil phir bekabu ho jata hai hahahahaha.

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us dost ke naam jis ka dil sone jaisaa hai



Ghazal ka shakhsaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon
Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main
Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Kashish in ki merey dil ki zameen pe raqs kartee hai
Sitaarey hain soraiyaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Merey kaanon me ras gholen meree aankhon me bas jaayen
Merey dil ka fasaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Idhar Hassaas raaton pe jawaan karwat ka ghera hai
Udher zaoqe tamaasha hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
masood bhai,WAAAAAAH,bahut khoob,dil se daad hajir hai kubool karen
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Ama kamaal kar dala in ghungruo ne mere bhai............yaar badi galat baat hai aap jab bekaraar hote ho to hame bhi apne sah shareek kar lete.........badi mushkil se to dil ko samjha pate hi hai ke appki tadap aakho ke samne aa jati hai aur dil phir bekabu ho jata hai hahahahaha.

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mujhe afsos hai ki aap ka shukriyah adaa na kar sakaa jo mere nazdeek ghair insaani fel hai
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masood bhai,WAAAAAAH,bahut khoob,dil se daad hajir hai kubool karen
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aadaab
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aap koo yahaan dekh ke khushi ka ehsaas ho raha hai
shaayad aap pahlee baar hamaare yahaan aaye hain aor wo bhi peyaar ki sapghaat laaye hain aise me agar ham aap ka shukriyaa bhi adaa na karen to badee naa insaafee ho gee
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Ghazal ka shakhsaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


Masood Bhai,

Ghazal k baaray meiN khaak lafzooN se
tareef karooN to boht hi kam ho gii,
Jii chah raha hai is dil fareeb ghazal per
aap ko aik 'jaadu ki jhappi' donh...

Mehfil ko jis tarah se aap ne roshan kiya hai,
bas maza aa gaya aap ki yeh dil-nasheen ghazal
phad kar,

Quoted ashaar ki kuch ziyaada hii tareef karooN ga,
kyun k in meiN be-panah piyaar aur umang ubhar k
saamnay aa rahi hai...

Younhi mehfil roshan kartay rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,


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Ghazal ka shakhsaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


Masood Bhai,

Ghazal k baaray meiN khaak lafzooN se
tareef karooN to boht hi kam ho gii,
Jii chah raha hai is dil fareeb ghazal per
aap ko aik 'jaadu ki jhappi' donh...

Mehfil ko jis tarah se aap ne roshan kiya hai,
bas maza aa gaya aap ki yeh dil-nasheen ghazal
phad kar,

Quoted ashaar ki kuch ziyaada hii tareef karooN ga,
kyun k in meiN be-panah piyaar aur umang ubhar k
saamnay aa rahi hai...

Younhi mehfil roshan kartay rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,

aadaab hassaan bhai

kaise hain kahaan hain
bade dino baad nazar aa rahe hain
idhar kuchh dino se aap ki koi ghazal bhi nazar nahi aa rahee hai
are bhai kaahe ko itnaa chhupaa ke rakhte ho laao yaar post karo ham sabhi ko aap ki ghazal se maza aata hai naye kheyaal milte hain anokhi soch dekhne ko miltee hai .. yaar jaldee karen intezaar ho raha hai

aor bhai ap ki jaadoo ki ,,jhappy,, itnee peyaaree hai ki agar aap chaaho to ghazal hi us ke badle me le sakte ho . is peyaar aor kholoos ki jhappy ko main apne dil se qobool kartaa hun aor us ka dil se shukriya bhi adaa kartaa hun
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aadaab hassaan bhai

kaise hain kahaan hain
bade dino baad nazar aa rahe hain
idhar kuchh dino se aap ki koi ghazal bhi nazar nahi aa rahee hai
are bhai kaahe ko itnaa chhupaa ke rakhte ho laao yaar post karo ham sabhi ko aap ki ghazal se maza aata hai naye kheyaal milte hain anokhi soch dekhne ko miltee hai .. yaar jaldee karen intezaar ho raha hai

aor bhai ap ki jaadoo ki ,,jhappy,, itnee peyaaree hai ki agar aap chaaho to ghazal hi us ke badle me le sakte ho . is peyaar aor kholoos ki jhappy ko main apne dil se qobool kartaa hun aor us ka dil se shukriya bhi adaa kartaa hun
mukhlis
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us dost ke naam jis ka dil sone jaisaa hai



Ghazal ka shakhsaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo
Jawaani ka taraanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon
Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main
Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Kashish in ki merey dil ki zameen pe raqs kartee hai
Sitaarey hain soraiyaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Merey kaanon me ras gholen meree aankhon me bas jaayen
Merey dil ka fasaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Idhar Hassaas raaton pe jawaan karwat ka ghera hai
Udher zaoqe tamaasha hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


kya baat hai mere bhai.. aapne to us mahbuuba ki yaad aise taaza kar di hai ki maano wo saamen se hi chalke a gai ho, aur mujhe bhi sunaai dene lage hon uski paazeb ke ghunghru... kamaal ki soch ke saath laajawb bayani.
bahot khoob dil se daad....


Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


beshaq ekdam sahi farmaya, mujhe ye ehsaas hota hai kabhi kabhar.



Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon
Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main
Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


masha-allah kahin meri nazar na lag jaae in sheron pe. kasam khuda ki bahot ummdah.

Kashish in ki merey dil ki zameen pe raqs kartee hai
Sitaarey hain soraiyaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Merey kaanon me ras gholen meree aankhon me bas jaayen
Merey dil ka fasaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

bahot khob bayaani saab...

Matle aur maqte ke liye alag se dad dena chahunga. ghazal ka aadha wazan to aapke maqte ne hi utha liya.. behad pasand aaya hame aapka kalaam.. likhte rahen yoonhi, taaki hum jaison ko bhi seekhne ke mauke milte rahen.
duaaon me yaad rakhen.

shaad...


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kya baat hai mere bhai.. aapne to us mahbuuba ki yaad aise taaza kar di hai ki maano wo saamen se hi chalke a gai ho, aur mujhe bhi sunaai dene lage hon uski paazeb ke ghunghru... kamaal ki soch ke saath laajawb bayani.
bahot khoob dil se daad....

Inhen paake hansee honton ki merey laot aatee hai
Ke har gham ka madawa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


beshaq ekdam sahi farmaya, mujhe ye ehsaas hota hai kabhi kabhar.


Sahaara hain mere dil ka inhen main kis tarah bhooloon
Merey man ka kalisaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Ijaazat tum agar dedo inhen aankhon se choomon main
Khudaayi ik atiyah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


masha-allah kahin meri nazar na lag jaae in sheron pe. kasam khuda ki bahot ummdah.

Kashish in ki merey dil ki zameen pe raqs kartee hai
Sitaarey hain soraiyaa hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Merey kaanon me ras gholen meree aankhon me bas jaayen
Merey dil ka fasaanah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

bahot khob bayaani saab...

Matle aur maqte ke liye alag se dad dena chahunga. ghazal ka aadha wazan to aapke maqte ne hi utha liya.. behad pasand aaya hame aapka kalaam.. likhte rahen yoonhi, taaki hum jaison ko bhi seekhne ke mauke milte rahen.
duaaon me yaad rakhen.

shaad...

aadaab
shaad bhai
yaar naaraaz na honaa bade dinon baad shukriyaa adaa kar rahaa hun pata hai ki aaj kal kiyaaho gayaa hai mujhe ki main andar se toot phoot ka shikaar ho rahaa hun aisaa lagtaa hai ki saaree quwat khatm hotee jaa rahe hai aor ye shaayed kisee ko takleef me dekh ke ho rahaa hai allah use asaanee de
aap ne ghazal ka jis tarah se tafseelee jaaizah liyaa hai oar us pe daad kaa taaj rakhaa hai us par tahe dil se shukr guzaar hun
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Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo


Bahut Khoob ... Masood Bhai !

Saath hi matlaa bhi dil ke kareeb raha ... tamaam ghazal meN paazeb ke ghunghroo ki jhankaar ne samaa baandh diya .... bahut luft aaya padhkar ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !




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behad umda khyaalon aur behhtreen mizaaj se likha hai Masood bhai aapne,bahut khoob,hamari janib se dili daad kubool karen
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Khushi in se hi waabastah inheen se munsalik gham bhi
Moqaddar ka safeenah hain terey paazeb ke ghunghroo

Bahut Khoob ... Masood Bhai !

Saath hi matlaa bhi dil ke kareeb raha ... tamaam ghazal meN paazeb ke ghunghroo ki jhankaar ne samaa baandh diya .... bahut luft aaya padhkar ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
aadaab
mehraa saahab
afsoos ki aap ki daad dekh na sakaa yaa dekhaa to shaayad bhool gayaa hun bahar haal shukr waajib hai aor sach ye hai ki jis ne bandon ka shukriyah adaa nahi kiyaa wo oopar waale ka shukr kiyaa daa kare gaa
mai aap ka aabhaaree hun ki aap hamesha hi himmat badhaate rahte hain
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