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aankheN - 5th December 2010, 06:09 PM





aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...
   
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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...
bahut khoob janab hassas saheb,

qafiya ko bahut achhe se nibhaya hai aapne, maza aa gaya aapki ghazal padh kar...
daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...

aapka dost,
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Masood Bhai ... Aadaab !

Aapki ek aur dilkash ghazal padhke mazaa aa gaya ... sabhi ashaar bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe ... matle se maqte tak ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ...

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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...

hassas bhayee

bahut acha laga padh ke

naye kafiyoN se parichaye kara diyaa aapne

shukriyaa lkhte raheN
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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...






ASSLAM-o-ALAIKUM…!

Janab Mohtram Masood Hassaas Saheb….!

Aap Ke Kalaam Ki Taareef K Shayan-e-Shaan Mere Paas Alfaz Nahi Hain…

Bas Itna Kahun Ga K Ap K Kalaam Em jo Jiddat Or Gehrayi Payi Jati Hai ….. Wo Aap He Ka Khaasa Hai..Hr Hr Shair Apni Misaal Aap Hai…

Qafiya Or Radeef Boht Mushkil Chuna Aap Ne Or Usay Itni Khoobi Se Nibhaya Hai KeAap Ki Shukhanwari Pr Rashk Aanay Laga Hai….

Yaqeenan Aap Fun-e-Ghazal Pe Mukammal Dastarass Rakhtay Hain….

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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...

bahut khoob............................................. .........


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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

wahhhhhhhhhhh.... kya kehna janab


nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


bahut bahut khoob... dil chhuu liya... daad


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye
wahhhhhhhhhhhh............. MashaAllah...


roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen
roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa
awesome............. just awesome....

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen
bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa
kya baat hai janab.... bahut khoob.....


badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...
kurbaan......
Hassaas ji,
Aadaab

kya kehna janab aapke is kalaam ka... MashaAllah bahut khoob... ab aapki taarif naa kare to aur kya kare... aap kuch aise shabdon ke jaal bunte hai jisme hum jaise kai log phas jate hai...... aapke ehsaas bahut dilfareb rahe aur aapka andaaz-e-bayaan to kya kehna,wahhhhhhhhhhhhh ! dil se dhero daad hazir hai.. yuhi likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...


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bahut khoob janab hassas saheb,

qafiya ko bahut achhe se nibhaya hai aapne, maza aa gaya aapki ghazal padh kar...
daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...

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Masood Bhai ... Aadaab !

Aapki ek aur dilkash ghazal padhke mazaa aa gaya ... sabhi ashaar bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe ... matle se maqte tak ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...

aadaab
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main dekh hi na paayaa ki aap ki doaa meraa intezaar kar rahee hai
main ma"Azarat khowaah hun
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hassas bhayee

bahut acha laga padh ke

naye kafiyoN se parichaye kara diyaa aapne

shukriyaa lkhte raheN

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aap ki daad ne sokoon bakhshaa khosoosan qaafiyah ke hwaale se jo baat aap ne ki achhi lagi
main chaahitaa thaa ki is me ek sher aor daalun magar us se itnaa mutmain nahi thaa is liye nahi daalaa haan magar ab aap ko sunaaye detaa hun

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masood sahaab aadaab..

aapki ghazal ne bahot mutaasir kiya..aur yeh do sher dil ke behad kareeb rahe..allah barkat de..daad..

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen


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Hassaas Saheb Salaam Valekoom,

Aap ke likhe ko paDh ne ka mauka mile yeh hi khush kismati hai, Aur aapki BBC par telecast huee Ghazlein bhi sunee aur aapki awaaz bhi. Beshak dil-o-zehen parr gehraa asar karne wala kalaam hota hai aapka.. yeh ghazal bhi behad pasand aayee khusoosan darj-e-zel sher zyaada purasar payaa..


roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

waah ..bohot khoob..


aapki shaayri paDh karr kuch ghanToN takk ek sher-o-shaayri ka khumaar chaa jaata hai..kuch puuraane kalam yaaad aa jaate hai..

kalaam paDh ke ho hassaas dil to behtar hai,
ho ashqbaar tau marghoob ho gayee aahkein.

..agar ho sake tau hamaari rehnumaayee kiyaa karein, beshaq hum jaante hain ke aap kaafi masroof rehtein hain lekin phir bhi..hasb-e-fursat jabb bhi munaasib ho..filhaal chaltaa hoon..Allah kare zor-e-kalam aur ziyaada.


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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...

nice .....
har ek shabd ko badhe hi pyar se sawanra gaya hai ....


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milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen


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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...

waah waah hassaas sahab !! hairatanghez aur lajawaab ghazal kahee hai aapne. behad nafees aur pukhta. har sher hi nahiin har lavz bhi beshkeemtee hai. saikadon daad aur duaaon ke saath .... zarraa
   
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appke liye daad kubool kijiye
खुमार-ऐ-दर्द से महबूब हो गयीं आखें
किसी की चाह में मजज़ूब हो गयीं आँखें

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हर एक खेल में आँखों में बुगहज़ दर आया
नज़र के खेल में महबूब हो गयीं आँखें

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appke liye daad kubool kijiye
खुमार-ऐ-दर्द से महबूब हो गयीं आखें
किसी की चाह में मजज़ूब हो गयीं आँखें

नज़र ने ओढ़ ली मंज़र की आतिशीं चादर
ग़म-ऐ-हयात से मर्तूब हो गयीं आँखें

सराब बन के मनाज़िर नज़र में हैं रक्सां
मिलन की आस पे मस्लूब हो गयीं आँखें

रूदाद इश्क की नाव खेज़ है अभी साकी
अभी से किस लिए महजूब हो गयीं आँखें

हर एक खेल में आँखों में बुगहज़ दर आया
नज़र के खेल में महबूब हो गयीं आँखें

बढ़ा जो मामिला तो इस्कादर हुवा हस्सास
की गाम गाम पे किया खूब हो गयीं आँखें


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janaab aap ke andaaz ne hamaaraa dil jeet liyaa ham ab wo alfaaz kahaan se laaye jo aap ke kholoos aap ki inaayat aap ki mohabbat ka badal ban sake aisaa lag rahaa hai ki tamaam lafzon ne ham se be rukhee akhtiyaar kar lee hai ham aap ke aabhaaree hain ye aap ka upkaar hai aaj se ham aap ke qarz daar hain ye udhaar us waqt utre gaa jam ham aap ki shaan ke motaabiq koi kaam kar jaayen
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masood sahaab aadaab..

aapki ghazal ne bahot mutaasir kiya..aur yeh do sher dil ke behad kareeb rahe..allah barkat de..daad..

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen


aapka dost,
Pradhyuman

aadaab
ghazal jab tamaam lof pasand karen tab us kiizzat me izaafah hojaataa hai aor belaa shubha aapki daad se aisaa huwaa hai
mainaap ka shukr guzaar hun
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Hassaas Saheb Salaam Valekoom,

Aap ke likhe ko paDh ne ka mauka mile yeh hi khush kismati hai, Aur aapki BBC par telecast huee Ghazlein bhi sunee aur aapki awaaz bhi. Beshak dil-o-zehen parr gehraa asar karne wala kalaam hota hai aapka.. yeh ghazal bhi behad pasand aayee khusoosan darj-e-zel sher zyaada purasar payaa..


roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

waah ..bohot khoob..


aapki shaayri paDh karr kuch ghanToN takk ek sher-o-shaayri ka khumaar chaa jaata hai..kuch puuraane kalam yaaad aa jaate hai..

kalaam paDh ke ho hassaas dil to behtar hai,
ho ashqbaar tau marghoob ho gayee aahkein.

..agar ho sake tau hamaari rehnumaayee kiyaa karein, beshaq hum jaante hain ke aap kaafi masroof rehtein hain lekin phir bhi..hasb-e-fursat jabb bhi munaasib ho..filhaal chaltaa hoon..Allah kare zor-e-kalam aur ziyaada.


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kiyaa baat hai janaab bahot khoob
aap se mulaaqat huyi ye hamaare liye fakhr ka moqaam hai aap hamaare bade bhai hain aor khair se hamaare jaise hi hijr ka dard sah rahe hain wo bhi UAE me to ek padosee hone ke naate aap kaa naam dil ke daftar me khaas moqaam pe aa gayaa hai
aap ne ghazal ko pasand kiyaa pazeeraayi bakhshee achha lagaa main aap kaa shukr guzaar hun
aor janaab main kiyaa meree besaat kiyaa ..taaham mujh se jo bhi ho sake gaa main aap ka taabedaar rahun gaa
zaraa taakheer se jawaab de rahaa hun is kaa dil me malaal na ho to behtar hai
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nice .....
har ek shabd ko badhe hi pyar se sawanra gaya hai ....


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen


good one

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yaaqeen karen kuchh samajh me nahi aarahaa hai ki kin lafzon se aapkaa shukriyaa adaa karun jis kholoos se aap ne nawaazaa hai us ne apnaa ghulaam bana liyaa hai
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waah waah hassaas sahab !! hairatanghez aur lajawaab ghazal kahee hai aapne. behad nafees aur pukhta. har sher hi nahiin har lavz bhi beshkeemtee hai. saikadon daad aur duaaon ke saath .... zarraa


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aap ki daad dil ke nehaan khaanon me sanbhaal ke rakh lee hai taake waqtan faoqtan is se ltf andoz hote rahen aap ka qalam nazm aor nacr me yaksaan kamaal ka haamil hai allah aor nawaaze
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aadaab - 13th December 2010, 04:22 AM

[QUOTE=ISHK EK IBADAT;417217]bahut khoob............................................. ........


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ASSLAM-o-ALAIKUM…!

Janab Mohtram Masood Hassaas Saheb….!

Aap Ke Kalaam Ki Taareef K Shayan-e-Shaan Mere Paas Alfaz Nahi Hain…

Bas Itna Kahun Ga K Ap K Kalaam Em jo Jiddat Or Gehrayi Payi Jati Hai ….. Wo Aap He Ka Khaasa Hai..Hr Hr Shair Apni Misaal Aap Hai…

Qafiya Or Radeef Boht Mushkil Chuna Aap Ne Or Usay Itni Khoobi Se Nibhaya Hai KeAap Ki Shukhanwari Pr Rashk Aanay Laga Hai….

Yaqeenan Aap Fun-e-Ghazal Pe Mukammal Dastarass Rakhtay Hain….

ALLAH AAP KO MAZID NAWAZAY


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kya kehna janab aapke is kalaam ka... MashaAllah bahut khoob... ab aapki taarif naa kare to aur kya kare... aap kuch aise shabdon ke jaal bunte hai jisme hum jaise kai log phas jate hai...... aapke ehsaas bahut dilfareb rahe aur aapka andaaz-e-bayaan to kya kehna,wahhhhhhhhhhhhh ! dil se dhero daad hazir hai.. yuhi likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...

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janaab aap ke andaaz ne hamaaraa dil jeet liyaa ham ab wo alfaaz kahaan se laaye jo aap ke kholoos aap ki inaayat aap ki mohabbat ka badal ban sake aisaa lag rahaa hai ki tamaam lafzon ne ham se be rukhee akhtiyaar kar lee hai ham aap ke aabhaaree hain ye aap ka upkaar hai aaj se ham aap ke qarz daar hain ye udhaar us waqt utre gaa jam ham aap ki shaan ke motaabiq koi kaam kar jaayen
plz aap apnaa naam bataayen aor darmeyaan ke parde uthaayen
aap ke jawaab ke intezaar me
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arey masood saheb aisa kuch bhi nahi humne appke ehsasoon ko phada orr hume bhut behtareen laga magar mujhe thoda phadne mai dikkat ho rahi thi maine socha ki agar ss hindi mai post kiya jaye to zyada asaani se appki baat sab tak phuch sakti hai
orr isse logon ko kam dikkat hogi or ke iss shndaar byan ko log zyada acchi trah se smjh payenge
issme maine koi bada kaam nahi kiya mujhe achcha laga mere dil ne kaha ki agar yeh hindi mai post hota t phadne mai orr bhi maza atta orr log iss behtar tarike se smjh pate to mai bas likh diya kyn ki iss behtareen kalam ko sab tak usske pure ehsaas ke sath phuchna zaroori hai
issle abb bas yahi guzarish hai ki app issii trah behtareen kalaam likhte rahe
kush rahe appka dost
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yaaqeen karen kuchh samajh me nahi aarahaa hai ki kin lafzon se aapkaa shukriyaa adaa karun jis kholoos se aap ne nawaazaa hai us ne apnaa ghulaam bana liyaa hai
bas itnaa hikahun gaa parwardigaar aap ko us moqaam pe le jaaye jis pe har koi naaz kare
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aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge




khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen
kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken

khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa

nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar
gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen

manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa


saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan
milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen

saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa
masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye

roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi
abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen

roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa

har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa
nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen

bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa

badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas
ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen



hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ...


waah waaah.. janaab Masood saahab bahot khoob kalaam likha hai aapne.. bamushkil alfaazonn ko bhi aapne jazbaton ke saath bilkul aasaan bana diya.. kamaal ka likhte hain.. yoonhi apne kaalaamon se mahfil ko roshan karte rahen.. khush rahen..

shaad...


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waah waaah.. janaab Masood saahab bahot khoob kalaam likha hai aapne.. bamushkil alfaazonn ko bhi aapne jazbaton ke saath bilkul aasaan bana diya.. kamaal ka likhte hain.. yoonhi apne kaalaamon se mahfil ko roshan karte rahen.. khush rahen..

shaad...

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shaad bhai
kabhi kabhi aisaa ho jaataa hai ki mushkil tareen qaafiyaf radeeb daanton se paseenaa nikaal deta hain un me se ek ghazal ye bhi thee majboor ho kar kuchh naye arbi alfaaz istemaal karne pare jo ki omooman urdu me istemaal nahi hain magar ye dekh kar khushi huyi ki logon ne use bhi khush aamdeed kahaa
main tahe dil se aap ki daad ka aor mohabbat ka shukr guzaar hun
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