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Hatim Jawed ki shairy - 23rd March 2013, 04:33 PM

GHAZAL
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Tera wajood samandar bikhar gaya hota |
Nadi na pyas bujhati to mar gaya hota ||

Jo aaj amn ki asmat na loot li jaati |
Wo shakhs laut ke mahfooz ghar gaya hota ||

Hamaare zarf ki chaadar agar nahi hoti |
Tere waqaar ka chehra utar gaya hota ||

Bahut ajeeb thi uss ke fareb ki basti |
Tilism toot na jaata to mar gaya hota ||

Falak pe hirs ke JAWED uss ki mahfil thi |
Bahut muhaal tha aana agar gaya hota ||

**** Hatim Jawed.

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23rd March 2013, 04:47 PM

Masha Allah!!..

kya baat hai...

Bohat khoob Jawed sahab.....


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23rd March 2013, 05:21 PM

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GHAZAL
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Tera wajood samandar bikhar gaya hota |
Nadi na pyas bujhati to mar gaya hota ||

Jo aaj amn ki asmat na loot li jaati |
Wo shakhs laut ke ghar gaya hota ||

Hamaare zarf ki chaadar agar nahi hoti |
Tere waqaar ka chehra utar gaya hota ||

Bahut ajeeb thi uss ke fareb ki basti |
Tilism toot na jaata to mar gaya hota ||

Falak pe hirs ke JAWED uss ki mahfil thi |
Bahut muhaal tha aana agar gaya hota ||

**** Hatim Jawed.
waaahhhh kya baaat hai... bahot ummdah janaab.....

likhte raheN

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23rd March 2013, 05:48 PM

Aadaab Janab Jawed Sahaab...!



Aapka SDC meiN swagat hai... Badi hi umdaa gazal se aapne aaghaaz
kiya hai is mehfil meiN .... Ummid hai yeH safar behad lambaa jayeNga..


Behad gehre aur umdaa ashaar rahe janab, kis qadar gehrai samaayi
hai aapke khayaaloN meiN kya kaheN... bus gazab dhaa gaye janab..


Is khoob gazal par meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..


Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye... Bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


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24th March 2013, 12:33 AM

Hauslo'N ko quwat ata farmaane ke liye aap sab ka behad shukrguzaar hooN.
   
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24th March 2013, 09:31 AM

Hatim Javed saahab Assalamaoalikum...

janaab behad mubaarak mauqe pe aap tashreef laaye hain SDC ki mehfil meiN... hum logon ne mushayre ka intazaamaat kiyaa hai jo ki aaj shaam baroz itwaar ko shaam ko 4 baje se shuru hogaa...

aap tashreef zaroor laayen, meri iltijaa hai.....

Neeche likhi link check kijiye baaki information ke liye....... shukriyaa

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75688

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