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Welcome on SDC, Abhi Ji...!

Woh sharaabi paani peeta hoga shaayad...!

Waise aap ka sher pasand hai hameiN

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abhi saahab, aapka is pariwar meN swagat hai... aapka pehla sher bhi bahut khoob raha, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aap yuNhi apni qalamkaari se humen rubaru karaate raheNge...



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Welcome on SDC, Abhi Ji...!

Woh sharaabi paani peeta hoga shaayad...!

Waise aap ka sher pasand hai hameiN

Keep writing & sharing, ok...?

shukriya Amanush sahab ... pasandgai ke liye

waise sharaabi aksar sharaab peete hain...

shayad aap paniii peene walon ko kehete hogee.... lolzz

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welcome abhi.....shayri pariwar mein aapka swagat hai.......
Sher bahut umdaa laga.....



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Abhi tamrkar... welcome to shayri dot com....

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Welcome to SDC Abhi Saahab! Nice shayr Sir! Please let us know about yourself in the following thread.

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WaaH ! ........... Nice One !!!




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WELCOME TO SDC ABHI JI..

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