If....

$hivani · **If.... -** 24th December 2004, 06:11 PM

hi friends!!!!!! i am posting something here after a really long time...hope u all like it..

IF.......

IF only life could be
as beautiful as one dreams of it to be...
IF only dreams could turn to reality
as one wants them to be...
IF only reality could be acceptable to all
as one hopes it to be...
IF only the accepted could be
as painless as one expects it to be...

BUT the truth is...
when dreams and reality meet...
the DREAMS are shattered;
leaving tearful reality behind;
which no one wants it to be........

$hivani · **hi -** 24th December 2004, 06:15 PM

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

candyboy · 25th December 2004, 07:40 PM

Hi Shivani Ji,

Truly a work of art. Luved every word of it.

But hey a word of advice, don't dwell on the IF 2 much. Life is much more beautiful n i guess we should all b thankful 4 what we do have.

True, dreams don't always come true but they are the stepping stones to the future we can make so don't ever stop dreamin but just don't expect them to b a reality. Pls don't mind ok, just friendly advice.

Take care n merry xmas 2 u 2.

$hivani · **hi -** 26th December 2004, 07:45 PM

h'llo salimji...thanx a lot for liking my composition and replying..u've said very rightly...like u even i dont xpect dreams to come true....thanx a lot once again...bye 4 now!..take care!

imran86 · **my if's...... -** 4th January 2005, 10:19 PM

If kiss wr water,I Will gve u sea.If hugs were
leaves, I will give u a tree.If u luv a planet,I will
give u a galaxy, if friendship is life
I will give u Mine...

If I were to be anything in this world…. I’d be ur
tears!!!… So, I can be conceived in ur heart, born in
ur eyes, live on ur cheeks & die on ur lips!!!!!

Rohin · **Re: If.... -** 10th January 2005, 11:06 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by $hivani
hi friends!!!!!! i am posting something here after a really long time...hope u all like it..

IF.......

IF only life could be
as beautiful as one dreams of it to be...
IF only dreams could turn to reality
as one wants them to be...
IF only reality could be acceptable to all
as one hopes it to be...
IF only the accepted could be
as painless as one expects it to be...

BUT the truth is...
when dreams and reality meet...
the DREAMS are shattered;
leaving tearful reality behind;
which no one wants it to be........

Hi Shivani,

Nice Composition really good.

If you would read my signature you would observe its a jist of your poem.

But on a hopeful note.

Dream for the SKY
Live to fulfil the Dream
One day and surely one day
Dreams would be a reality
If not you will Be glad that you pursued you dream

Thanks
Rohin

Chaand · 12th January 2005, 10:02 PM

BUT the truth is...
when dreams and reality meet...
the DREAMS are shattered;
leaving tearful reality behind;
which no one wants it to be........

Itna kadwa sachh kyoN bata diya Shivani ji....

dekhiye na....

Badi mushkil se dekha tha jo khwaab
wo is kadvi si sachchhai ne mita diya,
YooNto ye neeNd bhi kambakht na aati thi
Or aap haiN ke....
Hame raat bhar ki thakan se jaga diya.

But well said....

Because truth is truth...

Thanks.

beena · **If.... -** 14th January 2005, 10:35 AM

Shivani ji your composition is very sweet. But here's my question -
If life ever became as
Expected
It would become
A routine-in-a-guise
Day after day
Night after night
How could it be anything
Otherwise?

$hivani · **hi -** 16th January 2005, 07:30 PM

hello rohinji...thanx a lot for appreciating my composition..i really was not expecting any replies and i am sorry for being late in replying.thanx a lot once again....bye 4 now!...take care!

$hivani · **hi -** 16th January 2005, 07:35 PM

hello chaandji........very well said indeed....thanx a lot for replying and that too wen i was expecting absolutely no replies....thanx a lot.....bye 4 now!..take care!

$hivani · **hi -** 16th January 2005, 07:39 PM

hello beena ji..........firstly to i think i should welcome u this wonderful place...i hope i am right in thinking that u r new here.....secondly thanx a million for replying..and u know life is always unexpected and any questions regarding it are very complicated and the answers to them r equally unexpected.....thanx a lot once again....bye 4 now!...........take care!!!!!!!!