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bunyaadi haq - 15th November 2010, 06:23 PM

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mujhe apni ghazal pe ek do jagah edit karnaa thaa magar main na kar sakaa kiun ki edit option yahaan nazar hi nahi aa rahaa thaa kisee se maaloom huwaa ki ham sirf 40 minut tak apne edit ke haq ko istemaal kar sakte hain us ke baad mod ki madad lenee hogee
main is maamile me uljhan ka shikaar hun ki aayaa apnee takhleqaat me tarmeem o tsarruf ka ikhtiyaar kisee ko diyaa jaye yaa na
jabki doosree jaanib meree shakhsi anaa is baat se bhi majrooh ho rahee hai ki main bazaate khud apnee takhleeqaat pe tasarruf ka bunyaadi haq kho dun ....... kiyaa aisaa meraa zameer gawaara kare gaa .......jabki main ne apnee takhleeqaat ko kisee ke haathon farokht to kiyaa nahi hai
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aadaab
mod saahbaan

mujhe apni ghazal pe ek do jagah edit karnaa thaa magar main na kar sakaa kiun ki edit option yahaan nazar hi nahi aa rahaa thaa kisee se maaloom huwaa ki ham sirf 40 minut tak apne edit ke haq ko istemaal kar sakte hain us ke baad mod ki madad lenee hogee
main is maamile me uljhan ka shikaar hun ki aayaa apnee takhleqaat me tarmeem o tsarruf ka ikhtiyaar kisee ko diyaa jaye yaa na
jabki doosree jaanib meree shakhsi anaa is baat se bhi majrooh ho rahee hai ki main bazaate khud apnee takhleeqaat pe tasarruf ka bunyaadi haq kho dun ....... kiyaa aisaa meraa zameer gawaara kare gaa .......jabki main ne apnee takhleeqaat ko kisee ke haathon farokht to kiyaa nahi hai
aap hazraat is maamile ko dekhen to badee nawaazish hogee
doaan ke saath
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16th November 2010, 04:24 PM

Sahibaan,
mere vichaar se ek baar jo post ker diya wo printing material ki tareh non editable hona chahiye, kyonki isse baar baar editing ko badawa milega aur zinhone pehle us post ko padh ke reply ker diya hai un ke saath zyadti hogi. is ka ek example yei thread
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=71393
hai. is par editing ko le ker garma garam bahes ho chukee hai.
magar jaise ke proof reading hoti hai usee tareh yahan post kerte waqt kuch typing mistakes bhee ho jaati hain jin per baar baar padne ke baad bhi dyaan nahin jaata kyoki sab apna likha hota hai aur aabmi flow mein theek padta jaata hai. is liye 40 min ka samay editing ke liye hona kam hai isko badha ke 24 ghante kiya jaana chahiye aur is dauraan jo replies aayen editing ke baad un replies par automatic report honi chahiye editing ki.
aur ek baat jab bhi koi member login kerke apni post khole to sabse last post sabse ooper honi chahiye by default (Jaise post reply kerne ke samay hoti hai).


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