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mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha - 16th November 2010, 07:07 AM



aadaab yaaraane mahfil


aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak



mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha

kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal

merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha

yurish…… hamlah

merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha

so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa

ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha

lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch

kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha

gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal

tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha

kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?

barham ……. Gussa

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16th November 2010, 07:35 AM

tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha

kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?


Bahut Hi Umdaa Khayal Rahe ... Masood Sahab !

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16th November 2010, 09:48 AM

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tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
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kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?

Bahut Hi Umdaa Khayal Rahe ... Masood Sahab !

Tamaam Ghazal Ke Ashaar Qabile Taareef kahe jayenge ... bahut accha likha hai aapne... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ..

yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...

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bahut khoob.........................................


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aadaab yaaraane mahfil


aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak



mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha

kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal

merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha

yurish…… hamlah

merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha

so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa

ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha

lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch

kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha

gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal

tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha

kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?

barham ……. Gussa

Hassaas sahab,
sabse pehle ... aapko aur aapke pure pariwaar ko LAMHA ki aur se Eid ki bahut bahut bahut mubarakbaad......
rahi baat aapke kalaam ki..... to kya kehna aapka ! aapki kalam to har baar ghazab dhaati hai... aapki kalam se nikla har lafz jaise koi jaadu sa kar jata hai... ye kalaam be-shaq kaabil-e-tarif hai.... dilse daad hazir hai janab.... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan rakhiye.... khush rahiye.....


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[QUOTE=ISHK EK IBADAT;415627]bahut khoob.........................................

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Hassaas sahab,
sabse pehle ... aapko aur aapke pure pariwaar ko LAMHA ki aur se Eid ki bahut bahut bahut mubarakbaad......
rahi baat aapke kalaam ki..... to kya kehna aapka ! aapki kalam to har baar ghazab dhaati hai... aapki kalam se nikla har lafz jaise koi jaadu sa kar jata hai... ye kalaam be-shaq kaabil-e-tarif hai.... dilse daad hazir hai janab.... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan rakhiye.... khush rahiye.....


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lamha saahibah
khudaa barkaton se nawaaze
aap ke alfaaz soroor bakhsh hote hain jin se roonaroo hone ke baad ehsaas ke athaah samundar me sokoon ki kaifiyat paidaa ho jaatee hai
aap jis khollos se nawaaztee hain wo bhi taqreeban aaj kal naa paid hotaa jaa rahaa hai
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aadaab yaaraane mahfil


aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak



mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha

kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal

merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha

yurish…… hamlah

merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha

so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa

ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha

lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch

kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha

gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal

tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha

kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?

barham ……. Gussa
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masood bhai aadab ,,

apki ik ghazal se mustafeed howa hi tha ke .. is shandar ghazal ne apne hisar me le liya ....bhai yaar kya kaha jaaye ......apki shaan khuch kaha jaaye aise koi lafz nahi gareeb ke paas ...bus itna kahe sakta hun ke ap is fun ke ustad maloom padte ho ..allah apko mazeed barkaton se nawaze bhai ...kaunse sher ki tareef ki jaye ......ghazal kya hai gazab hai gazab ...allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ...

dad o mubarak khubool kijiye ...


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masood bhai aadab ,,

apki ik ghazal se mustafeed howa hi tha ke .. is shandar ghazal ne apne hisar me le liya ....bhai yaar kya kaha jaaye ......apki shaan khuch kaha jaaye aise koi lafz nahi gareeb ke paas ...bus itna kahe sakta hun ke ap is fun ke ustad maloom padte ho ..allah apko mazeed barkaton se nawaze bhai ...kaunse sher ki tareef ki jaye ......ghazal kya hai gazab hai gazab ...allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ...

dad o mubarak khubool kijiye ...


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aadaab yaaraane mahfil


aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak



mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha

kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal

merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha

yurish…… hamlah

merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha

so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa

ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha

lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch

kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha

gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal

tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha

kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?

barham ……. Gussa
Masood sahaab kya kehne..waahh..daad..is tarah ke ehsaas likh paana bahot mushkil hota hai mere hisaab se..


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aadaab yaaraane mahfil


aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak



mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha

kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal

merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha

yurish…… hamlah

merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha

so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa

ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha

lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch

kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha

gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal

tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha

kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?

barham ……. Gussa
Masha Allah bohat khoob Hassas sahab. ..aaj achanak nazar padi aapki ghazal per. ..

waqay dil ko chu gaye sabhi ashaar. ..

waise kahaan ghayab hain aap aajkal?

Aate rahiye...khush rahiyr




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merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha


Masood saheb..

Adaab-o-tasleemaat,

Waahhh! wahh! wahh!.. meHfil meiN aap ki ghazal dard ka aik samandar
le kar aati hai..... aur sabhi ko uss meN na chahte hue bhi doobna paRta hai..
kia kehne saheb.... bohat aala-darjay ka kalaam pesh kiya hai...
dherooN daad is nayaab ghazal ke liye....

meHfil meiN aap ki waapisi ka intezaar rahe ga,

DuaooN ke saath,

Khaaksaar,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Wah Hassas Sb.

Kya baat hai
Is damdaar Ghazal ke liye dil se mubarakbaad qubool farmayiye.
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aadaab yaaraane mahfil


aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak



mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha

kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal

merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha

yurish…… hamlah

merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha

so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa

ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha

lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch

kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha

gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal

tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha

kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha

hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen

zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?

barham ……. Gussa


bahut khoobsurat ehsaas.....dil se pasand aaye sabhi ashiyaar.


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