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Post Tum kaun ho hamaare.... - 22nd November 2010, 07:15 PM

Mahfil me aaye hue sabhi doston ko Shaad kaa aadaab.. aaj jab kisi kii yaad aai hai to kuch likh diyaa hai,, ummeed kartaa hoon koshish pasand aaegii...
aapkee beshkeemtii raayon kaa muntazir....






वास्ता ना तुमसे रहा ना गमों से तुम्हारे,
अब क्या कहें हम तुम्को,कि तुम कौन हो हमारे.

वो कह्कशां स चेहरा वो आन्खें झील सी,
वो गये दिनो के लोग थे,या दिल्कश कोइ नज़ारे.

ऊन्का नूर यून फ़िरोज़ां कि आफ़्ताब तक शर्माए,
मह्ताब भी है परीशां, हैरान हैं सितारे.

तुम आये क्या हिज़ाब मे,कितने ही प्यासे मर गये,
ज़ो रिन्द हैं तेरी आन्खों के, क्या करते बेचारे.

मह्खाने मे कभी तुम भी आओ की बेचैनी बडी है,
तेरि ज़ुल्फ़ों के साये हैं मेरे जीने के अब सहारे.

अब और कितनी सदा दें तुझे ओ दूर जाने वाले,
मेरी नज़र मुझसे पूछे, कितनी दूर हैं किनारे??





Waastaa naa tumse raha na ghamo.n se tumhaare,
ab kyaa kahe.n hum tumko,ki tum kaun ho hamaare.

Wo kahkashaa.n sa chehraa wo aankhen jheel sii,
wo gaye dino ke log the ya dilkash koi nazaare.

Unka Noor yoon Firozaa.n ki aaftaab tak sharmaae,
mahtaab bhi hai pareeshaa.n hairaan hain sitaare.

Tum aaye kya hizaab me, kitne hi pyaase mar gaye,
Jo rind hain teri aankhon ke, kya karte bechaare.

Mahkhane me kabhi tum bhi aao ki bechaini badi hai,
Teri zulfon ke saaye hain mere jeene ke ab sahaare.

Ab aur kitni sadaa dei.n tujhe O door jaane waale,
Meri Nazar mujhse pooche,kitni door hain kinaare??



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22nd November 2010, 07:24 PM

Mahkhane me kabhi tum bhi aao ki bechaini badi hai,
Teri zulfon ke saaye hain mere jeene ke ab sahaare.


Bahut khoob ........... Shaad Sahab !

Bahut dilkash andaaz meN bayaaN kiye hai aapne sabhi ashaar ... dil ko chhute ehsaas ... padhkar accha laga ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

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Tum aaye kya hizaab me, kitne hi pyaase mar gaye,
Jo rind hain teri aankhon ke, kya karte bechaare


Kya baat hai mere bhai...........bohat dilkash raha yeh sher.........yeh sher padte hi poore kalam ko mano bhool sa gaya aur ek ajeeb si muskurahat chehre par aa gayee.


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Mahfil me aaye hue sabhi doston ko Shaad kaa aadaab.. aaj jab kisi kii yaad aai hai to kuch likh diyaa hai,, ummeed kartaa hoon koshish pasand aaegii...
aapkee beshkeemtii raayon kaa muntazir....






वास्ता ना तुमसे रहा ना गमों से तुम्हारे,
अब क्या कहें हम तुम्को,कि तुम कौन हो हमारे.

वो कह्कशां स चेहरा वो आन्खें झील सी,
वो गये दिनो के लोग थे,या दिल्कश कोइ नज़ारे.

ऊन्का नूर यून फ़िरोज़ां कि आफ़्ताब तक शर्माए,
मह्ताब भी है परीशां, हैरान हैं सितारे.

तुम आये क्या हिज़ाब मे,कितने ही प्यासे मर गये,
ज़ो रिन्द हैं तेरी आन्खों के, क्या करते बेचारे.

मह्खाने मे कभी तुम भी आओ की बेचैनी बडी है,
तेरि ज़ुल्फ़ों के साये हैं मेरे जीने के अब सहारे.

अब और कितनी सदा दें तुझे ओ दूर जाने वाले,
मेरी नज़र मुझसे पूछे, कितनी दूर हैं किनारे??





Waastaa naa tumse raha na ghamo.n se tumhaare,
ab kyaa kahe.n hum tumko,ki tum kaun ho hamaare.

Wo kahkashaa.n sa chehraa wo aankhen jheel sii,
wo gaye dino ke log the ya dilkash koi nazaare.

Unka Noor yoon Firozaa.n ki aaftaab tak sharmaae,
mahtaab bhi hai pareeshaa.n hairaan hain sitaare.

Tum aaye kya hizaab me, kitne hi pyaase mar gaye,
Jo rind hain teri aankhon ke, kya karte bechaare.

Mahkhane me kabhi tum bhi aao ki bechaini badi hai,
Teri zulfon ke saaye hain mere jeene ke ab sahaare.

Ab aur kitni sadaa dei.n tujhe O door jaane waale,
Meri Nazar mujhse pooche,kitni door hain kinaare??



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kya khoob likha hai aapne ek ek ashar dil me sama gaya likhte rahen
daad hi daad

duaon ke saath


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Bohat khoob Sameer sahab......................




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Sameer Sahab,

Bahot khoob likha hai, dil se daad kubul kijiye.

Regards,

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Mahfil me aaye hue sabhi doston ko Shaad kaa aadaab.. aaj jab kisi kii yaad aai hai to kuch likh diyaa hai,, ummeed kartaa hoon koshish pasand aaegii...
aapkee beshkeemtii raayon kaa muntazir....





वास्ता ना तुमसे रहा ना गमों से तुम्हारे,
अब क्या कहें हम तुम्को,कि तुम कौन हो हमारे.

वो कह्कशां स चेहरा वो आन्खें झील सी,
वो गये दिनो के लोग थे,या दिल्कश कोइ नज़ारे.

ऊन्का नूर यून फ़िरोज़ां कि आफ़्ताब तक शर्माए,
मह्ताब भी है परीशां, हैरान हैं सितारे.

तुम आये क्या हिज़ाब मे,कितने ही प्यासे मर गये,
ज़ो रिन्द हैं तेरी आन्खों के, क्या करते बेचारे.

मह्खाने मे कभी तुम भी आओ की बेचैनी बडी है,
तेरि ज़ुल्फ़ों के साये हैं मेरे जीने के अब सहारे.

अब और कितनी सदा दें तुझे ओ दूर जाने वाले,
मेरी नज़र मुझसे पूछे, कितनी दूर हैं किनारे??




Waastaa naa tumse raha na ghamo.n se tumhaare,
ab kyaa kahe.n hum tumko,ki tum kaun ho hamaare.

Wo kahkashaa.n sa chehraa wo aankhen jheel sii,
wo gaye dino ke log the ya dilkash koi nazaare.

Unka Noor yoon Firozaa.n ki aaftaab tak sharmaae,
mahtaab bhi hai pareeshaa.n hairaan hain sitaare.

Tum aaye kya hizaab me, kitne hi pyaase mar gaye,
Jo rind hain teri aankhon ke, kya karte bechaare.

Mahkhane me kabhi tum bhi aao ki bechaini badi hai,
Teri zulfon ke saaye hain mere jeene ke ab sahaare.

Ab aur kitni sadaa dei.n tujhe O door jaane waale,
Meri Nazar mujhse pooche,kitni door hain kinaare??


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Waastaa naa tumse raha na ghamo.n se tumhaare,
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Sameer Bhai,

Boht khoob bhai boht khoob...

Quoted shair bas kamal.................!

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Bahut khoob ........... Shaad Sahab !

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Kya baat hai mere bhai...........bohat dilkash raha yeh sher.........yeh sher padte hi poore kalam ko mano bhool sa gaya aur ek ajeeb si muskurahat chehre par aa gayee.

janab sajid bhai kaise hain aap?? aap kya aaye hamari bazm me ki dilkash nazaara ho gaya.. is kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye behad shukriya.. yoonhi aate rahen..duaaon me yaad rakhen.
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shaad bhai
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kya khoob likha hai aapne ek ek ashar dil me sama gaya likhte rahen
daad hi daad

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Bahot khoob likha hai, dil se daad kubul kijiye.

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Boht Khooob SHAAD Saheb........


aapka behad shukriyaa shakeel saahab tashreef laane ke liye aur hame pasand karne ke liye.. yoon aate rahen.. saath dete rahen.

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sameer bhaa'ii:

namaste!

bahot hi umdaah ! aapki yeh koShiSh mujhe be-Had pasand aayii.n.. yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee.. daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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ab kyaa kahe.n hum tumko,ki tum kaun ho hamaare.



Sameer Bhai,

Boht khoob bhai boht khoob...

Quoted shair bas kamal.................!

Daad hi daad,

Aise hi mehfil roshan rakhiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,


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Sameer Bhai..........dil ko choo liya is ghazal ne........bahut hi khoobsoorat lagi

bahot bahot shukriya Vikrant bhai.. aane ke liye aur pasadn karne ke liye... yoonhi saath dete rahen. aage se koshish rahegi ki aise hi ghazlon ke saath aaun jo aapke dil ko chooti rahen.. jazbaaton ko smjhne ke liye ek baar fir se shukriyaah...

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namaste!

bahot hi umdaah ! aapki yeh koShiSh mujhe be-Had pasand aayii.n.. yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee.. daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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वास्ता ना तुमसे रहा ना गमों से तुम्हारे,
अब क्या कहें हम तुम्को,कि तुम कौन हो हमारे.

वो कह्कशां स चेहरा वो आन्खें झील सी,
वो गये दिनो के लोग थे,या दिल्कश कोइ नज़ारे.

ऊन्का नूर यून फ़िरोज़ां कि आफ़्ताब तक शर्माए,
मह्ताब भी है परीशां, हैरान हैं सितारे.

तुम आये क्या हिज़ाब मे,कितने ही प्यासे मर गये,
ज़ो रिन्द हैं तेरी आन्खों के, क्या करते बेचारे.

मह्खाने मे कभी तुम भी आओ की बेचैनी बडी है,
तेरि ज़ुल्फ़ों के साये हैं मेरे जीने के अब सहारे.

अब और कितनी सदा दें तुझे ओ दूर जाने वाले,
मेरी नज़र मुझसे पूछे, कितनी दूर हैं किनारे??

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MashaAllah.... bahut khoob.... har ek sher kaabil-e-taarif hai... aapne apne ehsaason ko bahut haseen shabdon se sajaya hai... dil se daad hazir hai.... yuhi is mehfil ki rounak badhate rahiye... khush rahiye.....


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salaam lamha .. aap aain yoon samjh lijiye kalaam mukammal ho gaya hai.. aapki beshkeemti nazar aur raayon ka to main hamesha se muntazir rahta hoon... aapko hamara likha kuch pasad aaya ye hamare liye sabse badii khush naseebi hai..hum to mahfil ki raunak badhane ki koshish karte rahenge basharte aap bhi ye vaada karen hamesha saath yoonhi bana rahega... aati rahiega.. khush rahie aur apna khoob khayaal rakhiye..

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Waaah Waaah Waaah...Mazaa aa gaya mere bhai is baar tumhaara kalaam padhke...Beautifully expressed...loved every word of it...

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Waaah Waaah Waaah...Mazaa aa gaya mere bhai is baar tumhaara kalaam padhke...Beautifully expressed...loved every word of it...

Dil se duwa kubool karo...likhte raho aise hi..

janab pulkit bhai ko shaad ka aadaab... aaj arson ke baad aapko yahan dekha.. aur hamari post pe aapka ana yoon laga kalaam ka khaalipan khatam sa hua.... aap ne jo apne chote bhai ki tareef ki hai sach kahen to behad khushi hui hai apko yahana dekh kar awwal to dusra aapko pasand aaya ye jaankar aur bhi zyada khushi hui hai... bas yoonhi saath banaae rakhen.. aate raha karen..

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