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Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo - 30th November 2010, 06:04 PM



Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam .. aankhon me aansoo liye
   
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Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


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Hassaas ji,

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Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo


Masood Bhai ... Aadaab !

bahut khoob soorat andaaz ke saath aapne yeh ghazal kahi hai ... matlaa bhi meri pehli pasand raha ... upar ankit ashaar dil ke khaas kareeb rahen ... tamaam ghazal ko tahe dil se daad ... yunhi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...




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Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam .. aankhon me aansoo liye
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Hassaas ji,

wahhhhhhhhhhh.... kya khoob kaha hai aapne... itna haseen kalaam be-shaq aap jaise umdaa shayar hi pesh kar sakte hai... MashaAllah kitni maasoomiyat se aapne apni mehbooba ki har achchi aur buri baat ko zaahir kiya hai... aapne apne khayaalon ki malika ko apne dilfareb lafzon se aur bhi zayada haseen bana diya... aapki is adaa ne to hamara dil chhuu liya... tahe dil se dhero daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko mehekate rahiye....likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...

aadaab
kaisee hain aap
are daad denaa to koi aap se seekhe main to aap ki is adaa pe fareftah ho gayaa ye ada aisee hai ki jise dil taaron ke qareeb mahsoos kiyaa ja saktaa hai ab main us andaaz me aap ko daad to nahee de sakta jis tarah aap detee hain kiun mujhe yaqeen hai ki aap is mahfil ki
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Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam .. aankhon me aansoo liye
masood hassaas saheb, aadaaB....

aapki ye ghazal bahut khoob lagi, mujhe yeh dekh kar behad khushi hui ki aap alfaazoN ko sirf istemal hi nahi karte, balki karne se pehle har lafz ki rooh ko pehchaante haiN...aapki is ghazal par dil se daad hai qubuul kijiyega aur is neeche wale sher ke liye khas taur pe...ye khud meiN ek nageena hai, mujhe bahut pasand aaya...

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo



aapka dost,
vikram


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masood hassaas saheb, aadaaB....

aapki ye ghazal bahut khoob lagi, mujhe yeh dekh kar behad khushi hui ki aap alfaazoN ko sirf istemal hi nahi karte, balki karne se pehle har lafz ki rooh ko pehchaante haiN...aapki is ghazal par dil se daad hai qubuul kijiyega aur is neeche wale sher ke liye khas taur pe...ye khud meiN ek nageena hai, mujhe bahut pasand aaya...

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo


aapka dost,
vikram


aadaab
merey dost merey bhai mainaap ka kis mun se shukriya adaa karun
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magar aap ne is sher ko pasand karke meraa dil jeet liyaa
sachh baat yahee hai merey bhaiki isee sher pe hi ghazal ka daro madaar hai aor rahe gaa aor mujhe khushiis baat kihai ki aap ne mereu dil me jhaankliyaa aor main ne aap ko f b jo kahaa hai wo 100% sachh hai ki haashiyah ( border) bana al sotoor ( between line ) ki baarikiyon ko pahlee nigaah me hishikaar kar lete hain
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Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo - 30th November 2010, 06:04 PM


Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam

Masood ji bahut khoob
dil se daad hazir hai qbul kareiN

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Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam .. aankhon me aansoo liye
Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

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Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo


Masood Bhai,

Wah wah wah janab....
Kia kehne janab,
Tamaam ghazal be-had haseen lafzooN
se sajayi hai aap nay, lekin quoted
shair ne khaas lutf diya.....

Aise hi mehfil roshan rakhiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,


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Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam .. aankhon me aansoo liye
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mujhe afsos hai ki aaj kal ki mashghooliyaat ne mujhe apne chaahne waalon ke shukriyaa adaa karne se bhi door kar diyaa hai ........ ho yun rahaa hai ki doston ki takhleeqaat aatee rahtee hain aor use parhne me yaa un ke jawaabaat me yaanee daad me theek thaak waqt guzar jaata hai is ke elaawah yahaan pe jo moshaaerey ho rahe hain un ki taiyaaree aor apnee rozee rotee ka intezaam bhi waqt le letaa hai is liye apnee jaanib tawajjoh nahi ho paa rahi hai .. main maantaa hun ki ye meree bhool hai ummeed ki aap hazraat ise dar guzar farmaayen ge
main tahe dil se aap tamaam logon ki mohabbaton ka shukriyaa adaa kartaa hun
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Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun




Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar
Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo

Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye
Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo

Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo

Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat
Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo

Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai
merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo


Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam .. aankhon me aansoo liye
behad dilchasp ghazal lagee aapke hassaas ji. har sher mein jo ghumaavdaar daleel thi woh padhkar bada lutf aayaa. andaz e bayaan bhi bahaut asardaar lagaa. daad hazir karta hoon aur duaon ke saath ... zarraa
   
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13th December 2010, 11:51 AM

hassaaas sahab ...aadaab ,,,,,,,,
kaise hain aap?

aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi...........
meri tara se daad kabool kijiye........
hassaas hai .

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behad dilchasp ghazal lagee aapke hassaas ji. har sher mein jo ghumaavdaar daleel thi woh padhkar bada lutf aayaa. andaz e bayaan bhi bahaut asardaar lagaa. daad hazir karta hoon aur duaon ke saath ... zarraa

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aap ke daad ka tareeqah munfarid hai mukhtacar par pur acar daad ka tahe dil se shukr guzaar hun
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hassaaas sahab ...aadaab ,,,,,,,,
kaise hain aap?

aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi...........
meri tara se daad kabool kijiye........
hassaas hai .

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zidd bhai
janaab jab kisee ghazal pe aap jaise shukhanwar daad de den to yaqeen kar lenaa chaahiye ki wo ghazal achhi hi ho gee
ye dekh kar badaa achhaa lagaa ki ghazal ko aap ki tanqeedi nigaah ne khoobssortee ka tamgha de diyaa hai
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Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo


Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

bahut khoob masood ji....
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bahot khoob likha hai masood bhai.. kamaal ke alfaaz lage aur ehsaas to mashallah qayamat hi rahe hain..... wese itna kaise likh pate hain bhai.. itne khyaaal kaise aa pate hain aapke dimaag me.. allha kare ye nemat yonhi badhtee jae... aur aap yoonhi likhte jaaen.. khush rahiye..

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Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo

Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo

bahut khoob masood ji....
daad kubul keejiye...

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bahot khoob likha hai masood bhai.. kamaal ke alfaaz lage aur ehsaas to mashallah qayamat hi rahe hain..... wese itna kaise likh pate hain bhai.. itne khyaaal kaise aa pate hain aapke dimaag me.. allha kare ye nemat yonhi badhtee jae... aur aap yoonhi likhte jaaen.. khush rahiye..

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main aap ka shukr guzaar hun jis sawaaliya andaaz me aap ne daad di hai wo daad daad nahi balki ek geraan maayah sarmaaya hai jo main apne dil ke nehaan khaano me dunyaa ki nigaahon se chhupa kar rakkhun gaa
bahot shukriyaa mere bhai
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