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Arrow Wo maseehaa tha to kyon... - 2nd December 2010, 09:03 AM

Shabe-gham ki teergii me dil ne tujhe yaad kiyaa,
khushq labon se jaise, khudaa se fariyaad kiyaa.

Ye kya jo Charagar nahi,usi se duaae-shifayat karna,
wo Maseehaa tha, to kyon meri rooh ko aazaad kiyaa.

Tere kuuche se nahii aati ab tere Pairhan ki khushbuu,
teri choukhat pe sar rakh ke Dar-o-Baam aabaad kiya.

Use miltaa thaa Sukoo.n Dilon ko cheerne se shaayad,
khud apna bhi pesh kar ke, use maine hi saiyyad kiya.

Jab se bakhshe hain tune anjaame-muhabbat jaana,
is aalam me dekh, maine apna takhallus hi "shaad" kiya.


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Bahooot Bahooot shukriyaa tiwari saahab jo aapne nacheez ko is laaayaq samjha.. pasand karne kaa behad shukriyaah.. aate rahen yoonhi.. khush rahen..

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bahut khoob shaad bhai daad kubul karen likhte rahen mehfil ko yun hi roshan karte rahen
duaon ke saath

Rajendar bhai kaise hain aap?? aaj aapka reply padhke bahoot khushi haasil hui.. yoon laga likhna kamyab huaa.. yoonhi saath banae rakhen. guzaarish

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Shabe-gham ki teergii me dil ne tujhe yaad kiyaa,
khushq labon se jaise, khudaa se fariyaad kiyaa.

Ye kya jo Charagar nahi,usi se duaae-shifayat karna,
wo Maseehaa tha, to kyon meri rooh ko aazaad kiyaa.

Tere kuuche se nahii aati ab tere Pairhan ki khushbuu,
teri choukhat pe sar rakh ke Dar-o-Baam aabaad kiya.

Use miltaa thaa Sukoo.n Dilon ko cheerne se shaayad,
khud apna bhi pesh kar ke, use maine hi saiyyad kiya.

Jab se bakhshe hain tune anjaame-muhabbat jaana,
is aalam me dekh, maine apna takhallus hi "shaad" kiya.


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Shabe-gham ki teergii me dil ne tujhe yaad kiyaa,
khushq labon se jaise, khudaa se fariyaad kiyaa.

Ye kya jo Charagar nahi,usi se duaae-shifayat karna,
wo Maseehaa tha, to kyon meri rooh ko aazaad kiyaa.

Tere kuuche se nahii aati ab tere Pairhan ki khushbuu,
teri choukhat pe sar rakh ke Dar-o-Baam aabaad kiya.

Use miltaa thaa Sukoo.n Dilon ko cheerne se shaayad,
khud apna bhi pesh kar ke, use maine hi saiyyad kiya.

Jab se bakhshe hain tune anjaame-muhabbat jaana,
is aalam me dekh, maine apna takhallus hi "shaad" kiya.

Shaad,
bahut bahut khoob dear.... dil chhuu liya aapke is kalaam ne... dil se dhero daad hazir hai... aapke is kalaam ki taarif ke liye lafz hi nahi hai mere pass... just awesome... likhte rahiye... khush rahiye.....


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bahut bahut khoob dear.... dil chhuu liya aapke is kalaam ne... dil se dhero daad hazir hai... aapke is kalaam ki taarif ke liye lafz hi nahi hai mere pass... just awesome... likhte rahiye... khush rahiye.....


bahot bahot shukriya dear.. khushi hui aapki aaamad yahan dekhkar./. ab jaaakar ye kalaam mukammal hua hai.. lag raha hai ki likhna kaamyaab hua ki aapko pasand aaya..
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Tere kuuche se nahii aati ab tere Pairhan ki khushbuu,
teri choukhat pe sar rakh ke Dar-o-Baam aabaad kiya.


Bahut Khoob Khayal Kaha Hai aapne .... Shaad Bhai ! bahut umdaa soch !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...

yunhi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....




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Bahut Khoob Khayal Kaha Hai aapne .... Shaad Bhai ! bahut umdaa soch !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...

yunhi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....

aapka behad shukriya naresh bhai jo aapne hamari adna si koshish ko itni izzat bakhshi.. jazbaaton ko itnaa tavajjoh diyaa... humkhayal hone ka tahe dil se shukrguzaar.............

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