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Post Main hii ek kameenaa thaa... - 3rd December 2010, 12:40 AM

वो आबशारों के कंवल पे शबनम सा कोई नगीना था,
उसके चेहरे पे रन्जिश थी कोई, गिरता जो पसीना था.

यूं लगता रहा सरे-राह कोई पुकारता रहता था मुझको,
हर आहट पे चौंक के देखा मगर, मेरे पीछे कोई ना था.

तेरी नज़रे-इनायत से महरूम तो हुआ पर हैरां हूं ज़रा सा
सर को कहां झुकाऊं अब,तुही काबा तू ही तो मदीना था.

घर का ये आलम, के अब तू आए तो शर्मिन्दा मैं हो जाऊं,
तु होता था तो गुल्दान सजे थे, हर ज़र्रे मे एक करीना था.

यूं तो अक्सर मस्जिद मे,मैं भी आ जाया करता हूं मेरे मौला,
सब ने हांथ उठाए, तेरे नाम से दुआ मे,मैं ही इक कमीना था.

लोग कहां से कहां जा रहे और तुझे शेर कह्ने से ही फ़ुरसत नहीं
वो कश्ती क्यों ना बदलते "शाद" अखिर मे तेरा जो सफ़ीना था.



wo aabashaaron ke kawal pe shabnam saa koii nageenaa thaa,
uske chehre pe ranjish thee koii,girtaa jo paseenaa thaa.

yoon lagtaa rahaa sare-raah koii pukartaa rahtaa thaa mujhko,
har aahaT pe chaunk ke dekha magar,mere peeche koii naa thaa.

teri nazre-inayat se mahroom to hua par hairaan hoon zara saa
sar ko kahaan jhukaun ab,tuhii kaabaa tuu hii to madeenaa thaa.

ghar kaa ye aalam,ke ab tu aae to sharmindaa main ho jaauun,
tu hota tha to guldaan saje the,har zarre me ek kareenaa thaa.

yoon to aksar masjid me,main bhi aa jaata hoon mere maula,
sab ne haath uThaae,tere naam se duaa me,main hi ik kameenaa thaa.

log kahaan se kahaan jaa rahe aur tujhe sher kahne se hii fursat nahii,
wo kashtii kyon naa badalate "shaad" akhir me teraa jo safeenaa thaa.



shaad...


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यूं तो अक्सर मस्जिद मे,मैं भी आ जाया करता हूं मेरे मौला,
सब ने हांथ उठाए, तेरे नाम से दुआ मे,मैं ही इक कमीना था.

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[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';416870]वो आबशारों के कंवल पे शबनम सा कोई नगीना था,
उसके चेहरे पे रन्जिश थी कोई, गिरता जो पसीना था.

यूं लगता रहा सरे-राह कोई पुकारता रहता था मुझको,
हर आहट पे चौंक के देखा मगर, मेरे पीछे कोई ना था.

तेरी नज़रे-इनायत से महरूम तो हुआ पर हैरां हूं ज़रा सा
सर को कहां झुकाऊं अब,तुही काबा तू ही तो मदीना था.

घर का ये आलम, के अब तू आए तो शर्मिन्दा मैं हो जाऊं,
तु होता था तो गुल्दान सजे थे, हर ज़र्रे मे एक करीना था.

यूं तो अक्सर मस्जिद मे,मैं भी आ जाया करता हूं मेरे मौला,
सब ने हांथ उठाए, तेरे नाम से दुआ मे,मैं ही इक कमीना था.

लोग कहां से कहां जा रहे और तुझे शेर कह्ने से ही फ़ुरसत नहीं
वो कश्ती क्यों ना बदलते "शाद" अखिर मे तेरा जो सफ़ीना था.





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यूं तो अक्सर मस्जिद मे,मैं भी आ जाया करता हूं मेरे मौला,
सब ने हांथ उठाए, तेरे नाम से दुआ मे,मैं ही इक कमीना था.

bhut khob shaad shaeb
shukriyaah yasir miyaan aapki aamad ke liye...
yoonhi tashreef le aaya karen kabhi kaabhar , duaaon me yaad rakhen.

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bahut khoob.............................................


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Shaad bhai.............sabhi sher bahut khaas lage, kush raho abaad raho aur SDC par yoon hi aapki gazaleN mahkati raheN.

yeh sher es baat ki gawahi hai ki AURAT se hi ghar banta hai
घर का ये आलम, के अब तू आए तो शर्मिन्दा मैं हो जाऊं,
तु होता था तो गुल्दान सजे थे, हर ज़र्रे मे एक करीना था.


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वो आबशारों के कंवल पे शबनम सा कोई नगीना था,
उसके चेहरे पे रन्जिश थी कोई, गिरता जो पसीना था.

यूं लगता रहा सरे-राह कोई पुकारता रहता था मुझको,
हर आहट पे चौंक के देखा मगर, मेरे पीछे कोई ना था.

तेरी नज़रे-इनायत से महरूम तो हुआ पर हैरां हूं ज़रा सा
सर को कहां झुकाऊं अब,तुही काबा तू ही तो मदीना था.

घर का ये आलम, के अब तू आए तो शर्मिन्दा मैं हो जाऊं,
तु होता था तो गुल्दान सजे थे, हर ज़र्रे मे एक करीना था.

यूं तो अक्सर मस्जिद मे,मैं भी आ जाया करता हूं मेरे मौला,
सब ने हांथ उठाए, तेरे नाम से दुआ मे,मैं ही इक कमीना था.

लोग कहां से कहां जा रहे और तुझे शेर कह्ने से ही फ़ुरसत नहीं
वो कश्ती क्यों ना बदलते "शाद" अखिर मे तेरा जो सफ़ीना था.



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वो आबशारों के कंवल पे शबनम सा कोई नगीना था,
उसके चेहरे पे रन्जिश थी कोई, गिरता जो पसीना था.

यूं लगता रहा सरे-राह कोई पुकारता रहता था मुझको,
हर आहट पे चौंक के देखा मगर, मेरे पीछे कोई ना था.

तेरी नज़रे-इनायत से महरूम तो हुआ पर हैरां हूं ज़रा सा
सर को कहां झुकाऊं अब,तुही काबा तू ही तो मदीना था.

घर का ये आलम, के अब तू आए तो शर्मिन्दा मैं हो जाऊं,
तु होता था तो गुल्दान सजे थे, हर ज़र्रे मे एक करीना था.

यूं तो अक्सर मस्जिद मे,मैं भी आ जाया करता हूं मेरे मौला,
सब ने हांथ उठाए, तेरे नाम से दुआ मे,मैं ही इक कमीना था.

लोग कहां से कहां जा रहे और तुझे शेर कह्ने से ही फ़ुरसत नहीं
वो कश्ती क्यों ना बदलते "शाद" अखिर मे तेरा जो सफ़ीना था.





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Shaad bhai.............sabhi sher bahut khaas lage, kush raho abaad raho aur SDC par yoon hi aapki gazaleN mahkati raheN.

yeh sher es baat ki gawahi hai ki AURAT se hi ghar banta hai
घर का ये आलम, के अब तू आए तो शर्मिन्दा मैं हो जाऊं,
तु होता था तो गुल्दान सजे थे, हर ज़र्रे मे एक करीना था.


duaoN ke saath
aapki didi

pyaari dee, kya kahun aaaj aaapko hamari mahfil me dekh kar dil itna khush ho gaya ki main bayaan nahi kar saktaa..
jee haan aapajaan aapne ekdam bajaa farmaaya ki gahr ki raunak aurat zaat se hi hai.. wo nahi hai to har cheez bejaan hai... baharhaaal kalaam pasand karne ka shukriyaah.. aati rahen... aapki duaaon ka muntazir hamesha se..

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waah shaad sahab. behad umda ghazal rahee aapkee. behad intricate ...jitna keh gayee utnaa chhupaa gayee. daad !!
bahot bahot shukriya janab pasand karne ke liye.. yoonhi tashreef laakar mahfil ki raunak badhate rahen.. khush rahen aur apna khayal rakhen.

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sameer sahab,

...plzz...Isay roman hindi me bhi post kijiye........




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ok zainy i will surely do that..


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Badiya gazal Shaad bhai ....


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सर को कहां झुकाऊं अब,तुही काबा तू ही तो मदीना था.

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ek baar fir se shukriyan shahiq bhai aane ke liye aur hame pasand karne ke liye. koshih rahegii ki aage se bhi aapko yoonhi aate rahne ke mauke detaa rahun... khush rahiye.

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वो आबशारों के कंवल पे शबनम सा कोई नगीना था,
उसके चेहरे पे रन्जिश थी कोई, गिरता जो पसीना था.

यूं लगता रहा सरे-राह कोई पुकारता रहता था मुझको,
हर आहट पे चौंक के देखा मगर, मेरे पीछे कोई ना था.

तेरी नज़रे-इनायत से महरूम तो हुआ पर हैरां हूं ज़रा सा
सर को कहां झुकाऊं अब,तुही काबा तू ही तो मदीना था.

घर का ये आलम, के अब तू आए तो शर्मिन्दा मैं हो जाऊं,
तु होता था तो गुल्दान सजे थे, हर ज़र्रे मे एक करीना था.

यूं तो अक्सर मस्जिद मे,मैं भी आ जाया करता हूं मेरे मौला,
सब ने हांथ उठाए, तेरे नाम से दुआ मे,मैं ही इक कमीना था.

लोग कहां से कहां जा रहे और तुझे शेर कह्ने से ही फ़ुरसत नहीं
वो कश्ती क्यों ना बदलते "शाद" अखिर मे तेरा जो सफ़ीना था.


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AAdaab mohtarma lamhaaa saahibaa.. lijiye aapki uljhan ka ilaaj hum kiye dete hain.. aapko kisi bhi sher ki tareef karne ki koi zarurat nahi saab.. aap hamari mahfil me baaade-saba ban ke aain aur iski izzat me chaaar chaand laga gain.. ab muje aur koi gila koi chaht bhi nahi hai... behad shukriyaa apka tahe dil se tashreef laane ke liye... aati rahiye..yoonhi sath dete rahiegaa... khush rahie

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