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2nd December 2013, 03:19 PM
koee gilaa na tha, na shikave the
teri shikan par bhi hum marte the
badghumaan hote jab bhi, ae sanam
hum teri fitrat pe hans dete the
shab-o-roz tanhaa-ii thi, lekin
teri deeda-e-tar se jaam pite the
duz-diidaa nazar teri, jab bhi hoti thee
be-andaazah hum deedar karte the
-- Duz-diidaa nazar = tirchhii nazar
khuld se namu daar hona tera humaayun tha
hamein woh bahot shaadamaan karte the
-- namu daar hona = prakat hona; humaayun = fortunate
-- shaadamaan = khush
qayaam karte the teri zulf ke saaye me
jab bhi teri aaghosh me rehte the
faasilah kiya tha jab, tune hamse kafir
woh roz hum, na hanste the, na rote the
jaam-e-may-e-talkh peysh kiya tha sabko
uss roz bhi, “Safeer” pur musarrat rehte the
-- Jaam-e-may-e-talkh = sharaab ka kaDwaa ghunT
-- pur musarrat = bahot khush
~ Safeer
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd December 2013, 10:31 PM
waah !!! kis tarah saja sanwaarkaar khoobsurat khayaal pesh kiye hai !! bahaut bahaut si daad aap ko Aadeil ji !!!
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3rd December 2013, 10:07 AM
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waah !!! kis tarah saja sanwaarkaar khoobsurat khayaal pesh kiye hai !! bahaut bahaut si daad aap ko Aadeil ji !!!
Aapka bahot bahot dhanyavaad Zarraa ji.
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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5th December 2013, 08:05 PM
waah...waah....kya baat hai....keep it up.
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6th December 2013, 10:03 AM
khoob se khoob sher hue hain Adeil saahab..... bahot acchi peshkash ke liye dheron daad...
qayaam karte the teri zulf ke saaye me
jab bhi teri aaghosh me rehte the
Shaad...
Shaad...
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6th December 2013, 10:09 AM
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waah...waah....kya baat hai....keep it up.
Bahot bahot Shukriya, Aaruji.....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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6th December 2013, 10:10 AM
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khoob se khoob sher hue hain Adeil saahab..... bahot acchi peshkash ke liye dheron daad...
qayaam karte the teri zulf ke saaye me
jab bhi teri aaghosh me rehte the
Shaad...
Aapki daad qbul, Sameerbhai.
Shukriya.....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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7th December 2013, 12:18 PM
bahut hi achi pesgkesh hai bhai aapki
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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9th December 2013, 11:09 AM
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bahut hi achi pesgkesh hai bhai aapki
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
Bahot bahot shukriya Shakir bhai.
dil se duaae.N
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30th December 2013, 05:06 PM
Bahut hi khoob likha hai Adil ji..
Likhte rahiye..
:-)
Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
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30th December 2013, 06:01 PM
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Bahut hi khoob likha hai Adil ji..
Likhte rahiye..
:-)
Bahot bahot shukriya aapka, janaab............
aap bhi aate rahiyega.............
Salaam
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