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Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi…. - 23rd May 2014, 04:10 PM
Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Kuch pane ka mann nahi…
Bhuli-bisri un yaadon ko…..
Dil main dabane ka mann nahi…..

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Dil ko sach samjhane ka mann nahi…
Palko main chupe in, aansoo ko….
Aaj chalkane ka mann nahi…

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Rahe-pathoron se takrane ka mann nahi….
Chupaa le kahi tere aachal main, mere aks ko…
Is Duniya se roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi….

Mudattein hui… Mulakat hue….
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23rd May 2014, 05:23 PM
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Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Kuch pane ka mann nahi…
Bhuli-bisri un yaadon ko…..
Dil main dabane ka mann nahi…..

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Dil ko sach samjhane ka mann nahi…
Palko main chupe in, aansoo ko….
Aaj chalkane ka mann nahi…

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Rahe-pathoron se takrane ka mann nahi….
Chupaa le kahi tere aachal main, mere aks ko…
Is Duniya se roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi….
Waahh ruchika ji kyaa kahne aapki is khoobsurat peshkash ke.... dard me doobaa huaa kalaam likhaa hai aapne har baar ki tarah is baar bhii.. ehsaason ke kyaa kahne.... bahot pasand aayee mujhe aapki ye peshkash... likhti rahiye..

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ruchika jee.....bahut hee sundar khyalaat hain aapke........mehfil mein aati raha kariye.....


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6th June 2014, 08:38 PM
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Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Kuch pane ka mann nahi…
Bhuli-bisri un yaadon ko…..
Dil main dabane ka mann nahi…..

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Dil ko sach samjhane ka mann nahi…
Palko main chupe in, aansoo ko….
Aaj chalkane ka mann nahi…

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Rahe-pathoron se takrane ka mann nahi….
Chupaa le kahi tere aachal main, mere aks ko…
Is Duniya se roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi….
Uff kitna dard hai ismein, agar mann pareshaan hai toh bhagwaan apko sukoon de.

Dard se nikle iss ansoo ke liye mera salaam kabool kijiye.

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6th June 2014, 11:20 PM
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Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Kuch pane ka mann nahi…
Bhuli-bisri un yaadon ko…..
Dil main dabane ka mann nahi…..

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Dil ko sach samjhane ka mann nahi…
Palko main chupe in, aansoo ko….
Aaj chalkane ka mann nahi…

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Rahe-pathoron se takrane ka mann nahi….
Chupaa le kahi tere aachal main, mere aks ko…
Is Duniya se roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi….
Khoob ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne ruchika ji...khayaalat behad umda tareeke se alfaazon mein dhaale hai aapne..itna hi kehnaa chahugaa ki mujhe is nazm mein shayad kafiye ka her pher laga..aapki nazm ke matle mein roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi kahi kahi aapki nazm mein apne hi radeef ko sawaalat kar raha hai...

umeed hai aap ise ek suggestion ki tarah se lengii...

aapka apnaa


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9th June 2014, 12:16 PM
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Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Kuch pane ka mann nahi…
Bhuli-bisri un yaadon ko…..
Dil main dabane ka mann nahi…..

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Dil ko sach samjhane ka mann nahi…
Palko main chupe in, aansoo ko….
Aaj chalkane ka mann nahi…

Aaj kahin jaane ka mann nahi….
Rahe-pathoron se takrane ka mann nahi….
Chupaa le kahi tere aachal main, mere aks ko…
Is Duniya se roo-ba-roo hone ka mann nahi….
Ruchikaji,
bahot hi khubsurat hai yeh rachnaa... dil se daad qabul kareN..


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10th June 2014, 03:16 PM
Thank u Shaadji, Arvindji, & aadeilji. Aapka naam nahi janti but aapke suggestions ke liye thank u "Mast- ek aashiq" aage se dhyan rakhne ki koshsih karungi. Pyari si nanhi pariji, aapki duaoo ke liye sukriya....

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