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मेरी एक ग़ज़ल तखल्लुस (हिलाल चन्दौसवी)
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मेरी एक ग़ज़ल तखल्लुस (हिलाल चन्दौसवी) - 12th June 2014, 05:19 PM

सफर याद रखना न घर याद रखना।
मगर आंसुओं के गुहर याद रखना।
गया जब मैं परदेश रुपया कमाने-
तो अम्मा ये बोली कि घर याद रखना।
तुम्हें ख़ार से फूल जिसने बनाया-
वो चाहत भरी एक नज़र याद रखना।
मिले लाख गुलशन ज़माने में फिर भी-
वो आँगन का बूढ़ा शजर याद रखना।
'हिलाल' उसकी रहमत है सारे जहाँ पर-
ये लाज़िम है शामो-सहर याद रखना।
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12th June 2014, 06:24 PM

Bas karo bhai......ek saath itne saare tiir mat chhodo.....abhi to pahale wale ki khumaari hi nahi gayi......kamaal likhte ho......waaqiaati shaairi Ki khoobsurat...behad-2 khoobsurat missal hai aapki ghazal......ek chhota sa mashwira hai aapke liye.....aap apni ghazal shayri-e-dard forum me post kiya kare....wahaa jiyaada se jiyaada log aapko padhenge.....chaa'nd ki khoobsoorti to isii me'n hai....sab uska diidar kare.....god bless you
   
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12th June 2014, 07:27 PM

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12th June 2014, 07:34 PM

Welcome to shayri.com tiwari sahab. ..

Bohat khoobsurat ghazal post ki hai aap ne.....

Agar bura na maano to ek chota sa doubt hai..aapka profile name tiwari hai aur aapne ghazal ke niche hilal likha. ..yeh ghazal aapki apni hai ya aapne kisi aur ki share ki hai?

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Love 12th June 2014, 09:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by chandranshu tiwari View Post
सफर याद रखना न घर याद रखना।
मगर आंसुओं के गुहर याद रखना।
गया जब मैं परदेश रुपया कमाने-
तो अम्मा ये बोली कि घर याद रखना।
तुम्हें ख़ार से फूल जिसने बनाया-
वो चाहत भरी एक नज़र याद रखना।
मिले लाख गुलशन ज़माने में फिर भी-
वो आँगन का बूढ़ा शजर याद रखना।
'हिलाल' उसकी रहमत है सारे जहाँ पर-
ये लाज़िम है शामो-सहर याद रखना।
-------हिलाल चन्दौसवी

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22nd June 2014, 09:52 AM

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