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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>



Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai



Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai



Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

   
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4th November 2011, 03:59 PM

Welcome in our SDC family, AnamikA Ji...! We had been waiting for you for so long...!

Aate hi aapne yahaN par bijli giraa di...!

Very nice start & very interesting creation...!

Keep coming, keep sharing & take care, ok...?

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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>



Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai



Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai



Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

Welcome hai ji... SDC maiN .......

achaa likhti hai aap.... acha laga apko padhnaaa....
hope to read u more
AUR AAPKA THAKHALUS BHI BAHUT PASAND AAYA

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4th November 2011, 04:26 PM

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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>



Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Masha allah kya likha hai aapne. Khoobsoorat ehsaas



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Ye bhi khoob kaha



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai

hmm achha hai ye ehsaas bhi



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

Ye sher to dil le gaya bus




Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Waah ye bhi bahut achha kaha




Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

Kasak ji, SDC pe aapka bahut bahut swagat hai. Aapki ye pehli peshkash bahut khoob rahi. Aap shayri mein itni nayi to nahi lagti. Aaiye is safar par sath mil kar chalein.

Likhtee rahein

Izaazat deejiye


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Love 4th November 2011, 04:46 PM

Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

mindblowing Anamika...warmest welcome
bahot hi kuhbsurat puri ghazal bani hai aap ki
thanks for sharing
waiting for more

Warm Regards



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4th November 2011, 06:36 PM

Welcome to SDC Anamika ji... Bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai..............




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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>



Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai



Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai



Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

bahut umda likha aate awasum shayri. Aate he cha gaye. Naya ghar me apko bahut kuch sikhane ko milega. Khush rahiyega


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Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai



Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai



Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!



Anamika Jee aaj pahli baaar aapko SDC me padhaa hai aur ye aapka pahlaa qalaam hai waah.. just superb

Is Pur asar Ghazal ke liye daad ka Nazraana pesh kartaa hoon.... Ummeed kartaa hoon qabool farmaaiyegaa... Likhtii rahiyegaa aur apnaa khayaal rakhiye.... All the very best.

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I like the simplicity of your words. You know somebody on shayri.com told me long time back, to write the most effective shayri is not to use the choicest of words and the most complex of language structure, but to say things with the least and the most simple. The thought that your creation conveys beyond the words is fantastic.


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Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai


Anamika Jii,,

Sab se phele to arz karna chahooN ga,
k aap ko yahan dekh kar be-had khushi huii,,
aur apni ankhooN per yakeen nahi aaya..
aik acha faisla hai yeh ..... yahan aap ko boht kuch seekhne
ko aur sikhaanay ko milay ga....

Aatay hain ghazal ki taraf... to hamesha ki tarah yeh ghazal bhi
Aap ki lajawaab hai... tareef k liye lafz dhoondhne pad jatay hain
aksar aap ki ghazal ko sarhaanay k liye..... tamaam ghazal
be-had khoobsorat aur dard se libraiz hai... quoted verse kuch ziyada hi
pasand aaye...

Aatay rahiye aur mehfil sajaatay rahiye,,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath ijaaza,

Aap ka,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Anamika ji ... Apka is bazm mein istaqbaal karta hooN. Apke pur soz ashaar bade asardaar lage. Daad qabool karein !



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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>



Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai



Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai



Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

   
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Welcome in our SDC family, AnamikA Ji...! We had been waiting for you for so long...!

Aate hi aapne yahaN par bijli giraa di...!

Very nice start & very interesting creation...!

Keep coming, keep sharing & take care, ok...?

With blessings

Amanush ji......

kya kahun mujhe samjh nahin aaraha.... yahan aane se pehle jo feel thi wo yhan aakar jaise chhumantar ho gai hai....

aap sab ne aate hi itna maan diya k bas aankhein num si ho gai....
meri iss nakaam si koshish ko aap sab ne itne pyaar se padha aur saraha k main kuch keh hi nahin paa rahi hun.....

aap sabka tahedil se shukriya k aap sabne mujhe itna pyaar se apnaya....
bas yunhi sath rakhiyega aur galtiyon pe tokte rahiyega aur achhce likhne pe sarahte rahiyega....

main koshish karti rahungi yahan sikhne aur achhca likhne ki..
bhul chuk k liye advance me maafi amaang leti hun....

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hope to read u more
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JanuManu ji.....

thnx alot for this warm welcome.....

khushi ho rahi k aap jaise achche shayar ne meri koshihs ko padha aur pasand kiya....

bas isis tarah sath banaye rakhiyega.... takhallus pasand karne ka shukriya ji...
aapka keemti waqt dene ka bht bht shukriya ji...

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Likhtee rahein

Izaazat deejiye
AnjAAn ji.......

aapne jis tarah ek ek sher ko alag se lekar padha aur uski tareef ki sach me bht hi ahccha laga aapka ye andaaz tareef karne ka..

aapne apna itna waqt diya aur itna saraha hume iske liye behad shukriya.. bas isi tarah hamesha hamara sath dijiyega aur sikhate rahiyega....


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mindblowing Anamika...warmest welcome
bahot hi kuhbsurat puri ghazal bani hai aap ki
thanks for sharing
waiting for more

Warm Regards


Praneeta ji.....

thnx for this warm welcome ji........ and thnx alot for liking my work... hope u will always b encouragingme for writing good and helping out in my mistakes....

thnx again for these lovely words...


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Anamika Jee aaj pahli baaar aapko SDC me padhaa hai aur ye aapka pahlaa qalaam hai waah.. just superb

Is Pur asar Ghazal ke liye daad ka Nazraana pesh kartaa hoon.... Ummeed kartaa hoon qabool farmaaiyegaa... Likhtii rahiyegaa aur apnaa khayaal rakhiye.... All the very best.

Shaad...

Shaad ji....

sabse pehle to aapka bht bht bht shukriya k apne mujhe yahan aane k liye kaha.... warna shayad main kabhi ye himmat na karti k SDC join karun....
its becoz of u i m here...ab zyada bol jaungi fir sunna padega......

aapka bht shukriya k aapne ye pasand ki post aur saraha....b wid me so i can improve my writings... always waiting for corectons and guidance from u....
thnx for ur wishes and u too take care of urself....


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I like the simplicity of your words. You know somebody on shayri.com told me long time back, to write the most effective shayri is not to use the choicest of words and the most complex of language structure, but to say things with the least and the most simple. The thought that your creation conveys beyond the words is fantastic.
Rohin ji.....

Thnx alot for ur swtt words... they reminded me of sm1 who actuallt encouraged me to write.... thnx again for liking my work and appreciating.. plz keep encouraging me like this.... thnx alot.....

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Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai


Anamika Jii,,

Sab se phele to arz karna chahooN ga,
k aap ko yahan dekh kar be-had khushi huii,,
aur apni ankhooN per yakeen nahi aaya..
aik acha faisla hai yeh ..... yahan aap ko boht kuch seekhne
ko aur sikhaanay ko milay ga....

Aatay hain ghazal ki taraf... to hamesha ki tarah yeh ghazal bhi
Aap ki lajawaab hai... tareef k liye lafz dhoondhne pad jatay hain
aksar aap ki ghazal ko sarhaanay k liye..... tamaam ghazal
be-had khoobsorat aur dard se libraiz hai... quoted verse kuch ziyada hi
pasand aaye...

Aatay rahiye aur mehfil sajaatay rahiye,,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath ijaaza,

Aap ka,
Hassan ji.....

aapse kya kahun ab main... itni tareef kar dete hain aap k kuch sujhta hi nahin kabhi jawab me...... aapne pasand kiya mera likha ...apna waqt diya saraha .. aur itne pyaar se welcome kiya yahan.....

sach yahan aakar sabko padhkar bht kuch sikhne mila hai mujhe ... ab koshihs karungi k ise sahi roop de sakun....

dil se shukriya kubul kijiye ji......

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Anamika ji ... Apka is bazm mein istaqbaal karta hooN. Apke pur soz ashaar bade asardaar lage. Daad qabool karein !

Zarra ji.....

bht bht shukriya k aapne apna keemti waqt meri koshish ko diya aur pasand kiya..... aur yunhi sath dete rahyega...

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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>



Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai



Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai



Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

Welcome To SDC Anamika Ji ! WaaH ! Kyaa Umdaa Khayaalaat Ke Saath Aayee HaiN ... Khoobsurat Se Khoobsurat Ashaar Kahe HaiN ... BehtreeN .. Laajawaab Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Dear Anu....dil se suwagat hai aapka, aapko yahan dekh kar hairaani+khushi dono hue

aapne bahut khoobsurat ahsaaoN ke saath entry ki hai, hame aapke sabhi ahsaas acche lge par highligted ahsaas dil ko khaas pasand aaye !


Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai

Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!


god bless u dear


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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>



Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai

Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai



Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai

Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai



Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main

Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai



Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me

Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai



Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere

Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai



Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*

Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

vry nice ........................ !


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Welcome To SDC Anamika Ji ! WaaH ! Kyaa Umdaa Khayaalaat Ke Saath Aayee HaiN ... Khoobsurat Se Khoobsurat Ashaar Kahe HaiN ... BehtreeN .. Laajawaab Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
itne saalon baad aapko shukriya keh rahi hun... par yahan aana hi na hua itne saalon me... dil se shukriya apke sneh ka


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Dear Anu....dil se suwagat hai aapka, aapko yahan dekh kar hairaani+khushi dono hue

aapne bahut khoobsurat ahsaaoN ke saath entry ki hai, hame aapke sabhi ahsaas acche lge par highligted ahsaas dil ko khaas pasand aaye !


Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai

Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!


god bless u dear
suni di... miss u .... sab khoye aur sath aap bhi kho gaye... thnkuuuu so much for ur love and affection...


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vry nice ........................ !
thnxxxxx a lotttt jiii dil se.......


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