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shokhi si thi aalam mein.... - 1st September 2015, 09:52 AM

shokhi si thi aalam mein mahki si fizayein bhi
rangeen se mausam mein bahki si hawayein bhi

Sazish si sabhi jaise karte hon vahaan milkar
hamko hi bulati thi roushan vo dishayein bhi.

ruk ruk ke kaii batein hothon pe mere aatiin.
Dhadkan ki sada kaise par unko sunayein bhi

Pahli vo shararat vo haule se mujhe chhoona
Fir Dil me tamanna hai vo aaj satayein bhi.

Chahat se bhari aankhein sharma ke jhuka lena
ham jaan luta baithe katil vo adayein bhi.

Sang sang hai kadam rakhna vada ye hamara tha.
Ab saath chalo milkar ham usko nibhayein bhi.


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1st September 2015, 10:10 AM
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shokhi si thi aalam mein mahki si fizayein bhi
rangeen se mausam mein bahki si hawayein bhi

Sazish si sabhi jaise karte hon vahaan milkar
hamko hi bulati thi roushan vo dishayein bhi.

ruk ruk ke kaii batein hothon pe mere aatiin.
Dhadkan ki sada kaise par unko sunayein bhi

Pahli vo shararat vo haule se mujhe chhoona
Fir Dil me tamanna hai vo aaj satayein bhi.

Chahat se bhari aankhein sharma ke jhuka lena
ham jaan luta baithe katil vo adayein bhi.

Sang sang hai kadam rakhna vada ye hamara tha.
Ab saath chalo milkar ham usko nibhayein bhi.
Behad Umdaa ghazal huyi hai Madhu, Bahut khoob yunhi likhti raho aur mehfil ko roshan rakho....


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Wah Madhu................

TPT par isey padaa tha tab bhi bohut pasand aayi thi aur ab bhi.

Bohut khubsoorat ghazal hai ye.

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1st September 2015, 12:46 PM
Bohot khuubsuurat ghazal ..

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bahut haseen peshkash madhu ji............... acchaa lagaa aapko padhnaa aur aapke ehsaason ko samajhnaa....

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1st September 2015, 10:46 PM
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Behad Umdaa ghazal huyi hai Madhu, Bahut khoob yunhi likhti raho aur mehfil ko roshan rakho....
shukriya mast sahab..
.ghazal aapko pasand aayi..jaankar khushi hasil huyi....

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khush rahein....


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bahut khoob rahi aapki ghazal madhu jee.........
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath

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3rd September 2015, 09:22 AM
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shokhi si thi aalam mein mahki si fizayein bhi
rangeen se mausam mein bahki si hawayein bhi

Sazish si sabhi jaise karte hon vahaan milkar
hamko hi bulati thi roushan vo dishayein bhi.

ruk ruk ke kaii batein hothon pe mere aatiin.
Dhadkan ki sada kaise par unko sunayein bhi

Pahli vo shararat vo haule se mujhe chhoona
Fir Dil me tamanna hai vo aaj satayein bhi.

Chahat se bhari aankhein sharma ke jhuka lena
ham jaan luta baithe katil vo adayein bhi.

Sang sang hai kadam rakhna vada ye hamara tha.
Ab saath chalo milkar ham usko nibhayein bhi.


Madhu Bala....bahut khoobsurat gazal likhi hai tumne, ehsaas pasand aaye hame...yu hi pyar bhara likhti rho. khush rho.


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shokhi si thi aalam mein mahki si fizayein bhi
rangeen se mausam mein bahki si hawayein bhi

Sazish si sabhi jaise karte hon vahaan milkar
hamko hi bulati thi roushan vo dishayein bhi.

ruk ruk ke kaii batein hothon pe mere aatiin.
Dhadkan ki sada kaise par unko sunayein bhi

Pahli vo shararat vo haule se mujhe chhoona
Fir Dil me tamanna hai vo aaj satayein bhi.

Chahat se bhari aankhein sharma ke jhuka lena
ham jaan luta baithe katil vo adayein bhi.

Sang sang hai kadam rakhna vada ye hamara tha.
Ab saath chalo milkar ham usko nibhayein bhi.
Madhu ji aapka kalaam paRha bahut khubsurat andaaz...........merii jaanib se is behtareen peshkash par dhairoN daad qabool kijiye ga......saadar !!!
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Wah Madhu................

TPT par isey padaa tha tab bhi bohut pasand aayi thi aur ab bhi.

Bohut khubsoorat ghazal hai ye.

iske liye dil se daad aur mubaarakbaad.
Aapki daad sar ankhon par sarika...
Aati rahiyega...aap sab ke comments likhne ka hausla dete hain...

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bahut haseen peshkash madhu ji............... acchaa lagaa aapko padhnaa aur aapke ehsaason ko samajhnaa....

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