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26th May 2004, 12:29 PM
terey waadey per jiye ham, to ye jaan jhooT jaana
ke khushi se mar na jaatey agar aitbaar hota
--Galib
Dil-e-nazuuk ko mere yoon na sataao tum
Deke *paiman-e-wafa mujhko na mitaao tum
Promise
Arzoo-e-ishq ne dee maat humko umr bhar
Deke khud ko meri jaan is dil ko jeetaao tum
Tumko paaya hai taye karke duniya ka safar
Dein kisko tohfa-e-mohabbat ye bataao tum
Zikr-e-rukhsat na karo dil toot sa jaata hai
*Hijr kee shab hai na *sehar ko bulaao tum
Night of parting
Morning
Sunlo ankhon se khamoshi ka sabab tum
Bekhudi-e-chahat hai, na hosh mein laao tum
lo pyaar ke behkaave mein aa gaye phir
Chot khaayi humne phirse na muskuraao tum
Rahe salamat wo 'Paras' Tark-e-ta-aluq karke
*Rag-e-dil ko ehsaas-e-fanaa ab na dilaao tum
nerve of the heart
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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Re: Bekhudi mein..... -
26th May 2004, 05:48 PM
priye paars
kuch nazare aise hopte hai jinko jitni bhi baar dekho jee nahin bharta,,kuch pyale aise hote hai ki ek baar peeo aur hosh nahin rehta.......kuch yunhi aapki yeh gazal hai....jitni bhi baar padho naya ehsaas de jati hai....dil se likhi jo hai....yun to saari hi gazal khubsurati ka aaina hai ,,magar jin "aainon" mein "aksh" bilkool saaaaaf dikhta hai wo yeh hai....
Zikr-e-rukhsat na karo dil toot sa jaata hai
*Hijr kee shab hai na *sehar ko bulaao tum
Sunlo ankhon se khamoshi ka sabab tum
Bekhudi-e-chahat hai, na hosh mein laao tum
lo pyaar ke behkaave mein aa gaye phir
Chot khaayi humne phirse na muskuraao tum
hamari daad kubool kijiye.....yun hi likhte rahiye/....
take care
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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27th May 2004, 09:41 AM
Sahibaa,
Beshaq ek nihayat hi khubsurat kalaam likha hai apne. Dard, mohabbat aura phir ek bekasi ke aalam me lipti yeh nazm bahut asar kar gayi. khastaur se yeh sher...
Zikr-e-rukhsat na karo dil toot sa jaata hai
Hijr kee shab hai na sehar ko bulaao tum
Sunlo ankhon se khamoshi ka sabab tum
Bekhudi-e-chahat hai, na hosh mein laao tum
niyazmand
majrooh
zindagii aise jiyo tum dushmano.n ko rashk ho
maut ho aisii ke duniyaa der tak maatam kare
--Nawaz Deobandi
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hello -
27th May 2004, 10:39 AM
dear paras ji
apki ye nazm bahut hi khoobsoorat h ai,,kabhi kabhi simey bepanah mohabbat ki khooshboo ati hai,,to kabhi kabhi,,ek tootey dil ki pukar sunayi deti hai,,aur kabhi kabhi,,ek majboori jo pana bahut chahati hai,,per..wo nahi mil pata,..
jazbaton ko jis tarah apne nazm ke roop me utara hai,,wo wastav mein kabil-e-tareef hai..apki kuch lines ne dil ko jhajkor diya...
Tumko paaya hai taye karke duniya ka safar
Dein kisko tohfa-e-mohabbat ye bataao tum
Zikr-e-rukhsat na karo dil toot sa jaata hai
*Hijr kee shab hai na *sehar ko bulaao tum
lo pyaar ke behkaave mein aa gaye phir
Chot khaayi humne phirse na muskuraao tum
ek sher...
"ankhon ka ye dhoka hi sahi
tum mere ho bhi ya nahi
per chahata hai dil tujhko herdum hi
ismey mere dil ki rahat hi sahi"
take care..
waiting for ur next nazm..
swati
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28th May 2004, 01:06 PM
Parastaar Sahibaa...
Waah! Bahut achhaa likhaa hai aap ne.. Pahle sher se hi zabardast suruaat ki hai...
Dil-e-nazuuk ko mere yoon na sataao tum
Deke *paiman-e-wafa mujhko na mitaao tum
Bahut khooB likhaa hai aap ne.. <<<Ek dum dil se nikli huyi aur dil se gujarti huyi...>>>
Zikr-e-rukhsat na karo dil toot sa jaata hai
*Hijr kee shab hai na *sehar ko bulaao tum
Yah bhi bahut khoob rahi.. Jaane ki baat hi na karoo... waah!
Daad qabul farmaaiye aur likhte rahiye..
MayanK
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hi -
28th May 2004, 10:35 PM
parsataar..sahiba
how r u?
aap ka apna hi andaz hay
acha lagta hay parh kar ..
likhti raho..
khush raho
banjara''''
agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon
or judai main mohabbat kasi????
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29th May 2004, 03:07 AM
Sunlo ankhon se khamoshi ka sabab tum
Bekhudi-e-chahat hai, na hosh mein laao tum
lo pyaar ke behkaave mein aa gaye phir
Chot khaayi humne phirse na muskuraao tum
Bahut khoob Paras ji!!!
Words can't always express the beauty of heart!!!
Silence can speak much louder than that!!!
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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Re: Re: Bekhudi mein..... -
29th May 2004, 05:41 PM
Manoj...
Iss gazal ke liye daad mein aapka bhi haq hai...jo mujhse keh keh kar dard kee or se thoda sarkaya...meri koshish aapko pasand aayi...bahut bahut shukriya...aur hamesha saath dene ke liye shukriya...aap iss andaaz se tareef kareinge tau dil tau chahega na ki baar baar iske haqdaar banein...apna khayaal rakhna...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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29th May 2004, 05:42 PM
Majrooh Sahib...
Aap yoonhi hamara likha padte rahein...hum likhte raheinge...tareef ke liye tahe dil se shukriya...
duaaon ke saath
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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30th May 2004, 11:37 AM
Swati jee...
Aap tau khud bahut hee khuubsurat likhti hain...hum tau bus ulta seedha shabdon ko jodh kar sochte hain ki shayar ho gaye...lol...aapki hausla afzaayee ka dil kee gehraayion se shukriyaa...
duaon ke saath
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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30th May 2004, 11:45 AM
Mayank...
yahan aane aur protsahan dene ke liye shukriyaa...aapki iss line pe barbas hansi aa gayi...
Yah bhi bahut khoob rahi.. Jaane ki baat hi na karoo... waah!
lol...aap padhte rehna hamein...ok
khush rahein
paras
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Jee khan bhayyia...
chaliye aapne hamara alag andaaz tau pehchana
sada hanste rahein...
paras
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Chahat...
thank you so much for coming...jee haan...hai na sach...main kayi baar khamoshi ko mehsoos karti hoon...tau lagta hai...kitna kuch mujhse keh rahi hai meri khamoshi...there is a whole new world out there hidden in one's silence...
take care
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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31st May 2004, 10:14 PM
Arzoo-e-ishq ne dee maat humko umr bhar
Deke khud ko meri jaan is dil ko jeetaao tum
Khoobsurat,behadd Khubsurat..
Paras,sach mein ye ghazal kamaal ki kahi tumne..ek ek sheyr hazaron zalazale chupaaye rakhe hai khud me..
Mubarak ho..
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1st June 2004, 11:10 AM
paras,
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meena
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1st June 2004, 05:49 PM
Paras ji,
Hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi bahut umda kalam pesh ki hai aapne... It reaches the soul directly... Do keep writing and Take Care..
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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4th June 2004, 11:15 AM
Shukriya bhai sahib...
bus hum tau aapse hee yeh sab seekhe hain...achha hua aapko sab samajh mein aa gaya... i hold my hands tight just in case i i am tempted to use those wonderful urdu words jo meri aur aapki dono kee samajh ke bahir hain...lol
luv
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Meena jee...
come on meena jee, main budhoo hoon...khamoshi nahin samajh pati hoon...aap plz...zara khul ke is khamoshi ko samjhayieygaa...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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4th June 2004, 11:21 AM
Dear pulkit...
twice in a day!...bumped into your computer again...that was sweet....'It reaches the soul directly...' i think may be the bumping today will shake off my stumped brain and it might start churning up some good shayri...take care
and pulkit i do love your choice of shayri...keep posting...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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4th June 2004, 11:22 AM
Meena jee...
come on meena jee, main budhoo hoon...khamoshi nahin samajh pati hoon...aap plz...zara khul ke is khamoshi ko samjhayieygaa...
hahaahhaahhaha...
paras.......
kya karu.... budhhu maie bhi hu...
taarif thhik se kar nahi paati.... thhoda tum mera maun samaj lo... thooda bayaan maie bhi karne lagoongi.
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4th June 2004, 11:28 AM
Ohh meena jee...
yeh bhi khuub rahi! ha ha ha!
budhoo se buddhoo mila...aur kya,
jo na socha tha wahi mila...lol
mere hisaab se tareef tareef hoti hai...isme galat ya theek kee kya baat hai...aap kar ke dekhiey...hamein aasmaan pe payeingi...
aapki paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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15th January 2016, 04:05 PM
waaahh!!! Kya lutf aaya hai padkar...
Nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyega.....
Regards
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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2nd February 2016, 04:01 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Parastaar
terey waadey per jiye ham, to ye jaan jhooT jaana
ke khushi se mar na jaatey agar aitbaar hota
--Galib
Dil-e-nazuuk ko mere yoon na sataao tum
Deke *paiman-e-wafa mujhko na mitaao tum
Promise
Arzoo-e-ishq ne dee maat humko umr bhar
Deke khud ko meri jaan is dil ko jeetaao tum
Tumko paaya hai taye karke duniya ka safar
Dein kisko tohfa-e-mohabbat ye bataao tum
Zikr-e-rukhsat na karo dil toot sa jaata hai
*Hijr kee shab hai na *sehar ko bulaao tum
Night of parting
Morning
Sunlo ankhon se khamoshi ka sabab tum
Bekhudi-e-chahat hai, na hosh mein laao tum
lo pyaar ke behkaave mein aa gaye phir
Chot khaayi humne phirse na muskuraao tum
Rahe salamat wo 'Paras' Tark-e-ta-aluq karke
*Rag-e-dil ko ehsaas-e-fanaa ab na dilaao tum
nerve of the heart
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diii...........arse baad aaj phir aapko padna, aik sukhad ehsaas rha...aap to jaanti hi hai ki aapka likha muje kyu bhaata hai
love u dii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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