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Love aaj fir hairaan huyi... - 14th November 2014, 11:41 AM

Ek ajnabi ban gaya yoon apna
Na pata khud se kab anjaan huyi.

Rooh tak uski khushboo chhayi hai
Badi mushkil me meri jaan huyi.

Na tha ikraar to roz jalta tha dil
Mil gaya jawaab to bhi pareshan huyi.

Shiddat se jisko maanga tha kabhi
khokar use sab pa liya to kya shaan huyi.

Surat e yaar khwaab ban k rahi ankhon me
Raat kuch is tarah se hampe mehrbaan huyi.

na mila vo sukoon bhi dil ka gaya
Dil e barbaad ki vajah bhi main nadaan huyi.

Lutf bhi khoob aur jhakhm bhi gahre
Ishq ke khel me aaj fir hairaan huyi.



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18th November 2014, 02:27 PM

bahot khoob peshkash Madhu saahiba...... nihaaytii khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne...

aati rahiye likhtii rahiye

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20th November 2014, 03:18 PM

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bahot khoob peshkash Madhu saahiba...... nihaaytii khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne...

aati rahiye likhtii rahiye

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Bahut bahut shukriya shaad ji..aapne mere kalaam ko tawajjo di..
yoon hi sath dete rahein...



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12th December 2014, 12:18 PM

Surat e yaar khwaab ban k rahi ankhon me
Raat kuch is tarah se hampe mehrbaan huyi.

na mila vo sukoon bhi dil ka gaya
Dil e barbaad ki vajah bhi main nadaan huyi.


waaaaaah! waaaaaaaah! Madhu jee..

kia baat hai... bohat hiii aala ghazal se ru ba ru karwaaya hai..

tamaam ashaar khoob haiN..
quoted ashaar bohat acchy lagy ...

dil se nikli dheroN daad haazir hai


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12th December 2014, 12:53 PM

Madhu ji behadd umdah khyaal or peshkash..wah ji wah...Raj...


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Na tha ikraar to roz jalta tha dil
Mil gaya jawaab to bhi pareshan huyi.

Shiddat se jisko maanga tha kabhi
khokar use sab pa liya to kya shaan huyi.

Surat e yaar khwaab ban k rahi ankhon me
Raat kuch is tarah se hampe mehrbaan huyi.

na mila vo sukoon bhi dil ka gaya
Dil e barbaad ki vajah bhi main nadaan huyi.

Waaaaaaaah madhu ji.........behad umda kalam....quoted ashaar dil ko choo gaye....

Beshumar daad is nayab gazal ki nazar

Aapka apna
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13th December 2014, 11:29 AM

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Ek ajnabi ban gaya yoon apna
Na pata khud se kab anjaan huyi.

Rooh tak uski khushboo chhayi hai
Badi mushkil me meri jaan huyi.

Na tha ikraar to roz jalta tha dil
Mil gaya jawaab to bhi pareshan huyi.

Shiddat se jisko maanga tha kabhi
khokar use sab pa liya to kya shaan huyi.


Lutf bhi khoob aur jhakhm bhi gahre
Ishq ke khel me aaj fir hairaan huyi.
Madhu ji waah !!! baakamaal ghazal ........Beshumaar daad qabool kijiye aur aisay hi likhtay rahiye...... Ho Zor e qalam aur bhi ziyada...
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13th December 2014, 11:21 PM

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Ek ajnabi ban gaya yoon apna
Na pata khud se kab anjaan huyi.

Rooh tak uski khushboo chhayi hai
Badi mushkil me meri jaan huyi.

Na tha ikraar to roz jalta tha dil
Mil gaya jawaab to bhi pareshan huyi.

Shiddat se jisko maanga tha kabhi
khokar use sab pa liya to kya shaan huyi.

Surat e yaar khwaab ban k rahi ankhon me
Raat kuch is tarah se hampe mehrbaan huyi.

na mila vo sukoon bhi dil ka gaya
Dil e barbaad ki vajah bhi main nadaan huyi.

Lutf bhi khoob aur jhakhm bhi gahre
Ishq ke khel me aaj fir hairaan huyi.
Behad khoob Madhu ji har alfaaz pur asar yun to har sher umdaa raha par is ek sher par wah baar baar niklii

Lutf bhi khoob aur jhakhm bhi gahre
Ishq ke khel me aaj fir hairaan huyi


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Surat e yaar khwaab ban k rahi ankhon me
Raat kuch is tarah se hampe mehrbaan huyi.

na mila vo sukoon bhi dil ka gaya
Dil e barbaad ki vajah bhi main nadaan huyi.


waaaaaah! waaaaaaaah! Madhu jee..

kia baat hai... bohat hiii aala ghazal se ru ba ru karwaaya hai..

tamaam ashaar khoob haiN..
quoted ashaar bohat acchy lagy ...

dil se nikli dheroN daad haazir hai
muafi ki talab gaar hun hassan sahab aaj nigah padi to dekha....

aapka shukriya ada nahi kiya...

shukriya..aate rahiyega...

apna khayaal rakhein..

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Na tha ikraar to roz jalta tha dil
Mil gaya jawaab to bhi pareshan huyi.

Shiddat se jisko maanga tha kabhi
khokar use sab pa liya to kya shaan huyi.

Surat e yaar khwaab ban k rahi ankhon me
Raat kuch is tarah se hampe mehrbaan huyi.

na mila vo sukoon bhi dil ka gaya
Dil e barbaad ki vajah bhi main nadaan huyi.

Waaaaaaaah madhu ji.........behad umda kalam....quoted ashaar dil ko choo gaye....

Beshumar daad is nayab gazal ki nazar

Aapka apna
Bhushan
raajveer ji....bhushan ji...dil se shukriya aapka...

aate rahiyega....

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Madhu ji waah !!! baakamaal ghazal ........Beshumaar daad qabool kijiye aur aisay hi likhtay rahiye...... Ho Zor e qalam aur bhi ziyada...

Bahut shukraguzar hun..harash ji.....

Aate rahiyega...

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