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Post Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.... - 14th August 2003, 12:48 PM

Khuch alag sa likhne kii koshish hai..shyaad ap logo ko pasand aayeN.....

Mere madhosh khwaaB
Woh taroN bhari rateN
Uss chaand ka muskuraNa
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

NeendoN se jagii ankheN
SiiNe parr behatii woh sanseN
LaboN parr bhikharii shaBnaM
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

SawaloN ki barsat
JawaboN mai ruthnNa
Pyar kii kasaM par lautna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.....

Woh hijjrR ki lambii rateN
KitaBoN mai shukhe fuL
AnsuN banN yadoN ka barsna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

Meri harr bat ki fikrR
Intazar ki pareshani
Mere ladkhadane se tera tutna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

Jate rahe woh meharBa jab se
Rehata hu unN yadoN mai
Ab dard ki shqll liye hai woh
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.......

ChuBtii hai sanseN
shoR machata hai DIL
Har waqt nabZ ginNta mai
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara

Pahucha me uss zamii koo
Mitti thii woh 'sanju' sii
AnsuN kii bundh thii terii sii
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara........


Jindagi se to khair shikvaa tha,

muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..

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arreeee sanjoo ji....pehle to kaise hai aap? thikh to hai na? aur maafi chahti hoon itne dino se kuch baatein nahi huwi..kya hai school shuru hone se hum buzy hogaye hai study mein..par aree aap ne yeh sab kya likha hai? aap humen kehte hai ke aise shayri nahi likhni chahiye..aur aap hai ke khud hi....waise ek kahawat hai..gujurati mein see if u understand "dayi sasre ni jay ne gandi(pagal) ne salah aape" hehe..aap kuch aise hi hai..hehe paar haa..bohat hi aacha likha hai...

"Meri harr bat ki fikrR
Intazar ki pareshani
Mere ladkhadane se tera tutna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......"

humen bohat hi pasand aaya....humara bhi kuch aaisa hi haal tha..par un sab baaton ko choriye..aur bataye..kya chal raha hai...? chalo ab hum chalte hai...
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15th August 2003, 05:35 AM

kyaa baat hai sanjoo bhai!
gazab kaa likhaa hai aapne..!

is lehk kaa yeh hissa khaas-taur pe behad pasand aayaa:

Jate rahe woh meharBa jab se
Rehata hu unN yadoN mai
Ab dard ki shqll liye hai woh
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.......


bahot khoob dost.. bahot khoob!

maiN dehr se tashreef laane ke liye sharmindaa huuN..

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waah - 16th August 2003, 02:17 AM

sanjj dost,
bahot hi khub.... muje bahot pasand aayi yah nazam.... aisa laga sara mere saamne se manjar gujar gaya....


Woh hijjrR ki lambii rateN
KitaBoN mai shukhe fuL
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Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

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Mere ladkhadane se tera tutna
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16th August 2003, 12:29 PM

Wah!

Sanju.. tum roz ek naya kamaal karte ho!

Waqai.. behad khubsoorat kalaam likha hai.. aur tumhara ye naya andaaz taza tareen hai.. bohat pasand aaya... baRi khubi se tumne isme pehle pyaar mohabbat, phir dard aur tanhai qaid ki hai.. lajawaab!


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Hi - 16th August 2003, 05:58 PM

Tulsiiiiii.....achha....... humarii billiii humii se meoW..... ye kahawat kesii lagii LOL!!!!!!
OOoh jabhii aaj kal humse bate karne ko time nahi mil raha hai....koyii baat nahi jab waqt hoo tau yaad kar lena!!!!aur iss bar bhii class mai frist aana harr bar ki tarah...taB baat bane gii.....haaN!!!! biju su chale che dikrii...tau chal pachi maliye..jalssa kar..........JSK


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16th August 2003, 06:12 PM

Aman sahaab.................humare pass khushi ko bayan karne ke liye koyii alfaz nahi hai...itane dinoo baad ap ko wapas yaha dekh karr mann parssaN huva sahaab..... !!! apki humare post par maujudgii hii hume bata rahii hai jo humne likha hai woh apna kaam kar gaya....!!!! bass sabhi dost par apna prem banaye rakhe aur jab bhii savasth ap ko izazat de apni kimatii ray dene yaha tashrif le aayen...
shukriya ke sath chlata hu......ap na khyaal rakhe..ap ka mitrr...


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b ahot khub - 16th August 2003, 07:51 PM

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aap ki ye zara zara si baten bahot kuch kah jati hi


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Hi - 17th August 2003, 11:55 AM

Meri achhii dost Meena..... kese ho ap...chlo lagat hai mumbai ki barisho se tau chutkara mila ab road se ladayii karni padtii hai kitane gadhe ho gaye naa...achhii kasii warjish ho jati hai gadi mai bhi.... naa.....LOL,,,,ap ke santacurz ka pata nahi parr borivali ke tau bohot bure hal hai!!!!!!

cholo apko humara likha passand ayaan tau hume bhii achha laga.... humare likhne ko ek aur naya maqsad mil gaya....shukriya ke sath chalta hu...ap dost sanju


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17th August 2003, 12:03 PM

Afshan...waah ap ki bhii jo apne humari tarif kii.....sach mai achha lagat hai jab ache dost apna waqt nikal kar humari post par reply karte hai....rahii kamaal kii bat tau woh karam hai unka jinnki badolt hum likha karte hai... ap unki ko lajawaaB bole tau sahi hogaa....woh hai hii aese kyaa kareN....ke kabhi kabhi ap jese dost ko bhi tarif karne par amada kar deta hai...duaeN dije ga unnHe!!!
shukriya ke sath izazat chahunga.....


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18th August 2003, 10:55 AM

Mita...hi hwr u......haan zara zara si bate hii tau bohot kuch kehjati hai...aur shayad ye humarii akhri baat hoo zara zara sii.. !!!Milenge fhiR kabhi dil ne zoR mara tau warrna aB ye dil kahi lagata nahi....bye!!!!


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wah janab - 18th August 2003, 08:53 PM

wah janan sanju ji kya likha hai "zara -zara " par iska ehsas hai bhut jyada bhut achha likha tusi great ho!


aesse hi likhiye aur muskurayie tareef kubul kijiye.


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Hi - 19th August 2003, 07:59 PM

Pallavi ji namshkar....ap ko bhi khich ke le ayii humari baat waah bhai khuB rahii.... rahii bat gr8 hone kii tau asii haan koyii shaq LOL!!!
Anyways......thnx a lot 4 replyin on my post....Bye

do sher suzhe hain sochta hun ap ko suna hii du...ap ki aur hamare kuch doston kii ray humare liye kimti hogii....

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MiloN sareN jaha se tuM apnNi chahat maiN
Kya paoogeN tum puchenge khabhii fhursst mai huM.....

Bass ab ek dua aur tum yen mangoN
BhichaD jayeN 'sanju' ki sanseN bhii tumharii tarah....

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20th August 2003, 03:55 AM

namastee.. sanjoo.. ji...

kaise hoo dost... wah yar..wakai mein bhut khoob likha hai dost.... bahut hi umda.. aur asar dar likha hai .. pne. .bakhoobi apne. .apni yadon aur ehssaas.. dikhaye hai .. .puri kalam hi tareef ke .. kabil hai per yeah line humare dil ko chu gai.. -->

Jate rahe woh meharBa jab se
Rehata hu unN yadoN mai
Ab dard ki shqll liye hai woh
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.......

ChuBtii hai sanseN
shoR machata hai DIL
Har waqt nabZ ginNta mai
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara

Pahucha me uss zamii koo
Mitti thii woh 'sanju' sii
AnsuN kii bundh thii terii sii
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara........


bahut khoob aise hi likhte rahiye aur mehfil..sajate rahiye ga..

bye ..and take care..


Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
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hi - 20th August 2003, 08:08 AM

sanjoo ji
kya gajab ka likha hai aapne
u know what after reading all this...mujhe bhi bahut kuch yaad aa gaya.....kep writing i luved ur style of writing
NeendoN se jagii ankheN
SiiNe parr behatii woh sanseN
LaboN parr bhikharii shaBnaM
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

SawaloN ki barsat
JawaboN mai ruthnNa
Pyar kii kasaM par lautna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.....

Woh hijjrR ki lambii rateN
KitaBoN mai shukhe fuL
AnsuN banN yadoN ka barsna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

Meri harr bat ki fikrR
Intazar ki pareshani
Mere ladkhadane se tera tutna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

Jate rahe woh meharBa jab se
Rehata hu unN yadoN mai
Ab dard ki shqll liye hai woh
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.......

ChuBtii hai sanseN
shoR machata hai DIL
Har waqt nabZ ginNta mai
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara

Pahucha me uss zamii koo
Mitti thii woh 'sanju' sii
AnsuN kii bundh thii terii sii
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara........


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Luv Priya


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hi - 22nd August 2003, 06:19 PM

Namaste manish..kese ho ap...yaar ap ka shukrrguzar rahunga hamesha..jo aksar apne hume dil se saraha..bye

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Priya....apka bhi bohot bohot shukriya jo apne humari baat ko tahe dil se pasand kiya...bye


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hi - 31st October 2003, 06:08 PM

hi sanjoo
vow aap to kamaal kar rahe hai aaj kal

aab pata chala ke hum ne kitni ach achi poems miss ki while i wont here

is nazam ko describe karne ke liye alfaaz anhein hai
har shayr aik se bad kar aik hai. its nice to c u writing different poems but they still have a meeta meeta dard in them and they are really nice

keep on writing
bye


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2nd November 2003, 12:15 PM

Romaaaa...ye meetha meetha dard hii na jaan parr bann aataa hai...pata hai naa????..nahii naa..achha hai isse wakiF bhii na hona kabhii..aur humesha khush rehnna..aur issi tarah se merii achhii dost ban kar merii tariFe karr tii rehnnaa..LOL..sachii jese apne ye poem miss karii hum bhi apko iss site parr miss karte hai..jalldi jalldii aaya karoo bhai apke yaaha bohot se dost hai jo apko miss karte hai sachhiii....achha ab izazat...Sanju


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1st July 2004, 08:28 PM

Meri harr bat ki fikrR
Intazar ki pareshani
Mere ladkhadane se tera tutna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

Jate rahe woh meharBa jab se
Rehata hu unN yadoN mai
Ab dard ki shqll liye hai woh
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.......


Sanjoo...

uffffffffff kya likha hai... hadd kar di yaar.. dil nikaal kar haath mein rakh diya....

Bahut acha laga!~~

Aise hi likhte raho

Khush rehna...

~Priya



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Post 1st July 2004, 08:38 PM

Sanjoo ji,

Bahut hee acchi lagi aapki lines..... sach mein bahut dum bhi hai...
Likhtey rahiyega

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Re: Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.... - 2nd July 2004, 02:07 PM

Mere madhosh khwaaB
Woh taroN bhari rateN
Uss chaand ka muskuraNa
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

NeendoN se jagii ankheN
SiiNe parr behatii woh sanseN
LaboN parr bhikharii shaBnaM
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

SawaloN ki barsat
JawaboN mai ruthnNa
Pyar kii kasaM par lautna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.....

Woh hijjrR ki lambii rateN
KitaBoN mai shukhe fuL
AnsuN banN yadoN ka barsna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

ChuBtii hai sanseN
shoR machata hai DIL
Har waqt nabZ ginNta mai
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara

sanjooo
mein muafi chahta hoon ki peeche kuch din masroofiyat ke chalte is site par jayda nahin aa saka....magar aaj jab tumhara yeh kalaam padha to mehsoos kiya ki kitni badi cheez se ab tak mehroom reh gaya tha mein.....bahoooooooot hi khubsurat likha hai tumne,,,aur waqai hat kar hai.....ek ek sher jaise sachai ka aaina dikha raha ho.....wo jaagti raatein aankhon ke saamne utar aayi hai....dil ki gehraiyon se nikli daad kubool karo......bahoot pasand aaya yeh andaaz tumhara....take care
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2nd July 2004, 02:29 PM

Sanjoo...

Malum nahin mera yahan reply kyon nahin hai...maine yeh nazm itni baar padhi hai...socha shayad diya hoga reply...sorry sanjoo...bahut umda likha hai...sach mein...aur saara kalaam ek khuubsurat manzar sa darshata hua sa jata hai...aur yeh alfaaz bahut achhe lage...

SawaloN ki barsat
JawaboN mai ruthnNa
Pyar kii kasaM par lautna
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.....

kam shabd aur kitna kuch hai inmein...hai na...

khush raho...

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ate rahe woh meharBa jab se
Rehata hu unN yadoN mai
Ab dard ki shqll liye hai woh
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara.......


Sanju bhaii...

Bahut achchhaa likhaa hai aap ne...Apni takhlif ko itni saadgi se jahiir kiya hai....Likhte rahiye.....

Aap ka dost

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really sanjooo..this one is reallyy good.....
waise sanjoo tumhe tulsika ne jo kahawat likhi hain woh to samjh nahin aayi hogi na kyon........sochna aa jayegi....

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Sanjoo.. tum ab bhi zinda ho.. haan apne hi in shabdon mein..

Khush raho.. jahan bhi ho!!


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wah sanju ji bhai maan gaye aapko bahut hi khoobsurat kalam pesh kiya hai aapne us se bhi jyada khoobsurati aur sadgi ke saath apne khayalon ko ujagar kiya hai.bas itna hi kahunga ki likhte rahiye taki hume itne sundar kalam humesha padhne ko milte rahen.

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Khush raho.. jahan bhi ho!!

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bilkul sahi kaha....... humara sanj..... humse yunhi jooda rahega har lamha.......

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hello varin bhai


kasie ho aap ne sanju ki is post ko aage la ke phir se uski har yaad taaza kar di aur aap ne sach kaha vo zinda hai aur hamesha rahega uske yeh alfaaz hamesha humaare saath raheinge


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Khuch alag sa likhne kii koshish hai..shyaad ap logo ko pasand aayeN.....

Mere madhosh khwaaB
Woh taroN bhari rateN
Uss chaand ka muskuraNa
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

NeendoN se jagii ankheN
SiiNe parr behatii woh sanseN
LaboN parr bhikharii shaBnaM
Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara......

SawaloN ki barsat
JawaboN mai ruthnNa
Pyar kii kasaM par lautna
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Woh hijjrR ki lambii rateN
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Pahucha me uss zamii koo
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Mujhe woh yaad hai zara zara........


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