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Ek Doha written by BIHARI-LAL(LOVE-POET) -
4th March 2005, 11:54 AM
kuch panktiyaan me aap logon ke saath share karna chahta hoon , jo mene apne school time me hindi subject me padi thee. i think u will enjoy it.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------- "kahaT, nataT, rijhaT, khijaT, milaT, lajiyaaT, bhare bhawan me karat hain neno se hi baat." ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- yeh line BIHARI LAL ki dohe se li gayi hai, aur isme shringGaar RAS ka misran hai. Arth: premi apni premika se bahar baag me milne ki liye kahta(kahaT) hai. premika mana(nataT) karti hai, premika ke mana karne ki ada se premi rijhh(rijhaT) jata hai, is par premika thodi si khijh(khijaT) jaati hai, aur phir dono ki aankhen milti(milaT) hain. BIHARI jee kahate hain... is tarah dono, sabhi logon(persons) se bhare huye bhawan me baate kar rahe. Yours... Arun |
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13th March 2005, 04:54 PM
well done
it was really nice. ek premi aur premika ke beech ki chemistry shayad hi koi samajh sakta hai. yeh to sirf kissise prem karke hi samjha jaa sakta hai. |
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15th March 2005, 07:34 PM
hi
thik kaha aapne. par.. aapne apna naam nahin bataya. us tarike se kisi ka naam to nahin jaana ja sakta. ok bye arun |
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16th March 2005, 07:24 AM
thanx for ur respond. well, mera naam vedika hai aur main ek student hoon.
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17th March 2005, 12:16 PM
wah
bahut khoob arun jee. bihari ki ye panktiyaan bahut achchi hain yours sp |
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16th September 2009, 09:01 AM
sabse pehle to thanx itni acha likha,
Kuch or isi tarike ka likhdo sarkar Aap ka karam hoga Aapka Habib Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,, Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda, Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M |
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