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First Love Letter (Gujarati)
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First Love Letter (Gujarati) - 27th April 2005, 12:43 AM

Tara pyar thi saru thai che aa safar,
Manzil malse ke nahin male kaune khabar,
Tara ahsas wagar adhuroj chu,
Zindagi adhuri hase tara wagar,
Dil hase ke kyank dil ni mehfil pan hase,
Rasta-o hase ke kyank manzil pan hase,
Tari nafrat bhari najar naa tir badha hase,
Parantu bija koi nu nahin e faqt maruj dil hase.

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27th April 2005, 01:28 AM

Well said... something I would like to share.... it does not match with your letter, but it's a feeling..........


Jyaan sudhi phoolon ma suvaas chhe,
Haan hu chhu.
Jyaan sudhi aa zarna o ek soor ma vahe chhe,
Haan hu chhu.
Jyaan sudhi aabh ma chand sitarayo chamke chhe,
Haan hu chhu.
Jyaan sudhi sooraj ni kirano prakaash failave chhe,
Haan hu chhu.
Jyaan sudhi koi hasi hasi ne dukh chhupave chhe,
Haan hu chhu.
Jyaan sudhi Jyaan sudhi maara dost mane jaane chhe,
Haan hu chhu..................
   
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27th April 2005, 06:35 PM

Dil hase ke kyank dil ni mehfil pan hase,
Rasta-o hase ke kyank manzil pan hase,
Tari nafrat bhari najar naa tir badha hase,
Parantu bija koi nu nahin e faqt maruj dil hase

Wah!!

Pan Saajan ji, Parul e bahoo saro reply aapel chey aney tamoye temney aa vishey kain pan lakhyoo nathi..

Rajan


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tumhara nam likh likh kar mithana bhol jata hu
tujy jb yad karta hu zamana bhol jata hu
bohot si easi bati ha jo mari dil ma rehti ha
magar jab tum sy milta hu batana bhol jata hu
mai aksar rat ko sochta hu k tum ko bhol jawon ga
magar jab subha hoti ha bholan bhol jata hu


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bahut khoob........................


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Bht accha likha hai saajan ji aapne..


Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..


   
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4th April 2016, 09:48 AM

Quote:
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tumhara nam likh likh kar mithana bhol jata hu
tujy jb yad karta hu zamana bhol jata hu
bohot si easi bati ha jo mari dil ma rehti ha
magar jab tum sy milta hu batana bhol jata hu
mai aksar rat ko sochta hu k tum ko bhol jawon ga
magar jab subha hoti ha bholan bhol jata hu
waah....william ji..bahut khoob..bahut rawaan..

achcha laga aapko padhna..

sdc me swagat hai aapka..

aate rahiye likhte rahiye...



mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai
mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai.

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