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O Sharabi! O Sharabi! - 19th May 2005, 07:23 PM

Hi Everyone,

Bahut din ho gaye is section mein kuch likha nahi...

Hmmm....

Sharab aur shayri ka bahut hi purana rishta hai...
to ek sher to kehna hi chahiye.....

Lijiye... pesh-e-nazar hai...

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O Sharabi! O Sharabi!

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Aa mehfil mein aa,
dekh hai kitni, masti yahan,
Haathon mein le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu jiye ja, Tu piye ja

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata
Hai tere dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal tu humme bata jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai raat baaki
Maikhane mein bahut hai baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara

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Re: O Sharabi! O Sharabi! - 19th May 2005, 07:33 PM

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Hi Everyone,

Bahut din ho gaye is section mein kuch likha nahi...

Hmmm....

Sharab aur shayri ka bahut hi purana rishta hai...
to ek sher to kehna hi chahiye.....

Lijiye... pesh-e-nazar hai...

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O Sharabi! O Sharabi!

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Aa mehfil mein aa,
dekh hai kitni, masti yahan,
Haathon mein le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu jiye ja, Tu piye ja

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata
Hai tere dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal tu humme bata jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai raat baaki
Maikhane mein bahut hai baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara

-- Rohin Bhargava
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dearest rohin,
sach mein sahi kaha tha meine u are masters in each saction. just loved reading each word of urs. ek gaana yaad aaya musafir picture ka tumhari is kalam ko padhne ke baad so posting ahead for u. take care n keep on writing buddy. god bless u with his finnest glitters.

Saaki se mohabbat hoti hai
Har roz, shikaayat hoti hai
Peene ko mere peena na kaho
Yunhi toh ibaadat hoti hai

Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, jo nashe mein na rahe
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, aise jo tauba kare
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, dil mein jiske gham na ho
Loot gaya samjho sharaabi paas jiske ham na ho

(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)

Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, jo nashe mein na rahe
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, aise jo tauba kare
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, dil mein jiske gham na ho
Loot gaya samjho sharaabi paas jiske ham na ho


(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)

Ishq ki galiyon mein na jaana, ishq bada badnaam hai
Ishq toh mera khuda hai, aashiq mera naam hai..ho…
Ho..i.shq ki galiyon mein na jaana, ishq bada badnaam hai
Ishq toh mera khuda hai, aashiq mera naam hai
Aashiqui ke har qadam pe, husna qatl-e-aam hai
Eh…aashiqui mein jaan lootaana aashiqon ke kaam hai
(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)

Maikade mein aane waale maikashi toh seekh le
Hampe hasne waale pehle tu hasi ko seekh le…oh…
Hey…maikade mein aane waale maikashi toh seekh le
Hampe hasne waale pehle tu hasi ko seekh le
Har khushi hai door tujhse, gham tere nazdeek hai
Haay...tere diwaane ki haalat, bin tere bhi thheek hai
Oh saaki saaki (saaki saaki saaki)
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki
(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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19th May 2005, 07:45 PM

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Aa mehfil mein aa,
dekh hai kitni, masti yahan,
Haathon mein le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu jiye ja, Tu piye ja

Hmmmmmm.....Sab dekh raha hoon... abhut masti chadhi hai!!


O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata
Hai tere dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal tu humme bata jara

Kya baat hai!! Do boond sharaab ki bhula deti hai saare gham? Is it?


O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai raat baaki
Maikhane mein bahut hai baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

Kya baat hai.. khus madhosh hain, doosre ko bula rahe hain...


O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

Aisa kyaa? But tumhara dil to nahin toota naa?


O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara

:-" Abhi to yeh dhun mere honthon par bhi chadh gayi hai.. too God!!

Rohin Sir!

So ab tusi gaanon ki field me Komal ko takkar dene utara gaye ho...but is baar apane dhun to daali nahi saah me.. chalo koi baat nahi main khud bana loonga

Vaise tumhare maiykhane jaane ke din nahi.. tum aankhon se jaam piyao to hi accha hai.. varna bahut joote padhenge

Jokes apart... Likha accha hai... Acchi dhun ban gayi hai...Likhte rhao aise hi .. TC


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19th May 2005, 07:52 PM

pankaj ji ki gayi hui ek gazal ke kuch bol yaad aaye so writing ahead.

arz hai: peene pilane ke sab hai bahane
kahan ki mohabbat kahan ke fasane!
khushi mein bhi pee hai gam mein bhi pee hai
hai masti bhare ye mey ke paiymane!
kisi ne mujhe mast nazoron se dekhqa
kadam khud-b-khud ab lage dagmagane!
sataye na humko kabhi yaad-e-maazi
chalo bhool jaye wo guzre zamane!
chalo ab to "gumnam" is meykade se
tumhein dafan karne hai sab gam purane!



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: O Sharabi! O Sharabi! - 19th May 2005, 08:16 PM

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Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Everyone,

Bahut din ho gaye is section mein kuch likha nahi...

Hmmm....

Sharab aur shayri ka bahut hi purana rishta hai...
to ek sher to kehna hi chahiye.....

Lijiye... pesh-e-nazar hai...

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O Sharabi! O Sharabi!

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Aa mehfil mein aa,
dekh hai kitni, masti yahan,
Haathon mein le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu jiye ja, Tu piye ja

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata
Hai tere dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal tu humme bata jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai raat baaki
Maikhane mein bahut hai baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara

-- Rohin Bhargava
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Dear Rohin
a masterpeice my dear
how sweet are the words aankhon khol painmane em hai sharaa jara
jhoom tere saath jhommey sare....jaise jaise Chadey iska Nasha

luv ya
I really liked this one
very cute

Priya


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very nice rohin ji!!!!



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O Sharabi! O Sharabi!

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Aaja tu mehfil mein aa jara,
Dekh hai kitni, masti yahan,
Haathon mein le le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu piye ja, Tu piye ja

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata?
Hai dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal humme bhi tu bata jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai kaafi raat baaki
Maikhane mein hai sharab baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe le do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan ko sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
Abhi paimane mein hai sharab jara

-- Rohin Bhargava

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Hey made a few modifications as a tune was coming to my mind...
Hope You like it and any suggestions??????


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O Sharabi! O Sharabi!

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Aaja tu mehfil mein aa jara,
Dekh hai kitni, masti yahan,
Haathon mein le le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu piye ja, Tu piye ja

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata?
Hai dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal humme bhi tu bata jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai kaafi raat baaki
Maikhane mein hai sharab baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe le do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan ko sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
Abhi paimane mein hai sharab jara

-- Rohin Bhargava

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Hey made a few modifications as a tune was coming to my mind...
Hope You like it and any suggestions??????
very well said rohin,
loved reading it again with new versionlol. hey just kidding yaar bt its gud as usual. take care

kaun hai jisne meh nahi chakhi
kaun jhooti kasam utthata hai
mehkade se jo bach nikalta hai
teri aankhon mein doob jata hai!



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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20th May 2005, 12:53 AM

nice but there is one thing....can alcohol really make you forget your sorrows as you have said in your post???? i dont think so..for everyone has a different reaction to alcohol...

agar hota k alcohol makes you forget your sorrows then there would be ppl drinking every single day who usually dont drink

sorry....but the poetry was nice

keep writing

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Re: Re: O Sharabi! O Sharabi! - 20th May 2005, 04:08 AM

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dearest rohin,
sach mein sahi kaha tha meine u are masters in each saction. just loved reading each word of urs. ek gaana yaad aaya musafir picture ka tumhari is kalam ko padhne ke baad so posting ahead for u. take care n keep on writing buddy. god bless u with his finnest glitters.

Saaki se mohabbat hoti hai
Har roz, shikaayat hoti hai
Peene ko mere peena na kaho
Yunhi toh ibaadat hoti hai

Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, jo nashe mein na rahe
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, aise jo tauba kare
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, dil mein jiske gham na ho
Loot gaya samjho sharaabi paas jiske ham na ho

(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)

Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, jo nashe mein na rahe
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, aise jo tauba kare
Woh sharaabi kya sharaabi, dil mein jiske gham na ho
Loot gaya samjho sharaabi paas jiske ham na ho


(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)

Ishq ki galiyon mein na jaana, ishq bada badnaam hai
Ishq toh mera khuda hai, aashiq mera naam hai..ho…
Ho..i.shq ki galiyon mein na jaana, ishq bada badnaam hai
Ishq toh mera khuda hai, aashiq mera naam hai
Aashiqui ke har qadam pe, husna qatl-e-aam hai
Eh…aashiqui mein jaan lootaana aashiqon ke kaam hai
(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)

Maikade mein aane waale maikashi toh seekh le
Hampe hasne waale pehle tu hasi ko seekh le…oh…
Hey…maikade mein aane waale maikashi toh seekh le
Hampe hasne waale pehle tu hasi ko seekh le
Har khushi hai door tujhse, gham tere nazdeek hai
Haay...tere diwaane ki haalat, bin tere bhi thheek hai
Oh saaki saaki (saaki saaki saaki)
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki
(Oh saaki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa paas aa, rahe na jaaye koyi khwaahish baaki)
Hi Jasu,

LAgta hai na mere gaane ke liye bhi yehi tune achi rahegi....hehehe...

Ho jaaye ek patiyala???

Aa jao mehfil mein

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20th May 2005, 04:10 AM

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Hmmmmmm.....Sab dekh raha hoon... abhut masti chadhi hai!!

Kya baat hai!! Do boond sharaab ki bhula deti hai saare gham? Is it?

Kya baat hai.. khus madhosh hain, doosre ko bula rahe hain...

Aisa kyaa? But tumhara dil to nahin toota naa?

:-" Abhi to yeh dhun mere honthon par bhi chadh gayi hai.. too God!!

Rohin Sir!

So ab tusi gaanon ki field me Komal ko takkar dene utara gaye ho...but is baar apane dhun to daali nahi saah me.. chalo koi baat nahi main khud bana loonga

Vaise tumhare maiykhane jaane ke din nahi.. tum aankhon se jaam piyao to hi accha hai.. varna bahut joote padhenge

Jokes apart... Likha accha hai... Acchi dhun ban gayi hai...Likhte rhao aise hi .. TC
Hi Pulkit,

yaar dhun to mere man mein bhi ban gayi thi....
kambakht utar hi nahi rahi hai....

Mera matlab dhun se hai.... daaro se nahi....
abhi to raat hai baaki ....

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Re: Re: O Sharabi! O Sharabi! - 20th May 2005, 04:12 AM

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Dear Rohin
a masterpeice my dear
how sweet are the words aankhon khol painmane em hai sharaa jara
jhoom tere saath jhommey sare....jaise jaise Chadey iska Nasha

luv ya
I really liked this one
very cute

Priya

Hi Priya,

Yeh masterpiece hai hi....

Ek Sharabi ne jo likha hai....
Nasha zindagi ka sar chadh kar bol raha hai....lol

Enjoy...

Jara sa jhum loon mein.... na re baba na.... lol

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nice but there is one thing....can alcohol really make you forget your sorrows as you have said in your post???? i dont think so..for everyone has a different reaction to alcohol...

agar hota k alcohol makes you forget your sorrows then there would be ppl drinking every single day who usually dont drink

sorry....but the poetry was nice

keep writing

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Sharab kissi bhi gam ka ilaaz nahi...
aur bura maane wali kya baat hai....

aur aage se apne bhai se kabhi sorry ya thank you mat kehna...

Yeh to masti ki baat thi...

Vaise sharab peene wali cheez hi nahi...
Zindagi ka har lamha hai....

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hi rohin,

Khamosh hai tu kyon bata?
Hai dil mein dard kya bhala


padte padte maan kuch gamgin sa ho gaya.......Pankaj Udas ji ka ek geet yaad aa gaya...jo mujhe bohot pasand hai.....
Phir haath mein sharab hai,sach bolta hoon mein

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hi rohin,

Khamosh hai tu kyon bata?
Hai dil mein dard kya bhala


padte padte maan kuch gamgin sa ho gaya.......Pankaj Udas ji ka ek geet yaad aa gaya...jo mujhe bohot pasand hai.....
Phir haath mein sharab hai,sach bolta hoon mein

aaj phir wasia hi ehsaas dil ko hua ye geet padkar.
Hi Shalini,

Tum gamgin kyon hoti ho....
Mast ho jao... zindagi ke maze lo....
Nasha yeh zindagi ka hai.... Sharab to hai lamhe zindagi ke....

Magar jo geet tumne yad dilaya woh bahut hi acha hai....

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Hi Bhaiya,

arre maine to ye post dekhi hi nahi thi.. is section me aati nahi na.. khair ab to dekh li.. bahiya bahut masti me jhoom rahe hai.. aur saath me baaki log bhi..

gaana sach me bahut achha hai aur mujhe to dono hi pasand aaye.. tune hmm.. apun gaana nahi gaata lekin.. apane ek friend ko diya tha usane gunguna ke sunaaya dono hi geet.. use bhi kaafi pasand aayi.. hum dono ki daad kabool karo bhaiya..

waise itna achha mahual sab itane khush hai.. to mai bhi sabki khushi me khush ho leti hoo.. jara sa mai bhi jhoom hi loo..

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Hi Bhaiya,

arre maine to ye post dekhi hi nahi thi.. is section me aati nahi na.. khair ab to dekh li.. bahiya bahut masti me jhoom rahe hai.. aur saath me baaki log bhi..

gaana sach me bahut achha hai aur mujhe to dono hi pasand aaye.. tune hmm.. apun gaana nahi gaata lekin.. apane ek friend ko diya tha usane gunguna ke sunaaya dono hi geet.. use bhi kaafi pasand aayi.. hum dono ki daad kabool karo bhaiya..

waise itna achha mahual sab itane khush hai.. to mai bhi sabki khushi me khush ho leti hoo.. jara sa mai bhi jhoom hi loo..

sahi hai na bhaiya?

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Hi Sister,

Haan mein bhi bahut din se is section mein aaya nahi tha....
To socha aise hi kuch likh doon is section ke liye....

Tumhare dost ne isse ga bhi liya... wah kya baat hai...
Usko bolna thanks a lot....

I am happy that you both liked it....
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wah rohin bhaiya bas hume to aapki panktiyoon se hi sharab ko chakhne ka experience ho gaya.bahut hi sundarta ke saath aapne har us harkat ko bayan kiya hai jo nashe me ek sharabi karta hai aur jiske liye ek insaan nasha karta hai.to bas itna hi kahoonga ki aap sharab me bhi regular likhte raho taki hume bhi bina botal chue hi nashe ka anubhav hota rahe.

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wah rohin bhaiya bas hume to aapki panktiyoon se hi sharab ko chakhne ka experience ho gaya.bahut hi sundarta ke saath aapne har us harkat ko bayan kiya hai jo nashe me ek sharabi karta hai aur jiske liye ek insaan nasha karta hai.to bas itna hi kahoonga ki aap sharab me bhi regular likhte raho taki hume bhi bina botal chue hi nashe ka anubhav hota rahe.

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Kya baat hai.....
Chakha bhi nahi aur nasha ho gaya ....
Yehi acha hai tumhare liye....
Kabhi na pade lat sharab ki....

Kya rakha hai sharab mein
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Hi Everyone,

Bahut din ho gaye is section mein kuch likha nahi...

Hmmm....

Sharab aur shayri ka bahut hi purana rishta hai...
to ek sher to kehna hi chahiye.....

Lijiye... pesh-e-nazar hai...

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O Sharabi! O Sharabi!

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Aa mehfil mein aa,
dekh hai kitni, masti yahan,
Haathon mein le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu jiye ja, Tu piye ja

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata
Hai tere dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal tu humme bata jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai raat baaki
Maikhane mein bahut hai baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara

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Well Very nicely written........
lagta hai bahut experiance hai

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Hi Rohin,
Well Very nicely written........
lagta hai bahut experiance hai

Regards Nidhi
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Apun ka experience .... to bahut kuch ka hai

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rohin sir
aapne to khoob likha hi hai

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara


my fav lines
main aapki halat samajh sakta hu
arz hai
"nasha ham karte hai ilzaam sharab ko diya jata hai par ye kambakht unhi ka to chehra hai jo hame har jaam me nazar aata hai "

fir bhi
jine ke liye peena hai zaroori
aur peene ke liye jeena hai zaroori


arz hai
meri khamoshi se bereham na ho aye dost
chalne wale bhi dam lete hai chalne ke liye
pee liya karte hai jeene ki tamanna me kabhi
dagmagana bhi zaroori hai chalne ke liye

waise hi yaha par bahut saari sharaab dekh kar pankaj udas sahab ka ek gaana yaad aya
bahut purana hai
hui mehengi bahut hi sharaab ke
thodi thodi piya karo
piyo lekin rakho hisaab thodi thodi piya karo
(aage ke lines dad se puch kar batunga-he's a big fan of pankaj sahab ki gazals)

so all i wanted to say is
ek mountain dew ki ad thi cheetah bhi peeta hai wali
arz hai
kaun kambakht jeene ke liye peeta hai
kaun kambakht marne ke liye peeta hai
ham to isliye peeta hai kyuki
cheetah bih peetah hai................

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rohin sir
aapne to khoob likha hi hai

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara


my fav lines
main aapki halat samajh sakta hu
arz hai
"nasha ham karte hai ilzaam sharab ko diya jata hai par ye kambakht unhi ka to chehra hai jo hame har jaam me nazar aata hai "

fir bhi
jine ke liye peena hai zaroori
aur peene ke liye jeena hai zaroori


arz hai
meri khamoshi se bereham na ho aye dost
chalne wale bhi dam lete hai chalne ke liye
pee liya karte hai jeene ki tamanna me kabhi
dagmagana bhi zaroori hai chalne ke liye

waise hi yaha par bahut saari sharaab dekh kar pankaj udas sahab ka ek gaana yaad aya
bahut purana hai
hui mehengi bahut hi sharaab ke
thodi thodi piya karo
piyo lekin rakho hisaab thodi thodi piya karo
(aage ke lines dad se puch kar batunga-he's a big fan of pankaj sahab ki gazals)

so all i wanted to say is
ek mountain dew ki ad thi cheetah bhi peeta hai wali
arz hai
kaun kambakht jeene ke liye peeta hai
kaun kambakht marne ke liye peeta hai
ham to isliye peeta hai kyuki
cheetah bih peetah hai................

peete raho
Kya baat hai Jubin bhai....

Bahut khoob...
Vaise bhi dard aur sharab ka hai rishta purana...
Khoob likha hai aapne bhi

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O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
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Haathon mein le ek jaam jara,
Tu piye ja, Tu jiye ja, Tu piye ja

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Khamosh hai tu kyon bata
Hai tere dil mein dard kya bhala
Jaam ko honton se tu lagaa jara
Dil ka haal tu humme bata jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Abhi to hai raat baaki
Maikhane mein bahut hai baaki,
Madhoshi ka hai aalam yahan
Nashe mein tu kho ja jara

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

O Sharabi! O Sharabi!
Dil ki dhadkan sun jara,
Kadmoon ko tu sambhal jara
Nashili aankhon ko tu khol jara
paimane mein hai sharab jara

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hey sharabi botale tod de jara.
pata hai rohin mujhe sharb se bahut nafrat hai kyun ki ye na jab koi dukhi hota hai uske gum ko us time to kam karti hai lekin auro ko gum de jati hai.
bahut khub likha hai .
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

ye baat hai jo mujhe achi nahi lagti.
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hey sharabi botale tod de jara.
pata hai rohin mujhe sharb se bahut nafrat hai kyun ki ye na jab koi dukhi hota hai uske gum ko us time to kam karti hai lekin auro ko gum de jati hai.
bahut khub likha hai .
Tute dil ki yeh dawa hai
Pe do ghooth aur jhoom jara
Dekh duniya bhi sang jhoome tere
Jaise Jaise chadhe iska Nasha

ye baat hai jo mujhe achi nahi lagti.
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Hi Sakhi,

Sharab ka nasha acha nahi .... is baat se mein bhi sehmat hoon...

Magar yahan sharab se matlab zindagi hai.....

Zindagi ka bhi ek nasha hai....

Right?

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hi sale sahaB ...

sabse pehle to muafi do apne jiju ko ... ki bohat deri se land kar raha huN tumhare kalaam ke runway par.... par sach bohat accha likha hai tumne .. aur dhun ki chinta na karna wo maine tayaar kar di hai ... phone karoge kabhi to sunauNga ... par haN jas ki tarah mujhe bhi musafir movie ka wo gaana yaad aa hi gaya ... bohat khoob likha hai tumne ...

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hi sale sahaB ...

sabse pehle to muafi do apne jiju ko ... ki bohat deri se land kar raha huN tumhare kalaam ke runway par.... par sach bohat accha likha hai tumne .. aur dhun ki chinta na karna wo maine tayaar kar di hai ... phone karoge kabhi to sunauNga ... par haN jas ki tarah mujhe bhi musafir movie ka wo gaana yaad aa hi gaya ... bohat khoob likha hai tumne ...

yuN hi likhte raho

tumhara apna

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Hi Jiju,

Maafi ki kya baat hai.... mein to samjh hi gaya tha Behan mehfil mein aane hi nahi de rahi hogi.... Tumhe Nashe ki kya zaroorat pad gayi..... hehehhehe

Thanks for liking it.... aur haan ab to phone karna hi padega.... pata to chale kya dhun ban padi hai..., Pulkit bhi gunguna raha hai....lol

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Pyaar ka ya Zindagi ka...
Nasha kare jao...

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wah ji wah mere sweetu ko to masti chhahyi hai

ab kya kahen daanten ki kush ho shrab mai bhi

hmmmm chlo kush raho ji
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bahut khoob!!! - 1st May 2006, 01:08 PM

hello rohin ji

wakai bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne...

aise hi likhte rahiye

keep smiling like dis

hehehe(kidding)


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wah ji wah mere sweetu ko to masti chhahyi hai

ab kya kahen daanten ki kush ho shrab mai bhi

hmmmm chlo kush raho ji
and likhte raho

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Shrdha di,

Masti to chadhni hi hai... zindagi ka nasha jo kiya hai... is nashe mein se nikalna mushkil hai...

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Re: bahut khoob!!! - 2nd May 2006, 04:05 AM

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Originally posted by aapki_anamika
hello rohin ji

wakai bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne...

aise hi likhte rahiye

keep smiling like dis

hehehe(kidding)


take care
ur's shweta
Hi Shweta ji,

i am glad u liked it...
i will try to write ...

and u too keep smiling..

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