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Mera kuch saman tumhare pass pada hai....
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Mera kuch saman tumhare pass pada hai.... - 4th October 2005, 10:56 PM



Mera kuch saman tumhare pass pada hai
Ho sawan k kuch bheege-2 din rakhe hai
Aur mere ek khat mein lipati raat padi hai
Wo raat bujha do
Mera wo saman lota do


Patjhad mein kuch patto k girane ki aahat
Kaano mein ek baar pehan k lotayi thi
Patjhad ki wo sakh abhi tak kaap rahi hai
Wo sakh gira do
Mera wo saman lota do


Ek akeli chhatri mein jab
aadhe-2 bheeg rahe the
Aadhe sukhe aadhe gile
Sukha to mein le aayi thi
geela mann sayad bistar k pass pada ho
Wo bhijwa do
Mera wo saman lota do


Ek 100 sola chand ki raatein
Ek tumhare kandhe kati
Geeli mehandi ki kushboo
Jhuth mut k shikwe kuch
Jhuth mut k waade bhi sab yaad kara du
Sab bhijwado
Mera wo saman lota do

Ek ezajat de do bas
Jab ishko dafnaungi
Main bhi wahi So jaungi





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6th October 2005, 04:00 PM

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Ek ezajat de do bas
Jab ishko dafnaungi
Main bhi wahi So jaungi........





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6th October 2005, 04:23 PM

Mera kuch saman tumhare pass pada hai
Ho sawan k kuch bheege-2 din rakhe hai
Aur mere ek khat mein lipati raat padi hai
Wo raat bujha do
Mera wo saman lota do



Kya baat hai ji....ab ye sab kon lauta sakta hai....wah Gulzaar saahab waah.


atjhad mein kuch patto k girane ki aahat
Kaano mein ek baar pehan k lotayi thi
Patjhad ki wo sakh abhi tak kaap rahi hai
Wo sakh gira do
Mera wo saman lota do



ye Sher kuchh jiyaada hi gehra hai ji....but I like this too.


116 Chaand ki raatieN
Ek tumhaare kaaNdhe ka til


(pata nahi ye shaayar saahab ko hamaare khaaNde ke til ka
keise pata chal gaya... )

Geeli mehNdi ki khushboo
Jhooth mooth ke shiqve kuch....

Love this too...


Bahut khoob Diya ji....parhkar achchha laga...

Chaand


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Re: Mera kuch saman tumhare pass pada hai.... - 6th October 2005, 07:12 PM

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Mera kuch saman tumhare pass pada hai
Ho sawan k kuch bheege-2 din rakhe hai
Aur mere ek khat mein lipati raat padi hai
Wo raat bujha do
Mera wo saman lota do


Patjhad mein kuch patto k girane ki aahat
Kaano mein ek baar pehan k lotayi thi
Patjhad ki wo sakh abhi tak kaap rahi hai
Wo sakh gira do
Mera wo saman lota do


Ek akeli chhatri mein jab
aadhe-2 bheeg rahe the
Aadhe sukhe aadhe gile
Sukha to mein le aayi thi
geela mann sayad bistar k pass pada ho
Wo bhijwa do
Mera wo saman lota do


Ek 100 sola chand ki raatein
Ek tumhare kandhe kati
Geeli mehandi ki kushboo
Jhuth mut k shikwe kuch
Jhuth mut k waade bhi sab yaad kara du
Sab bhijwado
Mera wo saman lota do

Ek ezajat de do bas
Jab ishko dafnaungi
Main bhi wahi So jaungi





kuch rachna ka apna jaado aisa hota hai... jitni bhi baar padho... dil par kaboo kar leti hai......

shukria ise share karne k liye...
   
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hi - 6th October 2005, 11:30 PM

sach kaha meena


thanks for reply


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8th October 2005, 01:39 AM

badi khoobsurat ghazal hai..jabbhi ise sunti hoon college ke woh din yaad ata jab ise meine ghazal nite mein gaya tha....
dil ke bahaut kareeb hai yeh ghazal mere.


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hi farhana - 8th October 2005, 11:27 PM

Ye gazal hai hi itni achi farhana ji


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Thanx for sharin it... Puraani yaadein taza ho aayiin...
   
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28th October 2009, 10:57 PM

Dear Diya ji , ye GHAZAL nahi hei ye tou GEET hei aur GULZAR sahab ka geet hei jo film IJAZAAT ke lye bari khubsoorti se gaya hie..

Heraan hon ke MODS ki nigaah nahi paree aur isko GHAZAL section mein abhi bhi rehne diya itne replies ke baad

GHAZAL isko nahi kehte ..GHAZAL ............SHER se bantee hei ....................SHER 2 micron ka hota hei ...............aur eik GHAZAL mein kam se kam 4 ashaar aur behtar hei ke 5 ya us se barh ke hon ...........matla aur maqta hona zarori hie ghazal mein ...ghazal paaband hotee hei radeef qaafiya kee...

Aise hee bas ap sab se ye share karne ko ji chaha ek GHAZAL kiya hotee hei :-)

umeed hei garaan na guzra ho ga aur ainda hum sab samjh payen ge ke GHAZAL aur NAZM ka kiya farq hei .

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