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Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai.. - 11th August 2006, 04:14 AM

Ek ke baad ek musibaT jhel rahe hain..
Ek ho ke bhi Tanha ji rahe hain..

Kaun samjhe humare dil ka haal..
Kaun jaane hum saans kaise le rahe hain..

Juda ho ke To aadha jeevan kar liya apna..
Bas us aadhe ko poora karne ki koshish kar rahe hain..

Mushkilein hain jo kabhi daman nahi chodTi humara..
Kya kahein ki kaise nse jhoojhl rahe hain..

SaaTh ho ke bhi saaTh nahi mera masiaah..
Kaise kahein.. kaise usse door hum reh rahe hain..

KaThinaaiyan aaTi hain kabhi darr ki shakal me..
Kaise baTayein hum ki kaise saamna kar rahe hain..

SaaTh jeene marne ki kasmein kha ke bhi saaTh nahi aaj..
Kaise kahein.. hum kaise je rahe hain..

Bas marr rahe hain har pal har shann,
Unhe yaad kar kar bas khud ko koss rahe hain...

Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai..
Bas saansein chal rahi hain.. aur vakT kaaT rahe hain..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Re: Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai.. - 11th August 2006, 12:51 PM

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Ek ke baad ek musibaT jhel rahe hain..
Ek ho ke bhi Tanha ji rahe hain..

Kaun samjhe humare dil ka haal..
Kaun jaane hum saans kaise le rahe hain..

Juda ho ke To aadha jeevan kar liya apna..
Bas us aadhe ko poora karne ki koshish kar rahe hain..

Mushkilein hain jo kabhi daman nahi chodTi humara..
Kya kahein ki kaise nse jhoojhl rahe hain..

SaaTh ho ke bhi saaTh nahi mera masiaah..
Kaise kahein.. kaise usse door hum reh rahe hain..

KaThinaaiyan aaTi hain kabhi darr ki shakal me..
Kaise baTayein hum ki kaise saamna kar rahe hain..

SaaTh jeene marne ki kasmein kha ke bhi saaTh nahi aaj..
Kaise kahein.. hum kaise je rahe hain..

Bas marr rahe hain har pal har shann,
Unhe yaad kar kar bas khud ko koss rahe hain...

Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai..
Bas saansein chal rahi hain.. aur vakT kaaT rahe hain..

~Priya
priya bahut khoob likha hai ek ek shabad dil ko chu gaya......!

Kaun samjhe humare dil ka haal..
Kaun jaane hum saans kaise le rahe hain..

Arz kiya hai:

teri yaddo ke jakham mai sillu kaise,
sanas leti hu to jakham toot jatey hain......!

Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai..
Bas saansein chal rahi hain.. aur vakT kaaT rahe hain..

ek aur likhney ki gustakhi kar rahi hu:

eh mere mahboob gujrati nahi zindgi ab bin tere,
tu joothy se hi kah de ki hum tere hain......!

bahut gahrai mai likha tumne priya, dard par daad kaya du, shayri bahut acchi hai.

tumari didi


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Re: Re: Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai.. - 15th August 2006, 06:01 PM

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priya bahut khoob likha hai ek ek shabad dil ko chu gaya......!

Kaun samjhe humare dil ka haal..
Kaun jaane hum saans kaise le rahe hain..

Arz kiya hai:

teri yaddo ke jakham mai sillu kaise,
sanas leti hu to jakham toot jatey hain......!


Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai..
Bas saansein chal rahi hain.. aur vakT kaaT rahe hain..

ek aur likhney ki gustakhi kar rahi hu:

eh mere mahboob gujrati nahi zindgi ab bin tere,
tu joothy se hi kah de ki hum tere hain......!


bahut gahrai mai likha tumne priya, dard par daad kaya du, shayri bahut acchi hai.

tumari didi
Dard ko samajh kar dard paida hoTa hai..
Dard se hi dard door hoTa hai..
Kaun samjhe yeh gehraaiyan dard ki..
Jab dil roTa hai To bahuT dard hoTa hai...

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne bhi di..

Shukriya mere dard ko apna banaane ke liye..

~Prii



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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15th August 2006, 07:18 PM

priya ji,
bahut acha likha aapne.yeh sher ache lage,

Bas marr rahe hain har pal har shann,
Unhe yaad kar kar bas khud ko koss rahe hain...

Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai..
Bas saansein chal rahi hain.. aur vakT kaaT rahe hain..

likhti rahiye yunhin.


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16th August 2006, 11:40 AM

KaThinaaiyan aaTi hain kabhi darr ki shakal me..
Kaise baTayein hum ki kaise saamna kar rahe hain..


Hello Priya

U have written nicely....priya itna dard bhara likha hay...mann udas ho gaya itna dard dekh...cheer up...dukh aatein hain to sukh bhi aayaingey....ek geet yaad aa raha hay Zindagi ki yahi reet hay haar ke baad hi jeet hay...thodey Ansuun hain thodi kushi...aaj gum hay to kal hay kushi...keep smiling

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hi priya ji
its very nice again ,i think u r writng after a long time



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Hmmm....

Priya...accha likha hai... though kaafi dard hai isme... but you have expressed it well.... keep writing like this.... take care too...


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priya ji,
bahut acha likha aapne.yeh sher ache lage,

Bas marr rahe hain har pal har shann,
Unhe yaad kar kar bas khud ko koss rahe hain...

Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai..
Bas saansein chal rahi hain.. aur vakT kaaT rahe hain..

likhti rahiye yunhin.
Akelijaan ji..

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapko mera likha kuch pasand aaya...

bas shabd umadte rahe aur unhe kaagaz pe utaarti gayi.. sher kab ban gaye, sach maaniye to abhi bhi nahi jaanti..

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka ek baar phir..

yun hi housla badhaati rahengi.. to likhne ki koshish jaari rahegi..

take care..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Kaise baTayein hum ki kaise saamna kar rahe hain..


Hello Priya

U have written nicely....priya itna dard bhara likha hay...mann udas ho gaya itna dard dekh...cheer up...dukh aatein hain to sukh bhi aayaingey....ek geet yaad aa raha hay Zindagi ki yahi reet hay haar ke baad hi jeet hay...thodey Ansuun hain thodi kushi...aaj gum hay to kal hay kushi...keep smiling

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Sukanya ji..

I'm so sorry.. aapko udas karne ka mera maksad bilkul bhi nahi tha..

jaanti hun dukhon ke baad khushiyan zaroor aati hain.. bas abhi kuch dukh aur dard ka daur chal raha hai.. hounsla na kabhi choda hai maine nahi chodungi kabhi..

itna kuch dekha hai.. yeh bhi guzar jayega..

mera dard samjhne ke liye bahut bhut shukriya aapka..

Take Care..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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hi priya ji
its very nice again ,i think u r writng after a long time
Thanx!!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Hmmm....

Priya...accha likha hai... though kaafi dard hai isme... but you have expressed it well.... keep writing like this.... take care too...
Bhaiya..

Itni der se reply karne ke liye maafi chaahti hun..

Bahut bahut shukriya jo aapko yeh pasand aaya..

Take Care..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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27th December 2006, 11:03 AM

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Ek ke baad ek musibaT jhel rahe hain..
Ek ho ke bhi Tanha ji rahe hain..

Kaun samjhe humare dil ka haal..
Kaun jaane hum saans kaise le rahe hain..

Juda ho ke To aadha jeevan kar liya apna..
Bas us aadhe ko poora karne ki koshish kar rahe hain..

Mushkilein hain jo kabhi daman nahi chodTi humara..
Kya kahein ki kaise nse jhoojhl rahe hain..

SaaTh ho ke bhi saaTh nahi mera masiaah..
Kaise kahein.. kaise usse door hum reh rahe hain..

KaThinaaiyan aaTi hain kabhi darr ki shakal me..
Kaise baTayein hum ki kaise saamna kar rahe hain..

SaaTh jeene marne ki kasmein kha ke bhi saaTh nahi aaj..
Kaise kahein.. hum kaise je rahe hain..

Bas marr rahe hain har pal har shann,
Unhe yaad kar kar bas khud ko koss rahe hain...

Kaise kahein ki hum kaise jee rahein hai..
Bas saansein chal rahi hain.. aur vakT kaaT rahe hain..

~Priya
priya ji ko raj ka salaam....is kalaam ke jriye aapke ehsaaso se rubru hone ka mooka mila.....saach mein dil ki gehrai se nikle huye ehsaaso ko bakhubi lafzon mein pirookar bhut hee ache tareeke se pesh kiya hai aapne is kaarguzari par hamari dil se daad hazir hai....yu hee likhti rahiye.......take care.......raj......


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27th December 2006, 12:23 PM

priya didi namskaar

aapke is kalaam meiN kiska intezar aur us iNrezaar ko khatam khtm ho jaye uske peeche chhupi hui bekarari si nazar aayi mujhe

aapNe apne ehsaasoN ko jis tarike se bayaaN kiya haiN diil ko chhu gaye aapke ehsaas dua karta huN k bahot jald iNtezar khtam ho aur kushuiyaaN hamesa k liye kadam chhume aapke

khus rahiyeN aur sada muskurati rahiyeN

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priya ji ko raj ka salaam....is kalaam ke jriye aapke ehsaaso se rubru hone ka mooka mila.....saach mein dil ki gehrai se nikle huye ehsaaso ko bakhubi lafzon mein pirookar bhut hee ache tareeke se pesh kiya hai aapne is kaarguzari par hamari dil se daad hazir hai....yu hee likhti rahiye.......take care.......raj......
Shukriya Raj ji..

Take Care..

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priya didi namskaar

aapke is kalaam meiN kiska intezar aur us iNrezaar ko khatam khtm ho jaye uske peeche chhupi hui bekarari si nazar aayi mujhe

aapNe apne ehsaasoN ko jis tarike se bayaaN kiya haiN diil ko chhu gaye aapke ehsaas dua karta huN k bahot jald iNtezar khtam ho aur kushuiyaaN hamesa k liye kadam chhume aapke

khus rahiyeN aur sada muskurati rahiyeN

aapka shaitaaN bhai
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Haan Bhaiya...

Aisa hi hai...

Bas ab to intzaar hai is intzaar ke khatam hone ka...

Shukriya meri rachna ko pasand karne ke liye..

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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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