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Thumbs up "MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u always - 19th September 2006, 09:05 AM

samjhti hai wo mujhe achhi tarh se,
kyuki dil ki bahot hi sachchi hai wo...................

sama badal jata hai uske aanese,
meri is duniya ki ranginiyat hai wo..................

dil me basi hai sirf wohi har taraf,
dil ki har dhadkn me basi hai wo..................

sanse bhi chalti hai uske ishare se,
meri har sanso me chhupi hai wo....................

uske liye jitna likhu kam hai utna,
bahot hi achhi aur pyaari hai wo................

ujala lati hai wo jindagi me meri,
main hu jalta diya aur roshni hai wo..............

safar hai zindgi bhar ka ye hamara,
main hu navik aur meri kashti hai wo..............

dil bahot sochta hai kyu uske liye itna,
bas meri is zindagi ki har khusi hai wo..............

khwabo ki duniya sajayi hai usne,
meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo.................








A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...................


meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo....................................


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...

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Re: "MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u alw - 19th September 2006, 09:07 AM

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samjhti hai wo mujhe achhi tarh se,
kyuki dil ki bahot hi sachchi hai wo...................

sama badal jata hai uske aanese,
meri is duniya ki ranginiyat hai wo..................

dil me basi hai sirf wohi har taraf,
dil ki har dhadkn me basi hai wo..................

sanse bhi chalti haiuske ishare se,
meri har sanso me chhupi hai wo....................

uske liye jitnalikhu utna kam hai,
bahot hi achhi aur pyaari hai wo................

ujala lati hai wo jindagi me meri,
main hu jalta diya aur roshni hai wo..............

safar hai zindgi bhar ka ye hamara,
main hu navik aur meri kashti hai wo..............

dil bahot sochta hai kyu uske liye itna,
bas meri is zindagi ki har khusi hai wo..............

khwabo ki duniya sajayi hai usne,
meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo.................








A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...................


meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo....................................
wel done dhaval
bahut acche
ab tumhari shayri main bahut nikhar aane laga hai.....
ase hi hamesha likhte raho
meri dua hamesha tumhare shath hai

dil se merri daad kabool farmaiyega

aapka ek begana sa dost
dilip

dhaval ji aapka massage box fiull hai pls use khali kigiye


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hi - 19th September 2006, 12:23 PM

Dhaval ji,

bahut behtar likhane lage hain...
dusere sher mein ranginiyat aur last sher mein sahjaadi shabd ka pryog nahi hona chahiye tha.
aapki lekhani mein mein dheeme dheeme sudhar aa jayega..
phir ek din mukammal likhane legenge aap..


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Re: "MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u alw - 19th September 2006, 12:32 PM

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Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
samjhti hai wo mujhe achhi tarh se,
kyuki dil ki bahot hi sachchi hai wo...................

sama badal jata hai uske aanese,
meri is duniya ki ranginiyat hai wo..................

dil me basi hai sirf wohi har taraf,
dil ki har dhadkn me basi hai wo..................

sanse bhi chalti hai uske ishare se,
meri har sanso me chhupi hai wo....................

uske liye jitna likhu kam hai utna,
bahot hi achhi aur pyaari hai wo................

ujala lati hai wo jindagi me meri,
main hu jalta diya aur roshni hai wo..............

safar hai zindgi bhar ka ye hamara,
main hu navik aur meri kashti hai wo..............

dil bahot sochta hai kyu uske liye itna,
bas meri is zindagi ki har khusi hai wo..............

khwabo ki duniya sajayi hai usne,
meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo.................








A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...................


meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo....................................
aaj to sab ne tareef kar di aapki mein bhi karu kya???

karni to paegi hi aapne itna achha jo likha hai. aaj aapki shayri me ehasaas ke saath shabd bhi bahot achhe hai.

unhi likhte jaiye yahi dua hai.

gratse

aapki dost
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Re: "MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u alw - 19th September 2006, 01:58 PM

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Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
samjhti hai wo mujhe achhi tarh se,
kyuki dil ki bahot hi sachchi hai wo...................

sama badal jata hai uske aanese,
meri is duniya ki ranginiyat hai wo..................

dil me basi hai sirf wohi har taraf,
dil ki har dhadkn me basi hai wo..................

sanse bhi chalti hai uske ishare se,
meri har sanso me chhupi hai wo....................

uske liye jitna likhu kam hai utna,
bahot hi achhi aur pyaari hai wo................

ujala lati hai wo jindagi me meri,
main hu jalta diya aur roshni hai wo..............

safar hai zindgi bhar ka ye hamara,
main hu navik aur meri kashti hai wo..............

dil bahot sochta hai kyu uske liye itna,
bas meri is zindagi ki har khusi hai wo..............

khwabo ki duniya sajayi hai usne,
meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo.................








A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...................


meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo....................................
dear dhaval, bahut khoob , har share mukamal share hai. bahut accha lagta hai tumhey yu aagey badtey dekhna. yu hi likhtey raho hamesha.

take care

tumhari di


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19th September 2006, 05:02 PM

wel done dhaval
bahut acche
ab tumhari shayri main bahut nikhar aane laga hai.....
ase hi hamesha likhte raho
meri dua hamesha tumhare shath hai

dil se merri daad kabool farmaiyega

aapka ek begana sa dost
dilip

dhaval ji aapka massage box fiull hai pls use khali kigiye


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19th September 2006, 05:07 PM

Dhaval ji,

bahut behtar likhane lage hain...
dusere sher mein ranginiyat aur last sher mein sahjaadi shabd ka pryog nahi hona chahiye tha.
aapki lekhani mein mein dheeme dheeme sudhar aa jayega..
phir ek din mukammal likhane legenge aap..


Akant...


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akant ji
achha laga ye janke k aapne jo suggations diye the
aise hi likha maine aur aapko pasand aaya bahot hi achha laga akantji

apne mujhe bahot help ki ye dost
aapka abhari hai

aise hi suggetions dete rahiyega

achha lagta hai mujhe

shukriya aapka bahot bahot

aate rahiyega

aapka dost
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19th September 2006, 05:10 PM

aaj to sab ne tareef kar di aapki mein bhi karu kya???

karni to paegi hi aapne itna achha jo likha hai. aaj aapki shayri me ehasaas ke saath shabd bhi bahot achhe hai.

unhi likhte jaiye yahi dua hai.

gratse

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Aapko Tanha Karke Hum Kaha Jayenge,
Jinda To Hum Aaj Bhi Nahi,
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ye ehsas hi to hai mere jiski wajah se mujhe bahot mehnet nahi karni padti har peshkas banaen me

asan ho jaiti hai ehsas ki wajah se


aapko pasand aayi ye peshkas bahot hi achha laga
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19th September 2006, 05:13 PM

dear dhaval, bahut khoob , har share mukamal share hai. bahut accha lagta hai tumhey yu aagey badtey dekhna. yu hi likhtey raho hamesha.

take care

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aur ye aapke ashirwad ka hi to natija hai

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bas yehi chahta hu k meri is sister ka aashirwad hamesha mere sath rahe

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