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Nari khilona nahi hai - 21st April 2007, 02:00 AM

Waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do
Usse uska adhikar de do
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahrye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop ko
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saammaan hai.

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21st April 2007, 09:28 AM

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Waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do
Usse uska adhikar de do
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahrye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop ko
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saammaan hai.

Nira
nira ji ...aapke vichar padey bahut accha lagga...ji ha...aap sahi kah rahi hai ki nari khilona nahi hai....yeh baat humey kuad ko bhi samjani hai aur doosron ko bhi samjani hai...taki phir koi nari par julam karne ki himakat na kar sake...aapka yu hi saath banna rahaeyga, to yakeenan aapke vicharo se hamari naujawaan pedi ki yubtiyan kuch sabak seekeygi aur kuad ko kisi ke haath ka khilona nahi banney dengi.
yu hi aati rahiyega..

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21st April 2007, 09:43 AM

very well written nira ji

jazbaat achhe hai aur sachhe bhi par gustakhi ke liye maafi chahuga par aaj kal ki ladkiyon ko dekhe to shayad aap unko khilona nahi keh sakegi

aur unhone to ladko ko khilona bana rakha hai. aur yeh ladke bhi aise hai ki kuch lamho ke saath ke liye kisi bhi hadd tak gir jaate hai aur apni image gava dete hai.

i m really very very sorry if i hurt anyone.. par maine yehi mehsus kiya hai

and i m not saying that all are same... hope you all understand.

par nira ji aapki koshish achhi hai. likhte rahiye



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21st April 2007, 10:32 AM

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very well written nira ji

jazbaat achhe hai aur sachhe bhi par gustakhi ke liye maafi chahuga par aaj kal ki ladkiyon ko dekhe to shayad aap unko khilona nahi keh sakegi

aur unhone to ladko ko khilona bana rakha hai. aur yeh ladke bhi aise hai ki kuch lamho ke saath ke liye kisi bhi hadd tak gir jaate hai aur apni image gava dete hai.

i m really very very sorry if i hurt anyone.. par maine yehi mehsus kiya hai

and i m not saying that all are same... hope you all understand.

par nira ji aapki koshish achhi hai. likhte rahiye
Jasdeep ji

har pahloo ke do roop hote hain koi ache koi bure. apne anpe experiences hain. bura maan.ne koi baat nahi hai, chahti to yeh hoon kisi ko bhi koi dukh naa mile, par hota hai yeh naa so. aapke vichar jankar acha laga. bahut bahut shukriya.
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21st April 2007, 11:15 AM

meri feelings ko samajhne ke liye bahur bahur meharbaani aur umeed hai ki aap aage bhi apni pyaari pyaari nazmo ko hamare nazar karti rahengi..........



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21st April 2007, 12:18 PM

nira didi namskaaR:

bahot hi sahii baat kahi hai aapne apni kaavisH meiN..

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saammaan hai.


yeH sab se achHaa rahaa..aise hi liKhte raheN

apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

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nira ji ...aapke vichar padey bahut accha lagga...ji ha...aap sahi kah rahi hai ki nari khilona nahi hai....yeh baat humey kuad ko bhi samjani hai aur doosron ko bhi samjani hai...taki phir koi nari par julam karne ki himakat na kar sake...aapka yu hi saath banna rahaeyga, to yakeenan aapke vicharo se hamari naujawaan pedi ki yubtiyan kuch sabak seekeygi aur kuad ko kisi ke haath ka khilona nahi banney dengi.
yu hi aati rahiyega..

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Sunita ji.
Aap mere jazbaaton se sehmaath ho yeh jankar khushi huyi. waqt ke saath kayi haalaton se guzarte nari ko dekha hai. aapko mera likha pasand aaya dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon. yunhi hi saath rahiyega.

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meri feelings ko samajhne ke liye bahur bahur meharbaani aur umeed hai ki aap aage bhi apni pyaari pyaari nazmo ko hamare nazar karti rahengi..........
Jasdeep ji.
Aap sab ka saath milt raha, koshish karoongi aap sab ki umeed par khari utar sakoon.

thanks aor plz mind naa kar meri baat ka.

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Waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do
Usse uska adhikar de do
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahrye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop ko
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saammaan hai.

Nira

nira ji namaskar

bahut accha laga aapka ye kalam
narii ki shaktii ko koun nahi janta per hain kuch insan jo nahi jante ki narii kya kar saktii hai............ narii srajan hai wo vidhwansh ban jaye to is sansar ka kya hoga bhagwan malik hai

aapke is kalam ko tahe dil se naman

shukriyaa

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nira didi namskaaR:

bahot hi sahii baat kahi hai aapne apni kaavisH meiN..

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saammaan hai.

yeH sab se achHaa rahaa..aise hi liKhte raheN

apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

aapka shaitaan
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aapka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon aapko meri nazam aor iske ehsaas pasand aaye,

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nira ji namaskar

bahut accha laga aapka ye kalam
narii ki shaktii ko koun nahi janta per hain kuch insan jo nahi jante ki narii kya kar saktii hai............ narii srajan hai wo vidhwansh ban jaye to is sansar ka kya hoga bhagwan malik hai

aapke is kalam ko tahe dil se naman

shukriyaa

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aapne ghahrayi se is nazm ko jaana uski rooh ko samajha, tah-e-dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.

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24th April 2007, 10:05 AM

are main kyun maind karne laga bhala... hamare is shayri ke parivaar ki yehi to khasiyat hai ki ham apni feelings share kar sakte hain aur jo dil mein aaye use keh sakte hai.
keep writing.......
Gud Luck



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are main kyun maind karne laga bhala... hamare is shayri ke parivaar ki yehi to khasiyat hai ki ham apni feelings share kar sakte hain aur jo dil mein aaye use keh sakte hai.
keep writing.......
Gud Luck
thanks jasdeep ji

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Nira ji..

Aaj shaayad aapko pehli baad padhne ka mauka milla hai mujhe..

Aur aapne bahut hi naazuk mudda uthaaya hai... jo ki sharm ki baat hai ki aaj bhi sachaai hai... aaj bhi aise ghatiya log hain to stree ko sirf ek jism hi samjhte hain..

Bahut khoobsoorti se aapne Stree Adhikaar ki saari baatein kahin.. behad pasand aayin..

Meri Daad kubool keejiye..

Aapki agli post ka intzaar rahega dost..

Take Care..

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Nira ji..

Aaj shaayad aapko pehli baad padhne ka mauka milla hai mujhe..

Aur aapne bahut hi naazuk mudda uthaaya hai... jo ki sharm ki baat hai ki aaj bhi sachaai hai... aaj bhi aise ghatiya log hain to stree ko sirf ek jism hi samjhte hain..

Bahut khoobsoorti se aapne Stree Adhikaar ki saari baatein kahin.. behad pasand aayin..

Meri Daad kubool keejiye..

Aapki agli post ka intzaar rahega dost..

Take Care..

~Priya
Priya ji

pyaar bhara namashkar.
aapko yahan dekhkar bahut abha laga. sahi kaha aapne hamara samaj aaj bhi stree ko vo maan, saamaan nahi de paya hai jiski vo hakdaar hai. aapko meri nazm pasand aayi dil se shukriya adaa karti hoon.

apna khayal rakhiyega.

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