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22nd March 2010, 01:42 PM
faisla karne se pahele meri achchiyaN gin lena
Har insaan mein anginat buraiyaaN hoti hai
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22nd March 2010, 02:01 PM
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faisla karne se pahele meri achchiyaN gin lena
Har insaan mein anginat buraiyaaN hoti hai
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Badaltey faislon par itebaar mat karna..
achchaiyan buraiyan ginne walon se pyar mat karna
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Kwaab se juda -
22nd March 2010, 02:58 PM
kwaab se juda aarzu me na mila khuda
kaha hai vo shaks duniya me moujuda.
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Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi
par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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22nd March 2010, 10:07 PM
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frineds.. kuchh examples de raha huuN....
jaise kii pahela Sher hai..
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh ess tarah ho sakta hai...
ishq me.n jaa.N se guzarate hai.n guzarane vaale
maut kii raah nahii.n dekhate marane vaale
aur phir ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh es tarah de sakte haiN...
us lab-o-chashm se hai zindagii-o-maut apanii
kab-kabhii pal me.n jilaayaa kabhii pal me.n maaraa
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janab jawab arz hai.
AAPKE IS SHER K JAWAB MEIN MIRZA GHALIB KEHTE HAIN,
ISHQ PER ZOR NAHIN YE HAI WOH AATISH GHAALIB
JO LAGAYE NA LAGE AUR BUJHAYE NA BANE.
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22nd March 2010, 10:12 PM
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hmm.. answer sahiii hai aur rabt bhii dono SheroN meiN.. yeh Sher waise bhii mera pasandidah Sher hai... so, thanks too
ab ess Sher ke jawaab meiN, Ek Sher arz hai...
zamii.n pe chal na sakaa aasmaan se bhii gayaa
kaTaa ke par ko parindaa uDaan se bhii gayaa
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is ke baare mein kya raye hai
aate hi kunj-e-qafas mein chup si mujh ko lag gai
le ude kya hosh tere taaqat-e-parwaaz bhi.
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22nd March 2010, 10:15 PM
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faisla karne se pahele meri achchiyaN gin lena
Har insaan mein anginat buraiyaaN hoti hai
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agar aap ek "uncomplete dream" hain to please apna naam khwahish ki bjaye hasrat rakh len, kyuki hasrat ke meaning hote hain uncomplete dream na k khwahish ke
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22nd March 2010, 10:28 PM
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Am Always ready to LEARN
But HATE being taught
khuda ke rasool ne farmaya hai ke aqalmand woh hai jo nasihat per amal kare ab faisla aapke haath hai ke aap kya hain.
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Har sawaal ka -
23rd March 2010, 07:32 AM
Har sawaal ka jawab is duniya nahi milta
ye aasma bhi har yakeen se nahi jhukta
teri had tak meri dua ka asar ho jayega
itni aasani se sab ek pal me nahi milta.
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23rd March 2010, 11:13 AM
hosh waalo me jara kam nikale samjhdaari ke andaaz
jose waalo ne rakhe hai jami pe emaandaari ke aagaaz.
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23rd March 2010, 11:24 AM
[quote=shaikh ashri;386764]
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Originally Posted by Baqtiar
Am Always ready to LEARN
But HATE being taught
khuda ke rasool ne farmaya hai ke aqalmand woh hai jo nasihat per amal kare ab faisla aapke haath hai ke aap kya hain.
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Kahin aap Urdu medium se tou nahi ho.....???
If you can read and understand English than do interpret my signature correctly.... (Else keep your two cents with yourself - apke kaam ayegi)
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23rd March 2010, 12:37 PM
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agar aap ek "uncomplete dream" hain to please apna naam khwahish ki bjaye hasrat rakh len, kyuki hasrat ke meaning hote hain uncomplete dream na k khwahish ke
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A dhakan......... tab izzat se samjhaya tha ab samjhane ke liye chance mat dena...... tumme kitna hunar hai dikhao nukta chini karni hai karo par mera dimag kharab kiya naa to na yahan chain se aa paonge naa aane ki sochonge.... samjhe... Its a Last warning to you....
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23rd March 2010, 12:56 PM
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A dhakan......... tab izzat se samjhaya tha ab samjhane ke liye chance mat dena...... tumme kitna hunar hai dikhao nukta chini karni hai karo par mera dimag kharab kiya naa to na yahan chain se aa paonge naa aane ki sochonge.... samjhe... Its a Last warning to you....
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Olley Olley Olley.....Bachey ko gussa agaya....hahahaha
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23rd March 2010, 02:18 PM
Pyar mein log andhey aur Behrey Ban jatey hai
Baad mein apni mashooq ke bachon ke mamu banjatey hai
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23rd March 2010, 02:26 PM
Ye tou Ayshoooo se poochna padega hahahaha
Waise kaisa laga apni hi mashoooq ki shadi attend kar ke hahaha
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24th March 2010, 02:54 PM
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Ye tou Ayshoooo se poochna padega hahahaha
Waise kaisa laga apni hi mashoooq ki shadi attend kar ke hahaha
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Haan woh to teri bahen hi hai puch lena........
Abey main itna bada ******** nahi huN ek ke liye pagal hone ko...
Kuch to fitrat mujh mein teri hi hai.....
Kuch tabiyat apni aisi hai
Fitrat bhi tere hi jaisi hai
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12th April 2010, 12:22 AM
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Kuch tabiyat apni aisi hai
Fitrat bhi tere hi jaisi hai
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pls sher hi likhiye, baateN aap PM mein bhi kar sakte haiN.
faasale aise bhii ho.nge ye kabhii sochaa na thaa
saamane baiThaa thaa mere aur vo meraa na thaa
vo ki Khushbuu kii tarah phailaa thaa mere chaar suu
mai.n use mahasuus kar sakataa thaa chhuu sakataa na thaa
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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12th April 2010, 10:49 AM
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pls sher hi likhiye, baateN aap PM mein bhi kar sakte haiN.
faasale aise bhii ho.nge ye kabhii sochaa na thaa
saamane baiThaa thaa mere aur vo meraa na thaa
vo ki Khushbuu kii tarah phailaa thaa mere chaar suu
mai.n use mahasuus kar sakataa thaa chhuu sakataa na thaa
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Hum bhi darya hai hamein apna hunar maloom hai
Jis taraaf bhi chal padengey raasta hojayega.........
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12th April 2010, 10:54 AM
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Hum bhi darya hai hamein apna hunar maloom hai
Jis taraaf bhi chal padengey raasta hojayega.........
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batoN batoN mai chura leta huN dil
kisi ne bataya nahi mujhe hunar mera
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12th April 2010, 03:06 PM
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batoN batoN mai chura leta huN dil
kisi ne bataya nahi mujhe hunar mera
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maine lafzoN ko baratne ka hunar seekha hai
uska har lafz mere dil pe asar karta hai
(With a slight change)
----------"kshitiz"
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12th April 2010, 04:09 PM
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maine lafzoN ko baratne ka hunar seekha hai
uska har lafz mere dil pe asar karta hai
(With a slight change)
----------"kshitiz"
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Dil tod ker judaane wale andaaz hia unke
Aisa hunar hi nahi katilana mijaaz hai unke
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14th April 2010, 12:59 PM
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Dil tod ker judaane wale andaaz hia unke
Aisa hunar hi nahi katilana mijaaz hai unke
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barbadiyo ka dour shuru hai abhi hua
badle hain yun mijaaz ki kuch bhi nahi hua
ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai.
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14th April 2010, 02:48 PM
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barbadiyo ka dour shuru hai abhi hua
badle hain yun mijaaz ki kuch bhi nahi hua
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"badal gaye haiN woh khud aaj mausmoN ki tarah,
woh jo kahte thy ki mausam badalne wala hai"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th April 2010, 02:53 PM
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"badal gaye haiN woh khud aaj mausmoN ki tarah,
woh jo kahte thy ki mausam badalne wala hai"
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Soch samjh ker hi kuch kehna unse
Woh mousam ki tarha miaz rakte hai
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Har baat-baatpar -
14th April 2010, 04:11 PM
Har baat-baat par wafa ko daav par na lagya karo
apne zameer par aks rakho aur hath bhadhya karo.
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Har baat-baat par wafa ko daav par na lagya karo
apne zameer par aks rakho aur hath bhadhya karo.
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ik aks kureda tha kabhi jo apne seene me
meri ankho se bahta hai lahu bankar vafao ka
ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai.
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14th April 2010, 10:35 PM
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ik aks kureda tha kabhi jo apne seene me
meri ankho se bahta hai lahu bankar vafao ka
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"meri waffaoN ka silla aap kya detey hazoor,
aap to aaj tak waffa ke naam se anjaan haiN"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th April 2010, 11:09 PM
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"meri waffaoN ka silla aap kya detey hazoor,
aap to aaj tak waffa ke naam se anjaan haiN"
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Gar Milti Wafaa Sab Ko Zamaane Me
Toh Be-Wafaa Kahaa Jaate...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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15th April 2010, 01:05 PM
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Gar Milti Wafaa Sab Ko Zamaane Me
Toh Be-Wafaa Kahaa Jaate...
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Kya kahenge bewafa hai jo Kwahish
Kaise nibhaye wafaa humse puchiye
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15th April 2010, 01:59 PM
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Kya kahenge bewafa hai jo Kwahish
Kaise nibhaye wafaa humse puchiye
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woh kisi aur ka ho to gaya tha yakeenan
bewafa tum bhi nikle na magar uske baad
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15th April 2010, 02:04 PM
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woh kisi aur ka ho to gaya tha yakeenan
bewafa tum bhi nikle na magar uske baad
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Main jafaa na karta to tum bewafa kahlate
Kisi ek hisse dard e yaar aaye achcha hai..
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15th April 2010, 02:10 PM
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Main jafaa na karta to tum bewafa kahlate
Kisi ek hisse dard e yaar aaye achcha hai..
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dard diya par kyun humdard nahi
e-khuda tu aurat hogi mard nahi
dont b personal plz
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dard diya par kyun humdard nahi
e-khuda tu aurat hogi mard nahi
dont b personal plz
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Yaar Bhai aap bhi naa......... Khair koun kah sakta hai..
Humne chahaa mohobbat mein khuda dekheN
Log HaiN daulat pe IamaaN banaye baithe hai
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15th April 2010, 02:25 PM
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Yaar Bhai aap bhi naa......... Khair koun kah sakta hai..
Humne chahaa mohobbat mein khuda dekheN
Log HaiN daulat pe IamaaN banaye baithe hai
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Khuda ne to ik hi baar banaya tha humeN
Woh mohabbat mai baar baar banate* rahe
banana .... to create
banana ... to make fool
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15th April 2010, 02:29 PM
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Khuda ne to ik hi baar banaya tha humeN
Woh mohabbat mai baar baar banate* rahe
banana .... to create
banana ... to make fool
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Hm amazing..... achcha khayal hai ...
Aayi kahan mere hisse hi meri KwahisheN
Loot ley gaya sab kuch mera dil lutne wala
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Hm amazing..... achcha khayal hai ...
Aayi kahan mere hisse hi meri KwahisheN
Loot ley gaya sab kuch mera dil lutne wala
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Kisi ko deta na maiN kheer ma ki banayee huee
chand aaj bhi mujhse apna hissa mangta hai
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15th April 2010, 02:40 PM
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Kisi ko deta na maiN kheer ma ki banayee huee
chand aaj bhi mujhse apna hissa mangta hai
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Chaht hai tujh par uski to mujh par bhi hai
Bhai maa sirf teri hi nahi woh meri bhi hai
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Chaht hai tujh par uski to mujh par bhi hai
Bhai maa sirf teri hi nahi woh meri bhi hai
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Meri maa ke anchal se chaand
bata tune kitne sitare lootey
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Meri maa ke anchal se chaand
bata tune kitne sitare lootey
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Yeh jo sitare hai, sab tumhare hai
Tere zid ke aage toot ke haare hai
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