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LoVe Is tRu B't N't LoVeR
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bohut khoobsoorat ho tum...... -
8th August 2008, 05:01 PM
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Agar Main Jo Kehdoon Mohobbat Hai Tumse,
Tho Mujhko Khudaara Galat Mat Samajhna,
Ke Meri Zaroorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Koobsoorat Ho Tum,
Ye Chehra Tumhaara Ke Din Hai Sunehra,
Aur Uspar Ye Kaali Ghataaon Ka Pehra,
Gulaabon Sa Naazuk Mehekta Badan Hai,
Ye Lab Hain Tumhaare Ke Khilta Chaman Hai,
Bikheron Na Zulfen, Tho Sharmaayen Baadal,
Farishtey Bhi Dekhen Tho Hojaayen Paagal,
Wo Pakeeza Moorath Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Hain Phoolon Ki Daali Ye Baahen Tumhaari,
Hai Khaamosh Jaadu Nigaahen Tumhaari,
Jo kaanten Hon Sab Apni Daaman Mein Bhar Loon,
Bichaawoon Main Kaliyon Se Raahen Tumhaari,
Nazar Se Zamaane Ki Khudko Bachaana,
Kisi Aur Se Dekho Dil Na Lagaana,
Ke Meri Amaanath Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsurat Ho Tum,
Jo Banke Kali Muskuraati Hai Aksar,
Shab-e-Hijr Mein Wo Rulaati Hai Aksar,
Jo Lamhon Hi Lamhon Mein Duniya Badalde,
Jo Shaayar Ko Milti Hai Pehloo Ghazal Se,
Chupaana Jo Paawoon Chupaa Hi Na Paawoon,
Bhulaana Jo Paawoon Bhulaa Hi Na Paawoon,
Wo Pehli Mohabbat Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsurat Ho Tum,
Agar Main Jo Kehdoon Mohobbat Hai Tumse,
Tho Mujhko Khudaara Galat Mat Samajhna,
Ke Meri Zaroorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Koobsoorat Ho Tum..............
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
S@N@ KH@N
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8th August 2008, 05:18 PM
nice creation.....
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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LoVe Is tRu B't N't LoVeR
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8th August 2008, 10:24 PM
thanxxxxxxxxx sunita ji yeh meri collection hai ............
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
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9th August 2008, 12:38 AM
lovely nice one
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9th August 2008, 03:44 AM
Thx Meer......
KOI ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE,
JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE,
PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE,
MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE,
AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI,
KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI,
HO JAYE WOH KASH MERA MUJHE KHONE SE PEHLE,
JO ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE.
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9th August 2008, 03:48 AM
thanxxxxxxxxxxx meer.......
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
S@N@ KH@N
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9th August 2008, 12:41 PM
wah ji kya feelings hain bahot bahot khoob
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9th August 2008, 06:37 PM
thanxxxxxxxx meerrrrr.......
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
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10th August 2008, 05:49 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sanaji
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Agar Main Jo Kehdoon Mohobbat Hai Tumse,
Tho Mujhko Khudaara Galat Mat Samajhna,
Ke Meri Zaroorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Koobsoorat Ho Tum,
Ye Chehra Tumhaara Ke Din Hai Sunehra,
Aur Uspar Ye Kaali Ghataaon Ka Pehra,
Gulaabon Sa Naazuk Mehekta Badan Hai,
Ye Lab Hain Tumhaare Ke Khilta Chaman Hai,
Bikheron Na Zulfen, Tho Sharmaayen Baadal,
Farishtey Bhi Dekhen Tho Hojaayen Paagal,
Wo Pakeeza Moorath Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Hain Phoolon Ki Daali Ye Baahen Tumhaari,
Hai Khaamosh Jaadu Nigaahen Tumhaari,
Jo kaanten Hon Sab Apni Daaman Mein Bhar Loon,
Bichaawoon Main Kaliyon Se Raahen Tumhaari,
Nazar Se Zamaane Ki Khudko Bachaana,
Kisi Aur Se Dekho Dil Na Lagaana,
Ke Meri Amaanath Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsurat Ho Tum,
Jo Banke Kali Muskuraati Hai Aksar,
Shab-e-Hijr Mein Wo Rulaati Hai Aksar,
Jo Lamhon Hi Lamhon Mein Duniya Badalde,
Jo Shaayar Ko Milti Hai Pehloo Ghazal Se,
Chupaana Jo Paawoon Chupaa Hi Na Paawoon,
Bhulaana Jo Paawoon Bhulaa Hi Na Paawoon,
Wo Pehli Mohabbat Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsurat Ho Tum,
Agar Main Jo Kehdoon Mohobbat Hai Tumse,
Tho Mujhko Khudaara Galat Mat Samajhna,
Ke Meri Zaroorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Koobsoorat Ho Tum..............
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its beautifuL sanakeep going...
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10th August 2008, 07:15 PM
thanxxxxxx neha
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
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10th August 2008, 07:20 PM
Bahut hi dilkash andaaz hai. Aap ke iss naGhme ko ham ne baar baar paDhaa.. khaas taur pe inn misroN ko:
Quote:
Bikheron Na Zulfen, Tho Sharmaayen Baadal,
Farishtey Bhi Dekhen Tho Hojaayen Paagal
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Jo Banke Kali Muskuraati Hai Aksar,
Shab-e-Hijr Mein Wo Rulaati Hai Aksar
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Aap ke kalam se ab aur bhi umiideN raheNgi..
-Prasad
aaKhirii hichaki tere zaanoN pe aaye
maut bhi maiN shaayraana chaahtaa huuN
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10th August 2008, 08:18 PM
thanxxxxxx prasad
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
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11th August 2008, 02:55 PM
kya baat hai sana ji bohat acha likha hai apne kya baat hai.
waqai main bohat bohat acha laga app ka kalam parh ker dil khush ho gaya hai.khas ker ye line jio hai
Agar Main Jo Kehdoon Mohobbat Hai Tumse,
Tho Mujhko Khudaara Galat Mat Samajhna,
Ke Meri Zaroorat Ho Tum,
ye line muje bohat passand ayi hain,dua kerta hon app agy be ayse he likhti rahen gi.apna khayal rakhna.
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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11th August 2008, 04:12 PM
thanxxxxxxxx rizi
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
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11th August 2008, 06:32 PM
welcome janab,app ki aysi he achi post ka intzar rahe ga.apna khayal rakhna,
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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11th August 2008, 09:54 PM
thanxxxxxxx rizi
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
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11th August 2008, 10:10 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sanaji
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Agar Main Jo Kehdoon Mohobbat Hai Tumse,
Tho Mujhko Khudaara Galat Mat Samajhna,
Ke Meri Zaroorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Koobsoorat Ho Tum,
Ye Chehra Tumhaara Ke Din Hai Sunehra,
Aur Uspar Ye Kaali Ghataaon Ka Pehra,
Gulaabon Sa Naazuk Mehekta Badan Hai,
Ye Lab Hain Tumhaare Ke Khilta Chaman Hai,
Bikheron Na Zulfen, Tho Sharmaayen Baadal,
Farishtey Bhi Dekhen Tho Hojaayen Paagal,
Wo Pakeeza Moorath Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsoorat Ho Tum,
Hain Phoolon Ki Daali Ye Baahen Tumhaari,
Hai Khaamosh Jaadu Nigaahen Tumhaari,
Jo kaanten Hon Sab Apni Daaman Mein Bhar Loon,
Bichaawoon Main Kaliyon Se Raahen Tumhaari,
Nazar Se Zamaane Ki Khudko Bachaana,
Kisi Aur Se Dekho Dil Na Lagaana,
Ke Meri Amaanath Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsurat Ho Tum,
Jo Banke Kali Muskuraati Hai Aksar,
Shab-e-Hijr Mein Wo Rulaati Hai Aksar,
Jo Lamhon Hi Lamhon Mein Duniya Badalde,
Jo Shaayar Ko Milti Hai Pehloo Ghazal Se,
Chupaana Jo Paawoon Chupaa Hi Na Paawoon,
Bhulaana Jo Paawoon Bhulaa Hi Na Paawoon,
Wo Pehli Mohabbat Ho Tum,
Bahut Khoobsurat Ho Tum,
Agar Main Jo Kehdoon Mohobbat Hai Tumse,
Tho Mujhko Khudaara Galat Mat Samajhna,
Ke Meri Zaroorat Ho Tum,
Bahut Koobsoorat Ho Tum..............
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11th August 2008, 11:24 PM
thanxxxxxx krenil baray din main appka reply aya acha laga mujhe ok
FIIMANULLAH bye
New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..
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