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Wink गुज़रे हुए हर लम्हे को जीना चाहता हूँ... - 17th November 2008, 11:33 AM

मद्धम मद्धम ही सही मुस्कुराना चाहता हूँ,
थोड़ा सा ही सही पर गम भूलना चाहता हूँ,
चाहत नही मुझे किसी आसमान की,
अपनी हिस्से की बस ज़मीं चाहता हूँ,

ज़िन्दगी हैं अनजान राहों का सफर,
फिर भी इसे अपना जानकर निभाता हूँ,
हजारों अनजान चेहरों के दरमियान ,
बस एक "अपना" सा चेहरा चाहता हूँ,

दर्द और गम तो पाता है हर इंसान,
और मैं भी जुदा नही जानता हूँ,
है गम बांटने वाले भी बहुत,
पर किसी "अपने" के सामने रोना चाहता हूँ,

हूँ आज मैं तनहा इतना की,
कागज़ कलम को हाल-ऐ-दिल बताता हूँ,
बस एक बार देखले मुडके ए ज़िन्दगी,
गुज़रे हुए हर लम्हे को जीना चाहता हूँ,

नलिन .......


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17th November 2008, 12:26 PM

very nice poetry
gujre hue har lamho ko jeena chahta hoon
plz ek baar romantic try karna
main tumhare blog mein gayee thi tumhari saari poetry achhi hain
tum i think shayar ke saath kavi bhi ho
tumhari bahot achhi command hain hindi pe
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18th November 2008, 08:22 AM

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very nice poetry
gujre hue har lamho ko jeena chahta hoon
plz ek baar romantic try karna
main tumhare blog mein gayee thi tumhari saari poetry achhi hain
tum i think shayar ke saath kavi bhi ho
tumhari bahot achhi command hain hindi pe
keep smiling
tc
bye
wish u all d luck 4 ur success
hey muskaan,
thanks alot yaar, for your praise, tum mere blog pe gayi aur koi comment bhi nai chora, thats not fair, kam se kam isi bahane apka naam hamare blog par aa jaata........ ya usrely, i will try romantic poetry, apr koi inspiration ho toh it gets easy,. i dont have any romantic inspiraton....
   
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18th November 2008, 11:07 AM

hey think abt ur self
i dnt think so u r boring person
so plz khud ko aaine mein dekho and start
hum khud hi khud ke inspiration hote hain
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बस कुछ इसी तरह से हम अपनी प्रेम कहानी लिख जा&#
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Love बस कुछ इसी तरह से हम अपनी प्रेम कहानी लिख जा&# - 18th November 2008, 11:36 PM

Hey Muskaan,
i wrote this romantic poem, let me know, apko kaisi lagi...


बस कुछ इसी तरह से हम अपनी प्रेम कहानी लिख जायेंगे...

अहिस्ता अहिस्ता हम तुझ मैं खो जायेंगे,
हर गुज़रते पल मैं "तुम" "मैं" और "मैं" "तुम" हो जायेंगे,
सोचा न था की ऐसे पल भी इस ज़िन्दगी में आयेंगे,
दो चार कदम जो चले साथ वही हमारे हमसफ़र हो जायेंगे......

अब जो थामा तुमने हाथ तोः नामुमकिन को मुमकिन कर जायेंगे,
एक तेरे प्यार के सहारे हम ज़िन्दगी की हर नफरत सह जायेंगे,
तुम देना बस यूँही साथ मेरा तोः करिश्मा हम कर जायेंगे,
दुनिया ने देखी न होगी मोहोब्बत की ऐसी मिसाल कायम कर जायेंगे,

देखा जो हमने मिलके हर वोः ख्वाब पूरा कर जायेंगे,
तेरी बाहों मैं अब अपनी ज़िन्दगी बिताएंगे,
जोड़ के एक एक ईंट अपने सपनो का घर बसायेंगे,
और उस छोटे से घर को तेरी मुस्कुराहटों से सजायेंगे,

फिर जोड़ के दोनों हाथ भगवान् से दुआ कर जायेंगे,
पाये तू खुशी दो जहाँ की और तेरे सारे गम मेरे हो जायेंगे,
बहायेंगे आंसू हम तेरे हिस्से के और अपने हिस्से की मुस्कराहट तेरे लबों पे सजायेंगे,
बस कुछ इसी तरह से हम अपनी प्रेम कहानी लिख जायेंगे...........

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19th November 2008, 08:26 PM

aapne kaafi khubsurti se likha hain
bahot hi mithe shabdo mein aapne apni prem kahani likha hain
mujhe lagta hain ye to aapki prem kahani lag rahi hain
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19th November 2008, 10:47 PM

hey muskaan,

check out this gazhal video, it is soo romantic, you will just love it

http://in.youtube.com/watch?v=OxDcoSKJiqU



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
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20th November 2008, 09:54 AM

खाके ठोकर "दर्द" का एहसास होता है,
"दर्द" के उस एहसास में एक "जज़्बात" जवां होता है,
कोई बनाता है इसे ताकत अपनी और किसी की कमजोरी हो जाता है,
बस यही एक "जज़्बात" ज़िन्दगी कहलाता है......


नलिन....



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22nd November 2008, 12:46 PM

kaafi achhi aapki gazal thi
nahin yaar kisi aur ki
superb thnx mujhe bataane ke liye
maine first time dekhi
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kaafi achhi aapki gazal thi
nahin yaar kisi aur ki
superb thnx mujhe bataane ke liye
maine first time dekhi
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24th November 2008, 02:12 PM

beautifully written..... bahut hi pyara.... luved it...


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Bata main kya karu….
Sare zamane ki Mohabbat leker…..

   
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24th November 2008, 05:40 PM

bahut accche ehsaas hain nalinjeee...yunhi likhte rahe.....


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Thanks Alot - 25th November 2008, 10:15 PM

hey mausam and ruchika..............THANKS ALOT FOR THE APPRECIATION........



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Red face क्या है ? - 25th November 2008, 10:18 PM

"क्या है?"

यह जो हो रही है दो दिलों के दरमियान ,
यह अजब सी गुफ्तगू क्या है,
कभी होता था मौसम गुलाबों का जहाँ ,
आज वहां काटों सी चुभन क्या है,

मुस्कुराहटों का दौर हुआ करता था जिन होटों पे कभी,
आज उन होटों पे गम-ऐ-ग़ज़ल क्या है,
किसी ज़माने में हंसा करती थी जो आँखें,
उन आंखों मैं यह आंसू क्या है,

मानके खुदा तुझे किए सजदे तेरे इश्क में,
तोह यह इबादतों मैं बेवफाई का ज़िक्र क्या है,
कहते है शायर की है बेंतेहा सुकूं इश्क में,
तोः फिर यह बेकरारी सी दिल मैं क्या है,

क्यूँ भरते है वो दम मोहोब्बत का अपनी,
जो ख़ुद समझते नही मोहोब्बत की आबरू क्या है,
इसी उम्मीद पे काटी है ज़िन्दगी नलिन ने,
वो काश पूछते की आरजू क्या है,

नलिन


HEY MUSKAAN, YEH WALI KAISI LAGI.....



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1st December 2008, 08:42 AM

oh ho
mr nalinji
kaise yaar likhte ho
bolte to ekdam jhakas
bahot pyari hain bilkul aapke shabdo ki tarah
ek ek shabd aapke ehsaas bayaa kar rahe hain
kitni khubsurti se aap shabdo ka istemaal apni gazal mein karte hain
mujhe to sach kahu shayri aati hi nahin hain
pata nahin kabhi kabhi by mistake rhyme ho jaati hain
he he he
hey
one thing
i like gazal songs
if u hv ne new collection to plz send karna
jo pehle bheji thi woh bahot hi achhi thi
chalo bye
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oh ho
mr nalinji
kaise yaar likhte ho
bolte to ekdam jhakas
bahot pyari hain bilkul aapke shabdo ki tarah
ek ek shabd aapke ehsaas bayaa kar rahe hain
kitni khubsurti se aap shabdo ka istemaal apni gazal mein karte hain
mujhe to sach kahu shayri aati hi nahin hain
pata nahin kabhi kabhi by mistake rhyme ho jaati hain
he he he
hey
one thing
i like gazal songs
if u hv ne new collection to plz send karna
jo pehle bheji thi woh bahot hi achhi thi
chalo bye
kuch zyada tarif ho gayee
u tc
keep smiling
hi muskaan ji,
kahan gayab ho gaye thay ap, maine apko PM bhi kiya tha, par apka koi reply nai aaya tha, main apko aur gazhala bhej dunga, but mujhe apko yeh mail karni padegi and uske lioye apka mail-id chahiye.....

will wait for ur mail id, my mail id is nalinmehra@gmail.com

ur friend
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26th March 2009, 11:00 AM

hi guys, im back after quite a time, anyways, I have a questions to ask all the forum members, how many of you find difficult to read the poem or gzahals if they are posted in hindi fonts................(not in roman hindi)...



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you are welcome to my blog..............



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muskaan ji, kahan ho aap, not coming on SDC these days
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oh ho
mr nalinji
kaise yaar likhte ho
bolte to ekdam jhakas
bahot pyari hain bilkul aapke shabdo ki tarah
ek ek shabd aapke ehsaas bayaa kar rahe hain
kitni khubsurti se aap shabdo ka istemaal apni gazal mein karte hain
mujhe to sach kahu shayri aati hi nahin hain
pata nahin kabhi kabhi by mistake rhyme ho jaati hain
he he he
hey
one thing
i like gazal songs
if u hv ne new collection to plz send karna
jo pehle bheji thi woh bahot hi achhi thi
chalo bye
kuch zyada tarif ho gayee
u tc
keep smiling



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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21st May 2009, 11:42 PM

main bhi kal se gayab rahungi ek mahina ...........taki koi mujhe bhi yaad kare

bahot achha poem hai Nalin jee

aap ki andaaz nirala hai

God bless you

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arey ap kahin mat jaiyega..................... ap chali gayi toh me toh bilkul akela sa ho jaunga SDC pe...................... aur huzoor, ap toh meri inspiration ho gayi hian........toh kahin mat jaiye............. yahin rahiye............
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main bhi kal se gayab rahungi ek mahina ...........taki koi mujhe bhi yaad kare

bahot achha poem hai Nalin jee

aap ki andaaz nirala hai

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arey ap kahin mat jaiyega..................... ap chali gayi toh me toh bilkul akela sa ho jaunga SDC pe...................... aur huzoor, ap toh meri inspiration ho gayi hian........toh kahin mat jaiye............. yahin rahiye............
to thik hai khubsoorat ghazal ab aap bhi likhiye

har koi yahan aapki kalam ka fan hai

yeh secret aap nahi jante ho

so sad



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yeh kaisi hai teri ada ki mujhko khudse rubaru karwa diya,
ek chhoti si pani ki boond ko samundar ka aaghaz bana diya.....

Diya ji, Meri kalam ka koi fan ho ya na ho, par yeh lost poet apka fan zaroor ho gaya hai.......
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to thik hai khubsoorat ghazal ab aap bhi likhiye

har koi yahan aapki kalam ka fan hai

yeh secret aap nahi jante ho

so sad



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yeh kaisi hai teri ada ki mujhko khudse rubaru karwa diya,
ek chhoti si pani ki boond ko samundar ka aaghaz bana diya.....

Diya ji, Meri kalam ka koi fan ho ya na ho, par yeh lost poet apka fan zaroor ho gaya hai.......
dekha to mera shayaa bhi mujhse judaa milaa
ek tum hi ho mere yaar jis meiN khudaa milaa



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Dosti Badi Hi Haseen Hai, Yeh Na ho toh Kya Phir Zindagi Hai........

Mujhe Me Khuda Jane Kyun Tumhe Nazar Aaya hai,
Bas Tumhari hai inayatein jo yeh mamuli insaan aj "ek dost" ban paya hai..
Apki Baaton ne toh achanak se meri zindagi ka rukh hi mod diya hai...............Diya Jee.....
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My Poem Got Award - 9th June 2009, 02:04 PM

hey hey, see my poem, "guzre lamhe" got appreciated in a poem competition @ Hindi Sahitya Manch, I Got a Prize too......... here's the link
http://hindisahityamanch.blogspot.co...g-post_07.html



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
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hey hey, see my poem, "guzre lamhe" got appreciated in a poem competition @ Hindi Sahitya Manch, I Got a Prize too......... here's the link
http://hindisahityamanch.blogspot.co...g-post_07.html
Mubaarak ho dost,

aap to SDC ki shaan ho .......
mujhe naaz hai mere dost per

khuda aapki kalam ko aur noor bakshe.........
kamiyaabi humesha aapki kadam chume



AameeN



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THANK UUUUUUUUUUU.......................
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Mubaarak ho dost,

aap to SDC ki shaan ho .......
mujhe naaz hai mere dost per

khuda aapki kalam ko aur noor bakshe.........
kamiyaabi humesha aapki kadam chume



AameeN



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THANK UUUUUUUUUUU.......................
thank uuuuuuuu se kaam nahi chalega exam ke baad yahaN SDC per party hona chahiye
30th ko Nalin party de raha hai ............sab log 9pm tak pahunch jayiyega .........



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Thumbs up bahut khoob likhtey hain aap - 9th June 2009, 08:14 PM

wow.......................nice creation nalin jii

aap to bhai kamaal ka likhtey haiN....aapki poetry hume bahutttttttt acchi lagi, ahsaas..... masha-allah bahut khoob.
bhagwaan aapki kalam ki dhaar ko aur tez kare.....yoon hi likhtey rahiye.

kush rahiye


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http://hindisahityamanch.blogspot.co...g-post_07.html
Congratulations Nalin................!!


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Wah Nalin Jii,

Bahut khub likha hai aapne wakai aapki kavita sarahniy hai, aapki is kavita main
sachai prakat hoti hai, honi bhi chahiye Guzare lamhe aapne bahut achche se likhe hai..

Yunhi likhate rahiye.........
Khush rahiye...................


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Sunita Ji, thank you, bas aap logon ki duayein milti rahi toh me yunhi likhta rahunga aur apki khidmat me pesh karta rahunga...............Poem padne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya....
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wow.......................nice creation nalin jii

aap to bhai kamaal ka likhtey haiN....aapki poetry hume bahutttttttt acchi lagi, ahsaas..... masha-allah bahut khoob.
bhagwaan aapki kalam ki dhaar ko aur tez kare.....yoon hi likhtey rahiye.

kush rahiye



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Sameer Jee...........Tareef Ke Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya...........
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Bahut khub likha hai aapne wakai aapki kavita sarahniy hai, aapki is kavita main
sachai prakat hoti hai, honi bhi chahiye Guzare lamhe aapne bahut achche se likhe hai..

Yunhi likhate rahiye.........
Khush rahiye...................



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Nanil ji......aapne apni kavita mai beete dino ki kitaab ko jin ehsaaso ke saath khola hai....wakai kabile taarif hai.....padhkar guzre lamhe satane lage hai....bahut acha likha hai aapne....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye...aur humse miltey rahiye......




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Naresh Ji, Apne Meri Is Poem ko padhne ke liye apna kimati waqt diya, iske liye bahut bahut shukriya............. yeh kavita mere dil ke behad kareeb hai, meri bhi zindagi ke guzre huye lamhon ko mere dil ke kareeb le aati hai....
ek baar phir se bahut bahut dhanyawad, yeh poem padhne ke liye........
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Nanil ji......aapne apni kavita mai beete dino ki kitaab ko jin ehsaaso ke saath khola hai....wakai kabile taarif hai.....padhkar guzre lamhe satane lage hai....bahut acha likha hai aapne....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye...aur humse miltey rahiye......



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he he he he, Naresh ji, mera naam Nalin hai...........Nanil nahi..........he he, sounds funny Nanil.........
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Nanil ji......aapne apni kavita mai beete dino ki kitaab ko jin ehsaaso ke saath khola hai....wakai kabile taarif hai.....padhkar guzre lamhe satane lage hai....bahut acha likha hai aapne....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye...aur humse miltey rahiye......



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The Roman Hindi Version Of The Poem

Maddham maddham hi sahi muskurana chahta hun,
thoda sa hi sahi par gam bhulana chahta hun,
chahat nahi mujhe kisi aasman ki,
apne hissay ki bas zameen chahta hun

Zindagi hai anjaan rahon ka safar,
phir bhi isay apna jaankar nibhata hun,
hazaron anjaan chehron ke darmiyaan,
bas ek "apna" sa chehra chahta hun

Dard aur gam toh pata hai har insaan,
aur main bhi juda nahi jaanta hun,
hai gam baantne wale bhi bahut,
par kisi "apne" ke saamne rona chahta hun

Hun aaj me intna tanha ki,
kagaz kalam ko haale-e-dil batata hun,
bas ek baar dekhle mudke aye zindagi,
guzre huye har lamhe ko jeena chahta hun


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मद्धम मद्धम ही सही मुस्कुराना चाहता हूँ,
थोड़ा सा ही सही पर गम भूलना चाहता हूँ,
चाहत नही मुझे किसी आसमान की,
अपनी हिस्से की बस ज़मीं चाहता हूँ,

ज़िन्दगी हैं अनजान राहों का सफर,
फिर भी इसे अपना जानकर निभाता हूँ,
हजारों अनजान चेहरों के दरमियान ,
बस एक "अपना" सा चेहरा चाहता हूँ,

दर्द और गम तो पाता है हर इंसान,
और मैं भी जुदा नही जानता हूँ,
है गम बांटने वाले भी बहुत,
पर किसी "अपने" के सामने रोना चाहता हूँ,

हूँ आज मैं तनहा इतना की,
कागज़ कलम को हाल-ऐ-दिल बताता हूँ,
बस एक बार देखले मुडके ए ज़िन्दगी,
गुज़रे हुए हर लम्हे को जीना चाहता हूँ,

नलिन .......


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Hey all!!!!!

I have started documenting my shayari and poems on my blog at

http://beingnostalgic.blogspot.com

Plz Have a look and comment. Its in Hindi.
   
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3rd August 2009, 11:26 AM

Musafir Jee, i think ur spamming my thread..................................
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Hey all!!!!!

I have started documenting my shayari and poems on my blog at

http://beingnostalgic.blogspot.com

Plz Have a look and comment. Its in Hindi.



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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