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Post बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" & - 30th November 2008, 12:34 AM

बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना
वो मद्धम सा मुस्कुराना और वो झूठ-मूठ का गुस्सा दिखाना,
समझना मेरी हर बात को और मुझे हर बात समझाना,
वो लड़ना तेरा मुझसे और फिर प्यार जताना
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना,

वो शाम ढले करना बातें मुझसे और अपनी हर बात मुझे बताना,
सुनके मेरी बेवकूफियां तुम्हारा ज़ोर से हंस जाना,
मेरी हर गलती पे लगाना डांट और फिर उस डांट के बाद मुझे प्यार से समझाना,
कोई और न होगा तुमसे प्यारा मुझे यह आज मैंने है जाना,

वो राखी और भाई-दूज पे तुम्हारा टीका लगाना,
कुमकुम मैं डूबी ऊँगली से मेरा माथा सजाना,
खिलाना मुझे मिठाई प्यार से और दिल से दुआ दे जाना,
बाँध के धागा कलाई पे मेरी अपने प्यार को जताना,

कभी बन जाना माँ मेरी और कभी दोस्त बन जाना,
देना नसीहतें मुझे और हिदायतें दोहराना,
जब छाये गम का अँधेरा तोः खुशी की किरण बनके आना,
हाँ तुम्ही से तोः सिखा है मैंने गम मैं मुस्कुराना,

कहता है मन मेरा रहके दूर तुमसे मुझे अब एक लम्हा भी नही बिताना,
अब बस "गुड्डू" को तोः है अपनी "परी दीदी" के पास है जाना,
हैं बहुत से एहसास दिल मैं समाये पता नही अब इन्हे कैसे है समझाना,
बस जान लो इतना "दीदी" बहुत याद आता है तुम्हारा "भाई" कहके बुलाना,

This poem is for my beloved sister...........

From A Poetic Brother Who Misses Her Sister Alot...

नलिन (गुड्डू)



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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1st December 2008, 08:48 AM

sach kahu di bhi tumhari poem padh ke kaafi khush hongi,
ki tum unhein itna pyar karte ho
unki har baat ko samajhte ho
aur sabse badi baat unki tumhare life mein value kya hain
waise abhi tak unhone ise padha hain
shayad emotional ho jaayengi
nahin to zor se hans padengi
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Nalin jii...............es rishte ke aage kuch kahe ko rah hi nahi jata.....aapne apne dil ki baat bakhoobi kahi hai....har bhai bahen ka pyar aisa hi hota hai, par lafzo.n mein har koi bayaaN nahi pata, jaisa ki aap kar gaye....bhagwaaN aapki didi ko aur aapko sadha kush rakhe.....yeh pyar yoon hi bana rahe.


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thank UUUUu - 7th December 2008, 01:47 PM

dearest muskaan,

itni tareef ke liye shukriya, main kya kahat hun, yeh toh mujhe bh pata nai. he he he.

yeh toh meri didi se mera emotional attachement hai jisne mujhse yeh poem likhwa di, ehsaas aur jazbaat yahi toh ek acchi poem ke liye zaruri hote hain....

thanks again

Nalin

dearest sunita,

itni tareef ke liye apka shukriya, bas aise hi ap logon ko pyaar milta rahega, toh koshish yahi rahegi ki, behtar aur accha likh sakun.

thanks again

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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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Wow! yaar, bhai behen k is pyaar ko bht hi khoobsurat andaz diya hai tumne....u r a versatile poet...awesome, KEEP IT UP



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THANK YOU NAZNEEN...................... THIS POEM IS VERY CLOSE TO MY HEART IT IS FOR MY DIDI..................SHE IS THE MOST SPECIAL ONE IN MY LIFE..............

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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Nalin Dost.......
u knw my prob...
Ab jb itni taareef hui hai aapki ghazal ki , to mujh pe thoda taras kha lo yaaaaar...
Raha ni jaara, is poem ko padhe bina...
   
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Thanks - 5th April 2009, 03:51 PM

@ Buland bhai, deri keliye maafi chahta hun, par waqt milte hi iska roman hindi version post karunga

@ KUNAAL bhai, apne is nacheez ki is kavita par nazar dali wahi karam tha, aur apne ispar jo khubsurat andaaz me tareef padi hai, uska shukriya ada karne ke liye mukammal lafz hai nahi mere pass..................... but i can say that, this is the best compliment i have ver got about my poem...................... thanks alot

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Nalin Dost.......
u knw my prob...
Ab jb itni taareef hui hai aapki ghazal ki , to mujh pe thoda taras kha lo yaaaaar...
Raha ni jaara, is poem ko padhe bina...



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Roman Version For My Friend Buland Shayar - 6th April 2009, 03:05 AM


This roman hindi version is on special request for my friend "Buland Shayar"

woh madham sa muskurana aur woh jhooth-mooth ka gussa dikahana,
samajhna meri har baat ko aur mujhe har baat samjhana,
woh ladna tera mujhse aur phir pyar jatana,
bahut yaad aata hai "didi" tumhara mujhe "bhai" kehke bulana,

woh sham dhale karna baatein mujhse aur apni har baat mujhe batana,
sunke meri bewakufiyaan tumahara zor se hans jaana,
meri har galti pe lagana daant aur phir us daant ke baad mujhe pyar se samjhana,
koi aur na hoga tumse pyara mujhe yeh aaj maine hai jaana,

woh rakhi aur bhai-dooj pe tumahara teeka lagana,
kumkum me doobi ungli se mera matha sajana,
khilana mujhe mithai pyar se aur dil se dua de jaana,
bandh ke dhaga kalai pe meri pane pyar ko jatana,

kabhi ban jaana maa meri aur kabhi dost ban jaana,
dena nashihatein mujhe aur hidayatein dohrana,
jab chhaye gham ka andhera to khushi ki kiran banke aana,
haan tumhi se to seekha hai maine gham me muskurana

kehta hai man mera rehke door tumse mujhe ab ek lamha bhi nahi hai bitana,
ab to bas "guddu" ko apni "pari didi" ke pass hai jaana,
hai bahut se ehsaas dil me hai samaye ab pata nahi inhe kaise hai samjhana,
bas jaan lo itna "didi" bahut yaad aata hai tumhara "bhai" kehke bulana..

This is dedicated to my beloved sister.
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बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना
वो मद्धम सा मुस्कुराना और वो झूठ-मूठ का गुस्सा दिखाना,
समझना मेरी हर बात को और मुझे हर बात समझाना,
वो लड़ना तेरा मुझसे और फिर प्यार जताना
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना,

वो शाम ढले करना बातें मुझसे और अपनी हर बात मुझे बताना,
सुनके मेरी बेवकूफियां तुम्हारा ज़ोर से हंस जाना,
मेरी हर गलती पे लगाना डांट और फिर उस डांट के बाद मुझे प्यार से समझाना,
कोई और न होगा तुमसे प्यारा मुझे यह आज मैंने है जाना,

वो राखी और भाई-दूज पे तुम्हारा टीका लगाना,
कुमकुम मैं डूबी ऊँगली से मेरा माथा सजाना,
खिलाना मुझे मिठाई प्यार से और दिल से दुआ दे जाना,
बाँध के धागा कलाई पे मेरी अपने प्यार को जताना,

कभी बन जाना माँ मेरी और कभी दोस्त बन जाना,
देना नसीहतें मुझे और हिदायतें दोहराना,
जब छाये गम का अँधेरा तोः खुशी की किरण बनके आना,
हाँ तुम्ही से तोः सिखा है मैंने गम मैं मुस्कुराना,

कहता है मन मेरा रहके दूर तुमसे मुझे अब एक लम्हा भी नही बिताना,
अब बस "गुड्डू" को तोः है अपनी "परी दीदी" के पास है जाना,
हैं बहुत से एहसास दिल मैं समाये पता नही अब इन्हे कैसे है समझाना,
बस जान लो इतना "दीदी" बहुत याद आता है तुम्हारा "भाई" कहके बुलाना,

This poem is for my beloved sister...........

From A Poetic Brother Who Misses Her Sister Alot...

नलिन (गुड्डू)



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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This roman hindi version is on special request for my friend "Buland Shayar"

woh madham sa muskurana aur woh jhooth-mooth ka gussa dikahana,
samajhna meri har baat ko aur mujhe har baat samjhana,
woh ladna tera mujhse aur phir pyar jatana,
bahut yaad aata hai "didi" tumhara mujhe "bhai" kehke bulana,

woh sham dhale karna baatein mujhse aur apni har baat mujhe batana,
sunke meri bewakufiyaan tumahara zor se hans jaana,
meri har galti pe lagana daant aur phir us daant ke baad mujhe pyar se samjhana,
koi aur na hoga tumse pyara mujhe yeh aaj maine hai jaana,

woh rakhi aur bhai-dooj pe tumahara teeka lagana,
kumkum me doobi ungli se mera matha sajana,
khilana mujhe mithai pyar se aur dil se dua de jaana,
bandh ke dhaga kalai pe meri pane pyar ko jatana,

kabhi ban jaana maa meri aur kabhi dost ban jaana,
dena nashihatein mujhe aur hidayatein dohrana,
jab chhaye gham ka andhera to khushi ki kiran banke aana,
haan tumhi se to seekha hai maine gham me muskurana

kehta hai man mera rehke door tumse mujhe ab ek lamha bhi nahi hai bitana,
ab to bas "guddu" ko apni "pari didi" ke pass hai jaana,
hai bahut se ehsaas dil me hai samaye ab pata nahi inhe kaise hai samjhana,
bas jaan lo itna "didi" bahut yaad aata hai tumhara "bhai" kehke bulana..

This is dedicated to my beloved sister.
Form a Poetic Brother
Nalin (Guddu)
Guddu ji 1st of all thanx 4 ur precious time,whch u spent on my request...

sach me maine bhai behan k pyaar k upar likhi ye pehli poem padhi hai, wakai kunaal ji ne sahi kaha, is rachna ko tareef k lafzo se nahi tola ja sakta...
Aapke ehsaas bahut he khoobsoorat hain...
Aapki poem ko padh k lagta hai k aapki Pari didi aur Aap dono he khushnaseeb ho...

Shayad aapki pari didi aapse badi hain,
meri b 2 behan hai lekin mujhse choti hain...

Kaash meri b koi badi didi hoti aapke jaisi...
To mai aapki poem chura k unko dedicate kar deta

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Buland bhai, apne is nacheez ki tareef kari, apka bahut bahut shukriya.....
is poem ka shrey meri didi ko jaata hai, woh hai hi itni acchi ki, meri jagah koi aur bhi bhai hota, toh woh bhi aisi kavita unke liye likh jaata.......

tareef ke liye phir se shukriya

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Guddu ji 1st of all thanx 4 ur precious time,whch u spent on my request...

sach me maine bhai behan k pyaar k upar likhi ye pehli poem padhi hai, wakai kunaal ji ne sahi kaha, is rachna ko tareef k lafzo se nahi tola ja sakta...
Aapke ehsaas bahut he khoobsoorat hain...
Aapki poem ko padh k lagta hai k aapki Pari didi aur Aap dono he khushnaseeb ho...

Shayad aapki pari didi aapse badi hain,
meri b 2 behan hai lekin mujhse choti hain...

Kaash meri b koi badi didi hoti aapke jaisi...
To mai aapki poem chura k unko dedicate kar deta

neways Thanx again bhai...



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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Waow...... Nalin so so amazing.....

Arey yaar ab to may tarif kare nahi takhaunga par mere alfaz hi mujhe dhokha de jate hai...

Sach me yaar kya feelings bayan ki hai tumne so so cute...

Tumhare is kavita ko may bahut hi kareeb rakhunga,..... Bus Tumhari Izzazt chahiye...
Is rishte ko bahut hi badiya bayan kiya hai tumne...

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Tareef Ke Liye Behad Shukriya, Arey jab ham ne apno apna maan liyahia toh hmarai kavita bhi aphi ki hui, toh izzazat ki baat hi nahin hai, ap is kavita ko apne kareeb rakhenge toh mujhe pe karam hoga, behad shukriya................
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Waow...... Nalin so so amazing.....

Arey yaar ab to may tarif kare nahi takhaunga par mere alfaz hi mujhe dhokha de jate hai...

Sach me yaar kya feelings bayan ki hai tumne so so cute...

Tumhare is kavita ko may bahut hi kareeb rakhunga,..... Bus Tumhari Izzazt chahiye...
Is rishte ko bahut hi badiya bayan kiya hai tumne...

Yaar yunhi likhte raho....
aur mehfil sajate raho...
Khush raho ab ke dua rahengi ki tumhare didi ka sath tumhe hamesh naseeb ho...



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Kunaal Bhai Behad Shukriya Aapka
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Nalin jee,
bhai bahen ke Rista hi anmol hai ....
is anmol Riste ko labzo meiN bayaan karna bahot muskil hai ..........
aapne itne khubsoorati se ehesaas ko bayaan kiye hai ki mere pass shabd nahi hai
kuchh tareef karne ko sachi

Didi ka ladla bhai ..........
humesha khus raho

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Diya Ji, ap is thread pe aayi toh mujhe bahut aacha laga, maine aaj tak jitni bhi poems likhi, unme se yeh meri personal favorite hai, aur mere dil ke bahut kareeb bhi hai.......
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bhai bahen ke Rista hi anmol hai ....
is anmol Riste ko labzo meiN bayaan karna bahot muskil hai ..........
aapne itne khubsoorati se ehesaas ko bayaan kiye hai ki mere pass shabd nahi hai
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Didi ka ladla bhai ..........
humesha khus raho

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Kunaal Bhai, apka bahut bahut dhanyawaad, jo apne waqt nikal ke is kavitako pada, deri se reply ke liye muaafi chahta hun...........

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aaj aapki i's kavita par nazar padi...kya kahuN, bahut khoobsurat ehsaasoN ko liye hai aapki kavita....bahut pasand aayee mujhe....mujhe kya jo bhi koi padhega, use aapki yeh kavita aur aapke yeh ehsaas bahut pasaNd aayeNge...
kunaal saheb ne theek hi kaha hai...maiN bhi is se zyada bolne ki auqaat nahi rakhta....

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nalin shaeb,
main bhi kunaal bhai se iqteffaq rakhta hu.....badi behan ka pyaar kismat valo ko milta hai...aur lagta hai aap kismat se dhani hai....
anmol alfaaz hai....koi mol nahi inka......
aquaat meri bhi utni nahi......
kush rahiye.....likhte rahiye.....
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Vikram ji, Bahut Bahut shukriya kavita padhne ka aur haan main sach main bahut kismet wala hu, itni acchi didi paake...
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aaj aapki i's kavita par nazar padi...kya kahuN, bahut khoobsurat ehsaasoN ko liye hai aapki kavita....bahut pasand aayee mujhe....mujhe kya jo bhi koi padhega, use aapki yeh kavita aur aapke yeh ehsaas bahut pasaNd aayeNge...
kunaal saheb ne theek hi kaha hai...maiN bhi is se zyada bolne ki auqaat nahi rakhta....

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Amit Ji, Tareef Ke Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya.... aap Jaise Doston Ka Pyaar Paake mujhe behad khushi ho rahi hai....
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main bhi kunaal bhai se iqteffaq rakhta hu.....badi behan ka pyaar kismat valo ko milta hai...aur lagta hai aap kismat se dhani hai....
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nalin jee...itni sundar panktiyan padne se main vanchit reh jata agar kal aap is pe reply na karte..bahut sundarta se aapne bhai behn ke rishton ko samjhaya hai..its marvellous...


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arvind ji, tareef ke liye bhead shukriya, waise mujh jaisa nacheez itni tareef ke kabil nahi hai...
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Bahut Bahut dhanyawadd Rajeev Ji, apne waqt nikal ke is kavita ko padha....
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Waaahhhh Nalin jii.............
aapki behad purani aur behad khaas kavita hhai yeh... sach kahun to mann gadgad ho utha is marmik kavita ko padh kar.. atyant samvedansheel... likhte raheN.... khush rahiye...

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waaooo nalin ji dil ko chu gayi...bas inta saa dukh hain ki meri koi behan nahi hain...





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बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना
वो मद्धम सा मुस्कुराना और वो झूठ-मूठ का गुस्सा दिखाना,
समझना मेरी हर बात को और मुझे हर बात समझाना,
वो लड़ना तेरा मुझसे और फिर प्यार जताना
बहुत याद आता है "दीदी" तुम्हारा मुझे "भाई" कहके बुलाना,

वो शाम ढले करना बातें मुझसे और अपनी हर बात मुझे बताना,
सुनके मेरी बेवकूफियां तुम्हारा ज़ोर से हंस जाना,
मेरी हर गलती पे लगाना डांट और फिर उस डांट के बाद मुझे प्यार से समझाना,
कोई और न होगा तुमसे प्यारा मुझे यह आज मैंने है जाना,

वो राखी और भाई-दूज पे तुम्हारा टीका लगाना,
कुमकुम मैं डूबी ऊँगली से मेरा माथा सजाना,
खिलाना मुझे मिठाई प्यार से और दिल से दुआ दे जाना,
बाँध के धागा कलाई पे मेरी अपने प्यार को जताना,

कभी बन जाना माँ मेरी और कभी दोस्त बन जाना,
देना नसीहतें मुझे और हिदायतें दोहराना,
जब छाये गम का अँधेरा तोः खुशी की किरण बनके आना,
हाँ तुम्ही से तोः सिखा है मैंने गम मैं मुस्कुराना,

कहता है मन मेरा रहके दूर तुमसे मुझे अब एक लम्हा भी नही बिताना,
अब बस "गुड्डू" को तोः है अपनी "परी दीदी" के पास है जाना,
हैं बहुत से एहसास दिल मैं समाये पता नही अब इन्हे कैसे है समझाना,
बस जान लो इतना "दीदी" बहुत याद आता है तुम्हारा "भाई" कहके बुलाना,

This poem is for my beloved sister...........

From A Poetic Brother Who Misses Her Sister Alot...

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shaad bhai, behad shukriya padhne ke liye, sach kahun toh meri didi itni acchi hai k meri jagah koi aur hota, toh who bhi aisa hi kuch likh deta unke liye....
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Sudhir ji, bahut bahut shukriya tareef ke liye.........
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waaooo nalin ji dil ko chu gayi...bas inta saa dukh hain ki meri koi behan nahi hain...



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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