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Kaash.... - 26th March 2009, 11:58 AM

काश


काश होते हम भी किसी के दिल का सुकूं,
काश हम भी किसी के दिल का करार होते,
खिलती किसी के लबों पे मुस्कान हमारे नाम के ज़िक्र से,
काश किसी की आंखों का हम इंतज़ार होते,

शाम ढले कोई ताकता राह हमारी भी,
काश हम भी किसी किसी के दिल में रहते,
हाथों मैं हमारे भी होता हाथ किसी का,
काश हम भी किसी की निगाहों में बसते,

हर सुबह कोई उठता देख के चेहरा हमारा,
काश हम भी किसी का सूरज होते,
होती जब सावन की पहली बारिश,
काश हम भी किसी की यादों मैं होते,

काश वो समझते दिल की बातें हमारी,
तो हम यह ग़ज़ल कभी न लिखते,
और जो लिखते कोई ग़ज़ल,
तो मोहोब्बत को "काश" न कहते.........

नलिन



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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26th March 2009, 12:26 PM

kaash hote hum bhi kisi ke dil ka sakoon
kaash humbhi kisi ke dil ka karar hote


Shikwe shikayat bheraa yeh kalam acha laga ...

koshish jaari rakhiye.

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Nalin ji namaste,
actuly mai mobile se net chalata hu, mujhe to mujeeb ji ne jo do lines likhi bas ve he samajh aayi aur bahut achhi lagi, mera mobile hindi support nahi karta, aapki do lines se he kuch kuch andaza ho gaya ki aapki ghazal kitni khubsurat hogi, aapse request hai,agar time mile to please isko roman me translate kar deejiyega...
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काश


काश होते हम भी किसी के दिल का सुकूं,
काश हम भी किसी के दिल का करार होते,
खिलती किसी के लबों पे मुस्कान हमारे नाम के ज़िक्र से,
काश किसी की आंखों का हम इंतज़ार होते,

शाम ढले कोई ताकता राह हमारी भी,
काश हम भी किसी किसी के दिल में रहते,
हाथों मैं हमारे भी होता हाथ किसी का,
काश हम भी किसी की निगाहों में बसते,

हर सुबह कोई उठता देख के चेहरा हमारा,
काश हम भी किसी का सूरज होते,
होती जब सावन की पहली बारिश,
काश हम भी किसी की यादों मैं होते,

काश वो समझते दिल की बातें हमारी,
तो हम यह ग़ज़ल कभी न लिखते,
और जो लिखते कोई ग़ज़ल,
तो मोहोब्बत को "काश" न कहते.........

नलिन

Nalin,

Nice to see you back on shayri.com

Nazm acchi lagi... Yunhi likhte rahiye....

Khush rahiye

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काश


काश होते हम भी किसी के दिल का सुकूं,
काश हम भी किसी के दिल का करार होते,
खिलती किसी के लबों पे मुस्कान हमारे नाम के ज़िक्र से,
काश किसी की आंखों का हम इंतज़ार होते,

शाम ढले कोई ताकता राह हमारी भी,
काश हम भी किसी किसी के दिल में रहते,
हाथों मैं हमारे भी होता हाथ किसी का,
काश हम भी किसी की निगाहों में बसते,

हर सुबह कोई उठता देख के चेहरा हमारा,
काश हम भी किसी का सूरज होते,
होती जब सावन की पहली बारिश,
काश हम भी किसी की यादों मैं होते,

काश वो समझते दिल की बातें हमारी,
तो हम यह ग़ज़ल कभी न लिखते,
और जो लिखते कोई ग़ज़ल,
तो मोहोब्बत को "काश" न कहते.........

नलिन
Hi Mr. Nalin....aapki ghazal humei bht pasand ayi...wakai ehsaas ko bht hi khoobsurat andaaz diya hai aapne....keep it up
   
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Thanks - 27th March 2009, 02:50 PM

Hey Purvi, Mujeeb, Buland Shayar , Nazneen, Thanks alot for the praises, I hope i will do more good creative work further..... and

@Buland Shayar,
dude, I will post the roman version ASAP..................... bahut jaldi hi post karunga



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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For BulanD Shayar - 31st March 2009, 01:28 AM

THIS TRANSLATION GOES SPECIALLY FOR MY POETIC FRIEND "BULAND SHAYAR"

Kaash


Kaash hote hum bhi kisi ke dil ka sukun
kaash hum bhi kisi ke dil ka karar hote,
khilti kisi ke labon pe muskaan hamare naam ke zikr se
kaash kisi ki aankhon ka ham intezaar hote

shaam dhale koi takta raah hamari
kaash ham bhi kisi ke dil me rehte
haathon me hamare bhi haath hota kisi ka
kaash hum bhi kisi ki nigahon me baste

har subah koi uththa dekh ke chehra hamara
kaash ham bhi kisi ka suraj hote
hoti jab saawan ki pehli baarish
kaash ham bhi kisi ki yaadon me hote

kaash woh samajhte dil ki baatein hamari
toh ham yeh gazhal kabhi na likhte
aur jo likhte koi gazhal
toh mohobbat ko "kaash" na kehte.....

Nalin The Lost Poet..


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Nalin ji namaste,
actuly mai mobile se net chalata hu, mujhe to mujeeb ji ne jo do lines likhi bas ve he samajh aayi aur bahut achhi lagi, mera mobile hindi support nahi karta, aapki do lines se he kuch kuch andaza ho gaya ki aapki ghazal kitni khubsurat hogi, aapse request hai,agar time mile to please isko roman me translate kar deejiyega...
Dhanyawaad



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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Many many Thanx NALIN JI
Aapki ye ghazal Dil ko chu gayi...

aapke kuch shero me kuch apne jazbaat jodne ki gustaakhi kar raha hu, ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...
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THIS TRANSLATION GOES SPECIALLY FOR MY POETIC FRIEND "BULAND SHAYAR"

Kaash


Kaash hote hum bhi kisi ke dil ka sukun
kaash hum bhi kisi ke dil ka karar hote,
khilti kisi ke labon pe muskaan hamare naam ke zikr se
kaash kisi ki aankho SE HAM B BEKARAR hote


kaash ham bhi kisi ke dil me rehte
haathon me hamare bhi haath hota kisi ka
kaash hum bhi kisi ki nigahon me baste

SHAM DHALE KOI RAH TAKTA HAMARI,
KAASH HUM B KISI KA INTZAAR HOTE..

har subah koi uththa dekh ke chehra hamara
KAASH ham bhi kisi ki RAAT KA KHUMAR hote
hoti jab saawan ki pehli baarish
KAASH ham bhi kisi ka SHRINGAAR HOTE..

kaash woh samajhte dil ki baatein hamari
toh ham yeh gazhal kabhi na likhte
aur jo likhte koi gazhal
toh mohobbat ko "kaash" na kehte.....

Nalin The Lost Poet..
GUSTAAKHI MUAAF NALIN JI, PAR AAPKI GHAZAL THI HE ITNI PYARI K DIL ME APNE AAP KUCH AATA GAYA AUR MAI USKO AAPKI GHAZAL K SAATH JODTA GAYA..
Hope u wont mind
Aapka Dost Buland Raj

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BULAND JI, yeh kaise andaaz hai apka, ek taraf toh apne hamein apna DOST maan liya, aur doosri taraf ham se ijazat le rahe hain, jab yeh dost apka hai, aur yrh dosti apki hai, toh is dost ke likhe hue kalam bhi apke hi hain, ap apne jazabaatoon ko mere kalam se jodke bayankarein toh mere liye is say badi baat kya hogi...................... aapka dil se swagat hai..........

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Many many Thanx NALIN JI
Aapki ye ghazal Dil ko chu gayi...

aapke kuch shero me kuch apne jazbaat jodne ki gustaakhi kar raha hu, ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...

GUSTAAKHI MUAAF NALIN JI, PAR AAPKI GHAZAL THI HE ITNI PYARI K DIL ME APNE AAP KUCH AATA GAYA AUR MAI USKO AAPKI GHAZAL K SAATH JODTA GAYA..
Hope u wont mind
Aapka Dost Buland Raj



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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Thanx Nalin ji,

aapki ghazal ki last wale sher ko thoda modify kr raha hu,
gaur farmaiyega...

KAASH WO SAMJHTE DIL KI BAATE HAMARI,
AUR THODE SAMAJHDAAR HOTE...
TO YE GHAZL NA LIKHI JATI,
AUR GAR LIKHI JATI TO USME
NAHI 'KAASH' NAAM K AASHAAR HOTE....
   
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behand khubsurat sa mod de diya apne toh hamari gazhal ko............. padke bahut accha laga

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Thanx Nalin ji,

aapki ghazal ki last wale sher ko thoda modify kr raha hu,
gaur farmaiyega...

KAASH WO SAMJHTE DIL KI BAATE HAMARI,
AUR THODE SAMAJHDAAR HOTE...
TO YE GHAZL NA LIKHI JATI,
AUR GAR LIKHI JATI TO USME
NAHI 'KAASH' NAAM K AASHAAR HOTE....



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Doston Kuch Likha Hai Maine, Pesh-e-Khidmat Hai...


कुछ रिश्ते होते हैं "हवाओं" की तरह,

बनके "खुशबू" ज़िन्दगी मैं घुल जाया करते हैं,


कुछ शख्स होते हैं "धुन" की तरह,
बनके "ग़ज़ल" ज़िन्दगी सुरमई कर जाया करते हैं,


जाने क्यूँ जब भी ज़िक्र होता है नाम का आपके,
हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" को महसूस कर जाया करते हैं.......

नलिन

Roman Hindi Version
Kucch Rishety Hote Hain "Hawaon" Ki Tarah,
Banke "Khushbu" Zindagi Me Ghul Jaya Karte Hain,

Kuch Shaqs Hote Hain "Dhun" Ki Tarah,
Banke "Gazhal" Zindagi Surmayee Kar Jaya Karte Hain,

Jaane Kyun Jab Bhi Zikr Hota Hai Naam Ka Apke,
Ham "Gazhal" Ki "Dhun" Aur "Hawaon" Ki "Khushbu" Ko Mehsus Kar Jaya Karte Hain...

Nalin



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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kaash
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kya baat hain itne achhe ehsaas kaha se aate hain
bahot hi pyari nazm hain tumhari
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muskaan ji, bahut bahut shukriya......... apne waqt nikal ke pada yahi hamare liye bahut badi baat hai............... apka bahut dhanyawad
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kaash
bahot achha likha hain aapne
kya baat hain itne achhe ehsaas kaha se aate hain
bahot hi pyari nazm hain tumhari
keep it up



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Nalin Jii..........

Wel come Back............... Aapki is khubsurat rachna per meri to nazar hi nahi gayi thi... sach mein bahut khoob likha hai aapne... "Kaash" ko bahut sahiN use kiya hai....
Aapki yeh rachna bahut pasand aayi.... yeh stanza bahut achche lage...

हर सुबह कोई उठता देख के चेहरा हमारा,
काश हम भी किसी का सूरज होते,

होती जब सावन की पहली बारिश,
काश हम भी किसी की यादों मैं होते,

काश वो समझते दिल की बातें हमारी,
तो हम यह ग़ज़ल कभी न लिखते,
और जो लिखते कोई ग़ज़ल,
तो मोहोब्बत को "काश" न कहते.........


Mehfil mein aate rahiye...
Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...


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Khwahish bahut bahut shukriya......
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Nalin Jii..........

Wel come Back............... Aapki is khubsurat rachna per meri to nazar hi nahi gayi thi... sach mein bahut khoob likha hai aapne... "Kaash" ko bahut sahiN use kiya hai....
Aapki yeh rachna bahut pasand aayi.... yeh stanza bahut achche lage...

हर सुबह कोई उठता देख के चेहरा हमारा,
काश हम भी किसी का सूरज होते,
होती जब सावन की पहली बारिश,
काश हम भी किसी की यादों मैं होते,

काश वो समझते दिल की बातें हमारी,
तो हम यह ग़ज़ल कभी न लिखते,
और जो लिखते कोई ग़ज़ल,
तो मोहोब्बत को "काश" न कहते.........


Mehfil mein aate rahiye...
Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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:) - 12th May 2013, 05:18 AM




Waah Waah Nalin Ji dil ko chu gayi...likhte rahiye...




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काश


काश होते हम भी किसी के दिल का सुकूं,
काश हम भी किसी के दिल का करार होते,
खिलती किसी के लबों पे मुस्कान हमारे नाम के ज़िक्र से,
काश किसी की आंखों का हम इंतज़ार होते,

शाम ढले कोई ताकता राह हमारी भी,
काश हम भी किसी किसी के दिल में रहते,
हाथों मैं हमारे भी होता हाथ किसी का,
काश हम भी किसी की निगाहों में बसते,

हर सुबह कोई उठता देख के चेहरा हमारा,
काश हम भी किसी का सूरज होते,
होती जब सावन की पहली बारिश,
काश हम भी किसी की यादों मैं होते,

काश वो समझते दिल की बातें हमारी,
तो हम यह ग़ज़ल कभी न लिखते,
और जो लिखते कोई ग़ज़ल,
तो मोहोब्बत को "काश" न कहते.........

नलिन
   
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