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Love Mohobbat Hai Kya bas aise hi ek pal me maine hai jaana.. - 27th March 2009, 02:56 PM

मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना......

वो झुकी झुकी सी आँखें उसकी और लबों पे मुस्कान का खिल आना,
बस मेरी एक छुअन से उसका ख़ुद में सिमट जाना,
फिर हौले से खोलना झील सी आँखें और मेरा उनमे डूब जाना,
शरारत भरी निगाहों से फिर मेरे दिल मैं उसका उतर जाना,
रखना फिर मेरे कांधे पे सर अपना और उसका वो ग़ज़ल गुनगुनाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना.......

वो पायल की झंकार और उसकी चूड़ियों का खनखनाना,
चाल में मस्ती और उसका आँचल को लहराना,
सुनकर मेरी बातों को उसका हौले से मुस्कुराना,
मेरी हंसी मैं ढूँढना खुशी और मेरी उदासी मैं उदास हो जाना,
जो लगे चोट मुझे तोः रो-रो के उसका बेहाल हो जाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना.......

वो करना शाम ढले तक बातें और थाम के हाथ मेरा सपने सजाना,
बहुत मासूमियत से उसका मुझे ज़िन्दगी का फलसफा समझाना,
जब हो लम्हा उदासी भरा तोः उसका मुझे गले लगाना,
छाये जब अँधेरा गम का तोः खुशी की किरन बन जाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना......


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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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27th March 2009, 03:05 PM

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मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना......

वो झुकी झुकी सी आँखें उसकी और लबों पे मुस्कान का खिल आना,
बस मेरी एक छुअन से उसका ख़ुद में सिमट जाना,
फिर हौले से खोलना झील सी आँखें और मेरा उनमे डूब जाना,
शरारत भरी निगाहों से फिर मेरे दिल मैं उसका उतर जाना,
रखना फिर मेरे कांधे पे सर अपना और उसका वो ग़ज़ल गुनगुनाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना.......

वो पायल की झंकार और उसकी चूड़ियों का खनखनाना,
चाल में मस्ती और उसका आँचल को लहराना,
सुनकर मेरी बातों को उसका हौले से मुस्कुराना,
मेरी हंसी मैं ढूँढना खुशी और मेरी उदासी मैं उदास हो जाना,
जो लगे चोट मुझे तोः रो-रो के उसका बेहाल हो जाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना.......

वो करना शाम ढले तक बातें और थाम के हाथ मेरा सपने सजाना,
बहुत मासूमियत से उसका मुझे ज़िन्दगी का फलसफा समझाना,
जब हो लम्हा उदासी भरा तोः उसका मुझे गले लगाना,
छाये जब अँधेरा गम का तोः खुशी की किरन बन जाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना,
मोहोब्बत है क्या बस ऐसे ही एक पल मैं मैंने है जाना......

For More of My Poetry & Couplets Please Visit My Blog at
www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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"MASHA ALLAH' kaafi khoobsurat aur romantic poem hai...........KEEP IT UP
   
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27th March 2009, 03:31 PM

Bhai aapne mohobbat ke sunhere ahsason ko jana aur bayan kiya Bahut badiya Amazing,
But

Bhigi bhigi palaon par Itminan kyun hai
Toot gaya dil phir bhi armaan kyun hai
Mohobbat me agar ghar baste hi hai to
Ujadi hui mohobbat ki dastane kyun hai


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1st April 2009, 03:48 PM

kya baat hai hamari mohhobbat pe, itna kam response..................
Does posting poem in hindi really borther readers..............?



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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Hi Nalin,

muje to ek arsa ho gaya ise padhe huwe.... tab bhi bahot pasand aaya tha aur aaj bhee...

waqyi bahot hee khubsurat hai.....


Yunhi likhte raho aur bazm ki raunak badhate raho.....

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bahut romantic aur khubsoorat likha hai.....keep it up


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@ PURVI JI
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Tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...........................



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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3rd June 2009, 09:33 PM

Roman Hindi Version

Mohobbat hai kya bas aise hi ek pal me maine hai jaana....

Woh Jhuki Jhuki Si Aankhen uski aur labon pe muskaan ka khil jaana,
bas meri ek chua.n se uska khud me simat jaana,
phir haule se kholna jheel si aankhein aur mera unme doob jaana,
shararat bhari nigahon se phir uska mere dil me utar jaana,
rakhne mere kandhe pe sir apna aur uska woh gazhal gungunana,
mohobbat hai kya bas aise hi ek pal me maine hai jaana


Woh Payal Ki jhankaar aur uski chooriyon ka khankhanana,
chaal me masti aur uska aanchal ko lehrana,
sunkar meri baaton ko uska haule se muskuraana,
meri hansi me dhundhna khushi aur meri udasi me udas ho jaana,
jo lage chot mujhe toh ro-ro ke uska behal ho jaana,
mohobbat hai kya bas aise hi ek pal me maine hai jaana


Woh karna shaam dhale tak baatein aur tham ke haath mera sapne sajana,
bahut masumiyat se uska mujhe zindagi ka falsafa samjhana,
jab ho lamha udasi bhara to uska mujhe gale lagana,
chhaye jab andhera gam ka toh khushi ki kiran ban jaana,
mohobbat hai kya bas aise hi ek pal me maine hai jaana,


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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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very heart touching...........lovely
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Hey Praneeta,

Thanks alot...............It is so wonderful to have you on this thread........my poem touched ur heart and i got praises from u, i consider myself quite lucky...........thank u .............
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very heart touching...........lovely
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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