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"yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul" - 15th April 2009, 08:00 PM

Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul



Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


Goodbye SDC

Diya

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Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai bari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul
sach me diya bahut khoob likha hai tumne...
har ek ashar complete hai...

kitna dard bhara likha hai tumne!!!!!

padh ke dil bhar aaya..ki meri diya aisa bhi sochti hai...
babu sach me tuney aaj bahut hi umda likha hai...

ye ghazal mujhe ab tak ki sabse achi ghazal lagi...

dil se daad tujhe...

mere paas abhi shabad hi nhi hain bayaan karne ke liye...

tuney badi hi aasaani se ek sachaai ko naya roop diya hai...

bus kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai ki tu bhi ek din aise hi humein chhod ke jayegi..

i will miss u humesha...

keep smiling...

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Aadaab Diya Ji
Diya ji bahut khoob ehsaas pesh kiye aapne ek beti ke dil ki baat bakhubi keh si aapne apni is umda gazal mein dil khush ho gaya aapko itna aacha likhte hue dekh kar khaaksaar daad deta kai unhi likhti rahey...TC


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Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai bari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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16th April 2009, 12:13 AM

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Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul


its just AWESOME diya..........u've touched my heart...har ek lafz ki sachchai ne dil aur rooh ko cheer ke rakh diya...is sachchai se chahe jitna dur bhaago,par hota aakhir yahi hai...ladki to hoti hi hai PARAYI......u made me cry....har ko baar baar padha aur zaar zaar royi...


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16th April 2009, 12:48 AM

Diya ji,

Aap ladkiyo ki ye sachhi padi maine, kafi dard bara hai, mayka chhod ek jaate ek dulhan ke man ke conditon ko aap ne kafi achhe se represent kiya hai.. Kafi kaabile tarif hai hai, aap ke ye lines..

Aap ke Line ke liye main bhi aapni likhi kuch line sunata hu, jara dhyan deke padiyega kyuki isme mera desi touch hai, local language ka bhi kafi use hai isme..

hope aap ko pasnd aayegi..


Regard -->

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Yeh duniyaa ki reet Sada se chali hai aai..
Beti praya dhan, kal kisi aur ke ghar jai..

Moh na laga babul aapni betiya se itana...
Jab Jai hai aangahn chhod, tohe bhi rula jai..

Itana kahe ko tutat hai jawat dekh ooke...
Tor gharana chhod ke woh kahi aur ghar basaye jai..

Hash ke Vidaa kariya, aashirwad deva tor ladali ko..
Taaki aage oohar jindagi khusiyoo se bhar jai..!!



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Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......

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Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul
Simply superb..........tumhari ye ghazal dil ko chu gai aur aankhe nam kar gai........tumhari abtak ki best ghazal hai ye........KEEP IT UP DEAR



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Wah Wah Wah .................. Kya ahsas hai Diya jii har line's haqeekhat bayan karti hai,
aur aapne ise baqubi pesh bhi kiya Daad kabul kijiye, Aur likhti rahiye.

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Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul


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16th April 2009, 06:16 PM

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Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul

diya ji apne bahut acha likha hai. aise vida jab hoti beti tab humesha aisa hi mahol bana hota hai. khush rahiye humesha humari bhi khusi mil jaaye apko.
apne ye baat bilkul sahi kahi hai saat fero se banta hai risthna saat janam ka
Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul


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Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul


very nice diya.....................

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Mahfil ko Diya ka Salaam,
aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul
Pyaari Diya,

Ek aisi sachaii ko tumne chand labzo.N mei.N bayan kiya hai...... jis sachaii mei.N chipe dard se waqif hote huwe bhi har Maa-Papa ka yehi sapna hota hai ki apni ladali ke jivan mei.N yeh rasam dher saari khushiya.N le kar aaye....

Yeh ghazal padhkar mere samne woh saari baate.N tazza ho gayi......

har baat ko tumne bahot hee khubsurati se is ghazal ke zariye pesh kiya hai....Very good job Diya.....


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19th April 2009, 01:07 PM

Diya ji


aapki "yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul" ye Rachna pad ke anayas hi meri aanke gili ho gai. bahut hi zindgi ke paas ki rachna hai. Naari ke marm ko uzagar karti sashakt kriti lagi mujhe.

aage bhi aap se mann ko chhu lene wali rachnaye padne ko milengi. Iss ummeed ke saath apni baat puri karta hu.


MERI TARHA TUMNE BHI KABHI AISE SOCHA HOGA !
JO AB TAK NAHI HUAA, WOH AAGE BHI KAISE HOGA !!
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sach me diya bahut khoob likha hai tumne...
har ek ashar complete hai...

kitna dard bhara likha hai tumne!!!!!

padh ke dil bhar aaya..ki meri diya aisa bhi sochti hai...
babu sach me tuney aaj bahut hi umda likha hai...

ye ghazal mujhe ab tak ki sabse achi ghazal lagi...

dil se daad tujhe...

mere paas abhi shabad hi nhi hain bayaan karne ke liye...

tuney badi hi aasaani se ek sachaai ko naya roop diya hai...

bus kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai ki tu bhi ek din aise hi humein chhod ke jayegi..

i will miss u humesha...

keep smiling...

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Diya ji bahut khoob ehsaas pesh kiye aapne ek beti ke dil ki baat bakhubi keh si aapne apni is umda gazal mein dil khush ho gaya aapko itna aacha likhte hue dekh kar khaaksaar daad deta kai unhi likhti rahey...TC

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its just AWESOME diya..........u've touched my heart...har ek lafz ki sachchai ne dil aur rooh ko cheer ke rakh diya...is sachchai se chahe jitna dur bhaago,par hota aakhir yahi hai...ladki to hoti hi hai PARAYI......u made me cry....har ko baar baar padha aur zaar zaar royi...
Sukriya Lamha sweety
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Aap ladkiyo ki ye sachhi padi maine, kafi dard bara hai, mayka chhod ek jaate ek dulhan ke man ke conditon ko aap ne kafi achhe se represent kiya hai.. Kafi kaabile tarif hai hai, aap ke ye lines..

Aap ke Line ke liye main bhi aapni likhi kuch line sunata hu, jara dhyan deke padiyega kyuki isme mera desi touch hai, local language ka bhi kafi use hai isme..

hope aap ko pasnd aayegi..

Regard -->

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Yeh duniyaa ki reet Sada se chali hai aai..
Beti praya dhan, kal kisi aur ke ghar jai..

Moh na laga babul aapni betiya se itana...
Jab Jai hai aangahn chhod, tohe bhi rula jai..

Itana kahe ko tutat hai jawat dekh ooke...
Tor gharana chhod ke woh kahi aur ghar basaye jai..

Hash ke Vidaa kariya, aashirwad deva tor ladali ko..
Taaki aage oohar jindagi khusiyoo se bhar jai..!!


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Meri aapni kalam se.. ** OMi **
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So nice of u Omi jee
youn hi saath detey rahiye


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Simply superb..........tumhari ye ghazal dil ko chu gai aur aankhe nam kar gai........tumhari abtak ki best ghazal hai ye........KEEP IT UP DEAR
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koshish karenge


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aur aapne ise baqubi pesh bhi kiya Daad kabul kijiye, Aur likhti rahiye.

Sukriya sameer jee
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diya ji apne bahut acha likha hai. aise vida jab hoti beti tab humesha aisa hi mahol bana hota hai. khush rahiye humesha humari bhi khusi mil jaaye apko.
apne ye baat bilkul sahi kahi hai saat fero se banta hai risthna saat janam ka
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thanx a lot Dinu
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Me hamesha uparwale se yeh dua karta hun ki meri ek beti zarur ho, aur yeh ehsaas itna kareeb hai mere dil ke ki ab kya bataun..........

aur apki yeh poem padke , meri aankhon me aansu hi aa gaye.........Apne toh har ladki ke haal-e-dil bahut khub bayan kiya hai...............
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Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
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Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
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Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul



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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Babul tere da dil kare dhiye meriye
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sada rahe guddiyaan patoel to khed-di
chuk chuk goudi te khindavaan

ma kade bhen bibi kade beti
tere bina dunia adhoori hai
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Bahut khoob Diyaa,

Really tum to ab bahot badi shayar ban gayi ho, Bahot pyaare khyaal aur usse bhi pyaare alfaaz. Great.

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aaj ek sachai ko aap sabke samne rakhne ja rahi hun ,
yeh woh pal hai jo har ladki ke zindagi mein aate hai ....
aur har koi isko mehsus karta hai.....

yeh sirf mere dil ke ehesaas hai jise mein aap sab se share kar rahi hoon
Shayad aapko pasand aaye ....yeh ghazal humesha mere Dil ke kareeb rahegi
ghaltiyan keliye muaafi ki haqdar hu..............





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Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
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Pleasure is mIne

ji.. jaroor... siQayat ka mauka naa denge.. dun worry..


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Wow diya.. Itne khoobsoorat jasbaat... Very nice... Full of feelings.... Ek kadvi sacchai ko bahut hee sundarta se byaan kiya hai aapne... I appreciate it
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very nice diya.....................

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Pyaari Diya,

Ek aisi sachaii ko tumne chand labzo.N mei.N bayan kiya hai...... jis sachaii mei.N chipe dard se waqif hote huwe bhi har Maa-Papa ka yehi sapna hota hai ki apni ladali ke jivan mei.N yeh rasam dher saari khushiya.N le kar aaye....

Yeh ghazal padhkar mere samne woh saari baate.N tazza ho gayi......

har baat ko tumne bahot hee khubsurati se is ghazal ke zariye pesh kiya hai....Very good job Diya.....
meri Di,
kaise ho aap ..?
yeh vo ehesaas hai jis se aap gujar chuke ho ....har ladki ke life mein yeh din to jarur aati hai .........yeh aisa dard hai jis se bayaan karne ko alfaz bhi kam pad jate hai
kya kahoon main samjh meN nahi aa rahi hai
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Real Writers write on hearts! And you did that here!
This is one of the best creation I have ever read!
It has an ocean of real feelings.
will wait to read more from you as From now on you are among My Favorates.

God Bless You!
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Diya ji


aapki "yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul" ye Rachna pad ke anayas hi meri aanke gili ho gai. bahut hi zindgi ke paas ki rachna hai. Naari ke marm ko uzagar karti sashakt kriti lagi mujhe.

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MERI TARHA TUMNE BHI KABHI AISE SOCHA HOGA !
JO AB TAK NAHI HUAA, WOH AAGE BHI KAISE HOGA !!
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Naresh jee,
aapko meri kalam achhi lagi mujhe khusi hui
yeh rachna ek sachai hai jiske saath har aurat ko jina padta hai
yeh dard sirf ek aurat hi samjhti hai

aapne is dard ko samjhe apni rai diye mujhe achha laga
Youn hi saath dete rahiye
main koshish karoongi aage se isse bhi kuchh achhi ghazal kahu

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Me hamesha uparwale se yeh dua karta hun ki meri ek beti zarur ho, aur yeh ehsaas itna kareeb hai mere dil ke ki ab kya bataun..........

aur apki yeh poem padke , meri aankhon me aansu hi aa gaye.........Apne toh har ladki ke haal-e-dil bahut khub bayan kiya hai...............
Nalin,
main uparwale se duaa karti hun tumhari 2 beti ho
is dard se tum bhi gujro .............
betion ke saath har ehesaash ko mehsoosh karo
betiyaN ghar ki rounak hai

ghazal achhi lagi mujhe khusi hui
apna khayal rakhna
Khus rahna

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yuN hi likhti rahiye


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Babul tere da dil kare dhiye meriye
doli tennu kade na bithavaan
sada rahe guddiyaan patoel to khed-di
chuk chuk goudi te khindavaan

ma kade bhen bibi kade beti
tere bina dunia adhoori hai
teri is kukkh bich dunia de sukh
dhiye teri doli toruni zaroori hai

"Marjana-maan" ta hai gunahaa.n da hi marya
doli wala punn ta kamavaan .............

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Bahut khoob Diyaa,

Really tum to ab bahot badi shayar ban gayi ho, Bahot pyaare khyaal aur usse bhi pyaare alfaaz. Great.

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Har koi nibhaaey yeh duniya daari babul
beti vidaa karne kii teri hai baari babul

Chhor ke chali jayegi beti maayka apna
sunehri yaadeiN bachpan ki saari babul

Rah jayenge pichhe apne khoon k rishte
yeh duniyaa ki reet kitni niyaari babul

Maa ke aanchal ki chaw jab naa milegi
khoob royegi tab teri raaj-dulaari babul

Saat feroN me banega rishta saat janam ka
fir paraaii ho jayegi beti tumhaari babul

Kaise jiyegi Maa judai beti ki seh kar
ye rasm padegi uspe bahot bhaari babul

Teri har yaad ko dil mein basa kar Diya
ho jayegi apne saajaN kii pyaari babul

Pyari Diya.....tere yeh ahsaas maine bahut baar padeN hai, par har baar pad kar aise hi lout gaye, lafzo.n ki kami lagi har baar, ki kya reply karuN, ahsaas bahut najuk se haiN, dil ko chu gaye har baat, yeh ahsaas jitna dil ko gudgudane wala hai ki ab muje mera jivan saathi mil raha hai utna hi dil dukhane wala bhi hai (ki babul mera naihar chutta jaye)....tumne ba-khoobi pesh kiye haiN yeh ahsaas.
aur meri dil se dua hai ki har ladki ko apne sasuraal meiN etna pyar miley ki woh apna maykaa bhool jaye.....ameeN

duao.n ke saath
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