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Love Jab Woh "Ufff" Kaha Karti Hai - 16th May 2009, 02:57 PM

जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

नलिन


Roman Hindi Version Of The Above Poem

Muskuraye Jab Woh Toh Sari Kaynat Hansa Karti Hai,
Pade Uske Kadam Jahan Woh Jagah Jannat Hua Karti Hai,
Dil Ke Sagar Ne Ehsaason Ki Ek Leher Utha Karti Hai,
Meri Badmashiyon Pe Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jo Mudke Dekh Le Bas Ek Nazar Toh Zindagi Thama Karti Hai,
Uske Har Kadam Ki Aaahat Pe Rituayein Badla Karti Hain
Mere Bikhre Se LAfzon Ki Gazhal Bana Karti Hai,
Sunke Mere Kafiye Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jab Bhi Mil Jaye Woh Toh Khushiyan Inayat Karti Hai,
Apni Pyari Si Baaton Se Man Ko Chua Karti Hai,
Meri Zindagi Ki Rehguzar Ko Manzil Mila Karti Hai,
Sunke Meri Daastan-E-Zindagi Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,
Yeh Kaisi Kashish Uske Lafzon Me Hua Karti Hai,
Zindagi Se hoti Hai Mohobbat Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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No Comments..........On My Poem......................



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
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17th May 2009, 03:16 AM

good one.


thanks for sharing.


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khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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17th May 2009, 03:56 AM

thank you aarya, for sparing ur precious time for checking out this poem........... thanks once again....
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good one.


thanks for sharing.


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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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kaatti-kaatti.......... sabche kattii, ab me tisi se bhi baat nai talunga, toi bhi meli poem nahi padta.......................



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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20th May 2009, 02:32 PM

Uff sry sry sry Nalin jee.............

Gustakhi muaaf kijiye ........aapki is poem per humari nazar nahi padi thi.......yeh to bahot bada gunah ho gaya ab kya kiya jaye...?

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,


Qatil hai jee Qatil hai

kaise aapki sukriya ada karooN jee
ek khubsoorat poem per janib ke daad

aise hi likhte rahiye
apne ehesaas se ru-ba-ru hone ka mouka detey rahiye

Dua.oN ke saath
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kisi ka dil kaise rakha jaaye yeh apko khub aata hai, bas mera dil behlane ke liye apne itni tareef kardi meri poem ki.................. khuda kare ki ap jaisa koi dost mujhe mil jaaye.................... Diya, tumne doobte ko sahara diya hai, mujhe toh laga ki yeh jaise yeh poem meri ekdum flop ho gayi, actually is poem ko maine kisi ke liye likha tha, pata nahi mera kya rishta hia ussay, dosti se badkar hai par pyar toh nahi ho sakta hai yeh bhi me janta hun............... aur sab kehte hain ki sacche ehsaas ke saath kisi poem ko likha jaaye, toh logon ke dilon ko chhu jaati hai aur unke muh se wah-wah apne ap nikalne lagta hai................

par lagta hai shayad mere ehsaason me woh baat nahi...........pata nahi yeh sab kyun likh diya yahan pe..............par sacchi-mucchi bahut bahut thank you, ki apne yeh poem padi.........

Nalin

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Uff sry sry sry Nalin jee.............

Gustakhi muaaf kijiye ........aapki is poem per humari nazar nahi padi thi.......yeh to bahot bada gunah ho gaya ab kya kiya jaye...?

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,


Qatil hai jee Qatil hai

kaise aapki sukriya ada karooN jee
ek khubsoorat poem per janib ke daad

aise hi likhte rahiye
apne ehesaas se ru-ba-ru hone ka mouka detey rahiye

Dua.oN ke saath
Diya



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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kisi ka dil kaise rakha jaaye yeh apko khub aata hai, bas mera dil behlane ke liye apne itni tareef kardi meri poem ki.................. khuda kare ki ap jaisa koi dost mujhe mil jaaye.................... Diya, tumne doobte ko sahara diya hai, mujhe toh laga ki yeh jaise yeh poem meri ekdum flop ho gayi, actually is poem ko maine kisi ke liye likha tha, pata nahi mera kya rishta hia ussay, dosti se badkar hai par pyar toh nahi ho sakta hai yeh bhi me janta hun............... aur sab kehte hain ki sacche ehsaas ke saath kisi poem ko likha jaaye, toh logon ke dilon ko chhu jaati hai aur unke muh se wah-wah apne ap nikalne lagta hai................

par lagta hai shayad mere ehsaason me woh baat nahi...........pata nahi yeh sab kyun likh diya yahan pe..............par sacchi-mucchi bahut bahut thank you, ki apne yeh poem padi.........

Nalin

Nalin jee ,
main ek baat kehna chahati hun ....pls aap dil chhota mat kijiye
ehesaas kis wah wah ki mohtaaz nahi hai .........sache ehesaas se jo poem aapne likha hai aaj nahi to kal ...kisi na kisi ke dil ko jarur chhu jayegi .............khud per yakeen rakhiye

mujhe baatein itna ghuma firake kehna to nahi aata ..........ghalat hindi bolti hun isiliye mahfil mein bahot kam bolne ki koshish karti hu.........


Kya aap mujhse dosti karoge...........


gar aap layak samjhe toh

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Wah Nalin,

It's really superb dear, so romantic superb yaar....

Keep it up bahut hii achche ahsaas bayan kiye hai tumne......

so cute yaar...


Keep posting

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Nalin.....................mere comments agar tumhe manzoooooooooor hai tou bolo ???
   
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Pata Nahi Tha Ki Itni Jadi Dua Kubool ho Jaayegi,
Meri Andheri Si Zindagi Ko 'Diya' Roshan Kar Jaayegi.............

Welcome To My Life............My Dear Friend......... Apki Dosti Hame Dil Se Kubool Hai......

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Kya aap mujhse dosti karoge...........




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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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arey baqtiar bhai sirf manzooooor hi nahi, apke comments toh sir aankhon pe hia.......... aane djiye.hame intezar rahega apke comments ka......
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Nalin.....................mere comments agar tumhe manzoooooooooor hai tou bolo ???



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Thank You ji.............................apne meri poem padi yahi bahut badi baat hai mere liye.... bahut bahut shukriya............
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Wah Nalin,

It's really superb dear, so romantic superb yaar....

Keep it up bahut hii achche ahsaas bayan kiye hai tumne......

so cute yaar...


Keep posting

keep smiling...

God bless you..



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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arey baqtiar bhai sirf manzooooor hi nahi, apke comments toh sir aankhon pe hia.......... aane djiye.hame intezar rahega apke comments ka......

Dude you are totally in love with her....

Unki sirf ek 'ufff' ne ye jaduu kardiya
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Baqtiar Bhai.....

Man gaye apko................. itni instant shayari apne likh di, aur woh bhi aisi ki seedha mere dil ko chuu gayi.........................apko maaan gaye baqtiar bhai........... UR Awesome.

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Unki sirf ek 'ufff' ne ye jaduu kardiya
alfaaz ada kardein tou qayamat hi ajaye

Kehne ko tou wo rakte hai rishta sirf dosti ka
Bekabar jaanti nahi ek uff se uski qaraar ajaye



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Pata Nahi Tha Ki Itni Jadi Dua Kubool ho Jaayegi,
Meri Andheri Si Zindagi Ko 'Diya' Roshan Kar Jaayegi.............

Welcome To My Life............My Dear Friend......... Apki Dosti Hame Dil Se Kubool Hai......
Uff....................

koi tamanna tumhari kabhi nakaam na ho
udas raho tum aisa koi shaam na ho









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Ab aap "ufff" kehne lagihai, toh lagta hai, apke liye bhi ek poem likhni padegi.............................. "Ufff"............
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Uff....................

koi tamanna tumhari kabhi nakaam na ho
udas raho tum aisa koi shaam na ho








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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

नलिन


Roman Hindi Version Of The Above Poem

Muskuraye Jab Woh Toh Sari Kaynat Hansa Karti Hai,
Pade Uske Kadam Jahan Woh Jagah Jannat Hua Karti Hai,
Dil Ke Sagar Ne Ehsaason Ki Ek Leher Utha Karti Hai,
Meri Badmashiyon Pe Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jo Mudke Dekh Le Bas Ek Nazar Toh Zindagi Thama Karti Hai,
Uske Har Kadam Ki Aaahat Pe Rituayein Badla Karti Hain
Mere Bikhre Se LAfzon Ki Gazhal Bana Karti Hai,
Sunke Mere Kafiye Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jab Bhi Mil Jaye Woh Toh Khushiyan Inayat Karti Hai,
Apni Pyari Si Baaton Se Man Ko Chua Karti Hai,
Meri Zindagi Ki Rehguzar Ko Manzil Mila Karti Hai,
Sunke Meri Daastan-E-Zindagi Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,
Yeh Kaisi Kashish Uske Lafzon Me Hua Karti Hai,
Zindagi Se hoti Hai Mohobbat Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

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Nalin jee,

Itne baDhe baDhe umda shayar apki taareef kar chuke hain to samajh me.n hi nahi aa raha kaha se shuru karun...
par haan mujhe ek baat bahut acchi lagi,
ke..
"bhoole se hi sahi aapki ghazal me.n humara naam to aaya........"
jaha tak aapke lajawaab ehsaaso.n ki baat hai to...........
awesome!!
fantastic !!
mind blowing......................................!!!!
bahut acche lage aapke ehsaas.........
and congrats...............aapki iis "uff" ne aapko Diyam jaisi itni pyari dost de di...!!
yun hi likhte rahiye...............
khush rahiye..
God bless you!
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Ritu Jee,
kahin yeh apke naam ka toh asar nahi ke yeh poem ki itni tareef ho gayi hai..... ha ha ha ha,
waise yeh toh sach hai ki mujhe Diya Jaisi dost mil gayi.......bahut khush hun diya jaisi dost paakar..

aur apne is nacheez ki poem ko pada, iske liye apka dil se shukriya ada karta hoon, bas apka pyar yunhi milta raha, toh me bhi yunhi likhta rahunga....

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Nalin jee,

Itne baDhe baDhe umda shayar apki taareef kar chuke hain to samajh me.n hi nahi aa raha kaha se shuru karun...
par haan mujhe ek baat bahut acchi lagi,
ke..
"bhoole se hi sahi aapki ghazal me.n humara naam to aaya........"
jaha tak aapke lajawaab ehsaaso.n ki baat hai to...........
awesome!!
fantastic !!
mind blowing......................................!!!!
bahut acche lage aapke ehsaas.........
and congrats...............aapki iis "uff" ne aapko Diyam jaisi itni pyari dost de di...!!
yun hi likhte rahiye...............
khush rahiye..
God bless you!
aapki ritu



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Hey Nalin...

wah wah.. mar dala yaar...
kya kahar..likha hai yaar... ek "uuf " ne tumhari..gajab kar diya.

bahut badiya ehsaas hai... maza aa gaya..:d
dil wah wah kar raha hai.. Meri diL se daad Qabool kariye...

Yuh hi aapane lafzo se mehfil ashikana banate rahiye..


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जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

नलिन



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NaliN jee,
maine kaha tha na aapse ...yeh "Uff" asar karega magar dheere dhree
har koi aapke fan honge ...........itna achha poem aapne dil se likhe hain
kaise kadr nahin hogi uski itni badi mahfil meiN

bharosha rakhiye apne Qalam per

khudaa aapki kalam ko aur Noor bakshe

Dua.oN ke saath

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OMI Bhai, apke comments padke, toh me kitna khush hua hoon , bat nahi sakta, apne toh bas mera dil khush kar diya, apne waqt nikal ke, is kavita ko pada, uske liye dilse apko shukriya kehna chahta hoon..
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Hey Nalin...

wah wah.. mar dala yaar...
kya kahar..likha hai yaar... ek "uuf " ne tumhari..gajab kar diya.

bahut badiya ehsaas hai... maza aa gaya..:d
dil wah wah kar raha hai.. Meri diL se daad Qabool kariye...

Yuh hi aapane lafzo se mehfil ashikana banate rahiye..

-- Omi



Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Man gaye apko diya jee, apke kadam kya pade is thread par, meri toh poem ko chaar-chand lag gaye.......... aur usse bhi badke khushi toh yeh hai ki, ap jaisi ek bahut acchi dost mujhe mil gayi hai........................

bas ek tere kadmon ki aahat se yeh kamal ho gaya,
kal tak jo tha gumnaam kahin aj woh har kahin roshan ho gaya.....
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NaliN jee,
maine kaha tha na aapse ...yeh "Uff" asar karega magar dheere dhree
har koi aapke fan honge ...........itna achha poem aapne dil se likhe hain
kaise kadr nahin hogi uski itni badi mahfil meiN

bharosha rakhiye apne Qalam per

khudaa aapki kalam ko aur Noor bakshe

Dua.oN ke saath

aapki dost



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Are mere bhai...
tuhmne likha hi itana badiya hai ki..kya kahu.. ek sharat to tumne ehsaaso ke dhage me firo ke, samne rakha.. jo bahut hi kabil-e-tarif hai..

bas.. yuh hi likho aur hume padate raho..

tumhara dost..
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OMI Bhai, apke comments padke, toh me kitna khush hua hoon , bat nahi sakta, apne toh bas mera dil khush kar diya, apne waqt nikal ke, is kavita ko pada, uske liye dilse apko shukriya kehna chahta hoon..


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iska credit me nahi lunga, iska credit toh usko jata hai , jiski "Ufff" ne mujhe majboor kar diya is poem ko likhne par............... Kya Kahun Bas uski "Uffff" me kuch aisa asar tha ki, bas jazbaat beh nikle, aur yeh kavita ban gayi............

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Are mere bhai...
tuhmne likha hi itana badiya hai ki..kya kahu.. ek sharat to tumne ehsaaso ke dhage me firo ke, samne rakha.. jo bahut hi kabil-e-tarif hai..

bas.. yuh hi likho aur hume padate raho..

tumhara dost..
OMi



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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hey DIYA................................ THANKS.......................



Nalin

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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
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Wah Wah, kya mast tareef kari hai apne meri..............kya comparison hai, "Ufff" Ka "Cheenk" se...................... Accha Naaz, tum ek baar "cheenko" , phir me tumhari "cheenk" pe bhi poem likhunga

Waise bahut bahut shukriya, jo apne is nacheez ki poem ko pada........ Aur Reps ke liye apka bahut bahut thank U, apne is chhote baacche ka dhyan rakha bahut bahut shukriya


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Uff....................kya poem hai, excellent, Nalin tum aise poet ho jo cheenk par bhi dil choo lene waala poem likh de, ye to sirf 'Uff' tha , wakai bht hi khoobsurat creation hai............reps ++++ i'll give u after spreading some. great work, keep it up



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nalin jee,
aapki iis "uff!!" ne baDa hungama macha rakkha hai SDC par........
ab humare jaise gareeb likhne walo.n ka kya hoga???
hume.n bhi bataiyega koi aisa hi.... hungama machanne wala word...
khush rahiye aur aise hi hungama machate rahiye...
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Arey koi bhi cheenke feeling toh ek jaisi hi aayegi... ha h ah ah ha, waise meri koi girlfriend nahi hai, this is a public declaration, ,i dont have any GF, i had some crushes and still have few.............. but no GF's..........
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hahahaha........seriously y dnt u try writing smthng on 'cheenk' i've full confidence in u, tum wakai ispar bhi poem likh sakte ho jahan tak mere cheenkne par likhne ka sawaal hai to phir tumhare andar wo feeling nhi ayegi jo tumhari gf k cheenkne par ayegi



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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
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arey ritu ji, aisa mat kahiye, ap toh meri taang khich rhi ho, SDC se pe toh mujhse bhi badke bahut saare fankar mojood hain, me toh kuch bhi nahi, bas ek chhota sa lost poet hun.......... haan yeh vaada raha ki koi hangama machane wala word mila toh aapse zarur kahunga, waise naaz ne ek word suggest kiya hai "Cheenk"...........ap chahe toh ........
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nalin jee,
aapki iis "uff!!" ne baDa hungama macha rakkha hai SDC par........
ab humare jaise gareeb likhne walo.n ka kya hoga???
hume.n bhi bataiyega koi aisa hi.... hungama machanne wala word...
khush rahiye aur aise hi hungama machate rahiye...
God bless you
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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22nd May 2009, 03:57 PM

Hey Praneeta,
Tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya, aur im sure yeh poem toh kuch bhi nahi hai, apke liye toh kisi ne is say bhi acchi poem likhi hogi...........................
is poem ko padne ke liye behad shukriya........
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bahot khub!!!!!!!!!!
kaash aisa koi mere liye bhi likhta.....such lovely feelings
great job.....keep it up
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wahhhhhhhhhhh..... NALIN.....bahut khoob ....'uff' kya pyaar hai........bahut hi pyaare lafzon me dil ke armaan bayaan kar diye aur hamare dil ko chhu liya....awesome............be shaq aap rep+++ deserve karte hai.............keep it up dear...


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thank u @ lamha ji............................ apko poem pasand aayi, mere liye toh yahi bahut badi baat hai, bas ap logon ka pyar yunhi milta raha toh, me bhi yunhi likhta rahunga aur apki khidmat me pesh karta rahunga......
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wahhhhhhhhhhh..... NALIN.....bahut khoob ....'uff' kya pyaar hai........bahut hi pyaare lafzon me dil ke armaan bayaan kar diye aur hamare dil ko chhu liya....awesome............be shaq aap rep+++ deserve karte hai.............keep it up dear...



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जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


मुस्कुराये जब वो तोः सारी कायनात हंसा करती है,
पड़े उसके कदम जहाँ वो जगह जन्नत हुआ करती है,
दिल के सागर में एहसासों की एक लहर उठा करती है,
मेरी बदमाशियों पे जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है


जो मुड़के देख ले बस एक नज़र तोः ज़िन्दगी थमा करती है,
उसके हर कदम की आहट पे ऋतुएं बदला करती है,
मेरे बिखरे से लफ्जों की ग़ज़ल बना करती है,
सुनके मेरे काफिये जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


जब भी मिल जाए वो तोः खुशियाँ इनायत करती है,
अपनी प्यारी बातों से मन को छुआ करती है,
मेरी ज़िन्दगी की रहगुज़र को मंजिल मिला करती है,
सुनके मेरी दास्तान-ए-ज़िन्दगी जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है,


खुदा ही जाने यह कैसी जुस्तुजू साथ मेरे हुआ करती है,
जितना रहता हूँ दूर उससे उतना ही वो मेरे करीब हुआ करती है,
यह कैसी कशिश उसके लफ्जों में हुआ करती है,
ज़िन्दगी से होती है मोहोब्बत जब वो "उफ़" कहा करती है.

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Roman Hindi Version Of The Above Poem

Muskuraye Jab Woh Toh Sari Kaynat Hansa Karti Hai,
Pade Uske Kadam Jahan Woh Jagah Jannat Hua Karti Hai,
Dil Ke Sagar Ne Ehsaason Ki Ek Leher Utha Karti Hai,
Meri Badmashiyon Pe Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jo Mudke Dekh Le Bas Ek Nazar Toh Zindagi Thama Karti Hai,
Uske Har Kadam Ki Aaahat Pe Rituayein Badla Karti Hain
Mere Bikhre Se LAfzon Ki Gazhal Bana Karti Hai,
Sunke Mere Kafiye Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jab Bhi Mil Jaye Woh Toh Khushiyan Inayat Karti Hai,
Apni Pyari Si Baaton Se Man Ko Chua Karti Hai,
Meri Zindagi Ki Rehguzar Ko Manzil Mila Karti Hai,
Sunke Meri Daastan-E-Zindagi Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,
Yeh Kaisi Kashish Uske Lafzon Me Hua Karti Hai,
Zindagi Se hoti Hai Mohobbat Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

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AApki tarrif karne ke liye mere pass laffz nahi hai.
bas aise hi likhte rahi
dil se dua kabool kare
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THANK YOU broken heart ji.......................................apne waqt nikal ke poem ko pada mere liye toh yahi bahut badi baat hai, apka bahut bahut shukriya....
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Very nice Nalinji
AApki tarrif karne ke liye mere pass laffz nahi hai.
bas aise hi likhte rahi
dil se dua kabool kare
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thank u @ lamha ji............................ apko poem pasand aayi, mere liye toh yahi bahut badi baat hai, bas ap logon ka pyar yunhi milta raha toh, me bhi yunhi likhta rahunga aur apki khidmat me pesh karta rahunga......

NALIN....................................just call me LAMHA............ye 'ji' kuch hazam nahi hota..


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lagta hai ap bhi meri hi tarah ke hain, mujhe bhi yeh ji hajam nahi hota.......... woh LAMHA hi behtar rahega...
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NALIN....................................just call me LAMHA............ye 'ji' kuch hazam nahi hota..



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kya kehne!! nalin jee............aapki unke "uff " ne kaafi hulchal machaa diya hai yahan........

bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain............




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Zainy Ji, bahut bahut shukriya is poem ko padne ke liye, bas ap logon ki dua hi hai yeh ki jo is"Ufff" ne itna dhoom macha diya hai SDC....................Shukriya
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kya kehne!! nalin jee............aapki unke "uff " ne kaafi hulchal machaa diya hai yahan........

bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain............



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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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