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Us ne jab jab bhi mujhe dil se pukara Mohsin
Main ne tab tab ye bataya ke tumhara Mohsin
Log sadiyon ki khataon pe bhi khush baste hain
Hum ko lamhon ki wafaon ne ujara Mohsin
Jab aa gaya ho ye yaqin ab woh nahi aaye ga
Gham aur anso ne dia sahara Mohsin
Woh tha jab pas to jeney ko bhi dil karta tha
Ab to pal bhar bhi nahi hota guzara Mohsin
Us ko pana to muqadar ki lakeron mein nahi
Us ka khona bhi karien kesey gavara Mohsin
..>SilenT<..
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Itni muddat baad mile ho!
Kin sochon mein gum phirte ho?
Itne khaif kyun rehte ho?
Hur aahat se dar jate ho
Tez hawa ne mujhse pocha
Rait pe kia likhte rehte ho?
Kash koi hum se bhi pochey
Raat gaye tak kyun jagte ho?
Main darya se bhi darta hon
Tum darya se bhi gehre ho!
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Apne Shehr k sab logon se
Meri khatir kyun uljhe ho?
Hum se na pocho hijar ke qissey
Apni kaho tum kesey ho!
Mohsin tum badnaam boht ho
Jese ho, phir bhi ache ho
Poet: Mohsin Naqvi
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Thak Jao Gi
Pagal ankhon wali larki!
Itne mehnge khawab na dekho____
Thak jao gi!!
Kanch se nazuk khawab tumhare
Toot gaye to
Pachtao gi!!
Soch ka sara ujla kundan
Zabt ki rakh mein ghul jaye ga
Kachey pakkey rishton ki khushbo ka resham
khul jaye ga-!!
Tum kia jano?
Khawab, safar ki dhop ke taishey
Khawab, adhori rat ka dozakh
Khawab, khiyalon ka pachtawa
Khawabon ki manzil ruswai!
Khawabon ka hasil tanhai!!
Tum kia jano?
Mehnge khawab kharedna hon to
Ankhien bechna parti hain____Ya
Rishte bholna parte hain
Andeshon ki rait no phanko
Piyas ki aot sarab na dekho
Itne mehnge khawab no dekho--!!
Thak Jao Gi!!
Poet: Mohsin Naqvi
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3rd September 2009, 03:38 PM
Itna khali to ghar nahi, hum hain!
Hum nahi hain magar nahi, hum hain!!
Chasm-e-dushman ke khuf se pocho
Nok-e-naiza pe sir nahi, hum hain
Sham-e-tanhai gham na kar k tera
Koi bhi humsafar nahi, hum hain
Chand se keh do, be dharak utre
Ghar mein dewar-o-dar nahi, hum hain
Woh jo sab se hain be khaber, tum ho
Jin ko apni khaber nahi, hum hain
Kyun jalate ho jhonpri apni?
Is mein lal-o-gohar nahi, hum hain
Hum hain humzaad, raat ko Mohsin
Jin ki qismat Sehr nahi, hum hain
Poet: Mohsin Naqvi
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5th September 2009, 11:33 AM
thanks for sharing .................................nice poetry.
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"यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया,
के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए........!"
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5th September 2009, 01:59 PM
It's my pleasure Sunita Ji.....
Mohsin Naqvi ki shayri mere dil ko to chu leti hai.......
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5th September 2009, 02:08 PM
Woh tha jab pas to jeney ko bhi dil karta tha
Ab to pal bhar bhi nahi hota guzara Mohsin
Assalam-o-Alaykum Hassan ji bahut hi umda collection aapne yan.ha pesh kiya khaaskar pehle wali gazal ke to kehne hi kya.......hamse yeh gazal bantne ke liye shuhriya janaab
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.

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5th September 2009, 06:56 PM
W/Salam Kashif Bhai,
Mujhe khushi hui yeh sun kar, Mohsin Naqvi is bestest poet my dear,
and his compositions are very very beautiful,
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Ab is se bhar k bhalan kia ho ehtiyaat-e-wafa,
Mai tere shehr se guzron, tujhe khaber na karon!
Wo aik pal ko dikhayai to de kahin Mohsin,
Mai jaan ganva ke bhi us pal ko mukhtasir na karoN!
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30th September 2009, 10:03 AM
Us ko pana to muqadar ki lakeron mein nahi
Us ka khona bhi karien kesey gavara Mohsin
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30th September 2009, 08:10 PM
superb!!....bohat acchi collection hai.....thanks for sharing......
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30th September 2009, 11:35 PM
Zainy Ji,
Boht boht shukria sharing pasand karnay ka 
Aisay hi saath detay rahiye ga,
GOD BLESS YOU,
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Itna khali to ghar nahi, hum hain!
Hum nahi hain magar nahi, hum hain!!
Chasm-e-dushman ke khuf se pocho
Nok-e-naiza pe sir nahi, hum hain
Sham-e-tanhai gham na kar k tera
Koi bhi humsafar nahi, hum hain
Chand se keh do, be dharak utre
Ghar mein dewar-o-dar nahi, hum hain
Woh jo sab se hain be khaber, tum ho
Jin ko apni khaber nahi, hum hain
Kyun jalate ho jhonpri apni?
Is mein lal-o-gohar nahi, hum hain
Hum hain humzaad, raat ko Mohsin
Jin ki qismat Sehr nahi, hum hain
Poet: Mohsin Naqvi
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Itna khali to ghar nahi, hum hain!
Hum nahi hain magar nahi, hum hain!!
kamaal hai ............... 
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Itna khali to ghar nahi, hum hain!
Hum nahi hain magar nahi, hum hain!!
kamaal hai ............... 
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Vikaas Jii,,,
Sharing pasand karnay ka shukria...
Waqai yeh kamal line hai,,,
Itna khali to ghar nahi, hum hain!
Hum nahi hain magar nahi, hum hain...!
Wah......!!
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20th October 2009, 09:27 AM
Badan pe apne lahoo ka libaas rakhta hon,
Main khaas phool hon rangat bhi khas rakhta hon,
Kisi khushi ki bhala ab mujhe khushi kyun ho,
Tumhare ghum se jo khud ko udas rakhta hon,
Main apne Dard kahan bant'ta phiron Mohsin,
K main apni cheezien faqat apne pas rakhta hon,,
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24th October 2009, 11:18 PM
Nice sharing........................................... ........
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Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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Fezan Jii,,
Thanks a lot..........................................
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Badan pe apne lahoo ka libaas rakhta hon,
Main khaas phool hon rangat bhi khas rakhta hon,
Kisi khushi ki bhala ab mujhe khushi kyun ho,
Tumhare ghum se jo khud ko udas rakhta hon,
Main apne Dard kahan bant'ta phiron Mohsin,
K main apni cheezien faqat apne pas rakhta hon,,
Subhan allaha!!
Kya ehsaas hai....
bahut khoob....
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Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
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30th December 2009, 09:48 AM
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Badan pe apne lahoo ka libaas rakhta hon,
Main khaas phool hon rangat bhi khas rakhta hon,
Kisi khushi ki bhala ab mujhe khushi kyun ho,
Tumhare ghum se jo khud ko udas rakhta hon,
Main apne Dard kahan bant'ta phiron Mohsin,
K main apni cheezien faqat apne pas rakhta hon,,
Subhan allaha!!
Kya ehsaas hai....
bahut khoob....
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Sharing pasand karne per shukar-guzaar hooN....
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Wo aik pal ko dikhayai to de kahin Mohsin,
Mai jaan ganva ke bhi us pal ko mukhtasir na karoN!
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Us ko pana to muqadar ki lakeron mein nahi
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sach kahoon to jaan hi le li
very nice thought
keep doing
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sach kahoon to jaan hi le li
very nice thought
keep doing
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20th August 2010, 05:17 PM
Bahut khoob.......Thanks for sharing sir,................. 
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Bahut khoob.......Thanks for sharing sir,................. 
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Be-had shukriya janab..... 
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24th December 2010, 06:57 PM
Thanks for sharing ........hassan Ji ! nice one ............. 
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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Us ne jab jab bhi mujhe dil se pukara Mohsin
Main ne tab tab ye bataya ke tumhara Mohsin
Log sadiyon ki khataon pe bhi khush baste hain
Hum ko lamhon ki wafaon ne ujara Mohsin
Jab aa gaya ho ye yaqin ab woh nahi aaye ga
Gham aur anso ne dia sahara Mohsin
Woh tha jab pas to jeney ko bhi dil karta tha
Ab to pal bhar bhi nahi hota guzara Mohsin
Us ko pana to muqadar ki lakeron mein nahi
Us ka khona bhi karien kesey gavara Mohsin
..>SilenT<..
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aadaab
aaj yahaan se guzraa to janaab muhsin naqvi ke naam ne qadam rok liye
ye badee achhee baat hai ki ostaaz logon ki ghazal ko is tarah se pesh kiyaa jaaye taaki ham jaison ko seekhne ka maoqa mil sake
magar bahot adab w ehteraam se kahgun gaa ki
Jab aa gaya ho ye yaqin ab woh nahi aaye ga
Gham aur anso ne dia sahara Mohsin
ye sher bahr me nahi hai main ye maanne ko taiyaar hi nahi hun ki janaab muhsin jaise azeem shair ki ye ghalatee ho gee .. naahi aisaa ho hi nahi saktaa ... wo ek shaair hi nahi zabaano bayaan pe qudrat rakhne waale mofakkir hain un ka shumaar waqt ke chotee ke chand shairon me hotaa hai ye janaab us moqaam pe hain jahaan in ke kalaam se daleel di jaatee hai
aise me yaqeenan ye ghalatee typing ki hogee is liye bahot adab ke saath guzaarish hai ise durust kiyaa jaaye
aor wo bhi is liye ki in jaise tamaam shoraa ka kalaam hamaaree waraacat hai jis ki hefaazat ham sab pe farz hai
main ummeed kartaa hun ki jald az jald ise durust kar liyaa jaaye gaa
mukhlis
masood hassaas
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26th December 2010, 12:16 AM
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aadaab
aaj yahaan se guzraa to janaab muhsin naqvi ke naam ne qadam rok liye
ye badee achhee baat hai ki ostaaz logon ki ghazal ko is tarah se pesh kiyaa jaaye taaki ham jaison ko seekhne ka maoqa mil sake
magar bahot adab w ehteraam se kahgun gaa ki
Jab aa gaya ho ye yaqin ab woh nahi aaye ga
Gham aur anso ne dia sahara Mohsin
ye sher bahr me nahi hai main ye maanne ko taiyaar hi nahi hun ki janaab muhsin jaise azeem shair ki ye ghalatee ho gee .. naahi aisaa ho hi nahi saktaa ... wo ek shaair hi nahi zabaano bayaan pe qudrat rakhne waale mofakkir hain un ka shumaar waqt ke chotee ke chand shairon me hotaa hai ye janaab us moqaam pe hain jahaan in ke kalaam se daleel di jaatee hai
aise me yaqeenan ye ghalatee typing ki hogee is liye bahot adab ke saath guzaarish hai ise durust kiyaa jaaye
aor wo bhi is liye ki in jaise tamaam shoraa ka kalaam hamaaree waraacat hai jis ki hefaazat ham sab pe farz hai
main ummeed kartaa hun ki jald az jald ise durust kar liyaa jaaye gaa
mukhlis
masood hassaas
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Hame aagah karaane ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaH Masood sahab,
waise maine bhi is ghazal ko google per bohat dhooNda, aur kayi sites per yeh ayse hi posted hai,Jaise Hassan sahab ne post kiya..
per ek site per sahi ghazal mil gayi,
shayed yeh sher kuch is taraH hai
"Jab aagaya ho ye yaqeeN ab woh nahiN aayega.
Gham aur aaNsu ne diya dil ko sahara mohsin."
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nice collection. thanks for sharing...................................
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Thanks for sharing ........hassan Ji ! nice one ............. 
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14th December 2011, 08:08 AM
What an innocent flow and B'ful feels... It just went on.. went on... and touched... Looks like a young small town girl fallen in love...
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Thak Jao Gi
Pagal ankhon wali larki!
Itne mehnge khawab na dekho____
Thak jao gi!!
Kanch se nazuk khawab tumhare
Toot gaye to
Pachtao gi!!
Soch ka sara ujla kundan
Zabt ki rakh mein ghul jaye ga
Kachey pakkey rishton ki khushbo ka resham
khul jaye ga-!!
Tum kia jano?
Khawab, safar ki dhop ke taishey
Khawab, adhori rat ka dozakh
Khawab, khiyalon ka pachtawa
Khawabon ki manzil ruswai!
Khawabon ka hasil tanhai!!
Tum kia jano?
Mehnge khawab kharedna hon to
Ankhien bechna parti hain____Ya
Rishte bholna parte hain
Andeshon ki rait no phanko
Piyas ki aot sarab na dekho
Itne mehnge khawab no dekho--!!
Thak Jao Gi!!
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15th December 2011, 08:33 AM
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nice collection. thanks for sharing...................................
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11th March 2012, 11:42 AM
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What an innocent flow and B'ful feels... It just went on.. went on... and touched... Looks like a young small town girl fallen in love...
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Pallavi Jii,,
Thankyou so so much for giving your precious
time to my sharing........ 
Take very good care of yourself,
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