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Lutff toofaan ka....... - 16th December 2009, 04:54 PM

Well Aplog ko bahut bore kiya games khel khel key ab kuch pad lijiye
Ab ye nahi kehna...
Baqz sudhar gaya and all that blah blah blah and yack yack yack...
I dont know why am posting this here ............



Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala

Kal talak rah-e-wafa mein jo mere saath raha
Ye wohi shakhs hai anjaan sa janey wala

Sirf yaadein hee nahi, Khwaab, Umeedein, khushiyan...
Ghar ka ghar ley gaya ghar chhod ke janey wala

Kho gaya hai kahan shohraat ki bulandi chu kar...
Saari duniya ko isharon pe nachaney wala

Tod dey ta hai hawaon ki shikayaat sun kar,
Ek gharonda Lab-e-sahil pe bananey wala

Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala

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16th December 2009, 05:54 PM

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Well Aplog ko bahut bore kiya games khel khel key ab kuch pad lijiye
Ab ye nahi kehna...
Baqz sudhar gaya and all that blah blah blah and yack yack yack...
I dont know why am posting this here ............



Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala

Kal talak rah-e-wafa mein jo mere saath raha
Ye wohi shakhs hai anjaan sa janey wala

Sirf yaadein hee nahi, Khwaab, Umeedein, khushiyan...
Ghar ka ghar ley gaya ghar chhod ke janey wala

Kho gaya hai kahan shohraat ki bulandi chu kar...
Saari duniya ko isharon pe nachaney wala

Tod dey ta hai hawaon ki shikayaat sun kar,
Ek gharonda Lab-e-sahil pe bananey wala

Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala

*The One and Only Baqz*
acha likha hai ...daad..khaas kar mujhe aakhri sher bahot pasand aaya..matla bhi umda hai...acha likhte ho..

Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala


Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala

bahot khoob..

god bless
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Baqtiar Ji.....Aadaab ! aapki tehreer ke sabhi ashaar bahut umda lage mujhe.....khayal aur adaayegi bahut pasand aai......aakhiri sher mujhe khaas laga.....

dil se daad hazir hai........kabul farmaaye....

yuhi likhte rahiye....
duaoon ke saath...




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16th December 2009, 07:54 PM

Baqs jee humne aapki kalam padh liya
gar ijazat milegi to tahreer ke bare mein kuchh kahenge



Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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Kho gaya hai kahan shohraat ki bulandi chu kar...
Saari duniya ko isharon pe nachaney wala

Tod dey ta hai hawaon ki shikayaat sun kar,
Ek gharonda Lab-e-sahil pe bananey wala

Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala

jabardst ...... tumhari baq baq to bahto ki sanjeedgi se achi hai
soch raha hun tumhari tareef karu to kaise aur buaryee to kaise
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Well Aplog ko bahut bore kiya games khel khel key ab kuch pad lijiye
Ab ye nahi kehna...
Baqz sudhar gaya and all that blah blah blah and yack yack yack...
I dont know why am posting this here ............



Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala

Kal talak rah-e-wafa mein jo mere saath raha
Ye wohi shakhs hai anjaan sa janey wala

Sirf yaadein hee nahi, Khwaab, Umeedein, khushiyan...
Ghar ka ghar ley gaya ghar chhod ke janey wala

Kho gaya hai kahan shohraat ki bulandi chu kar...
Saari duniya ko isharon pe nachaney wala

Tod dey ta hai hawaon ki shikayaat sun kar,
Ek gharonda Lab-e-sahil pe bananey wala

Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala

*The One and Only Baqz*


Kabhi kabhi mai sochti thi ke Baqz saheb akhir sdc per kyun aatey haiN...??..ab samajh me aaya ek acche shayer ke liye bilkul sahi jagah hai yeH......

keep it up.......keep writing........
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Baktiyaar Bhai As salam waleuM..........

Bhai aapki yeh koshish to behad lajwab lagi, Kafi gehri soch hai janab ise chupaker na rakha karo...... sabhi sher behad sanjidgi se kahe hai aur khoob kahe hai........

Sabhi sher la jawab hai yaar sach mein kisi sher men kuch bhi atpata nahi laga, isi ek sher ko pasand karun to puri kalam ke saath nainsafi hogi puri kalam per dil se daad kabool aro........ aur khayaloN ki gehrai ne to mujhe daad ke liye lafz hi nahi chore...........

Keep it Bhai, Aise hi likhate raho..........

Main humesha padhta rahuNga............

Khush raho khuda hafez..........


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Well Aplog ko bahut bore kiya games khel khel key ab kuch pad lijiye
Ab ye nahi kehna...
Baqz sudhar gaya and all that blah blah blah and yack yack yack...
I dont know why am posting this here ............



Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala

Kal talak rah-e-wafa mein jo mere saath raha
Ye wohi shakhs hai anjaan sa janey wala

Sirf yaadein hee nahi, Khwaab, Umeedein, khushiyan...
Ghar ka ghar ley gaya ghar chhod ke janey wala

Kho gaya hai kahan shohraat ki bulandi chu kar...
Saari duniya ko isharon pe nachaney wala

Tod dey ta hai hawaon ki shikayaat sun kar,
Ek gharonda Lab-e-sahil pe bananey wala

Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala


*The One and Only Baqz*


woooooooooooooo..........................Baqz , ye kya ho gaya tumhe yaar...tum chit-chat forum me hi raho yaar....is tarah shayari karke hum sab ko shock mat do...muje to abhi tak yakeen nahi ho raha ke ye tumne kiya hai ...waise likha to bahut khoob hai...par plz yaar hum sab pe kuch taras khao aur aise sadme naa diya karooo....


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Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala

Kal talak rah-e-wafa mein jo mere saath raha
Ye wohi shakhs hai anjaan sa janey wala

Sirf yaadein hee nahi, Khwaab, Umeedein, khushiyan...
Ghar ka ghar ley gaya ghar chhod ke janey wala

Kho gaya hai kahan shohraat ki bulandi chu kar...
Saari duniya ko isharon pe nachaney wala

Tod dey ta hai hawaon ki shikayaat sun kar,
Ek gharonda Lab-e-sahil pe bananey wala

Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala


*The One and Only Baqz*

Mai khamakha khush horahi hun teri ghazal dekhkar ........ye to mai jaanti thi tu achcha likhta hai lekin itna achcha likhta hai aj pata chala ghazal bht khoobsurat hai sab shocked hain ki baqs itni gehrai se bhi soch sakta hai



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18th December 2009, 05:22 PM

Baqz bhai,

Main bikul shocked nahi hua aap ki composition dekh kar,
After reading "Kuch Aashaar.." i was of the view that u can write better,,,

Keep the spirit up,,,

Take care n Regardz,,


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Kabhi kabhi mai sochti thi ke Baqz saheb akhir sdc per kyun aatey haiN...??..ab samajh me aaya ek acche shayer ke liye bilkul sahi jagah hai yeH......

keep it up.......keep writing........
Probably aisa bahut log sonchte hai ke mein akir sdc par kyun aata hoon???
   
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woooooooooooooo..........................Baqz , ye kya ho gaya tumhe yaar...tum chit-chat forum me hi raho yaar....is tarah shayari karke hum sab ko shock mat do...muje to abhi tak yakeen nahi ho raha ke ye tumne kiya hai ...waise likha to bahut khoob hai...par plz yaar hum sab pe kuch taras khao aur aise sadme naa diya karooo....
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Mai khamakha khush horahi hun teri ghazal dekhkar ........ye to mai jaanti thi tu achcha likhta hai lekin itna achcha likhta hai aj pata chala ghazal bht khoobsurat hai sab shocked hain ki baqs itni gehrai se bhi soch sakta hai
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Well done................ aacha likha hai aacha hi nahi bahut aacha likha hai..... baqs G ...... aise hi likhte rahiye


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Bohat hi khoob ...

tareef shabdoN ki mohtaaz nahi ... meri muskaan aaj aapke kalaam ke naam ...

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7th April 2010, 07:42 PM

another excellent creation.
this one was very good

Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala

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Well Aplog ko bahut bore kiya games khel khel key ab kuch pad lijiye
Ab ye nahi kehna...
Baqz sudhar gaya and all that blah blah blah and yack yack yack...
I dont know why am posting this here ............



Lutff toofaan ka uthata hai uthaney wala,
Kashti kaagaaz ki samundar mein bahaney wala

Kal talak rah-e-wafa mein jo mere saath raha
Ye wohi shakhs hai anjaan sa janey wala

Sirf yaadein hee nahi, Khwaab, Umeedein, khushiyan...
Ghar ka ghar ley gaya ghar chhod ke janey wala

Kho gaya hai kahan shohraat ki bulandi chu kar...
Saari duniya ko isharon pe nachaney wala

Tod dey ta hai hawaon ki shikayaat sun kar,
Ek gharonda Lab-e-sahil pe bananey wala

Sunna hai khwaab ab bhi shaher mein bhiktey hai
Konsa khwaab khareedon mein zamaney wala

*The One and Only Baqz*


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I am just speechlesssssssssss..................mere bhai aapne to bolti bandh kar di. Sach kahu to mar dala zalim kya ghazal likhi hai wahhhhhhhhhhhh.

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I am just speechlesssssssssss..................mere bhai aapne to bolti bandh kar di. Sach kahu to mar dala zalim kya ghazal likhi hai wahhhhhhhhhhhh.

Subhan_allah mujhe to pehle se pata hai janab aap mamuli cheeze nahi ho......yeh sher hamesha yaad rahege.
Koi nahi mila kya dude......hehehe meri hi Tangg keench rahey ho....
   
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