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Ab to waqt hi nahiN mil pata kavitaayeN likhne ka par kuch puraane pannoN me mil gaya mujhe to socha likh hi daalun kya pata kisi ko ahchi hi lag jaaye,gar kisi ki baahvnaoN ya soch pe ye kavita kataksh kare to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga.....!!



mera janam
kisi aspatal ya
prashav grih me nahiN,
balki samaj ki
oopri manjil mein
hua tha.

mera laalan paalan
kisi maa ne nahi
balki samaj ki
beechwali manjil ne
kiya tha.

main
ab tandurust aur
jawan hoon.

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.



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bhai, auron ka toh pata nahin, par mujhe achi lagi.


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15th June 2010, 03:47 AM

jaan kar khushi hui bandhu ki kisi ne sachhai ko dekhne aur usme haami bharne ki himmat ki,waise lagta hai ki aapko kavitaaoN aur tasveeron dono ka kafi tagda shauk hai...!!



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chaliye maan li aapki baat.....!!



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great thoughts kalpana ki unchi udan ka behtreen namoona well done
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mere khayal se aapka naam praveen hi hoga kyuNki aapne banda likh rakha hai...[:P],
jaan kar behad khushi hui janab ki aapko humara likha pasand aya umeed karta huN ki aapka saath aage bhi yuNhi bana rahega....!!



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To hum v jaan boojh kar bekufiyaaN karte gaye,
Fir ek din vo tanha akela chod gaye hume, keh ke,
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Ab to waqt hi nahiN mil pata kavitaayeN likhne ka par kuch puraane pannoN me mil gaya mujhe to socha likh hi daalun kya pata kisi ko ahchi hi lag jaaye,gar kisi ki baahvnaoN ya soch pe ye kavita kataksh kare to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga.....!!



mera janam
kisi aspatal ya
prashav grih me nahiN,
balki samaj ki
oopri manjil mein
hua tha.

mera laalan paalan
kisi maa ne nahi
balki samaj ki
beechwali manjil ne
kiya tha.

main
ab tandurust aur
jawan hoon.

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.


Pehle 3 stanzas padhe tou lagaa tha ke shayed aap apne hi baare me baat kar rahe haiN...phir baad ke 3 stanzas padhe tou laga ke yeh kya hogaya Lucky ji ko....akhiri stanza me puuri baat samajh aayi, ...phir dubaara padha maine..

Just 2 words..."Its good."........keep writing...
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Pehle 3 stanzas padhe tou lagaa tha ke shayed aap apne hi baare me baat kar rahe haiN...phir baad ke 3 stanzas padhe tou laga ke yeh kya hogaya Lucky ji ko....akhiri stanza me puuri baat samajh aayi, ...phir dubaara padha maine..

Just 2 words..."Its good."........keep writing...

zainy ji kisi forum ko chodte v ho aap...?? main sochta tha maiN akela insaan hun jo har forum me bhatakta rehta huN...!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!



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zainy ji kisi forum ko chodte v ho aap...?? main sochta tha maiN akela insaan hun jo har forum me bhatakta rehta huN...!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!

Aap forum ki baat kar rahe haiN, maiN kisi thread kisi post ko nahi chhodti janaab, ab kya kareiN Zimmedari li hai, nibhani tou padegi........

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isiliye kehta huN aisi zimmedariyaaN bekaar haiN,apne kaam se fursat milti hai to mushkil se a paate haiN uske bad fir yahaaN v nibhayeN, na re baba na, kuch forum walon ne mujhe v kaha tha, par bhaiya hum aise hi ahche, pata nahin aap itna aur vo v itne waqt se kaise manage kar rahi haiN...?? Hats off....!!

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To hum v jaan boojh kar bekufiyaaN karte gaye,
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Ab to waqt hi nahiN mil pata kavitaayeN likhne ka par kuch puraane pannoN me mil gaya mujhe to socha likh hi daalun kya pata kisi ko ahchi hi lag jaaye,gar kisi ki baahvnaoN ya soch pe ye kavita kataksh kare to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga.....!!



mera janam
kisi aspatal ya
prashav grih me nahiN,
balki samaj ki
oopri manjil mein
hua tha.

mera laalan paalan
kisi maa ne nahi
balki samaj ki
beechwali manjil ne
kiya tha.

main
ab tandurust aur
jawan hoon.

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.

bahut hi acha likha

sabd hi nahi kya kahu ek hi sabd me sari daad koi jabab nahi ish rachana ka

bahut dino baad yesa hua ki bar bar padhi

yesa sunder chitran kiya apane

aap bahut hi acha likhate he

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

bahut hi acha

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

itana acha likha


mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

kya sunder chitran he

desh ka bharshtachar h
main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon

likhate rahe

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shakuntala ji,

sundarta likhne wale ke chitran me nahin balki padhne waloN ki samajh aur aNkhoN me hota hai, likhne walo to apni soch aur kalpanaaoN ko lafzoN ka roop de det hai,par padhne wala hi hai jo use ahcha ya bura ya fir kaargar banata hai...!!



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20th June 2010, 05:06 AM

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.


Lucky Ji........aapka yeh roop bhi zabardast raha....kavivar sahab !

kavita bhi aapne bahut asardaar likhi hai........aakhir ki panktiya qaafi prabhaav chhodhti nazar aai......mujhe bahut pasand aaya.....aapka kavita paath........

aainda aur bhi rachnaayen...post kariyega....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....




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[QUOTE=ghayal_shayar;396361]Ab to waqt hi nahiN mil pata kavitaayeN likhne ka par kuch puraane pannoN me mil gaya mujhe to socha likh hi daalun kya pata kisi ko ahchi hi lag jaaye,gar kisi ki baahvnaoN ya soch pe ye kavita kataksh kare to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga.....!!


mera janam
kisi aspatal ya
prashav grih me nahiN,
balki samaj ki
oopri manjil mein
hua tha.

mera laalan paalan
kisi maa ne nahi
balki samaj ki
beechwali manjil ne
kiya tha.

main
ab tandurust aur
jawan hoon.

mera vichran sthal
neechli manjil se
oopari manjil tak faila hua hai
meri maan aur maryadaa
aakash choom rahi hai.

log bhagwan ke bina
reh sakte hain,par
mere bina nahi.
Meri pahuNch,
panditoN ki shikhaoN,
aur mullaoN ki dadhiyon me,
samaan roop se hai.

mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.


aapka ye khyal bahut hee psand aaya dad kbool kijiye or khush rahain

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mai saapekch hoon
dharm nirpekch hoon
meri gandh lagte he
khushali fail jati hai
aur jahan mein nahi hota
wahan badhali fail jati hai.

main yug ki pukar hoon
samay ki dhaar hoon
najuk sukumar hoon
desh ka bharshtachar hoon.


Lucky Ji........aapka yeh roop bhi zabardast raha....kavivar sahab !

kavita bhi aapne bahut asardaar likhi hai........aakhir ki panktiya qaafi prabhaav chhodhti nazar aai......mujhe bahut pasand aaya.....aapka kavita paath........

aainda aur bhi rachnaayen...post kariyega....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....

Naresh ji pranaam,

ye to humari khushnaseebi hai ki aapne hume pasand kiya bas yahi dua rahegi ki ap aage v hume yuNHi padhne ki jehmiyat uthaate raheN...!!



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Unhe muskurana jo pasand tha humari bewkufiyoN pe,
To hum v jaan boojh kar bekufiyaaN karte gaye,
Fir ek din vo tanha akela chod gaye hume, keh ke,
ki "Taish" tum bewkufiyaaaN bahut kiya karte ho...

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