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Maa..................? - 18th July 2010, 12:01 PM

TERE JAANE KE BAAD


mujhe tera dande se peetna na-pasand tha,

school jane ke naam par machal kar mitti pe fail jata tha,

mujhe tera baajoo se pakad ke ghaseetna na-pasand tha,

teri jhidki se dar ke nikal jata tha katra ke,

tere aage munh kholna bhi bandd tha,

ab halat badal gae hain,na tu hai na mujhe koi peetne wala,

tujhe chaah ke bhi nahin dhoond sakta sirf yaad karta hoon,

maa mai aaj bhi teri jhidki ke khyal se darta hoon.


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18th July 2010, 12:21 PM

Aapki is peshkash ko Ghayel ka salam Parveen jee...........I am just speechless.


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18th July 2010, 12:23 PM

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TERE JAANE KE BAAD


mujhe tera dande se peetna na-pasand tha,

school jane ke naam par machal kar mitti pe fail jata tha,

mujhe tera baajoo se pakad ke ghaseetna na-pasand tha,

teri jhidki se dar ke nikal jata tha katra ke,

tere aage munh kholna bhi bandd tha,

ab halat badal gae hain,na tu hai na mujhe koi peetne wala,

tujhe chaah ke bhi nahin dhoond sakta sirf yaad karta hoon,

maa mai aaj bhi teri jhidki ke khyal se darta hoon.

Maa Toh ....Bas Maa hoti hai...... Maa Tujhe Salaam !

Very Nice creation......... Praveen Komal Ji ! dil se daad !




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18th July 2010, 12:46 PM

thanks ghayel ji aur naresh ji, apne is nacheez ki rachna pe dhyan dia , dil se shukria apka
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TERE JAANE KE BAAD


mujhe tera dande se peetna na-pasand tha,

school jane ke naam par machal kar mitti pe fail jata tha,

mujhe tera baajoo se pakad ke ghaseetna na-pasand tha,

teri jhidki se dar ke nikal jata tha katra ke,

tere aage munh kholna bhi bandd tha,

ab halat badal gae hain,na tu hai na mujhe koi peetne wala,

tujhe chaah ke bhi nahin dhoond sakta sirf yaad karta hoon,

maa mai aaj bhi teri jhidki ke khyal se darta hoon.

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19th July 2010, 10:45 AM

parveen ji bhot hi touching kavita hai....
bhot achi lagi hume..
daad kabool kijiye..
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parveen ji aapne kafi sanjida topic pe likha hai maa to maa hai uspe kuch nhi likkha jaye acha to hota hi hai
khair ab aapse or bhi behtar peshkesh ki umeed hogi fir hme apni khubsurat peshkesh se jald ru-b-ru karayee

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pawan ji ,apka bahut bahut shukria. yaade'n kai baar kuchh jyada hi bechain kar jaati hain
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TERE JAANE KE BAAD


mujhe tera dande se peetna na-pasand tha,

school jane ke naam par machal kar mitti pe fail jata tha,

mujhe tera baajoo se pakad ke ghaseetna na-pasand tha,

teri jhidki se dar ke nikal jata tha katra ke,

tere aage munh kholna bhi bandd tha,

ab halat badal gae hain,na tu hai na mujhe koi peetne wala,

tujhe chaah ke bhi nahin dhoond sakta sirf yaad karta hoon,

maa mai aaj bhi teri jhidki ke khyal se darta hoon.

bahut khoob praveen bhai
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