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26th March 2001, 03:16 PM

if a girl is too proud of her beauty then i guess this sher is appropriate...........

Patti Patti gulab kya hogi
Har kali mehr-khaab kya hogi
Jisne dekhi ho laakho haseen
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nice one - 30th September 2001, 03:21 PM

patti patti gulab ho jati....
her kali mera khwab ho jati..
tune na dali ek maikasha nazar..
varna yeh shabnam bhi sharab ho jati.......


kunche ko tere chhorkar, jogi hi ban jaye magar..
jungle tere, parbat tere, basti teri
sahera tera....
   
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4th October 2001, 09:44 AM

patti patti gulaab ho jaati
har kali mehvekhwaab ho jaati
tune daali na meh-fishaa(n) nazren
varna shabnam sharab ho jaati


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kaleejey pe chaley hai

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4th October 2001, 03:33 PM

Thora hat ke sher likha hai..arz hai....

Patti Patti gawaah ho jati..
Har kali ek raaz ho jati...
Accha huwa ke woh aaye nahi mehfil me
warna unki berukhi meri chahat ka saboot ho jati!!!!

kaisa hai??


kabhi kisi ko muqammal jahan nahi milta
kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!!

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brilliant....!!
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Thumbs up brilliant....!! - 4th October 2001, 03:41 PM

wah ...!!

aapki shayri mein bhi dard aane lagaa hai shumaila ji......!!


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Shukriya maikashji...!!

Aapne ye baat kahke mere sheyr me dam daal diya!!

Hausla-afzai ka ek baar phir shukriya..


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4th September 2008, 12:43 PM

wah.....gaurav jee....ek sher se kitne sher ban gaye...majja aaya padke...




.......Sunita Virender Singh.......

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